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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome post...and excellent read. You have analyzed Dutta's character and traced his emotional groW*H over the last one year beautifully. Please keep writing.

we are lucky to have so many creative forum members. appreciate your efforts. 👏 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shjilpi you always make me loss at words!
beautiful posts !
the title is just too beautiful and the post is brilliant !

the way u described everything abt dutta
awesome !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dear Shilpi,

Remember you wrote to me a PM to be saying that I leave a lot of things un-said or lets say I do not describe in details a scene at times as I leave them to the imagination of the reader whereas you would like to read it from my point of view. Hence I had asked Kavita about her point of view as I feel she is a very rational reader, believe me she too had your view as she had said you need to give some fillers at times, not everytime maybe but certain fillers here and there were missing...hence the last 3 chapters of Raj Gharana were edited and re-edited again a trend which I never followed....I write with a flow and seldom edit my work as I believe my first thought is my best thought and of course I do not have the time too most of the time....Regarding my being a soap watcher yes I watched KS till the last episode, but the stories I wrote with Jai -Bani had nothing to do with the show...I watched the show because my love for the characters and the actors and the forum...nothing to do with the serial as after 6 months the serial had gone down the drain, was about to be banned from IF for calling the makers names as I used to write aaj ki do baatein after every episode tearing them apart but lets not talk about them....
Now coming back to your reply, as I said I watch the show for MR so no point elaborating on that but I agree with you Naku is very saintly and yes precisely that is the reason I want some 'shararaat, love can be boring too without some spice in it...let Dutta initiate it...let him tease Naku....some lttle jokes or some memories of their time together in the past, what he felt seeing her for the first time, what she felt seeing him for the first time...I am married and after all these years, I love teasing my husband just taking away the newspaper he was going to pickup, when he wants to discuss something looking somewhere else...he shouts at me saying gosh woman what will you do at the age of 70....the same I reply, god save me...he replies back..the place is not important, you don't have to run around trees, it can be just a sprinkle of water, hitting with some pebbles...I love the idea Dutta making tea for Naku, waking her up lovingly ...why not...after all he is a husband...
Dutta is the Don of Patilwadi, I cannot believe that with one baaji and few bodyguards he held on to Patilwadi...there must have been some favours granted, people grateful to him for his timely help...yes he might not know the exact situation, who is where, who is with Kala or alive etc etc., but that he is thinking a glimpse once in a while is enough, the fillers as you wanted in my story...
Regarding the quality and making of the serial, Shilpi, no I have never been on a set or in a studio...sometimes have come across shooting going on the road but then people take too much of time to set the whole thing up.....for a viewer it is not important...you work in an office...you have deadlines, you cannot make mistakes because one mistake you make your company will bleed paying penalties but then still mistakes happen, to err is human but then quality is also very very important...like in corporates you will be handed over marching orders if you cross certain limit, here too in the name of making 'jugaard' I am not ready to give them creative licences, sorry Shilpi, it is their trade, their roji roti, let them be honest to the profession they are in and as viewers I am paying to watch it hence I want my share of quality product...there is a limit to acccepting sloppiness and I am not ready to accept in the name of jugard....for them it is also a job...hence they should do it properly.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
@ tin..well said and fair enough..

yeah i would like to see those shararati moments too...oh..i loved the payal scene and kurta selection scenes...i loved how he asked her to say his name making her all nervous and shy-why....loved it. i am sure we will have more when things get better..

About him ruling Patilwadi with just baaji and few BG...actually he must have ruled with a whole force..a force which is with Kala...don't know why..i mean Dutta showed his metal in 10 yrs to rule..how come all are accepting kala...now if you have to pick something up to point i feel pick on that...but not many are bothering to ask that...i think as kala said all Dutta's wafadars are killed...or pussed in hiding....i am sure the fillers will come next week.

about jugard...well i know what you are saying about quality and corporate world..i am in no way defending the slip in name by MV or her wearing those shoes or the man suddenly captured by mistake in camera...i want these kind of bloopers taken care of...but story wise i don't feel they have ever slacked....nope....i will still maintain that LTL has always given us better no excellent work on story and creative front....we were scared that it will be Nakku's agnipariksha with suresh debacle but it was done beautifully...even kala's faceoff with family and dutta were done awesomely...

ur FFs are great loved storm never last and the phone call also ek duje ke liye...couldn't relate to emperor and girl but it was nice too..

you know what they do in west...when they come to a crucial part of story they end the season, plan rewrite and shoot and replan and reshoot the stuff for 6months and come back with new season...next year...LOST,Friends,How i met your mother, despearate housewives all folow this track thats how they work and how their soaps have much detailed storylines...but even then they have many bloopers...

