New Short FF '~Miracle~'updated EPILOGUE on Pg 24! - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow something new huh. Its lovely. Do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice start .... seems interesting story

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey bushy

very beautiful update and thanks for pm

so she works for NGO and dutta is very rich person yet he is decent .....like that

He let her go alone but as good man he follows her for her safety..lovely na 😳😳

update soon and plz update a long part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Bushy,
Enjoyed the update.I am glad Dutta doesn't gamble like his friends😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello everyone..Thank you for liking my first part....I know it was quite short...sorry i was in a hurry Hopefully this part should be long....😳
~'MIRACLE'~

Chapter-2

She stood there with her mouth open'.he left her hand...'Stop staring at me'.and start walking'.' She shut her mouth and started walking behind him'.she looked at him and then looked down' 'What are you doing here?' she questioned him tentatively'

I have some work that way'.so thought of escorting you'Don't think I came here to drop you'' he said not looking at her'

She nodded her head''So your name is Dutta?' she smiled'

'Yeah!' he said'keeping his gaze on the road'.

'Ermm'What do you do?' she asked trying to start a conversation'

Nothing' he said'not interested in her questions'.

'Wow'I wish I could have done nothing as well..' she giggled'.which stopped him in his footsteps'.he turned at her'.'Now, is this your way of starting a conversation? If it is, then can't you see I am not interested'.I am NOT interested in talking to you'.alright'so just seal your mouth and keep walking until we reach your home..' he screamed at her'she just looked down and started walking'.he put his hands in his pockets and started walking with her'..she was quite all the way'.after some time she stopped'..he looked at her''What's wrong? Why did you stop?' he asked puzzled'

'Because'my home is here' she said in a low voice'.pointing towards her house'.

Oh, ok'bye then'' he smiled'she walked up to her house'opened the door, before going in she glanced at him''Thank you very much'and sorry'.because of my questions'.the devil inside you woke up'bye..goodnight' she shut the door in seconds not giving him a chance to speak'.he stood there'thinking''Devil inside me? I have a devil inside me? Whoa man...she has guts, huh?' he ran his fingers through his hair'.he turned to walk'.but as usual he was stopped'.by a voice from the balcony''You said you have some work this way'.? But you are going back? What's wrong?' she asked innocently...

He closed his'.and not looking at her'he said...in a husky voice "I lied'now go to sleep peacefully'' he went away'.while she just stood there'.amused by this guy'.

[Dutta Shriram Patil, the only son of Shriram Patil and Shakuntala Patil'Shriram Patil was a rich business tycoon who had left so much property for his son'.and a business to look after'.Shakuntala was a social activist but she stopped working as an activist after her husband's demise'.Dutta was a careless spoilt brat'.who cared about nothing except his mother'.he didn't care to look after his father's business'.he spent his father's property in stupid things'.it was his mother's only dream to see her son become responsible'which was highly unlikely at the moment'He had friends who cared not about him but his money'.and he knew that'but still he didn't care about it'.as long as he had someone's company'.]

The next day'.he was sitting on a bench on the street when he heard a voice'"Yes ma'am'its three days later'.do come to the event ma'am..' and this voice reminded him of the same girl he dropped home last night'.and his lips curved into a faint smile when he saw her turn to him'he walked up to her'stood in front of her folding his hands across his chest''Hello' he smiled'.

'Hey, I didn't know you have such a good smile too' she said smiling back'

'Thank you' he smiled again'"You always distribute these papers'.I mean you distribute them 365 days of a year?' he asked chuckling'.

She smiled 'No, I don't do this the whole year...' "Then why are you doing it now'I mean today? It's a Sunday today, you don't have any plans for today?' he asked curious to know what plans she must have'.laughing in his mind'.

"OMG'I didn't know it's a Sunday'.thanks for telling me'.' She giggled''Well'.why do you have to care if it's a Sunday or a Monday'when you do nothing'' she cocked her eyebrow'.

'I do nothing because I have nothing to do'.i have so much property left by my father that I can sit my entire life and enjoy.' he said proudly'.

'You have your father's business to look after' she said with a straight face'not happy with the way he was proud of his good for nothing attitude'she walked away'not looking back at him'

He stood there without any motion'..it's not that this was the first time someone reminded him of his responsibility'.but it was the first time someone reminded him of his responsibility in such a caring manner yet it was in an unhappy tone'.that was the first time he felt something'.he was hurt'he was happy'.hurt because everyone feels that he is good for nothing'.and happy because someone showed concern towards him'.

