New FF*Till Death Do Us Part*THE LION RETURNS Pg15

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Index''''😊

Part 1''''Pg 1'''''.😳



Part 2....Pg 4......With No hope and Only Love in my heart!..................


Part 3..............Pg 7...............Beetey Lamhey..............


Part 4.............Pg 12............DESIRE...............



Part 5..................Pg 15..................The LION RETRUNS....................


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Hi everyone……………well thanks a tonnnn for all those who voted for the title of this FF!..............Hope u all like it………It will begin eighteen months after the scene where naku roams around like diwanis finding dutta and calling out his name……………..And one thing more…………Iss mein…………….Nana sahib is a Positive character and not after naku…………….😊

Sooo lets begin…………..

Eighteen months later………😊

It's a scene in the patil niwas and u see everyone is roaming around in the hall………getting ready for the pooja……….

As baji keeps the thaali of diyas given by leela and moves up u see he was placing it in front of dutta's portrait…………….

Baji walks around the room and reaches a corner after making sure all preparations were done for Dutta's first shraad…………….

He calls the driver to ask where they were and just then…………..Pandit jiss come in with guru jii and sit down to make all the taiyaaris for the pooja…………..

Two months after that fateful day……..when naku and dutta had gone to seek blessings in the temple and naku had asked dutta to go and take the round of temple and come back to have tilak…………and after which he never returned…………..Naku had seen him taken away in the van…………

Naku had tried to find him everywhere and when she returned back home to tell everyone……each of dutta's people went out in search of him but in vain…………….

Even Nana sahen and his men used all power and money in vain…..dutta could be found now where………….

Two months later………………a body did come to PN…………..of the same physique as dutta……….with all his belongings on him……….the cahin……watch …..ring everything was dutta's but the face of the corpse was charred!..................

That day……….Life seemd to have come to a stand still for the Patil's…………….THEY ALL FOUND IT HARD TO BELIEVE IT WAS THEIR BELOVED dutta's corpse…………….

But when naku walked in…….broke down her bangles………..removed the vermillion from her forehead and cried bitterly kneeling by the body'a side……………taking off her MS too…………..SEEING THE WOMAN WHO HAD FOUGHT ALL ODDS TO GET BACK HER LOVE ………..GIVE UP!...................the other members too GAVE IN!................and accepted…………..THAT THE VERRY FOUNDAION OF THEIR FAMILY……………Their dutta had left them forever………….😭

Roops walks upto baji and says----main aayi sahib ko leney jaa rahii hai baji….tu jaa waheeni ko bulaa laa…………….

Baji nods his head and walks away when guru jii calls out to him……………..

Upstairs in dutta's room…….u see naku stands in front of dutta's portrait smiling at her………

She stood dressed in an off white saree……………All these months she was ALONE EVEN WITH THE WORLD AROUND HER MOVING AHEAD……………SHE JUST WANTED TO STAY WITHIN THE WALL SHE HAD BUILT AROUND HERSELF!...............😭

Like dutta she fulfilled all her responsibilities………………she was a perfect daughter in law………..a perfect sister in law……….a perfect aunt……..infact almost like mother to leela's daughter Mihika and kishore's son Anay………………😳

But not for once did she LET THEM SEE THE IMMENSE PAIN she hid in her heart………………

Not once did she let them feel that she was all SAD……BROKEN and LONELY WITHIN……………….

She always kept that sweet smile on her face intact………….BEHIND WHICH EASILY SHE HID…………..her own grief trying hard each day…………..TO NOT LET dutta's family FEEL HIS ABSENCE!....................😭

Naku stares at the thread in her hand which she had to tie on dutta's wrist once he returned from the parikrama………….and then looks up at dutta's pic and says softly-----SABB AAPKEY BINA APNI ZINDAGI KII EK NAYI SHURUAAT KAR SAKEIN…………….PICHLII BAAR KII TARAH……………PHIR WAHII UMEED AUR WAHI BHAROSAA UNKEY DIL MEIN NAA RAHEY………ISLIYE Uss LAASH KO apnaa kar mainney iss safed jodey ko apna jeevan maan liyaa………………LEKIN AAJ bhi……………(tears well up in naku's eyes as she says on…………)………..aaj bhi yeh sirf AAPKI HAR DHADKAN KE SAATH DHADAKTAA HAI!...............KYUNKII YEH JAANTA HAI………….KII EK DIN AAP WAAPAS ZAROOR AAOGEY……………..Ek din inn nazron ko aapka deedar aur iss BIKHRI ZINDAGI KO USSKA KINARA ZAROOR MILEGAA…………..Phir chahey wohh din meri zindagii kaa aakhiri din hii kyun na ho………………😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Naku takes in a deep breath and sobs silently…………..

There Nana sahib walks in the hall and baji greets him……………He asks him---nakusha kahaan hai?..............

Baji says---upar kamrey mein hai………….main bas jaa rahaa thaa naku ko laaney……………….

Nana sahib says---tu yahiin kaam dekh……MAIN jataa hai…………..😊

NS makes his way up the stairs as baji goes to leela who was calling him………………😊

Ok how u like it?..............Hope u enjoyed.......................😊

Edited by MishalLeoSheeba - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good one indeed, nakku putting up a brave face nd Thank God! NS is positive. Hope u bring back our beloved dutta back someday🤔.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: brvr

Good one indeed, nakku putting up a brave face nd Thank God! NS is positive. Hope u bring back our beloved dutta back someday🤔.

hey cheer up.............he will be back in ff and show too.....trust me mishal will be back😳😃😛😊.....don't u see ltl people still using his flashbacks.............like me u all to just watch ltl on youtube not tv..............plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz wwe have to fight......................👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hain?? u sed surprise for me?? is it really for me? ......🤔....😆 got it ...but i think more dan me its for u .. hai naa?😉...Leela's Dawter name Mihika??

Nice chapter n ur a chapter.... u knw really a chapter😉😆...NS is positive....whtever i dint watch LTL nw😔.... Hope u bring D back... n fir se tera prediction true ho jaye ...like always👍🏼..
*Edit add* ye loah all r asking for pm...isnt it too bad😆 do d honour sheeba mam n tell dem... aap pm kabhi nahin karte...aur nahi padhte😆(except very few)😳😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it Sheeba. Yea Mishal or Hopefully Dutta's character should be back coz without it LTL will no get any TRP.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey :)
very nice start....but plz bring dutta soon
i also think MR will be back in the show :)
i like naku being all brave for the family....i feel for her ....poor her :(
yay good thing u said NS is positive & not after naku :)
great part....update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey shebbba :)
amazing update darling....its really sad....pls upload asap...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice sheeba
very emotional
tune toh rula diya sheeba

update soon and plz send pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice start ...... please continue

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