'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95 - Page 7

Awesome FF. really enjoyed reading it. please do add me to the list and I like how u end each part with just one dialogue. 😳 Plz do update as soon as possible. thanks. 😳

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

luved it luved it luved it babe!!!!

omg dat was jus amazing!!! thank you very much your too kind

soo romantic i think that we are all so fed up of waiting in ltl that i thought i would write my own version and sort it out😉 glad you like it though

gee D has rely learnt suma while he was away yep defo changed a bit there..

luvd his teasing techniques lmao 😉

n da buton wala scne waz jus wow!! thank you..all down to him really..

are yeh baji hamesha KMH!! lol yep then again if we have all the romance now then ive got nothing more to write.

wow D sed he wont leav hr next time!!! *mein toh faint ho ghi...*
no comment there...lol..cant really reveal what happens next..i think i'll leave it to u to make your mind up..😆

areee plz next time please jaldi karna..pata nahin next time kab ayega....

thnx 4 pm sure will try my best..thanks

x

Originally posted by: vikaluvsmish

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Hi Dear,

Thank you for the PM, and i must say wow! even with being blind.. he is stalking naku like lion who is ready to pounce on his prey.. I loved the the baaji scene always interrupting.. even with closed doors..more soon dearie

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

awesome dear
plz add me to ur pm list

Originally posted by: brvr

You sent me to tasha dreamland, where atleast DN ko kuch rahat mili, tired of seeing the negativity in the serial. It is a cute ff, thank u dear nd will be waiting soon for the next update.😍

Originally posted by: IrikaLovesKMH

OMG I love ur FF plz update more asap =)

Originally posted by: -Ritz-

Hi jagrutid

Awesome FF. really enjoyed reading it. please do add me to the list and I like how u end each part with just one dialogue. 😳 Plz do update as soon as possible. thanks. 😳

Note for readers:

Hey guys didn't get a chance to reply to some of your

Comments so I would like to thank you all for your lovely feedback. If I did miss any of you out with a pm last time please give me a shout and will do it this time..

Just wanted to say a big thank you for reading. Hope you enjoy this chapter too.! ive commented back to all your feedback and I hope you to hear more from you..here were are guys just for you-. Jagruti. p.s valentines day so i thought i would just add..... this❤️..... for the spirit of the day!😉

Chapter 4

Duttas eyesight seems to be faint but is getting better. Nakus presence is no longer needed for every daily task yet dutta insists on naku being around just so he can tease her, be with her. He had promised himself that he would not make an move until naku was comfortable with it and more so the reason being was that he wanted to witness there moments with his eyes. Nakusha wasn't aware of this…she blushed at every casual close moment. From dressing his wounds to an accidental fall into his arms. Naku made the most of it…she could admire him and he would not know yet he always had an apt reply to all the staring that he could sense. Every moment between them was romantic in the smallest of ways. Dutta never crossed the lines of romance for he knew that for naku it was a matter of heart….and she was still to confess her feelings ..her past. She was waiting for his permission and dutta was waiting for the right time.

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A regular morning in patil niwas, dutta steps out of the shower with a wet look.

Not hearing nakus rustling nor feeling her presence dutta shouts for her Naku!!!---kaha gayee.. trying to trail the bedroom for his clothes dutta gets to a point and steps on something soft on the floor..by touch dutta had figured out it was bedding. Naku had yet again slept on the floor.

As his shouting got louder naku walked into the bedroom… with a fresh morning look naku had added sindhoor…a yellow saari to her look. Smiling as ever that smile had faded to a cautious look when she realized that dutta had been shouting for a while now and was in a very blunt mood.

Hearing the inkling of her bangles…dutta senses nakus presence.. "kitni der laga di naku.." naku replies softly while taking out duttas clothes.."sahab who aayi sahab bularahi thi…"

Naku takes out a very different attire for dutta..something that had changed over the past few days to make dressing easier for dutta..

] Dutta was dressed as per nakus liking yet she wondered what he would make of himself when he looked in the mirror. He knew nothing of what his new clothes looked like on him.

