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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: buttbhai

yep its up 2 u i m honoured that u want my suggestion 2 be the of your ff again thanks.



aw thank you very much..will give it some thought.. a little bit busy right now so will hopefully update 2morrow if not then Monday. thanks again.
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thank you very much.. will try to update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jagrutid



thank you very much.. will try to update soon!



Oh baby thank u for being kind !

u dont have any idea what im going through , im beemar , exams ka bhukhar plus !

Mishal ki yaad !
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Posted: 14 years ago
poori 4 char din ho gaye ab toh update karo please.waiting please do update today or tomorrow.
jaldi se update kar make it a long and full of tasha loving romance with no kabab mein haddi only tasha and their dreamland, do show dutta request for birthday and please make naku a bit bold and romantic,give us a long update.Please pm me when u will update,love your FF keep it up,👍🏼
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kab update karogi, today woke up early to read your FF but got dissappointed on its absense ,please update soon do not let us starve so much, update soon,your fans r waiting.
monday ko surely update karna without fail.
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Originally posted by: krishaa

kab update karogi, today woke up early to read your FF but got dissappointed on its absense ,please update soon do not let us starve so much, update soon,your fans r waiting.

monday ko surely update karna without fail.



😕i'm so sorry will be sure to update my 2morrow..(Monday.) really don't mean to keep you guys waiting..just haven't time to finish off sorry..will pm you soon..
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Note for my readers: Hey boys/girls here we go ..update! ab sab kush ho jaaon!! Sorry for keeping you all waiting hope you like this one..and I want lots and lots of feedback good or bad it doesn't bother me but tell me what you think..! ive replied to you previous feedback..thank you very much for your lovely words..and I hope you enjoy this.. Jagruti

Chapter 17

Looking out from the window of there bedroom at the moonlight..nakusha thinks of her moments with dutta and a smile creases on her expression.. a little embarssed..a little in love and a little innocent. A sense of butterflies arose within..when duttas words echoed in her mind. "Upar kamre mein intaazar kar mein abhi aaya.." the way in which he had put his words was as ever demanding yet..there was a sense of mischievousness that was hidden under that sternness.. nakusha had seen that playfulness in his eyes, that spark that told her dutta had atera intentions. Thinking more and more about it..nakusha seems to go a shade of crimson. As familiar footsteps are sounded making there way into the room ..nakusha was aware that dutta was approaching as ever hear heart seem to beat in anticipation for whenever he was close there was feeling of longing that finally had come to an end. Yet the moment different a little from what she expected..dutta seem to storm into the room with a highly angry expression. Dropping his black overcoat on the edge of the sofa, taking a seat on the sofa he completely overlooked nakusha…and nakusha turning his way knew exactly what the matter was. Her husband had a profound sense of anger..and no doubt after irrupting it at some poor person this was the aftermath. Nakusha approaching ever so silently took a glance towards dutta who seemed to be looking into oblivion .she thought It better not to touch on the matter, after she wasn't too keen on his anger either. Silently taking away his overcoat from the edge of the sofa, nakusha approached the cupboard opening it hung the coat its rightful place. Taking another glance towards dutta almost hoping that there would be change in mood..nakusha notices the way in which dutta reaches for that alcohol bottle on the table yet before he does Nakusha quickly approaching takes it away. Taking a rather intense stair looking up at nakusha duttas eyes question her move but nakusha says very little. Walking a little distance away towards the balcony of the room..nakusha unscrews the cap of the glass bottle and pours the alcohol out of the window while dutta watches rather stunned of her move.

Dutta replies to naksuha move very sienlty..instead of making a point verbally dutta walks to the side table where another bottle of alcohol sits in his wait ..but nakusha watching his trail of eyesight gets there before him.

Standing inbtween the sidtable and dutta as a barrier..nakusha folds her hands in certain determination to get her way. Dutta overlooks nakusha a little aggravated by the way she seemed to be stopping him but as dutta looked into those innocent eyes of nakus for a second he could help but give in..all she had to say was

"sahab" and it always seemed to hit the soft spot in dutta, the way in which nakusha seemed to be so courageous in confrontation with him yet the way she reffered to him as "sahab.." put a smile on duttas face.

