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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Jag ,, raj here ,🤗
i love your ff ,, i finally caught up wth the story
nakku is so innocent and dutta cn read her so well , it was nice to see a Jealous nakku also
now who is chottu mom,,how is she connected ... pl update soon
Raj
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Jagu !

Thanks baby for being so understanding !

you know na how much i adore ur FF😳

so coming to chap 14 of BZSKN :P

First of all
love the update and lOve the possessive Of naku :P
the one i was dying for :P

OMG she used chai as her bahana , even the last encounter due to chai was horrorandous :P
BUt she was so keen to know all that she stright went for it 😆

OMg she was checking evry girl !
and she was in no mood to acknowledge them :P

and love this dialogue
"after all she was dutta shri ram patil's wife and she was going to be the only one. "

Love her determination adn she walks in lions den :P
and OMG loved Naks dialogue here :P

she was rejecting the idea and girl :p
she was actually jealous and very mean towards the girl !
so true love make human jealous :P
and she left !

OMg she is not more an afraid type Naku today
on asking by Baaji ,
she asks k she want sunwayeee🥱
OMG :P

too much to handle and Baaji goes and tell D abt it :P

and wooo how much i adore this FF D , i cant tell u

the way he presses on words if she want sunwaye from the King of patilwadi
so he will be that :P

LOve this scene sooo much :D
and awww the way D deals with her is to die for ,
he has become such a change man indealing with the ones he loved !
LOved his attitude
and the way he tells he likes the way N was jealous :P

so cute <3

and awww poor chootu is hurt ,
love the way Naku cured him
and the way D was looking at her 😳
and aw she wants to look for Chotu family 1
and best scene chotu comes again to D for singine :P

ANd omg im so scred and want to know who is this chotu mom !
D knows and AS knows not Naku some one form D past !

oh gos its getting too much interesting 😳
but no dorriyan for my D and N 😳


LOve the update Jagu and update soon :d

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prncz

Hi Jag ,, raj here ,🤗

i love your ff ,, i finally caught up wth the story
nakku is so innocent and dutta cn read her so well , it was nice to see a Jealous nakku also
now who is chottu mom,,how is she connected ... pl update soon
Raj



hiya thank you very much for reading and commenting..thanks
just about to update so guess you will know very soon whats in store next! thanks again.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran255

hey Jagu !

Thanks baby for being so understanding !

you know na how much i adore ur FF😳

so coming to chap 14 of BZSKN :P

First of all
love the update and lOve the possessive Of naku :P
the one i was dying for :P

OMG she used chai as her bahana , even the last encounter due to chai was horrorandous :P
BUt she was so keen to know all that she stright went for it 😆

OMg she was checking evry girl !
and she was in no mood to acknowledge them :P

and love this dialogue
"after all she was dutta shri ram patil's wife and she was going to be the only one. "

Love her determination adn she walks in lions den :P
and OMG loved Naks dialogue here :P

she was rejecting the idea and girl :p
she was actually jealous and very mean towards the girl !
so true love make human jealous :P
and she left !

OMg she is not more an afraid type Naku today
on asking by Baaji ,
she asks k she want sunwayeee🥱
OMG :P

too much to handle and Baaji goes and tell D abt it :P

and wooo how much i adore this FF D , i cant tell u

the way he presses on words if she want sunwaye from the King of patilwadi
so he will be that :P

LOve this scene sooo much :D
and awww the way D deals with her is to die for ,
he has become such a change man indealing with the ones he loved !
LOved his attitude
and the way he tells he likes the way N was jealous :P

so cute <3

and awww poor chootu is hurt ,
love the way Naku cured him
and the way D was looking at her 😳
and aw she wants to look for Chotu family 1
and best scene chotu comes again to D for singine :P

ANd omg im so scred and want to know who is this chotu mom !
D knows and AS knows not Naku some one form D past !

oh gos its getting too much interesting 😳
but no dorriyan for my D and N 😳


LOve the update Jagu and update soon :d



hiya thank you very much for your lovely comment! always love reading your feedback!
and i'm glad you liked this difference in nakusha but do you blame her bitchari..she did think he was looking for a second wife!. and the chai!!
well i just can't get away from the chai..thing its been in my ff ..a few times now..what can i do its the perfect excuse for romance😉
thank you very much its really nice too know you enjoyed that bit of the ff.. what can i say naku ko thoda sa power aagayay tha!!
actually my frav bit was the way dutta deals with whole situation too.. perfect situation..he totally knew what misunderstanding she was carrying yet..somewhat took advantage of it..
naughty hey..anyways sorry i can't reply in detail just going to rush of too update now!!
thank you and keep reading.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Note for readers ..hey girls and guys ok I'm back with an update.. and time time round it's a double update so it should keep you going for a fews days (I hope..) shanti se padna and please let me know what you think..thank you for your lovely comments on the last chapter..i have replied to them so thank you!!