Naku knew that the moment her sahab would see himself in the mirror he would change back to his old attire yet for now she enjoyed seeing him this way. Duttas new look consisted of a more formal dress sense.chrisp shirts topped with waistcoats of a deep shade, the one naku had taken out for him was of a deep back. Dutta was now a mix of that rough prevailing look with a mix of attractive trend. He looked neat, distinctive and powerful as ever yet this new attire added a certain finishing touch.

Naku handed dutta a white shirt…swinging it around his shoulders he repeated the comment that he had been saying for the past few days now.

Dutta: "Pata nahin yey kya phenarahi hai muje…" and it was true in the name of making dressing easier for dutta naku changed dutta wardrobe completely.

His comment would always make naku smile…"aap ko muje par bharosa hai naa sahab.. aap ache lag rahe ho."

Dutta didn't answer that as such he just nodded..slipping his hands into his shirt he pulled the too sides together and was now able to fasten the shirt to perfection.

Naku helped dutta with the cufflinks….whilst dutta had something to taunt naku for.

Dutta: "tu fir se raat ko zaameen pein zoh gayee naa"

Naku: "ji" nakus reply was meek and cautious of any anger that it might provoke.

Dutta: "tu aisa kyun karti hai naku…" perfecting duttas sleeves…naku looks at the dominating yet attractive appearance of her husband..he looked perfect naku couldn't really never meet his expression when he questioned her. instead she took the moment softely..she held out the jaket for dutta to put his hands though. adding that black waistcoat made dutta bring out that class that he carried in within, just the way naku liked It. As dutta turns around waiting for an answer naku steps closer..Fastening the last buttons to his waistcoat she replies…

naku: "Sahab aapko taklif naa ho isleigyey mein zaameen par soh gayee thi.." dutta takes nakus words into account and mentions nothing more. Naku hands dutta his dark glasses from the side table.

Naku: "Sahab aapki aakhe ab…"

Naku mentions duttas eyes daily and dutta adds the same on a daily baisis, "kuch kuch behtar dhik raha hai." and that would make naku happy. Dutta turns to pick up his gun from the side table…and naku adds. – "Sahab ek baat bolu…?"

Dutta replies putting the gun in his back pocket , "bol"

Naku looks at dutta with immense love and then changes her mind.."ji kuch nahin"

Dutta makes nothing of it….

Dutta " baaji ke saath meeting pein jaaraha hoon der hojayeygi"

Naku was always worried when it came to dutta working…."sahab aap khyal rakhna" dutta reassures naku and then leaves the room.

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Dutta and baaji head to leave Patil Niwas but like usual they get halfway down the staircase and there is always a reason why dutta needs to head back to his bedroom. It was the same every time…by now even baji had figured that there was some romantic guesture behind it for naku.

Yet baji had to pretend that he knew nothing of the sort. As usual the line started with….

Dutta: "Baji mein kuch bhul … and this time baji finished it off..

Baji: "pata hain..aap kuch bhul gayey ho..mein gadi nikalta hai" with a smug expression rolling his eyes baji walks off and dutta takes back upstairs.

At this point naku is still usually still in the bedroom..dutta walks with in some excuse or the other and spends a few second with her. walking into the room finding it silent dutta realizes that naku is not around. The only other place that naku would be was in kalas room.

Stepping out into the corridor duttas walks the pace to outside kalas bedroom and stops outside the door. The doors to the room are propped open yet dutta prefers to stand outside.

Within the room a lost and unstable kala was being fed by naku. Kala had been pronounced as being mentally unstable and for that reason dutta had accepted her stay in the house. Yet forgiveness was far from what she had been granted. Dutta had vowed not to be linked with her in anyway hence even at this moment in time dutta stood at the entrance of the room.

Standing in that very pause that was dutta bhao there was a distinctive authority that shun through when dutta rested his arms behind his back like that. Usually for naku it was a sign of caution.

To announce his presence dutta cleared his throat bringing nakus attention towards his presence. Taking a glance at the doorway naku knew that it would be dutta as always it was one of his ways of depicting his feelings for her yet this time around she wasn't too sure.

