'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95 - Page 43

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mnx12

Nice update,👏👏 Datta looking for a girl for Baji, making Naku jealous was interesting. Next part will be about Chotu's mother & her connection with Datta's family, Waiting for next update. Thanks for pm. 😊



hiya..thank you very much for reading.

i guess this tried to add something a little different and yep next chapter will involve chotu and his more..there still be a bit of tasha.. will pm you when i update. Thanks.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ziks

Thanks Jagruthi for this ff . Really its very very nice . Read all the parts .

Nice ff . After reading this part iam quite tensed and quite confusing and me scared of this lady . Please Jagruthi don't bring any other lady between tasha . I hate this lady . Hope she is Dutta's sister or something . Please don't seperate tasha again because of this lady .

Poor naku always in show also why she only always feel to insecure because of dutta .


I mean not only Dutta but Naku is also a beautiful girl . Dutta can also feel insecure and jealous . I really want to see this stubborn Dutta in this ff as jealous dutta . Don't want to see jealous naku instead love to see jealous Dutta .

Tasha suffered much problems so They need to be happy atleast from now onwards . Hope to see
jealous and possessive Dutta .


waiting for the update.



hiya.. thank you very much for reading and commenting.
I wouldn't worry about..the lady..the story will reveal its self. yep i know what you mean by the way Nakusha is always the one who suffers in some way. i will see what i can do😉 and its a very valid point. - will try to update soon..thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

great update

naku soch rahi hai ki dutta dusri saadi karne wali hai 😆 naku dutta se sunviye chahti hai ,naku's behaviour towards dutta lovely😳

and now again a cliff hanger wow you always have that na

thanks for update and pm
love it



hiya thank you very much for reading! and yep your right nakusha did start thinking
that dutta was looking for another wife.
nakusha's behavior i guess is always..very sweet even in a more irritated way which she was here.
yep another cliff hanger..you will have to wait and see i guess. thanks again.
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Posted: 14 years ago
i unreserved my reserved spot

what i mean is that I ~*~ E D I T E D ~*~ 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dg0628

i unreserved my reserved spot

what i mean is that I ~*~ E D I T E D ~*~ 😆



thank you very much will be sure to go back and take a look..hope you liked the update though!.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dg0628

RESERVED


~*~ E D I T E D ~*~

Jag 🤗

wonderful part 😃 loved it ...very well written as usual...and enjoyed it soo much :-)

aww I loved her jealousy and him all enjoying it...

they are soo meant to be and soo good together

really enjoyed the whole thing from her taking chai up and see all girls up until his teasing

haye * daya goes off into tashaland 😳😆

aww and their moment interrupted by the kid...but it was cute...

oh so this woman who is the kids mother knows the whole family...

that kinda worries me the way u built it up

hopefully nothing to bad 😆 i will be hopeful

but i know whatever you do with that will be good :P

fantastic part...me now waiting impatiently for next update😳😆

toh jaldi update karna 😳




aw thank you very much glad you enjoyed the update..i've been trying to rack by brains for an update today..but creative block ho raha hai BIG TIME!
pata hai kya likha na hai..but thats not enough..cant think of any..good tasha scenes..😳 i can be full of it at times but today ...pata nahin kya ho raha hai. as for the last update yep ..bitchari put your self in her shoes if dsp was your husband..and he was eyeing up girls for another wife.. aw.. 😆
yep there moments are always interrupted yet in this next one no intteruption...promise.. i myself want to write a tasha scene where no body turns up to kill off the romance... (see how far i get with that..😉) aw dont worry about what happens next..nothing to worry about ..but if you have any ideas for tasha moments then.. i could do with the help!!! 😉 thanks..will update as soon as this creative block lifts..
dont want to think about it ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very sticky story, great update specially the possessive Nakusha. I am positively surprised.
When are you updating next? Do it today, please 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: inosh

Very sticky story, great update specially the possessive Nakusha. I am positively surprised.
When are you updating next? Do it today, please 😊



aw thank you very much.. glad you enjoyed it..hmm i think i problably update..2morrow evening..sorry...trying my best to put an update together.. but ..thanks for your feedback, always nice to hear from you.
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Posted: 14 years ago
ideas eh let my brain think on my bus ride home and the wen am on my lappy i will get back to lol me also have to think of tasha scene for 2 FF update lol ...so in the process i will think for u too...i noe writers block sucks na :P
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dg0628

ideas eh let my brain think on my bus ride home and the wen am on my lappy i will get back to lol me also have to think of tasha scene for 2 FF update lol ...so in the process i will think for u too...i noe writers block sucks na :P



yep pretty much i know exactly the type of thing i want..yet.don't know what it is ..if that makes sense.. at least i have somebody who understands..
thanks!!!😉

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