Chapter 15

A lady enters Patil Niwas and Dutta's eyes clock to the entrance of the house and it was like he knew of her and as she walked closer it was confirmed that it was her. Getting up from his seat…dutta placing hands behind his back true to his character his expression changes somewhat. Stern yet sure. As this lady walks in ..her appearance is simple.. That of a maid in some ways. Dressed in a dull shade of green sari..a young looking lady..fair..slender with simple features..her hair tied back in a plate.she looked young yet her appearance seemed age, her expression and face features tired. Walking alongside chotu who seemed overly happy at the return of his mother was a confirmation of who she was yet..dutta seemed to recognize her in another way. And not just dutta but also aayi sahab …reacted. Getting up from her seat ..aayi sahab's expression seemed to react too.

As she approached stopped before both dutta and aayi..leaving chotu waiting at some distance she approached aayi sahab…taking her blessing, aayi sahab seemed affectionate towards her and welcomed her in a her usual warm way. Hearing a certain difference in sound from the kitchen Nakusha enters the room and watches from a distance. unsure..a little unknown and unaware of who this lady was nakusha watches from a distance silently.

As the lady approaches dutta..the interaction between the two of them is something of significant. Dutta overlooks her as she stops before him..

Her eyes seem to fill with tears and her expression soften..as she greets dutta, touches his feet.. and more significant and overpowering was the way in which duttas expression seemed to sadden. Looking at chotu who stood a little distance behind ..dutta looked back at the girl in front of him..looked at the way tears trailed down her face and putting his hand over her head..it seemed as if ..dutta provided the girl with a blessing. Nakusha noticed the way duttas eyes carried a certain sadness the way in which his eyes too filmed up with a mix of joy and sorrow. She didn't know who this girl was ..apart from being Chotu's mother she seemed to have a deeper significance which Nakusha was unknown to.

………………..

From where Nakusha seemed to be watching, this woman..was unknown yet nakusha could feel a certain intimacy this woman had with dutta..with patil niwas and with aayi sahab. She watched as Dutta redeemed himself from a more soft expression yet this woman's eyes will still cupped in tears as she spoke, barley looking up at dutta..her words were hesitant ."Sahab aagar kuch dino ke leighyey ham yaha rukh sake toe"

Before she could finish dutta had already confirmed a yes nodding his head..to approve. Baaji tumara saman upaar phochadega.." dutta takes a glance to his side at baaji but the lady stops him .."Nahin woah..ham vahin rahenge jaa phele rehte the.."

With as much authority as ever dutta seems adamant on his thoughts..not liking the idea of her staying in the servant quarters Dutta takes a glance at aayi sahab for a second and getting a nod of approval keeps silent.

…….

Morning rays of sunshine fill Patil Niwas and today there was an extra sense of happiness to Patil Niwas. Much later in the morning than usual dutta still in his white morning kurta…outlooks the open balcony witin his room in silence, unaccompanied and lost in thought.

Comfortably having placed his arms in a fold he overlooks the outbound garden area of Patil Niwas and watches Chotu's mother sweep the floors. Dutta was lost in thought..and as Nakusha entered silently and touched upon his shoulder from the back…even her feel was not enough to get his attention but as Nakusha overlooked dutta with a soft smile her words got his attention. -"Janamdin mumarak ho sahab.." turning to face her softly duttas expression seemed to be pleased..his eyes glowed in affection yet nakusha noticed a certain worry beneath it all. Dutta took nakushas hand within his…looked into her eyes for a second as if he was about to tell her something yet changed his mind.

There was a sense of great comfort to his expression today…ease..and that smile on his face reassured naku. -Sahab..aap aise ekele mein kya soch raheh ho?

Dutta takes a supple look up at nakusha…turning back to on look out of the balcony..dutta places hands behind his back and silences takes to the room…yet as he speaks his words are as heartfelt as ever.

"Naku har saal aaj ke din..mein aapne parviar ke saath bitaata hoon, patil wadi ke logo ke saath bitaata hoon. Yeh soch kar ke ..saal bhar jo duriya hoti hai..woh aaj ke din thoti mit jaayey.

Aaj ke din…ghar ke har sadaasay ke saath kuch vakt bitaatan hoon, kirshore dada ki baaten sunta hoon, aayi ke saath batchpan ki baata karta hoon, roops aur leela ki shopping ki mange puri karta hoon. Baaji ki bakwas bhi sheh leta hoon."

Thinking of all those moments to cherish a smiles creases on duttas expression and nakusha too smiles at the thought of this, dutta had a very soft side and it was times like this that It was visible. But as dutta continued turning to overlook the balcony again..nakusha realized that his words turned a little apprehensive.

