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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

Omg MisHeZ.X i feel caught wel u r rght...to be honest for the first tym i found myself in nakus place as i wrote these parts! Putting the suffering into words made me feel light....i am soo glad u wait for the ff to be updtd wow thank u ji for all the love :) i knw slitting wrist is unlyk naku but jab dard bahot ho AUR APNO KI KHATIR USEy CHIPANA PADEY TOH AT LAST U END UP FINDING SOME WAy to free urself ....i hope u got convinced :D YA DARD HO YA KHUSHI TASHA ARE TOGETHER IN IT thats why same tymng....and wel it wil be amnesia and more surprises soo be ready....pata hai nakus lines made me cry hard THEY WERE SOO DAMN APT FOR US :(

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Shally

@shally_m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

very nice update ...... can't see nakku suffering like this 😭😭😭😭😭

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: shallymann
very nice update ...... can't see nakku suffering like this 😭

I know dear.............well wait till she meets dutta...............glad u liked it...................😳

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: MishalLeoSheeba
Omg MisHeZ.X i feel caught wel u r rght...to be honest for the first tym i found myself in nakus place as i wrote these parts! Putting the suffering into words made me feel light....i am soo glad u wait for the ff to be updtd wow thank u ji for all the love :) i knw slitting wrist is unlyk naku but jab dard bahot ho AUR APNO KI KHATIR USEy CHIPANA PADEY TOH AT LAST U END UP FINDING SOME WAy to free urself ....i hope u got convinced :D YA DARD HO YA KHUSHI TASHA ARE TOGETHER IN IT thats why same tymng....and wel it wil be amnesia and more surprises soo be ready....pata hai nakus lines made me cry hard THEY WERE SOO DAMN APT FOR US :(

aww sweetie ikno hw u feel n how naku mustv felt...

its soo painful 2 see em like dis inih....

n d show is jus getin worse...day by day ..... cnt beliv dey r executing bajis character in such a disgusting manner...anyway....4get dat

ur welcum u rli do derv d lovely coment..ur writing styl has improved immensly than b4...it was gud b4 but now its even beter....ur ability to bring out their pain feelings n emotion hav improvd icredibly mashAllah..............sory but had 2 say dat lol

waiting 4 ur nxt update.x

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#155

haila ....amnesia?? kinda had a feeling why else wouldnt he go back :P

lol well i'm sure it will be interesting :D

update soon yaar

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554064

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Posted: 14 years ago

#156

Hi sheebz ...🤗

dont belive dis... wen my net ws not working y e FF itna aage gaya...ok read d whole at 1 gp dear...😛first of all awesome updates jaaneman 👏

arrhh i dont lyk dis NS...at all ..whtever he is +ve or -ve😕😆 anyway...omg 2 saal beet gaye😲..*thud* ... n nice song viraniyaa...perfect for all dutta diwanis...😳 whats dis soo nice lines..

"Unn dinon''.jabkii tum the yahan''..Zindagi jaagi jaagi sii thi'''

Saarey mausam badey meherbaan dost the'''

Raastey'''dawatnaamey the jo manzilon ne likhey the zameen par humarey liye'''.

Pedd'''baahein pasarey khadey the hummein chaanv kii chaadar udhaney ke vaastey'''

Shaam ko sabhii sitaarey''.bahot muskuratey the jab dekhtey the hummein''''

Unn dinon''.jabkii tum the yahan''..sheebz mujhe rula diya...😭

yee kya hua tujhe sheebz...itna accha i mean d whole mandir scene ws sooo beatiful yaa...,😍 loved it... kya awesome idea👏 superrbb gal...

n dis arrhhh ... YES SHE HAD DONE THIS BEFORE...SEVERAL TIMES WHEN SHE FELT BROKEN and the sufferring became unbearable...

i ws lyk wht happened to sheebz?? whts she writting?? yaar ws soo scared😲

n dis D's dialogue... "KYUN KAR RAHI HAI AISA NAKU...KHUD KO ITNA DARD ITNA DUKH MATT DEY...MAIN TEREKO ISS HAAL MEIN NAHIN DEKH SAKTA!" omg 😭 ..sheebz u brought tears in my eyes ... n seriously ur updates title" desire n beetey lamhay " ws very nice👏😳

n finally sher ki entry wit blood..but ...wen D is here den no fear...😍

n haan at last dis lines...HAKEEKAT NAHIN ABb SIRF EK EHSAAS HAI TU... ZINDAGI JEENEY KI AAKHIRI AAS HAI TU... JEE PAAON TERI bahon KI PANAAH Mein YEH HO NA SAKAA... Phir Bhi HAR SAANS TERA INTEZAR KARTI HAI... Aisa pyaar hai tu...

n last updates END ws superbb d BG voices n dat two stanza for tasha wa awesome😳

waah waah ...aapne dil khush kar diya... 😉..

n haan i knw u send me PM abt dis Ff's update...wen i ws not here hai naa?😆

but really sweety luv dis story😳

Edited by --SONEE-- - 14 years ago