So i feel what we have is great...ab did you want to wait till next year after dutta saw her real face for his reaction..lTL would have come with next season..Jugard is not as u think...jugard in tele industry means plan B which was as well thought of as plan A...if we don't get a bus for shooting a shot then we have to hire a auto...but then if its an auto..then the girl won't have to wait in bus-stop so change of the begining of the scene a little...thats jugard....its not like they do this thing randomly...as u said its their roji-roti...no one..no one..can be casual about their work...trust me they are not casual about their shows..they are very professional ppl and i say applause where its due and criticism where it is...i don't blame the pace they are giving now...as i can see a lot of movement in story...but as i said thats just me.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shilpi, I agree the story has a lot of potential, given a chance I would loved to work on Damodar Patil track, the SR track and post SR track...my fingers were itching to be very frank...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: tintiny

Shilpi, I agree the story has a lot of potential, given a chance I would loved to work on Damodar Patil track, the SR track and post SR track...my fingers were itching to be very frank...



mine too....in fact i have my own version of Badi hasti and damodar track all ready for shooting..😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi shilpi,

wat is this....... i am at loss of words........ amazing post yaar.......

i dont even know which thought of urs shud i discuss.............. so many n so much of detailing........

its one of ur best posts i hav read until now dear..........

keep pouring....... lovely discussion.........

tc
divya
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shilpita87



mine too....in fact i have my own version of Badi hasti and damodar track all ready for shooting..😆

😃😆😆😆😆 Lets make the serial once again with our version😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwww.....🤗......Shilpi...😊..........beautifull post.............bang on.......👍🏼....described every thing perfectly.............he is our OLD DUTTA ...........JUST THE SURROUNDINGS HAV CHANGED...........and they shot a sequence in a day which we see in a week...........lolzzzzzzz...😆..........so better have patience and be happy that the story is moving and we'll have our DUTTA the lion BACKKKKKK with his eyesight soooooooooon...😃..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Srushti-

from the little I read...am agreeing to what you said...but will back to reply in detaill
But fab post Shilpi[😃
Edited:
Fab post Shilpi as I said...am not complaining and am loving Dutta right now...we will have the sher back, but right now he needs to have this moment of peace.....you wrote exactly what I had in my mind although in a way better manner😃
am posting what I wrote on another thread:😃

Well, in Friday's episode, I found so many Dutta...
I found a trusting Dutta, when Mahadeveji hugged him.
I found Baaji's friend Dutta, when he had memories of his friend flashing.
I found a hopeful Dutta, when he looked at Nakku after Mahadevji gave them the medicine.
I found a believer Dutta, when Nakku put medicine on his eyes.
I found a naughty Dutta, when Nakku was asking him whether he could see her.
I found a content Dutta, when he saw Nakku worried on his reaction on the medicine not giving results as immediately as she had thought.
I found a concerned Dutta, when Nakku hit the plate.
I found an authoritative Dutta, When he called Nakku back and ordered her to sit.
I found a caring Dutta, when he felt for her feet and found blisters.
I found a Dutta, who would have been, had he not have been jilted by the two maha b.....in his life, when he put medicine on Nakku's feet.
I found a child-like Dutta, when he sat in the kitchen, cross legged and hooking his arms around his knees, waiting for Nakku to feed him.
I found a loving Dutta, when he stopped Nakku's hand, and fed her himself....
Now, I wouldn't say I did not like all the above Duttas....I loved him.
Given the circumstances, I know, we all hanker for Sher Dutta and avenging Dutta....
But this Dutta is the one which ultimately, we were heading for all this months....
This was the Dutta, who would have been if Seema would not have ruined his life...You see the flashbacks, you see the carefreeness in his smile, a bit of cocky attitude that goes with the young man in the throes of a pulsating love.....
The man, he had been on the way of becoming, even when he was ready to get married to Supriya...
At that point of time we were so much angry on him for giving all the credit to Supriya, when it should have been to Nakku...and right now he is doing the same...and I am not complaining...
And as to the rambling....I see it this way...
It is not out of character ... he does ramble when he is with Nakku....and we were so happy once, when he used to put out all his feelings before Nakku and not Supriya and were cursing him for being a gadha for still not understanding, that it is Nakku he loves...and right now he is doing just that, and I am definitely not complaining....
the first time he talked about his past life, on the river bank with Nakku...
Remember the scene when he gave her the necklace, just before his to-be marriage to Sups...Nakku did not speak a word, he was the one rambling...and at that time Baaji had discovered that Nakku loves him....
The day he told Nakku, near the Bappa's idol that he is ready to marry Sups...at that time also he ranted Nakku was silent...
the time when he went with Baaji to their Adda, to vent out his feelings about Nakku ...

If you remember, he used to be like this, when he is reveling in his love and considering himself lucky that somebody loves him for what he is....
the payal scene,,,,was so hot😳 and nakku hardly spoke a word, it was all Dutta explaining how this was not a necklace but a payal....
And he has not talked to her for days...since the FR, he has not talked to her....he had so craved for her...would it be so wrong for him to just vent out the pent up love he has had kept within himself all this time....
And as rightly pointed out...for us it has been weeks but it is just 2 days in LTL world, he is blind, he has been betrayed by his sister, suddenly his world has turned upside down, and he has only one anchor to save him from drowning, would it be so wrong if he didnot want to let of the anchor...
And he knows he has been wrongly treating her all this time, we wanted to see him repent and compensate big time...he is doing that....and I am not complaining...
Gosh!!! there is still so much to write...cant seem to stop...but I think this is getting more like Nakku's bhashan....so that is it...thanks guys....😃




WORD srushti...
I loved all those Dutta too..I say that he has matured and grown up a lot...and even though Nakkusha started the process he has managed to come so far by his own....i love this DSP who is so madly in love that he abandons a war to save his wife first..who is not afraid to call her his strength..touch her feet to apply salve and make tea for her in the morning....it does not take away from his sher image just adds a cute side to it which is only exposed to his sherni..

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