Itna hein nahin Naku… meine apne paarivar ke har ek saadasya ko haak diya hai ke woh aaj ke din mujse jo bhi mange woh mein une saroor dunga. Nakusha listening on is touched by duttas love for his family and her eyes express how touched she is by this nature of his but as she listened it sounded as if dutta had began to doubt his own ability. Looking out from the balocony..nakusha noticed the way dutta seemed to be watching chotus mother as he spoke. she was going about her cleaning task..unaware that dutta was watching.

"Lekin aaj lagta hai..ke aagar..kisi ne kuch aisa maanga joe mein de naa paun toe?"

Nakusha puts a comforting hand on duttas shoulder and her words acted as a reassurance to his words.

"Sahab aap ne kabhi apne parivar ki anken padi hai...woh ankhe sirf aapka pyaar chahti hai.. baaji ki anken aap mein apna woh purana dost dhunti hai. madhu ki ankhen apne bhai ke pyaar ka intaazar karti hai…aayi sahab ki annkhen apne woh bete ke leighyey muskurati hai.

Aur patil wadi..sirf appne malik ka pyaar..chahti hai.. unka sahara chahti hai

aap ho..itna hein kafi hai hamare leighyey sahab."

Nakusha's wise words always seem to be little any of duttas worries and it was the same today. Dutta turned to nakusha and his eyes filled with a thankful appreciation for naku. Turning to face her…dutta stepped closer..and gazing at her with immense love..he moved away a hair that was out of place on her her face and as nakusha managed to take a look into his eyes she saw them glow with a certain love..that seemed to fill all there moments together.."Tere baatein hein hai joe dil ko sakoon deti hai naku."

Nakusha..puts her hands to duttas chest..and looking up softly at him there is a little prompt form her side.

"Sahab … aap tayaar hojayey..der ho rahin hai." duttas nods a silent yes to nakushas request and..walks away heading for the wash room.

…..Just as dutta takes to the wash room, baaji..knocks on the surface of the bedroom door and then hearing no objection takes a glance opening the door a little..seeing Nakusha at the far end of the room he walks in. as ever in a bright shade of orange..baaji russels his hair looking around the room..his eyes search for Dutta.

"areh naku..bhau kaha hai..?" nakusha looks pleased to see baji and explains..

sahab taayar ho rahe hai..kuch kaam tha kya..?

"nahin woah…bhau ko wish karne ka tha..baad mein karta hai." As baaji turns away to leave the room, nakusha stops him and baaji turns back.

"baaji…yeh aurat .."

Baaji looks at Nakusha confused for a second and then he realizes. Walking up to the balcony area in which Nakusha was standing baaji overlooks chotus mother still continuing her task of cleaning. Glancing at nakusha with a sense of ease…baaji explains the significance of the lady named "Sia.."

"Kuch salon phele bhau ne is ladki ki ko sahara diya..shayad is ladki ka koi bura atit hai..lekin hai toe woah patil wadi ki sadasya is naate se bhau ne uski zimidari li.

Ghar mein jaaga di…aur waoh nauk rani ki haisiyat se yaha rehne lagi. Kuch salon baad woh ghar chor kar chahiyi gayi..aur kal mere ko pata chala ke woah..chotu ki maa hai." Nakusha felt comforted and was somewhat more proud of being dutta shri ram patil's wife for he was very symbol of compassion but something..that nakusha could not overcome was the way in which duttas eyes seemed to film in tears. There was something very deep something very emotional about what she saw and it had left her mind entwining in thought. Baaji notices the way nakusha seems to look over Sia and think.."kya hua naku kya soch rahin hai?" nakusha snaps out of her thoughts and then explains herself.

"tu joe keh raha hai woh theekh hai leki kal meine sahab ki aankon mein aasun dekhe..aur aaj bhi woh kuch parishan lag raheh the." Nakusha was concerned dutta never let of his sorrow in front of people ..and this is what she found so peculiar. Yet baaji didn't think of it like that.. he reasoned in his own way.

"tu jaanti hai bhau ko kisi ko aapnane mein vakt lagta hai use, lekin ek baar aapna leighyey toe phir..woh kabi use bhul ta nahin hai. aur "Sia" ka dukh apni ankhon se dekha hai bhau ne. Satch toe yeh hai ..ke bhau ke siva koi "Sia "ke aatit ke bare mein nahin jaanta mein bhi nahin." Even though Baaji had answered all the questions Nakusha couldn't help thinking about the reaction dutta had to Sia's presence. Maybe it was something that wasn't meant for it and she wouldn't question dutta about it..but she couldn't help think about for dutta's pain was in turn hers too.

But as ever baaji's evergreen nature put an amusing turn on things..

"atcha naku..mein chala…bhau ko baatana ke meine … puri wish list baanayi hai..intaasar karega mein uska."