"Aap aise kyun muskura raha ho sahab..mein yaha se bilkul bhi nahin haategi!

Aur aapse baat bhi nahin karna chahti! "

Little did nakusha know that dutta was completely in owe of her this very moment, a sense of loved filled his eyes as he overlooked nakusha in a more stubborn and determined character. In some ways dutta loved to see nakusha in this way..there was a sense of clossness In the way she was able express herself. Watching nakusha turn her back to him in irritation dutta seemed to forget his promise of spending time with her. putting his hands behind his back as per persona dutta onlooked the back..enjoying the way nakusha seemed to be putting up reistance..duttas expression seemed to carry a mischievous smile .."Kyun meine kya kiya hai..?

"Phele aap bolte ho ke..mera intaasar karo, itni der lagate ho.."

"Kabhi kabhi lagta hai ke aap mujse syaada..apni sharab ki bottle se pyar karte ho.."As nakusha spoke dutta could feel the irritation in her voice..and in the way she was convicted not to turn to him ..dutta felt a little comforted and surprised by the way nakusha confessed that she was waiting for him.. playing on the moment as opportunity arose dutta stepped closer to nakusha.lowering his expression a little, brushing his lips against nakushas neck dutta began to softly caress nakusha..his proximity left her silent with intance. Ringing his arms around her waist..nakusha could feel his warm touch on her bare skin..the stubble of his beard brush against her skin indulging her in every passionate sense.. his touch his feel, embarrassed yet awoke a passion within nakusha in every sense..

Turning Nakusha around..duttas eyes trigger an innocence within her looking down at her with eyes that read hidden agenda..dutta enjoyed the way his actions left her speechless. Nakusha looked up at dutta with a sense of embaresment..

"Chup kyun hogayi…?, Kaafi hai…ya aur pyaar jaataan?"

The way in which nakusha seemed to smile in a sense of embarrassment put a sparkle do duttas eyes..sweeping nakusha off her feet…nakusha feels a rush in nevers at dutta picks her up…taking her towards the bed..gently lets her down and overlooks with eyes that carry..much more than just the intention of comforting words. duttas unhooks his watch from around his wrist and places it on the sidetable..all the while nakusha watches his movement…anticipating what is to come next.. unbuttoning his kurta all the while watching nakushas expression dutta slowly paces himself closer to nakusha.. as he takes loose each button of his kurta nakusha feels her heart skip a beat..

There was a certain look in duttas eyes that nakusha knew of…Aise kya dekh rahe ho sahab..? dutta said nothing, still approaching closer..pulling off his black kurta throwing it a side dutta..closed the distance between himself and nakusha..hovering over the bed and nakusha with proximity..dutta gazes into those eyes of hers with intensity before kissing her lips intimately one of his hands trails off to the light switch. Leaving them both in an intimate darkness…

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An hour or two later into the night..dutta walking across the bedroom floor sliently as not to wake nakusha he picks up his kurta from the floor..rings it around his head..over his bare skin as he walks out into the balcony area of the room. The feeling of content, feeling of happiness began to prevail within as..dutta stopped at the balcony there was faint yet walm light that hit there room…dutta outlooking the night sky from the window for a second as smiled. Moonlight and stars shinning down on him..today things for dutta seemed perfect. This is what he had always dreamed of a happy family..a loving wife and a bright future. Those eyes were cupped with mad love..a certain glow within them and that smile on his face was indescribable.. rustling his right hand over back of his head dutta thinks about how..nakusha had taken over his conscious even her expression, that smile of hers and those words played in his mind and left him smiling.

