Lovely Shilpita,
You always end up surprising me with the depth of feelings that you get to portray through each and every single moments of your FF or the OS. Aa Paas Aaa is like manna to all the souls who believe in love in its simplest and unadulterated form, no artifice, no pretences where words need not be expressed to tell the one you love that you are the most important human being in this lifetime. I just wish that the CVs of LTL would really snoop on the Forum and draw inspiration to move the story forward and as you say it yourself, you would not have a problem with that as it would mean moving the story forward in the right direction.
Coming back to your OS, what more shall I say but laud you for the sensitivity with which you have dealt with a couple trying hard to overcome all the inhibitions, misunderstandings and apprehensions that never allowed them to take their relationship to the next level. And that is justified as I would have found it callous of the sensitve Dutta just taking for granted the fact that he could just build and repair all the bridges that have separated him from his wife all these months. His good sense will only accrue the love and respect that Nakusha, be it the koyal or the gori one has always professed for him, in words or deeds.
Nakusha's dream sequence that Dutta reads as if it was second nature for him to decipher every thought of a girl who has read him like an open book is another highlight that I dont ever see the creative team of LTL ever coming up with. Take a bow for the way you get Dutta to rid Nakusha of all her mental inhibitions when it came to express herself with the soot on by carrying the latter for a drenching in the first rains of the season. This equates to new beginnings with renewed passion for the sanctity of a love that would have seen them through thick and thin.😳
Congratulations. 👏👏👏👏👏👏Aa paas Aaa would have found its rightful place in the OS contest but Thank you for the generous impulse that pushed you to share it with all your friends on th IF.
Happy Valentine's to you and your loved ones.❤️
Luv,
Kavita😳
Edited by KavitaDR - 14 years ago