Baajis comments as ever humorous and leave nakusha smiling. A few seconds after baaji leaves the room dutta walks out of the washroom.. throwing his towel onto the bed from around his neck..dutta rings his black kurta around his head..and nakusha happens to be watching from a distance. there was something about him that had her hooked..he wasn't the conventional husband..yet nakusha loved him for that factor. The rugged yet..sharp look he pulled off was all adding to the attraction that she had for him. duttas hair wet yet in ..place…a more heaver stubble ..that slender yet powerfull figure of his.. many a times did nakusha think about how lucky she was to have him..she loved him impenslity ..that attraction and that love grew day by day. As nakusha overlooked dutta form a distance that attraction she had for him became appearant to her..and she silently..began to blush on her own.

Yet as dutta..straighted his look in the mirror..added his overcoat and then began folding each sleeve of his kurta..he took a glance nakushas way and noticed the way she seemed to be going red.

Adjusting the sleeve of his left arm ..dutta turns to nakusha…taking a few defined steps closer he stops in front of her. placing his hands behind his back..looking down at the way Nakusha preferred to scatter her sight rather than look at him..dutas comment was passed with the intention of getting nakushas attention and it worked.

"Sirf nazre milaayi aur sharmagayi…jab nazdikya baadaunga tab kya karegi."

Nakusha knew dutta was teasing her with his words..and for a second looked up at him..and saw a very playful look in his eyes and quickly changed the subject.

"Sahab ..neche chale..sab intaasar kar rahe hai."

………

As dutta and nakusha approach the breakfast table..all members of the family greet dutta with happy returns of the day..and approaches aayi sahab for blessings yet ..as dutta takes a seat at the table ..and nakusha serves breakfast more interesting was the conversation amongst family members. As usual sparked by baaji but all seemed to join in while dutta simply consumed his breakfast ..and listened silently.

"Vaise bhau...aaj tum sab ke saath vakt guzaronge lekin…phele toe meri hein baari hai naa. - Meine..apni list taayar rakhi hai bhau..!!"

dutta looks up at baaji..by-passing his random comments as usual yet the rest of the family were unhappy about how baaji had thought of himself to be top of dutta's list.

-"Nahin..bhau…mere paas pehle aayeyge!!!!"..-

Was the comment that came from all sides of the table, leela..roops..madhu..and even kishore.

Dutta took a glance up his left shoulder to nakusha who was standing behind his chair. Dutta hoped for naku to help but even she was in no possition to advise here. Dutta silences the table by announcing that he would think about it and..priortiy of person did not mean anything for him.

As breakfast was coming to an end..nakusha..walks off into the kitchen in order to tidy ..and silently excusing himself..dutta walks into the kitchen a little later making sure..none of the family members notice nor suspect.

Dutta walking into the kitchen sees Nakusha busy yet as dutta steps closer from behind Nakusha hears those farmilar footsteps and..her lips utter the phrase "sahab.." which in turns makes duttas smile for he stood silently behind her as per persona dutta only spoke when was appropriate. Nakusha looked up at him..suprised by his presence..

"Aap??" Duttas eyes give of a comforting glow as he speaks looking into her eyes dutta gives nakusha priority. "Tu baata naku..tuje kya chahiyey?"

Nakusha nodds denying the want for anything..and defers the matter a little..

"Mere kya hai sahab..mein toe hamesha aapk paas hein hai baaki parviar walon ko aapse bohot umeedin hai." dutta knew nakushas words were reality. Dutta could never take time out for his family..time to do those everyday things that were norm for a family. He was always too busy ruling patil wadi..looking after his businesses and dealings and this was one day he had where he could at least try to make up for that isolation. But dutta was put on the spot..each member of his family expected him to priotrise them over others..

"Kya karu naku…in-mein se chunu kaise..?" Nakusha saw duttas expression crease in a certain..confustion..but as ever her words solved all his problems..

"Mere khayal se aapko..ghar ke sabse chote sadaysa ke paas pehele jaana chahiyey."

……….

In amongst the servant quarters of patil niwas.. chotu sits on the door step of his room…looking somewhat ..annoyed and upset his mother sits next to him..in an effort to console him but she too was unsuccessful. As dutta walks the house in search of chotu..he happens to notice this..and standing a little distance from both mother and son..listens to the way chotu seems to be..highly agitated by something.

Dutta silently approches..closer..overlooking both of them..chotus mother.. notices his presence ..and at once..stands up in acknowledgment of him. Something about duttas eye contact was a sign that he acknowledged her gesture in silence. She took a few steps away.stood in slience as dutta overlooking chotu..this way took a seat next to him in an aim to find out what chotu was so upset about.

