New FF*Till Death Do Us Part*THE LION RETURNS Pg15 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
Hey rubal plzz dont u dare apologise! Warna i wil start grr in dutta mode lol its kind of u to take out time for my ff isliye no sory plz! Glad u lykng ns hope u keep enjoyng:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I understand Azmishy😭! Even i was cryng as i realised naku feeling just what we r going thrugh! Wil brng dutta back in ff soon and im sure u wil flash mishu jaisi big smile :)
Edited by MishalLeoSheeba - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Sory i made u all cry :( lekin kya karun had to show wht naku must be feelng i m sure once saab returns in ff u wil smile :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: rubal223

write next part soon................

😆I am on it................update kar ke hii log out karoongi.....will u be there?..................😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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In the burning flame of the diyas''''.NAKU COULD FEEL HER HEART MELT AWAY'''.😕

SHE FELT ALL HOPE MELT IN TOO''..

THE WAIT TOO SEEMED TO BURN AWAY IN THOSE FLAMES''''.😭

AND A SINGLE TEAR WHICH FELL INTO THE FLAME VANISHED AWAY TOO''''.

NAKU CLOSES HER EYES AND RECALLS DUTTA SMILING''''and the realization dawned onto her''''there was one thing that remained'''.INTACT''..UNBEATEN''..UNCHANGED'''..AND BURNING LIKE THE FLAME'''.😳

IT WAS LOVE'''..NO HELPLESSNESS'''NO LOSS OF WAIT'''.NO ADVERSITY'''.NO BROKEN HOPE ''''COULD EVER DESTROY IT''''.😛

Nothing could take it away from her'''..not even death could steal her love for dutta from her'''.

And as naku sits for the pooja holding to the thread even more firmly''..for JUST LIKE THE THREad AWAITED A HAND TO TIE AROUND'''.NAKU AWAITED OR DUTTA TO RETURN'''.AND HIDING HERSELF IN HIS ARMS''..TELL HIM'''WHAT HE MEANT TO HER'''.

Naku sits staring blankly at the burning havankund'''.and vividly recalls all the beautiful moments spent with dutta'''.😳

The song veeraniyan plays in the background'''.and as the flames rose higher''.the smoke kept on hurting her eyes''''leaving them red and watering😭'''..and even through the blurred vision''''.naku could clearly remember'''.dutta''..smile''..frown''..and shout''.gaze and grin at her'''''.

U hear naku's voice say in the background'''😳

Unn dinon''.jabkii tum the yahan''..

Zindagi jaagi jaagi sii thi'''

Saarey mausam badey meherbaan dost the'''

Raastey'''dawatnaamey the jo manzilon ne likhey the zameen par humarey liye'''.

Pedd'''baahein pasarey khadey the hummein chaanv kii chaadar udhaney ke vaastey'''

Shaam ko sabhii sitaarey''.bahot muskuratey the jab dekhtey the hummein''''

Unn dinon''.jabkii tum the yahan''..😭

The pooja ends'''slowly everyone get up and naku touches aayi sahib's and nana sahib's feet and they bless her''''.

Naku goes to seek the priest's blessings too'''.

Later that evening''''.u see everyone Is around the dinner table''''''

Leela and roops serve the food to everyone while naku keeps on watching baji and roops busy gazing at each other''''.😆😉

Over these months''''.the two had fallen in love''''and they both confided in to naku''''''and naku too let AS know about it and she was glad to know too'''''

Naku says-----aayi sahib'.kuch baat karnii thii aapse''''..

AS smiles---haan bolo na naku''''..

Mishika comes in and sits in naku's lap saying---aayi hum sirf bua ke haathon se khayeingey''''.

Naku smiles and leela too grins as she knew how fond her daughter was of naku''''''.

Naku feeds the little one as and says----agley haftey madhu bhi chutiyon ke liye aa jayegi''''.isliye''main soch rahii thii''''..kyun naa hum achcha saa mahurat dekh kar baji aur roops kii sagaayi karvaa dein?..................👏

Baji is shell shocked and roops is blushing hard as AS nods saysing----yeh toh bahot achcha khayaal hai naku'''''hum kal hii guru jii se baat kareingey''''''

Kishore and suds tease baji while leela grins at her little sister knowingly'''''and naku too smiles seeing everyone laughing and enjoying'''''.

