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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 9 Remember Me

"NAKUSHAAA" dutta wakes up with a start and stares at the empty room around! He could feel beads of perspiration streaming down his forehead as he could still hear his scream ring in his ears--NAKUSHA...dutta takes in a deep breath trying to catch on his senses...all of a sudden his mind had given him a name and somehow dutta felt a feeling of calmness as the name still repeated in his brain...the phone rings and dutta goes to pick it up and says an instant later--woh aise nahin maanega...tu ruk main baat karega uss saaley se! Dutta bangs down the phone and fiddling with the gun he picks it up in his hand from the sidetable and taking the phone in a hurry dials two digits wrong in the actual number and the PHONE RINGS IN PN...IN tasha's room! ( I knw kaafi dramatic and chance se aisa hoga lol but when it comes to dutta and naku...kuch bhi ho sakta hai ;) sahi kaha na? )

Naku feels her heart beat stop as the silence of room is broken by the ringing phone...tears flow down naku's eyes and with trembling hands she picks up the phone...SILENCE...AN INSTANT LATER Just as dutta is about to speak naku sobs--SAAB?!...DUTTA feels the ground under his feet give way.. .of all the voices...hearing this one he could never mistake it! It was the same girl's voice from the flashes he used to have and ofcourse the word Saab!...dutta remains silent as naku sobs--saab...main...main aapki nakusha!...baat nahin karogex mere se?...Dutta tightens the grip on his gun as... he felt dizzy... suddenly...he hears the door of his room flung open and in a confusion a disoriented dutta slams down the reciever again and finds himself staring blankly at a worried kala standing at the doorway...

Kala had heard dutta scream out naku's name and stunned she stood outside the door and then gathering her senses...she walks into the room and finds dutta standing with a gun in his hand...he was sweating and looked dazed and disturbed...and as kala saw him like that...all the memories of that dreadful night came back to kala's mind ...THAT NIght...it was almost a week since dutta had returned from the hospital...and with each passing day his condition was worsening...sleepless nights and nightmarish days with all sorts of unknown dreams were troubling him terribly...

And that night kala was finding it hard to sleep and soo she was sitting alone in the hall when she heard noises from dutta's room...kala had rushed in and found dutta in todd phod mode...he had broken almost everythng and anythng that came his way ...and as kala entered the room she froze as she saw dutta stand with a gun pointed to his forehead! His eys were closed and kala could see he was tired...worn out and desperate to get rid of himself by ending his unknown life!...a stunned kala had rushed upto him just in time and moved his hand...for the first time that day KALA WAS SCARED FOR HIS WELLbeing...AND FOR THE FIRST TIME SHE SLAPPED HIM TOO!

Once again as kala entered in listening to dutta scream out nakus name she saw him looking distressed and with a gun in his hand...kala drops the glass in her hand and rushes upto dutta and snatches away the gun shouting at him--yeh kya kar raha hai?...PAGAL HO GAYA HAI BHAU?!...(dutta remainr silent and dazed as kala makes him face her and says on) dekh...dekh meri taraf...tu...tu jaanta hai na ki mere liye tu...(kala sobs) tujhe kuch ho gaya toh main...main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahin kar paaongi...

Dutta embraces kala's face and says-tayi...main theek hai...aur main jaanta hai ki main tere liye kya hai...tu...tu ro matt main khud ko chot nahin pahoncha raha tha...KALA LOOKS AT DUTTA as he wipes away her tears...and as she watches him she wondered howcome in all these years her hatred for him didnt let her appreciate and enjoy the care and tenderness he always bestowed upon her!...NExt U see dutta kneels by kala's side as she slept on the couch in his room as she feared leavng him alone...slowly after making sure that kala was asleep dutta gets up and goes to stand by the window...he stares at the moonlit night...there in patil niwas naku too stood by the window gazing at the moon...dutta takes in a deep breath and says--NAKUSHA...THERE NAKu enjoys the strong wind blowing through her hair and softly says--SAAB...the screen splits and u see dutta on one side...feeling the warmth of taking this newly found name from his past...and a sense of belongingness dawns onto him...and naku on the other feeling calm as her hope of finding dutta reached a new dimension.
The screen merges to focus on naku as u hear dutta's voice say in the background from his naku's side--~~ASHKON MEIN JAISE DHUL GAYE SAB MUSKURATEY RANG...RASTEY MEIN THAK KE SO GAYI MASOOM SII UMANG...DIL HAI KI PHIR BHI KHWAB SAJANEY KA SHAUK HAI...PATTHAR PAR BHI gulaab uganey ka shauk hai...BARSON SE YUN TOH EK AMAVAS KI RAAT HAI...ABB ISKO HONSla Kahun ki ZIDD KI BAAT HAI...DIL KEHTA HAI KI ANDHEREY MEIN BHI ROSHINI TOH HAI...MAANA KI RAAKH ho gaye umeed ke lau...ISS RAAKH MEIN BHI AAg kahin dabii toh hai!..

.hope u all liked...



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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
hey sheebs,

that was one lovely update...

the last few lines hav such an intense meaning...

keep writing...

tc
divya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
res:)

* aww great update hun... i'm liking it so much

but please make them meet soon

look at both of them one is causing pain to herself

and the other one is drowned in memories of Naku and doesnt noe who she is to him!