Little did dutta know that a few steps away nakusha was watching him from behind. It was only when the word .."sahab" was sounded that dutta turned his back and a smile came to play on his face..as he saw..an unfarmilar yet somewhat adorable sight.. nakusha was draped in his white kurta which looked largely oversized for her yet made her look more innocent than ever. Her hair left loose sindhoor that looked as if nakusha had reiterated and her mangalsutra that could be seen under the open colar of the white kurta..Dutta had gathered that it was a quick cover up and was amused in seeing how it covered nakusha from head to toe.. nakusha noticed the way dutta..looked her up and down...there is no doubt that she felt a need to explain..lifting her eyes a little..nakusha is just about to explain..when dutta beggins to walk across the floor towards his desk and chair at the balcony..resasures her that there is no need for explaination.."kuch kehne ki saroorat nahin hai naku…" and takes a seat in his chair. Nakusha noticed how dutta seemed to be looking into space..seemingly happy..yet thinking of something.

"Kya soch rahe ho sahab..? " dutta takes a rather loving glance at nakusha and smiles..

"Meri zindagi mein itni kushiyan hai naku..aur yeh sab teri vajese.."

Nakusha feels a little humbled by the way dutta seems to credit her yet is happy ato see that he is content. As nakusha approches duttas side…she is about to take a seat on the floor next to his arm rest but dutta stops her..

Grabbing her wrist before she takes a seat on the floor..duttas eyes talk to nakusha with a conviction that meaningful in every way.

"Naku..mein jaanta hoon tu yeh..sab apna pyaar jantane ke leighyey karti hai..joe issat tere dil mein mere leighyey woah jaatane ke leighyey karti hai lekin aaj nahin…." Dutta gently pulls nakusha towards him and as he intends nakusha falls onto his lap.

Her expression hidden in duttas chance by the way she had happen to fall into him..dutta is amused by the way the moment had had so perfectly met his intentions. Nakusha pulls out her expression from within duttas chest ..and looking up towards him..is a little embarssed yet amused..by duttas ways. Sitting in duttas lap nakusha is comfortably positioned side ways ..which allowsr dutta to look down at her.. stroking her loose hair..dutta watches nakushas lowered expression with a smile as she rests upon his chest.."Kya soch rahin hai..naku?"

'Yeh ke mein kitni kush kismat hoon..jo muje pati ke roop mein aap mile.'

Nakusha lifts her head from duttas chest..looking into his eyes nakusha tells him what she feels for him.".aap bohot atche ho sahab..aaj aapka janam din tha aur aapne pura din sirf dusro ki kwaishe puri ki hai." nakusha's words reminded dutta that he hadn't yet fulfilled any of her wishes.. looking at the way his eye contact provoked nakusha to drop her eyes..duttas lips seem to crease in a smile before he spoke.

'Lekin tuje vakt nahin de paayay naa naku..bol naku..tuje kya chahiyey' putting his arm around nakushas back for comfort duttas words were as ever sounded with a deep autority and reassurance… "aaj ek nahin teri sab kwaishe puri karoonga naku. bol.."

Nakusha plays with her mangalsutra..a little as if she was wondering what she could ask him..

Looking up at dutta with a very defined look of care love..and devotion in her eyes..

"Sahab…mein samaj ti hai ke aapke kam mein bhohot katra hota hai, mein mein aapko rokengi nahin ..lekin.". Nakusha pauses for a second..looking into dutta eyes there is something she is trying to say but in order to do so..she takes a thoughtful pause which helps her put her words in the right way. Dutta silently looks down at her..waiting for her to speak.. "Mein chahti hai ke aap apna..khyal rakho..chot aapko lagati hai..dard aapke parivar ko hota hai sahab."

Dutta was mesmerized by the way nakusha was gifted in wrapping her words in cotton wool… touched by the way she showed her love for him dutta..looked down at nakusha with ease..asking her to go on.. "aur..aur kya chahti hai...?"

This time nakusha looks up at dutta with a little hesitation..maybe she was a little unsure of what she was going to ask next..or more what duttas reaction would be yet..looking into his eyes with a certain determination..nakusha asked away..knowing that even if he resufused first time around she would convince him with time.

"Sahab..peena chordo.."