Later in the night u see everyone is fast asleep in PN'''''..

Naku walks out into the hall and reaches the door'''''

She opens it and is taken aback to find nana sahib standing there''''.

She says lowly---aap?................Mere ko lagaa''''aap'''..aap bhool gaye''''''

NS smiles----AISA KAISEY HO SAKTAA HAI?...........Pichley kitney maheenon se har haftey tu isi din''''jis din tunney dutta ko khoyaa thaa'''.ussi jagah jaati hai jahaan se wohh gayab ho gayaa tha!...............AUR HAR BAAR MAIN TERE SAATH AATA HAI''''..ISS UMMED MEIN KII SHAAYAD''''SHAAYAD TERI TARAH main'''''..BHI USSEY WAHAA MEHSOOS KAR PAYE magar nako''(NS grins a little'..)'..aisaa kabhii nahiin hotaa'''''.(he raises his hands and putting it on naku's head says blessing her)'''''..Tu meri zimedaari hai''''''dutta kii amaanat hai mere paas''''''..ABB CHAL''''..waqt rehtey waaps bhi toh aana hai'''''..

Naku nods her head and the two sit in the car and reach the temple''''..

NS stays in the car while naku gets down and goes up the stairs reaching the main hall of the temple''''''😊

The cool breeze blows across her face'''''.AND SHE COULD HEAR DUTTA WHISPER TO HER-----MAIN WAAPS AAONGA''''''

The wind made the bells in the temple collide with each other and make noise''''''.AND NAKU COULD FEEL DUTTA WATCHING HER!..............Moving towards her''''as she could hear his footsteps too!..................😳

The sky above was brightly lit canvas by the stars and as naku stared at the dark night '''''.SHE COULD SEE DUTTA SMILE AT HER!.......................😊

And as the clouds moved and the moonlight fell into the whole place lighting it up''''''.NAKU COULD FEEL DUTTA OPEN UP HIS ARMS TO EMBRACE HER!......................

Yes'''''.this place where nau last saw dutta''''''the place where she lost him''''''REMINDED HER OF HIM EVERYTIME SHE WALKED IN!..................⭐️

ALL THE FORCES OF NATURE SEEMED TO ASSURE HER''''''.that her love''''.her dutta sahib was fine''''..and AND SOMEWHERE waiting to unite with her''''''.😊

ALL THE FORCES OF NATURE SEEMED to know'''''..THAT ONE DAY THE TWO LOVERS WOULD MEET''''''and NAKU WOULD FIND ER DUTTA'''''''and dutta would get his naku'''''.IN LIFE OR IN DEATH''''''.ONE DAY THE TWO WOULD BE TOGETHER AND THAT TOO FOREVER!..............😍

Kaisa lagaa?.............😊

Jaldii bataao''''''..😊

Edited by MishalLeoSheeba - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: dg0628

res :)

Hey Sheeba :D

aww that was filled with emotions 😭

bring Dutta soon yaar....i'm also missing him

I like this NS role ....in helping her and aww both are tryin to be soo strong

she's hanging onto every memory ......

Very well written dear ....great update....

do update soon ......and thanks for the pm 😳😃


Glad u are liking the ff😳.................yaa me too missing mishal a lottttttttttttttttttttttt😭..................Just like us naku too holding on to every moment spent with dutta tightly...............wow.............Dutta is soo lucky to have us...................😆😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
RES.x
1st of all great choic of song n da poemm..beautiful wordz
awww baji n roops in love..... saaghai bhi hone wali hain....wel it cant hapen without D hu wil hopefuly be there very soon
naku goin 2 da mandhir wit NS every yr............dat is soo sweet n somethng dat naku wil surely do........................
pls tel me the D she is seeing is not jus a vision..............................?!?!?
thnx 4 pm n for such an aswum upd8 bbe.........but i kno next part wil be even beter.......n den everythng can only get beter................haina................. cont soon................x



Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
accha laga and nana sahib kuch zyaada hi rekh dekh karte hai nakku ki and thanks for the PM 1question : Is dutta alive , i mean will be he back in nakkus life?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
Brilliant Sheeba. Filled with emotinons. Naku waiting for her Dutta to come back to her.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Awesome sheeeba written brilliantly ,this is the nakuu we knew not nakuu loosing hope and turning insanee😡 as in show ,waiting for dutta to return eagerly😊

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