He was walking aimlessly on the streets'.hitting an empty can of diet coke'.he came across the auditorium where the event was going to take place'.he peeped in hoping to get a glimpse of her'

She was there'..wearing a white dress'her hair tidily tied in a pony'.she was instructing everyone'.she was busy'..running here and there'..his feet automatically started walking to her'.within minutes he stood in front of her'..he cleared his throat''May I help you?' he asked with a puppy face'.she looked at him'she didn't knew what he was doing here'.she furrowed her eyebrows'.'What are you doing here..Du...err...Mr.Patil?' she looked at him''Call me Dutta'.sounds familiar'' he smiled''Ok'.what are you doing here Dutta?' she asked again''I Don't know'.I just landed here in course of my wanderings'.now that I am here'.I thought of helping you'if you don't mind'' he put a hopeful face'.

She looked sideways and smiled'..'Is this your plan for a Sunday?' she asked'jokingly'.

'Yeah'you can say that' he laughed along with her'Soon they both started working'.making the preparations together'..she was struggling to lift a box full of decorating stuff'.when she felt a strong arm hold the box from the other side'.she looked at him'..he was smiling'.'You can't do everything without anyone's help'.everyone's in this world is dependent on each other' they both kept the box on the ground'.in the corner'.he dusted his hands'.she looked at him in amusement''You don't look like the way you are' she stated'.he looked at her and gave a smile with a sigh'."What's wrong? Why are you laughing?' she asked'..thinking that she might have said something funny'..'Nothing'..I'll tell you later'' he nodded'.and she agreed'.

They both were walking on the street'a lonely street which had the noise of the creepy insects'from the woods'..on either side of the street'.

So you work for an NGO?' he asked'this time...he trying to start a conversation'.

She looked at him''Hmm'yeah'.I do' she said'smiling proudly'.

'Why don't you work for a company'.or an MNC? Why an NGO? You can earn good bucks' he asked'shrugging his shoulders'

She stopped and turned to him'.'I prefer working for those little kids who need help'.i would spend my time with them'.showing concern for them'.loving them'rather than working for those rich people who don't understand the language of heart but they only understand the language of money'.statistics'and brain'.and for me'money is not everything'.' She smiled again'.a smile of contentment'."And btw'I have my father'who earns enough to fulfill my needs'.i don't need more money'I am happy..and satisfied' she nodded'and resumed her walking'."How can you be so simple yet different?' I have never come across someone like you' he said'.not believing that he said those words'

"Thank you, I think we should go now'.it is getting late and its chilly here'' she stroke her arms'.'Oh I am sorry'.lets go' he walked with her'..he bid a goodnight to her and came home'.

NOTE: NGO is a Non-Governmental Organisation...in simple words a Charitable institution 😊

Please press the "like" button and leave your comments....😳

And silent readers......thank you for liking my FF...😳

Love

~Bushra~

Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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R E S E R V E D
EDITED;;;
geez man D is soo rude!!
haha naku is rely cheeky..i like her persona...she dsnt tke no shytt but stil sayz thngz indirectly without showing her anger..clever girl
erm can i jus as u suma hun...wat dus NGO stnd 4...wat is it..a charity place??😕
hmm D geting amused by naku...awww he realizd nakus concern 4 him bles
n he actualy felt bad..wel he shud n beter act upon it now dat nakus around
awww hes helping her
loved d update honey...thnx 4 pm..cont soon.x
ps.plz update ur other ff aswel..😳been ages sinc uve updated😛😆



Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Res😊
Edited :
Ok,so it was Dutta who came to save her.Good for him😆warna itni smart ladki ke saath walk lene ka chance chala jaata😉
I loved how Nakku started the convo. & then on his irritation kept quiet,but Dutta ko silence achcha nahi laga😆
Also when nakku caught him in his lie🤣,bechara😆
Tell me one thing,he is following her kya,again he is at the place where she distributes those pamphlets.
Dutta ko pehli baar kisiki baat dil pe lagi naa😉,looks like NGO me kaam karte karte Nakku,iss gadhe ko bhi responsible bana degi.😆
So,he got pulled towards her & started helping,kya baat hai👍🏼,lage raho gadhe ji😆
This is 2nd time he is going to drop her at her place.
Ab walk se baat aage ke stage pe kab jaayegi😉
So i filled my reserved spot,ab next update ASAP.
Pooja😊
Edited by preety_219 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
reserved :)

*Edited :D

Bushy 🤗 amazing update

haha I was right....look who showed up.....our man to the rescue 😳

haye haye he lied 😳 what a cutie .....big heart ,,,couldnt let her go alone eh ....

we know kuch kuch hota hai 😆

haha i love how his feet takes him where his heart is 😉 naku ke paas 😛

love their interaction....well written Bushy keep it up 😃

and update soon .....by now you know ...but let me say again ......all ur FF's :D



Edited by dg0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Bushy - that was awesome....starting to relive TaSha again ....
Very well written too...loved it ...👏👏
Could not comment after the first chapter though read it long back....
🤗
For keeping TaSha alive...miss them so much.
Waiting for the next part eagerly........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
oh bushy! its lovely! eagerly looking forward to the next part!

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