Nakusha quickly looks away from dutta in anticaption of anger and dutta notices..yet is silent somewhat in shock to what she had just asked for.. nakusha knew that this may have been a little too much..and maybe she had overstepped the mark but…as she preferred to clutch on to duttas kurta..and hide from his sight..dutta picked up her expression via her chin..looking into his eyes..he asked for confirmation..

'Yehi chahti hai tu..?" Nakusha ..is forced to look into duttas eyes a she softly nodds a yes. Duttas expression is somewhat unpredictable, nakusha didn't know if his response would be suttle or irupptive yet dutta was simply very silent there was a playfulness that grew in his eyes as he spoke..and nakusha knew that dutta had his own agenda from the minute he looked at her in that way..

Nakusha was a little surprised that he actually seemed to agree..his words put a smile on her lips yet as he went on to speak the moment was very different to what she had anticipated.. dutta has his own conditions..

"ek shart..pein chor dunga naku.. " nakusha looks at him as if she was ready to accept all conditions little was she aware that duttas thoughts were swaying in a more mischievous manner.. looking down at naku ..hiding all intentions beneath a serious expression..the true altera motives could be seen in those eyes of his.

"..agar tu..aaj ki taara..bina..peeyey hein pelati rahegi..toe.." Dutta began caressing nakushas..neck with his lips brushing his lips against her lower neck he seemed to be taking advantage of nakusha closeness yet as nakusha realized what dutta was referring to..her face turned a shade of red..and the way duttas move seemed to be more and more flirtatious It didn't help her one bit..

It took nakusha a second..to make out what dutta really meant but when she did…the only word that came to her lips was "sahab.." Dutta pulling away from her a little looked down at her eyes cupped with embarrassment and smiled..

sab kuch mere leighyey hein maang leigyey..aapne aap ke leigyey kuch nahin chahti..?

Nakusha looks at dutta with a sense of comfort..her happiness was in his yet not to reject his gesture…nakusha..plays on words wisely..mein soch ke baatayeygi … and dutta accepts but befores dutta actions swayed in a playful manner..nakusha asks him of his wishes..

"Aapka jaanamdin tha..aur meine tofe mein aapko kuch nahin diya.. aap bolo sahab aapko kya chahiyey?" Dutta was amused by the way nakusha spoke as if she had the power obtain anything for him and the funny thing was nakusha could provide him with something that was priceless .. dutta continues caressing nakushas face..kissing ear dutta softly shares..his request with nakusha ear uknown words uknown for me and you yet.. in turn..nakusha shy's away a little..yet the smile on her face..is full of affection.. as dutta finishes of his words..

"tu jaanti hai ke mein kya chahta hoon naku,lekin meri madat ke bina thoda muskil hai... " dutta doesn't give nakusha further chance to react..lifting her in his arms he carries Nakusha to bed.

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Next day mid morning amongst the surroundings of Dutta's bedroom baaji sits on the sofa waiting for dutta who had called for him. althought dutta was the one who had demanded his presence..he was the one missing.

Baaji could hear the sound of the shower running from behind the washroom door sometime ago and gathered that dutta was still getting ready.. "yey bhau bhi naa..khud toe taayar ho raha hai..aur mere ko itni subhe subhe bulaliyay.." nodding his head in almost an all knowing fashion baaji is about to go on talking to himself when the wash room door is sounded and dutta walks out..wearing his vest..with a wet hair look..duttas expression shows the existence of tiredness. Walking towards his bed dutta picks up the blue kurta nakusha had left out for him..taking a glance In baajis direction dutta acknowledges him..a little silently and then question him on the way he seemed to be talking to himself.. "akele mein kya babbar raha hai baaji?" Ringing the kurta around his head…dutta straightens it as he walks to the mirror..takes a look at his refection brushes his hair..

"Kya bhau tu toe jaanta hai naa…mein toe uhein..bolta rehta hai.."

Dutta takes a fine glare into the mirror..turning around..in baajis direction..he beggins to fold the sleeve of his right arm as he goes on to speak ..

"Baaji aaj ki meeting fix uhi kya..?"