Looking towards the door her eyes beam when seeing dutta… "sahab…." Dutta hears what naku says and waits for her patiently.

Naku tells kala that she will be back soon and puts down the plate of food she was earlier feeding kala from and walks out of the room.

Something with naku feels comforted by the way dutta makes the effort to come and see her one last time in the morning and she smiles… timidly

Searching the floor naku was always good at the talkative aspect and that's just what she did. But her words were soft..humble.. Every wordswas spoken with a sense of love and devotion, she never forgot to add that simplicity that showed her respect for dutta. Dutta listened silently as naku really didn't give him a chance to speak. Folding his armas across his chest he is intrigued to hear what naku has to say for it was him that had come to say something.

"Mein jaanti hai ke aap yey khange ke aap kuch bhul gayey ho lekin aapka rumal aapke shirt ke dayne pocket mein rakha hai,

Aapka phone upar vale pocket mein rakha hai aur aapki ankhon ki davayee waoh meine baaji ko di hai." having given no additional direction of duttas belongings naku drops her sight to the floor and adds very cautiously..

"agar phir bhi aap muje kisi baat ke leighyey daatne ayey hai toe mein sun rahin hai."

nakus innocence amused dutta if naku could see behind those dark glasses of his she was see a soft smile in those eyes.

Yet from appearance and outer attitude dutta was always rather firm yet when it came to naku there was leeway at the best of times.

Duttas words started off firm yet as always they give way for her, "Naku mein tuje daatne nahin aayay..mein thujse kuch mangne aayay hu.."

Naku looks up at dutta in surprise…before she could express anything dutta had his words clear.

"Jab mein aaj ghar lotu toe tu mere saamne aaise ayeygi jaise mein tuje pheli baar mila tha."

naku is confused and only gets a stunned outburst of "Sahab??" dutta ignores it and continues to have his say -

"Hah agar tune meri baat par amal nahin kiya toe thuje daat padegi.." naku has no other words…she could never refuse duttas wishes nor did she have it in her to face his disappointment. with a little hesitation and confusion she accepts …hearing a "ji" from naku..dutta leaves.

……….. dutta and baji head off for the car journey together, seated next to dutta whilst starting the car baji adds…. "Kaha chalna hai bhau?" duttas reply is "hospital". The journey to the hospital leaves baji thinking, dutta has no appointment due so what was the need of this sudden visit… "sab theekh toe hai naa bhao…???" The only reply that dutta got was ..

"tu driving pein dhyan rakh……"

Dutta knew his way around the hospital by now at least the areas which he needed to know..walking into the doctors office dutta takes a seat opposite a rather old looking male doctor and baji accompanies his side.

The doctor takes out a paper document and puts it on the desk in front of baji.

Doctor: "Bhao yey aapke last medical report hai kuch hein dino mein aapki ankhe phirse normal ho jayeygi"

Dutta takes off his glasses and places on the wooden table in front of the doctor …"Doctor mere ankhon ki roshni vaapas aagayi hai..." hearing what dutta has to say that too very casually both the doctor and baji are shocked. The fact was that the alignment of duttas eyes when looking at the doctor truly looked like he had his sight back but it was naturally hard to believe especially for baji as minutes ago he had seen dutta acting blind.

Before the doctor could say anything else dutta proved himself by mentioning the medical report that sat on the desk.

-"Is report mein spelling mistake hai doctor…… dutta s patil ki jage…yaha dutta j patil likha hai."

Baji is amazed at bhao's comment picks the piece of paper up to check with his own eyes…

"Shahi …shahi hai doctor…" in excitement baji begins to celebrate the moment.

The doctor too looks at the document and duttas version is proved to be back. The doctor however does not look too sure yet he too is outdone. Going back on his words the doctor reassures dutta.

Doctor: "meine phele se hein kaha that patil sahab ke dhere dhere aap ki ankhe theek hojaygi." Dutta is very calm, punctual yet serious about the matter. Staring the doctor in a very deep manner duttas eyes speak a very serious question.

"Phir bhi doctor mein tumare muhn se sun na chahta hoon.. Meri aankhe hamesha ke leighyey theekh hogayi hai naa?"

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