FF Deewani#2 Ch 43, pg149, DISABLED

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1101

Originally posted by: vikaluvsmish
Love it Tinks!

Thank u so much babez! 😉

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1102

Originally posted by: ushankitvc
its such a touching updt... dutta understanding Madhu... loved their convo... his and his conscience convo gr888888888... witch Kala... trying to get Nakku killed...OMG!!!!!!!! Dutta went in the same vehicle... OMG!!!!!!!OMG!!!!!!!!!!! cliffhanger... break fail... OhNo!!! Chanda here tooo... hate her...and that chachaji of hers... waiting eagerly fr the nxt updt...

Thank u darlin', Lol Kala witch! hahaa...well it weren't spose 2b cliffhanger, u know I dnt like cliffhangers myself, but I guess it's just where it felt ryt to end, but dw, a lot will happen in the next one. I h8 Chanda/Seema too lol, but trust me she'll be out!

Will update soon dis time. 😉

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1103

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
awesome update...loved the way u described the internal struggle of dutta...hope everything will be fine

Thank u! I'm glad u liked the fight against himself, and dw of course everything will defo be fine.😉

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1104

Originally posted by: Nakusha
liked it but plz no chanda for too long & unite tasha soon ,waiting for the update 😊

Don't worry hun, Chanda won't be around for long at all, literally in this update, and out in the 2nd update 4rm now. 😉 Will be updating soon.

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1105

Originally posted by: meriyaar
Tink that was awesome!!!
loved it, especially the madhu and dutta interaction it was small yet so big, loved how madhu just let everything out she stuck up for their father and dutta actually understood if only he had hugged her back with love for his sister.
dutta confronting dutta was just fab!
loved how he was getting jealous coz his 'duplicate' said my naku lol.
urgh kala and her annoying plans, she's like the vamp all vamps lol.
this chanda better not be seema...
and now dutta's gonna crash, great! he better not lose his eyesight!
thanks for the pm hun and also for a lovely and wonderful update :D
tc
xoxo

Hey babez! 😉

Thank you as usual for u enthusiastic start!😳

Yeah it was small, but dat bit was in a little better detailing in the previous copy of the chatper that got deleted. But yeh he'll come around to his sister soon.

Glad u enjoyed teh Dutta vs Dutta convo lol, even dat one was better in the 1st one, but still the point got thru I guess. And yeh it felt ryt to let Dutta be possessive over Naku even against his own reflection lol, it just seems like his character. 😆

I agree Kala is the Witch amongst all Witches lool, and uh-oh...Chanda is exactly Seema. 😳

Lol Dutta is defo gonna crash, but his eyesight won't be longterm, hope u cope wid it well lol.

Ur welcome for the pm, and of course the update, thanks for commenting.

xxx

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1106

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15
gr8 update...read it during work bt cudnt post my comment den...
reali liked da madhu-dutta scene, esp wer she says 2 him tht he's my dad 2 n i aint nuthin like u wich means ur the way u r cos of urself...i can so imagine her sayin tht...LOL

omg damn kala made the brakes fail...n dutta drove the car...m sure nothing wil happen 2 him bt pls pls pls reunite tasha in ur nxt update..missing der scenes, u do knw tht its tasha thts kept me hook...other wise u pairing roops with baji killed it for me... 😡😭

Cheers chik.

Of course you'd like Madhu scene first lol, and yeh I totally get wot u mean, I can imagine her saying that too.

Well nothing 'major' will happen to Dutta, but hun tasha will re-unite trust me. Of course I know it's tasha keepin' u hooked, ain't that why everyone here is reading lol.

Thanks for comments hun tc.

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1107

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv
awesome update dear
finally dutta understand the truth
but i was thinking exact opposite concept that dutta will find lost naku but you have plan dutta's accident as inshow
kala decides to bring back seema
fabulous update
love it
thanks for pm

Thank u Ranjana.

Yeah I like keeping a few things the same as the show just to keep it's originality running thru the FF.

Yep Kala has major plans wid Seema, lets see how they turn out..😉

Ur always welcum for pm.

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1108

Originally posted by: mnx12
Good update👏 Datta- Madhu's convo was good. Datta in his fb mode, then talking to himself was nice, atleast he could finally decide, that he needs his wife. Kala wanted to kill Naku & plant Chanda in Datta's life. This track is almost simillar to the screen version. If Naku has prayed for Datta, then he will be safe. 😊

Thank u chik😊. Yeah dis track is very similar to the on-screen version, it's just how I wud have liked it or preferred it to be I guess. Dutta will always be safe for Naku don't worry, and Madhu and Dutta will soon have a strong bond.

Cheers for comments hun.