Baaji answers with a ho..bhau..as dutta completes folding his kurta sleeves walks to the side table.. picking up his watch he hooks it around his wrist…and pulling the drawer of the wooden side table he takes out a file which happens to be of a green shade. Flicking through the pages …dutta takes a fews steps to the centre of the room ..and begins mentioning work related points to baaji.. Seemingly engrossed in what was very important for dutta.. Baaji listens in silence as dutta instructs him on his tasks.. but as this more formal talk was going on.

Nakusha approaches the bedroom, dressed in pink and green saari there is a sense of overjoyed happiness to her expression. Her eyes beam in bliss and her lips are creased in a very expressive smile as she takes into the room..as the door is partially open. Seeing Dutta standing alone amongst the room with his back to her..reading this file Nakusha is oblivious as to baajis presence who she cannot see..somewhat unknown to the fact that her husband was not alone..nakusha walks into the room. Very silently ..being faced with the his back nakusha…slides her arms around his shoulders from the back subtly and placing her head against his back presses against Dutta in an embrace.

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Ok girls and guys wait and see what happens next!! you can always predict and let me know. what you expect or think?.😉- lots and lots of Dutta and Nakusha just like you all wanted.

Also have to mention that the initial Idea of nakusha asking dutta to give up his drink was actually buttbhai's(sorry never got a chance to ask your name.)I just adapted per my liking and writing style..and concept so thanks for the suggestion!

hope you all liked it.. Please do leave you comments.. Thanks!

Edited by jagrutid - 14 years ago
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Edited:

Mein aa gai ...and that too first again 😆 funny thing is i dont have laptop anymore ...gone for servicing for 2-3 wks ...and came on my phone and just so happened ur pm popped up 😆 and me just sat and waited for it 😳

In regards to update...Wonderful...Very well written as usual 👏

aww omg i love this Dutta ...owww and what *ahem ahem scenes ☺️

haye haye haye ...me all blushing reading tasha parts...at this rate kids are soon a possibility ? i hope i want her pregnant soon

me still wondering who that women is 🤔

oh haha Baaji ...and Tasha LOL 😳 am looking forward to wat will happen 😆

update soon

thanks for update...it was awesome 😃

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Thanks in advance, will read n come back :D
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Beautiful update dear😳

Aham aham!!!☺️ If this rate continues then the football team is not so far I guess!!!☺️😆😆

And this time if u had ask what he whispered in to her ears I bet u we would have had 100% correct answers!!!😉😆

And the bday gift……!!☺️ Hayeee….!!☺️

"..agar tu..aaj ki taara..bina..peeyey hein pelati rahegi..toe"☺️

[me tho margayi reading this part!!!😆]
but then it was so well written!!😉

Love the way he was happy and content, its so rare we see that side of him and he is great full to her!!😃

"Meri zindagi mein itni kushiyan hai naku..aur yeh sab teri vajese.."😳

And the pre cap!!!🤣

KMH bina tasha , ye hosakatha hai kya!!🤣🤣

Thank u dear for the beautiful update, n looking forward to the next part eagerly 😳😃

Edited by AzMishy - 14 years ago
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Hey Dear Jagruti
Thanx alot for the wonderful updates and Pms ..Once again iam sorry for been a late to comment😳...But Loved all the updates ...

Awww loved jealous naku and dutta teasing naku😍just 2 good yaar ...Chotu is cute 😉
Wow Romance in air 😍iam up for it 😆...can"t enough of these 2 ...
wow new twist in story with Sia ...what"s her story?...can"t wait to unfold the mystery 😳...
Omg The last update "suhana in tasha dreamland"😆iam speechless☺️...If looks can kill then iam in heaven😍...what a superb romance ...just tasha and tasha...Loved it alot ...
Haila dialogues took my breath away
"..agar tu..aaj ki taara..bina..peeyey hein pelati rahegi..toe.."😍...
really beautiful yaar ...thanx alot 🤗...waiting for the nxt part ...pls jaldi update karna
u take care...
Love and hugs
suhana🤗


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