Kya baat hai..muje baata.. dutta was expecting a more pleasant interaction with chotu ..he'd hoped to make his day by gifting him something of his choice..dutta soon realized that chotu did ask him for something yet but in a more upset fashion.

"Muje mere baba chahiyey, sab ke baba hote hai..mere kyun nahin."

Something about what chotu had said changed duttas expression there was something more to this matter as dutta took a glance to chotus mother and saw..a certain sadness in her eyes. It was a silent past dutta seemed to know of as looking into Sia's eyes and seeing that sadness..dutta also seemed to be lost in a concerned silence. Yet as this significant eye lock broke between the two of them dutta..snapped out of this phase and turning to chotu reasurred him with an ease. Dutta was very good at consoling those in which he saw innocence. A persona ..that was innocent was something dutta admired.

As dutta spoke..neither chotu nor his mother could quite believe what dutta had said.

"Tu muje baba..bulagyeyga..?" chotus face lit up when dutta told him..he could refer to him as his farther..and chotus mother who watched from a distance..was once again thankful to dutta for how he had helped her.

As dutta rose from his seat next to chotu…approaching sia..who stood at a distance.. putting his hands behind his back per persona. Dutta looked at the way she seemed emotional. There was nothing much dutta could say to her…the compassion in his eyes was enough to portray his feelings. For dutta was not very good at putting emotions into words..and nor was It relevant for his expression said it all.

As dutta turns around to leave.. he hears an almost silent "shukriya" from Sia to which dutta turns around and acknowledges with a smile before leaving.

………….


Chapter 16

As Dutta continues spending his day with family..walking the corridors of patil niwas he approches madhus room and hears the stringing of her gituar..just before he enters Leela and sudharashan happen to be around who wish him happy birthday and inurn.. sudharashan sweet talks dutta into financing his next project and dutta keeping In mind his tradition of gifting his family what they ask for agrees.

Dutta enters madhus room..and overlooks her stringing her gitaur in her usual way..she preferred to alone at best of times and dutta appreciated the way she was always so compossed..she needed not to waste her time in unessasary banter and maybe that was a trait that they both had in common. Sitting down next to her…duttas presence..gets madus attention and as ever she is happy to see her brother.. wishing him happy birthday..dutta spends time talking to her.. her likes her dislikes..her furter aspirations. All conversation that was standard in a brother and sister relationship..and the feeling of warth between the two was netual. As dutta touched on what she wanted from him today..madhu opened up a drawer at her bedside table and pulled out a rakhi.

The signifance of it was known was to both of them as..it was the first time in years madu would be completing this tradition. As madhu tied the rakhi and was overly touched by the way dutta seemed to make the effort with her there was burning sent coming into the room.and madu revealed that roops was trying to bake a cake for him. yet the mention of cooking and roops got both of them a little worried and heading out towards the kitchen..it is apparent that roops had made a bit of a mess. The kitchen in a state. ..filled with burning smoke dutta walks into the kitchen to find roops..a little lost in all her mess a she notices duttas presence she tries to explain..

Bhau Aapke leighyey cake baana rahin thi …lekin…there is pause roops steps away from what she is hiding behind her back and on the kitchen surface is a burnt cake. Dutta finds her gesture very sweet and laughing a little at her mess doesn't help roops who seems to be sulking but as dutta..comforts her with a hug..he reassures her that it really didn't matter.

………..

As baajis time finally comes. Dutta returns to his room..and in doing so he sees baaji sitting behind his desk..writing something or the other. Stopping just outside the room dutta pulls a pretentious clearing of the throwth to get baajis attention.

Looking up from his pen and paper…baaji sees duttas waiting a little outside the room.and pulls one of his sarcastic comments the ones only he seems to find funny.. "areh tera hein kamra hai bhau…aa naa. " dutta gives one of his glares and walks into the room..taking off his black overcoat dutta walks a little distance away from the desk and balcony area slinging his coat onto the sofa he takes a seat.. on the sofa…and picks up the bottle of alcohol that sits in front of him on the coffee table.. pouring a drink into the glass he questions baaji curious of knowing what he is up to..kya kar raha hai..baaji??"

kya bhau..tu toe jaanta hai ke mein kitna talented hai.. shaayari likh raha hai.. sunoge??

Dutta takes a glance baajis way and today instead of critsing baajis bakwas he replied with a smile. The kind of one that said..i find you irritating yet that is why you are so close to me. "Jaane doe bhau..vaise aapko yey shayari vaayri kya samaj mein aayeygi.".dutta looks at baaji again this time to not impressed with his comment for dutta knew..he could string some words together that would leave baajis shaayri undermined.

Getting more to the point dutta wanted to know..what was in this wish list of baaji's..

As dutta consumed his drink he paused to ask baaji..

Atcha …yeh teri list sunaa muje..