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1109

Originally posted by: krishaa
good one tink so dutta finally accepted that he can't live without nakku oh chanda here also same track again but plz end it soon and you can't make dutta and nakku together like nakku accident by dutta car and both saved by chanda plz don't seperate them.update soon thanx for pm.

Thank u darlin'. Dutta had to accept he can't live without Naku one day or another, but don't worry they gonna re-unite soon I promise, and Chanda will play her short role.

Ur welcome for the pm, and I will be updating soon. 😉

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Pooja_219

@Pooja_219

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1110

Pari🤗

so sorry dear,i was so caught up in some work that totally forgot to read & comment on ch.40.😕

Once again interesting choice of words as far as title is concerned,i think this time its fits on Dutta,Nakku & Madhu.Nakku becaz she has again gone back to her patient nature & she is allowing her silence to do the magic.😉Dutta has again retorted back to drinking,but sadly its not working for him this time😔,becaz his love for Nakku is way too strong rather than his false hate & his self-guilt.Madhu is like a riddle,or more aptly coconut,tough on exterior,but very sweet & emotional from inside & a bit lonely.

My guess was right,Kala is surely upto something,& i am sure Madhu will pick up on her planning just like she could read the evilness behind Kala's warm smile.Looks like Kala is all set to announce to the fashion world about her talent & in a grand style,but her plan of trapping Dutta into some legalities is going to backfire,becaz this time Dutta has his own blood by his side.Madhu's profession will surely play key role in this mess.

Nakku is damn right,this time Dutta is fighting with his inner demons & he has to find his own way to come out of that darkness.But,that certainly doesn't mean Nakku is going to sit back,she is doing her bit to show him that no matter how hard he tries,she is never going to leave him.Her inner resolve & her faith is so strong this time,that Dutta is taken aback,he knows he is loosing fast,its only a matter of time before he surrenders to Nakku's love.

I loved the Harley,so far the max. harleys i have seen is during my trip to scotland,there people are just crazy for their Harleys.😆so i can definitely understand Madhu's love for her bike,besides this was a gift from her dad,so it like one of his good memories.

Nakku was as always spot on about Gaurav's attraction towards Madhu.How much ever he fights with her ,but from inside he is really curious to solve the puzzle named Madhu.There is something about her which makes him think about her subconsciously.

Junglee is mine & my dad's fav. movie,he always used to laugh whenever the title song used to play on radio or tv,& he used in call Shammiji a monkey😆Felt really nice to see all the young bunch of patil family bonding together & by now Gaurav is also an inseparable patil family member.Roops initial opinion about Madhu surely changed ,seems like they will gel nicely as the time passes.

That dialouge speaking idea was fabulous,i was laughing so hard when suddenly Nakku said main tumhare bachche ki maa banane wali hoon🤣imagine Dutta hearing that,what all things he would have broken😆

Baaji is surely a troublemaker😆,but unknowingly he foretelled the future relation of Gaurav & Madhu😉I don't drink ,but i like the explanation u gave,besides scientifically its proven that good wine or whiskey taken in limit is good for health😊I like the fact how u bring some intersting points at every stage of story movement & they gel so well with the story.👏

Coming to the highlight of this update -Madhu reliving her fond memories of past with her dad⭐️

I really liked that instead of making her tell her past to someone from PN family,u gave bits & pieces & in her own version ,its like she was revisiting her life right from her birth.She was quite a hand full😆,but she is surely a multitalented personality & yet very rooted ,traditional,knows her limits & as the title says-old fashioned,yet modern exterior.

I am totally against tatooing 👎🏼but in Madhu's case i feel she does the thing which her heart feels right,unlike some teens of today who does anything in the name of latest trand.

There were many parts her memory drive where i felt Dutta was present thru her thoughts or her dad's repentance.Depsite being her dad's darling daughter ,she knew the void which her dad had in his heart could never be filled by her ,but surprisingly she had no jelousy or hate towards Dutta,infact she loved & respected her brother without even meeting him.

Dutta is indeed lucky.

He has to open his soul's eyes to see that he has loving wife,doting sister & a very loyal friend ,& i am damn sure these 3 people have a huge role to play during the coming days,when he is still struggling with himself.These 3 individuals will be his support pillers.

Madhu's past & her abilities are now known to us readers & i am thinking each of her skill will have some or other role to play in future.I am also sure that she will someday prove to Dutta that their father was a changed man.

Loved this part.Its clearly visible Gaurav is falling for her & she too feels something about him.But,at this point i am more curious to know what holds in future for Dutta & Nakku's relation.Till now Kala & her evil side have always worked as boon for DN relationship,let's see if her latest plan does the magic of bringing them together or not.😉

Lots of love🤗🤗

Pooja😊

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