I loved the phone ...dial the wrong digits...cuz the heart wants to talk to her na

and how he stood stunned

Sheeba update soon

and spandana thanks for posting :)
Edited by dg0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
Part 10 Waits Do End

Naku stands staring at the moon she says softly--MERA CHAAND...DUTTA SAHIB...she feels someone touch her shoulder and turning around she finds dutta looking at her...tears well up in her eyes as dutta takes her to the bed and making her sit attends to her wounded wrist...he does it gently lest she might get more hurt...and naku just watches him...dutta looks up at her and sees a tear roll down her cheek...he remains silent and makes her lie down with her head on her lap...she takes his hands in hers and as she drifts into sleep...she mumbles--MAIN AAPKO KAHIN NAHIN JAANEY DEGI SAAB...kahin nahin...aa jao na saab...laut aao na ...apni nakusha ke paas...DUTTA embraces nakus forehead lovingly and says--aaonga naku...bahot jald main wapas aaonga...aur iss baar...humeshaa ke liye. ...he bends his face and kisses nakus forehead and her lips curl up into a smile...

There in mumbai u see dutta stands wide awake...still gazing at the moonlit night...he felt odd...to his unknown existence another name had been added...But...to his own surprise...HE DIDNT FEEL AN URGE TO find out how was he related to the name...INFACT IT FELT LIKE IT WAS WITH HIM ALL THIS WHILE...and as he stood awake late in the nght...his inner self seemed to be calmed...AND IT FELT LIKE HE MUST NOT SLEEP AS HE HAD SOMEONE TO WATCHOVER!...and there in patil niwas u see naku sleepng all alone with a smile on her beautiful face...THE SCREEN BLACKS OUT.

NEXT MORNinG...dutta is busy talking to someone on the phone when kala walks in...she sits on the dining table waiting for him to join in for breakfast and wondering how was he coping up with this new discovery frm his past...her thoughts are interrupted when she hears him shout--AYE GAIKWAAD...BAHOT SHAANA MATT BANN...NAHIN TOH APUN WAHIN PATIL WADI MEIN AAKAR TERE KO TERE bill se nikalega! Kab tak chipega tu dutta ki nazron se?!...KALA Wasnt listening anymore...patil wadi?! ALL THIS TIME THIS NAME HAD NEVER COME UP...BUT YESTERDAY NAKUSHA...AND TODAY PATIL WADI?!...KALA WONDERED IF IT WAS TIME FOR DUTTA TO RETURN?...she looks at dutta as he walked upto her smiling...after disconnectng the phone...

Kala smiles too as dutta sits for breakfast and thinks to herself-- Abb waqt aa gaya hai bhau...ki tu apne apnon ke paas laut jaye...teri iss muskurahatt...tujhpar jiska hak hai unhein saumpney ka waqt aa gaya hai bhau...AUR JO LADKI TERE LIYE DUNIYA SE LADII...HAR GHAM Ko sehtii rahi...uska intezar khatam karne ka waqt aa gaya hai...DUTT says--tayi...kya soch rahi hai...

Kala had made her decision and she says-- bhau...jo gaikwad ne jo kiya hai woh maafi ke kaabil nahin...main chahti hoon ki tu khud ja patil wadi aur Puraaney hisaab chuka aa...DUTTa Reamains silent for a while and says--theek hai tayi...jaisa tu kahey...main aaj shaam ko hii nikal jayega Patil Wadi ke liye...KALA NODS HER HEAD AND SMILEs to herself as she knew very Soon MANY WAITS WERE GOING TO COME TO AN END...

Its late in the evening...naku is ready to leave for airport to go to recieve madhu...she gets into the car and after some distance the car comes to a halt...naku asks the driver as to what happened and he gets out...checks the car and tells that the car had broken down...naku gets down when her phone rings...it was nana sahib...he asks--nakusha ...woh aaj zameen dekhne chalna zaruri hai...tu bhi chal? ...NAKU TELLS him how she was stuck...and nana saheb asks her to wait and that he would come there...naku says a yes and the driver leaves to get help...all of a sudden strong wind blows and u see dutta drive in from the far end of the same road where naku stood all alone...
hope u all lyked...😳


Iridescence1 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
res :)

Edit:

Me first 😃 Dinchak dinchak

oh Sheeba ...great part

so Dutta goin to PW and Kala ok with it ...now itz time :)

awww omg Naku alone on same road as Dutta coming on

oh sheebz upload asap ...i can not wait 😳

Edited by dg0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Wow superb update sheeba,
dutta and nakku both are on same road. What a coincidence, full of suspense. Will they unite there.
Plz update asap
iam curious to know that what will happen next.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
superb update sheeba

so kala decided to send dutta to patil wadi so that he can meet anyone of family member or naku or might remember anything of his past.

love it
thanks for pm
keen for next update

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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

Nice update Sheeba,👏 eagerly waiting for the next part😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
OH MY God
sheebuuu 1

love the update!

How D make N to sleepa nd
The time has come that D is going to Patilwadi !

OH sheebu , ab intezaar nahi hota :P
plzzz milwasdaaa Dutta or naku ko :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
hey sheebs,

the update was so short dear, but was very nice... now update the next part, waiting eagerly to watch them face together again... that wud b awesome n i know ur writing would b as well...

continue asap...

tc
divya

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