There was a certain childlike smile on baajis face as he pulled out a piece of paper and began reading from it. every time baaji would read out on of his wishes ..dutta would pull a strange face…or think about it and then completely ignore it..

"Bhau merko naa..dunya ki saher karni hai..america, switerland..jane ka ha

Ek naayi gadi chahta hai…

Famous actor bana chahta hai bhau..!!

Pele ki taara tere saath mechanic giri karna chahta hai mein..

Apne ghar mein ..swimming pool lagana chahta hai…"

The list was endless and got more and more amusing at it went on yet there was something baaji missed off.. and as he came to the end of it dutta mentioned it.

Aur shaadhi, shaadhi karega..yah phir zindagi gi bhaar meri biwi ban kar rahenga?

Dutta's comment seemed to embarrass baaji a little yet which dutta again commented on yet he revealed that he was looking for a suitable match for him.


…… Late afternoon and there was still a few people dutta still had to mind..more so nakusha who he couldn't stop thinking about...yet he hadn't a moment to himself. Having spent time listening to ..kishore's intuitive thoughts over a game of chess..dutta approaches aayi sahab in her room who seems to be looking over old photographs of dutta.

Dutta taking a seat next to her on the bed aayisahab senses duttas proximity and tells him something she had been meaning to touch apon for days.

Dutta parivar sab kuch hota ..kal ko naku ke saath tera apna ek parivar hoga. Naku tere se kuch nahin kahengi..lekin..yeh dhanda..jis mein hamesha tumari jaan ko khatra hota yeh theek nahin hai.Dutta knew exactly what aayisahab was trying to say… and with a understanding centiment to his eyes..he eased aayishab.

"Mein vaada karta hoon tumse aayi ke vakt anne paar mein yeh sab chordega.."

………

Dutta had spent his day according to custom and there was a feeling of great comfort knowing that everybody was happy and more so realizing the care ..and affection attaching each and every member of his family to him.

Leaving aayi sahabs room ..dutta happens to bump into nakusha who holds in her hands a glass of water seemingly for aayi sahab. And that soft interaction between them beggins,the way there eyes lock for a second..reminds dutta that he hadn't yet dedicated any time to nakusha.. but just as dutta thinks of this and is about to..mention it to duttta..Aaayi sahab..intruppts. reminding dutta that he had not yet visited the temple for the tradtion of chairtiy he carried out dutta agreed to doing that next. Somewhere within dutta was a little disappointment that he would have to wait a little longer to spend time with Nakusha.

Dutta, nakusha and baaji visit the local madir..changing in attire dutta dresses in a white kurta and as per tradtion dutta and baaji are busy commencing charity.. patil wadi villagers queue to greet dutta, dutta gifts them, listening to there problems he provides them with the support they require. At some distance within the mandir nakusha prays in front of bappas murti yet as she does..something..someone gets her attention.

Opening her eyes her attention is grabbed by that farmilar old woman.. that had cursed dutta, repleadly visted patil niwas ..accusing dutta of killing her son.

Her presence made nakusha feel a little insecure …the woman seem to be comesning some kind of yagna..puja with a pandit..a little worried and curious. Nakusha questions the padit that happen to be by her side.

"Panditji yey aurat yaha.??" Everybody was aware of how this old woman seem to have a grudge against dutta yet no one took her seriously. For this was patilwadi and all were loyal to dutta.

Nakusha watches the pandit look a little unhappy as he explains.

Dutta bhau istaajsat nahin dete varna ham ise mandir mein kadam naa rakhene de..

Yeh aura haar roz ek puja karvati hai, aisi puja jo apne shatru ke vinaash ke leighyey hoti hai. nodding his head in concern, this pandit was genuinely sorrowful yet he had his hands tied for dutta would not permit him to take action. Bhau ke leighyey yey aatcha nahin hai lekin saab kuch jaankar bhi woh kuch nahin kehte. Shayad bhau samaj te hai..ke yey aurat apna karm kar rahin hai..aur woh ..apna..

Nakusha feels Immense concern for dutta but she is also proud of him.for being the bigger person in this situation, the kind of respect and admiration she had for him was because of these values he carried. As nakusha tries to overlook the moment she walks away..walking out of the mandir and out into the open courtyard where dutta and baaji were commencing charity Nakusha walks closer to dutta and feels safer by his side. Every now and again eyeing that old woman from the corner of her eye naku looks to towards the mandir and feels a little uncomfortable. Dutta notices the way..nakusha..stands touching on his arm..and looking her way…asks her what the matter is .. kya hua naku..? nakusha denies anything being wrong and nods.

People continue to queue but the next person in the queue who approches dutta is that old woman. Nakusha feels a little scared stepping a little closer to dutta where as baaji moves to..hush her away yet dutta stops him.

