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sub_rosa

@sub_rosa

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Nice😊 Reminds me of the song 'Beqaraan' from 7 Khoon Maaf😍☺️

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shruti

@shruti10august

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Mindddd blowingggg.....

I always thot of TaSha in rain, u beautifuly bring it out...

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Wow Shillpi !

Its just amazing

today when i log in

i prayed "Kuch acha ho forum main "

and then when i open i got this

My prayer answered

Again u have nailed it

They love each other but its so hard for them to xpress !
and Dutta naughty dreams :P

and i love the line

"He had tried in these past days to decipher the mystery behind it at the cost of looking like a lost fool during his important meetings. Heavy cost it was too! Dhandey ki waat lagi hai, aur saala Dutta tu deewana ho raha hai!"

hehehehhheheh

really Dutta will be going through this all

and i second u

this should happen in the show !

If breaking up takes time

so does making up !

Love it to the core honey

well best treat 4 valentine

P.s if u were in contest , u know i was definitely voting for u!
cuz i just adore ur writing :D

Edited by kiran255 - 14 years ago

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-bharti-

@-bharti-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Even if i dont see this dream or the reality [dreamy like] 😍soon in the episodes, it was such a treat girl. My My u r too good. U must help all DN ❤️diwanis with more such OSs. Please dont take long. Will surely do the mailing trust us.

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droopy_asleep

@droopy_asleep

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Beautifully written, I wish we see something like this in reality!

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

awesome dear

what to say .I have no words to say after reading ur beautiful,lovely os .

i just love it.

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prettywoman

@prettywoman

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Mujhe bhi bheegna hain rain mein.. vandu stomping her feet.. It was blissful.. let no one here see me asking for rains kyunki 70% of the year we have rains yaar.. or let's say light drizzle and clouldy weather :( but I just love the first rains in India and the earthy smell.. my fav scent..

OMG, the first part was his dream and i was like haila Dutta bada dare devil ban gaya and lo she wakes him up!! ,,and u used my fav dialogue.. i just love it whn Naku goes chhup and Dutta says kuch bolti kyun nahin..kuch toh bol...

where do i start.. now i have run out of adjectives to praise your writing anymore girl.. see, that button taangne wala scene in the show is a firm fav with me..but in this one, they both have equal love reciprocated fro the other and that makes all the diff..sigh.. baaji was super cute.. esp him saying nakku tu apna haath sill rahi dutta ke kurte mein.. hahaha

the distance between them even after coming back is so natural.. him feeling a bit unsure as he has said so many hurtful things and is waiting for that sign from her, whereas she feels she has always been his.. gosh.. dhande ki waat lag gayi and dutta deewana ban gaya.. LOL..very good dialgues too.

it was just so wonderful him carrying her out in the rains and in that instatnt when she mumbles about how her aai never let her get wet in the rains he understood what her life must have been and the rain washes away all their misgivings and pain and brings them together.

and lovely song to end it with... u made my Sunday.. i am reading this even before breakfast and now i am sure it will be a rocking day.. pls my men in blue u guys pls rock today na!