"Rukh baaji..yeh bhi patil wadi ki sadasaya hai.. use bhi sab ki taara hak hai. "

baaji listening to duttas words steps back..yet his expression is annoyed with the sight of this woman. Dutta is not the least affected by this woman as stern as ever and with as much power as ever duttas words get to the point. - Bol kya chahyiyey tuje ko? But what shes asks for is more worrying.

As ever with bitterness with her words for dutta..she seemed to be looking at nakusha as she spoke."Muje aaspe nahin…vahini sahab se kuch maangna hai. ."baaji fuming at the way the woman dared to talk to dutta in such a way begins to get irritated. But as dutta is about to reject any link of hers to nakusha..naku herself..steps in. stepping out from the proximity to dutta…naku's words are sounded with a strong conviction.

"Sahab mein taayar hai..yey jo mangna chahti hai …maang sakti hai..lekin aaj nahin…"The woman seems to accept this condition and sets her own terms which nakusha agrees too. "kal raat ko mein mandir mein aapka intaaar karegi."

Nakusha nods confirming she will be there.

A silent journey home as baaji drives, dutta sits in the passenger seat and nakusha sits at the back. Naku and baaji both knew that dutta was not happy by the way she had committed to the woman's words yet he didn't say anything . But this silence was always of deeper concern.

Walking into Patil Niwas..baaji and nakusha walk alongside each other..where as dutta prefers to walk at his own pace in front of them ..but as something comes to mind..dutta turns back to both of them and the way in which he looks at them and in particular look in his eyes and Nakusha..naku was aware that he meant every single word and it was not to be questioned.

"'Kal tu khayi nahin jaayeygi nakusha, dyaan raheh mein apni baat phir se dhoraunga nahin."

Nakusha nodds knowleging his words yet her mind sways in thought.

A little later into the night and as dutta sits at the bar..he is just about to touch upon that bottle but seeing a hand approach and move It away..dutta knew the only person that had it within them to do that was nakusha. Taking a glance to his side..nakusha's expression in front of him puts a smile on duttas lips.

"Tere bare mein hein soch raha tha naku.."Nakusha comforted by duttas words smiles..as he takes a seat off the stool and takes a step closer to her. Watching over her lovingly..dutta places his hands on her cheeks..

"Is pal ka shubhe se intaazar tha naku.. ab koi beech mein nahin aayeyga.. din bhaar sabhi kushiyon ka khal rakha..lekin tuje nazar adaaz karta gayay..ab tere vakt hai naku."

Nakusha put her hands to that black kurta of his…as dutta pulled closer and..began closing the distance between them. Like always nakusha's heart began to beat faster..with his closeness.. going a shade of red..there was immense love mixed with innocence in those eyes of hers.. as dutta got close intending to kiss nakusha somewhat intimately his phone began to ring.

A little irritated by the inconvenience dutta.. took of his mobile phone out of his pocket acknowledging it to be somebody of importance he cuts the call when the intention of ringing them back. Putting his phone back into his overcoat pocket..dutta takes a glance back at nakusha..and one view of washes all that irritation away in seconds.

A sense of love is instant in those eyes of his as he looks at nakusha but naku always found it hard to make eye contact when dutta looked at her this way..a little hesitant of the moment ..nakusha drops her expression. Stepping closer..dutta kisses nakusha on the forehead softly..and looking down at her his eyes carry a certain playfulness that puts nakusha into a more timid state.


"Upar..Kamre mein intaazar kar..mein abhi aayay.."

Nakusha looks at dutta a little wary..the way he seemed by be looking at her..and the tone that he was using..was something that got nakusha's attention. She was so much in in love with him yet..his advances always played on her heart. A little embarrassed at duttas ways nakusha..nods in confirmation and leaves for there bedroom.

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What happens next I'll leave it up to your imaginations until the next chapter!!! Suggestions are always welcome!!

Hope you enjoyed it!

Edited by jagrutid - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
R E S E R V E D ...


Me first


~*~ E D I T E D ~*~

I'm back 😃

aww thank you thank you for the double treat :)

ahhh so he needs to get everyone something...thats nice

I loved Naku's response to that

and of course Baaji's awesome neverending list 😆

oh that lady scares me as it is ...and now she wants to talk to Naku

me just curious ...is there any connection to this old woman and Sia...

I'm sure Sia has a bigger story ...waiting for that

aww i loved the last scene naughty Dutta...

telling her to wait in the room 😳😆

oh ho my imagination is going to go wild 😆😆

hmm i expect some good romance to happen 😳

great part Jag...loved it ...wonderful like always

continue soon :)

Edited by dg0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the updates today!
I think if I had to guess what were to happen in the next scene - I would like to see either one of the following play out:
1. Naku seducing Dutta...in some innovative, naive and playful way...which leaves him just wanting for more :)
2. Dutta gets called for duty...and he does not go upstairs and leaves Naku high and dry. Then Naku really plays hard to get and Dutta goes after her.
Now upto you :) I am sure you will find a very creative way around this conundrum.
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Hey Jagruthi,

First of all thank you for giving two updates at a time . Very interesting updates . The way you are continuing the story is awesome very interesting . 👏

Dutta 's birthday the way he spend his day with his family members fulfilling their wishes is so sweet .😊

And ofcourse i was really confused of the new lady chotu's mother . I hate her to the core .😡

I really love if it could be like this that some other guy from dutta's family is responsible for that lady's state so he is taking her resposibility .
Iam having confidence on u that u won't bring our dutta's character down😊 .

I don't want dutta to be related with her even in the past in any way i hate it even of dutta knowing her also i hate . Dutta is only for naku and naku is only for dutta . 😊

Please don't bring any other woman character even in dreams also between our beloved tasha .

and one more suspense with that old woman who cursed dutta my god naku is going to meet her in the temple . now what she is going to ask naku ?😕


And the way tasha interacts i mean i feel it always seems there is still some distance in between them . 😕

Naku is not feeling free with her husband of course she always considering him as saab and respects to the core but even in romance , love times also she is not feeling free . I mean you got my point she is unable to open herself before him. She is always having fear, concern, respect more for her saab rather than love . of course she loves him more than her life but not being able to show it off . 😕

I feel dutta also not 100% open and free with nakusha . He also not expressive . Don't know why jagruthi feel like saab-servant relationship is still alive between them . I mean still she fears of asking him any question , feels timid ,nervous before him even in romance time also . 😕

I really tired of seeing naku in problems suffering always . I want to see her happy with her saab . want to see naughty nakusha .😍

please I want more romantic scenes and playful mischeivous scenes between tasha .😍


I will be happy if you give us as others mentioned I also want to see dutta to drool over naku and also want to see jealous and possessive dutta .😉

Thank you for this ff .

Swapna .



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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice update👏👏👏, Datta spending time with his family, fulfilling their wishes, on his birthday was very noble side of him. Overall very interesting update. Thanks😊
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g0628 Thank you very much for reading and commenting and as usual how quick are you to reserve your spot wow! Superhero type!

As for the double update..i realized that maybe its far too much to pack into one and therefore split It. I thought It might keep you guys going yet …I should have known that you guys were going to read it all at once anyway!! Lol

As for the storyline so far..yep topic of chapter was duttas birthday… guess this way there was entheriis on his relationships throughout the house and not just nakusha. As for the old lady and sia thing …I'm going to keep it a secret for now..you will find out in the chapters to come.!! Aw and dutta, guess he has his romantic moments..the end was kind of to get you hooked and waiting for the next one..yet I haven't decided how I'm going to start the next chapter yet….looks like dug a whole for myself …am bury karna baki hai! anyways..thank you!!

droopy_asleep thank you very much for taking out time to read and comment and to be honest you've thought more about the next scene then I have ..lol!

not given it a thought yet..hopefully I will come up with something that doesn't disappoint you all but both of your predictions are very good… like your second suggestion..seeing dutta run after nakusha..and the whole hard to get..approch would be good..yet like I said..not decided yet.

Thank you very much for commenting..feedack is always really important to me thanks!

MeetPremeer thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it..keep reading!

Ziks/swapna, Thank you for reading and commenting the fact that you take out time to read my ff is much appreciated!! So thank you. Glad you enjoyed the updates and as for what is going to happen next.. theres no need to worry about it at all.

Whatever happens I give you my word when I say..nothing is going to belittle duttas character when I comes to Sia and Chotu so rest assured!! Take my word for it.!!

As for the old woman well your going to have to wait and see what happens with her yet..dutta did object to naku going to meet her..so that's that for now..yet next chapter..things will begin to make sense… well I hope anyway.. again nothing to worry about. And yep I am aware that there is still a certain distance between the two maybe not physically but mentally nakusha still carries some obligation of there previous master/servant type relationship but I don't think dutta is reserved in any way..he is just composed takes him time to share certain feelings and knowing full well that nakusha still hasn't got over the change in relationship completely he doesn't want to take things too fast. He has totally accepted her as his..wife..and so treats her appropriately I would say..nakusha is the one who still carries triates of there old relationship..

..with chapters to come..this Is going to be one of thing I touch on..in the close future. I understand what you mean when you say a "suffering " nakusha..hopefully that will soon change too.

you guys all seem to want lots of romance between tasha…and yep your request of a more jelous.. and possessive dutta.. I'll think something up!

Thanks again.

mnx12 hiya thank you very much for reading and commenting ..glad you enjoyed the update.. will try to update soon.

eternity_of_luv aw hey ..thank you very much for reading.. nice to hear from you.. I will try to update soon and again thanks for reading!

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