'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95 - Page 24

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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful updt.........luved Tasha convo and the way both acted stubborn.........Tasha 2gether is always enjoying...........ending sad...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey hun :)
omg it was well written
can imagine it soo well
thanks for a wonderful update :)

loved Dutta's punishment 😳
Naku soo innocent na 😆

end was a sad.....
do continue soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys thank you for your feedback..guys seem a little bit down..don't worry..keep your hopes up and thank you for reading my ff.

ramya90: thank you very much glad you enjoyed the update..keep reading will update soon

buttbhai: thank you very much..sorry for dragging the update out so long..but i did it in the end.!

ushankitvc: thank you very much yep its true..when tasha are together its always going to be good..but ...i'm thankful that update worked out and you liked it. As for the stubborness i guess if duttas the sher then shes no less either..i think the conversation was one of my frav bits too.

dg0268: hiya hope your good!, aw sounds like you enjoyed it phew! :)
aw thank you...thats major for me ..my aim is always to try and paint the picture thats in my mind so if you can imagine it then i can't really ask for anything more.
As for duttas punishment..lol i though you wouldn't mind reading that..but had to put some dutta/naku in there to balance it out cuz the end was a little intense. will try to update soon.

thank you guys..will try to update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful update dear...you have such a nice command on screenplay..great job!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: droopy_asleep

Beautiful update dear...you have such a nice command on screenplay..great job!



aw thank you very much...glad to know you enjoyed it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update
awww wt a punishment lol... haha...cute...
aww babi n sethji left n Patil Parivaar returned...n oh gosh so did the crazy woman...aww poor naku...she's hurt by her words, bt dw naku m sure if dutta continues 2 giv u the sme punishment as he did, it wnt b long b4 PN has its very own football team..lol
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

very nice update

awww wt a punishment lol... haha...cute...
aww babi n sethji left n Patil Parivaar returned...n oh gosh so did the crazy woman...aww poor naku...she's hurt by her words, bt dw naku m sure if dutta continues 2 giv u the sme punishment as he did, it wnt b long b4 PN has its very own football team..lol



hiya its taking a lot of courage to..even think after seeing todays episode!! aw i'm ashamed to be a laagi thujse lagan fan..the way in which they showed todays episode was horrible!! anyways bk to the ff. glad you enjoyed it..aw i knew i was going to get some comments on that part of it. you guys want romance..you guys get it. yep babi and babi and sethji gone..as for the crazy woman..let her be.! use bhi toe kuch karna hai naaa..so dutta ko pareshan kar rahin hai. - apart from that..i was thinking more of a cricket team.!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jagrutid

hiya its taking a lot of courage to..even think after seeing todays episode!! aw i'm ashamed to be a laagi thujse lagan fan..the way in which they showed todays episode was horrible!! i onli watched the beginning up until dutta saw the man holding the pic..i didnt c it after tht...i hpe they dnt shw tht he's dead...😡anyways bk to the ff. glad you enjoyed it..aw i knew i was going to get some comments on that part of it. you guys want romance..you guys get it. thank u...😳yep babi and babi and sethji gone..as for the crazy woman..let her be.! use bhi toe kuch karna hai naaa..so dutta ko pareshan kar rahin hai.m surprised u bought her in the ff..no1 eva has u knw, whilst reading it i thrt the woman wud apologise for her outburst bt u showed her curse mre..😭 - apart from that..i was thinking more of a cricket team.!😆 haha u a cricket fan? m a football fan..i find cricket boring🥱..lol..no offence 2 cricket fans... evry1 has their own opinion n likes in sports... yh u can hav wteva team u wnt bt jus nt yt...btw i wud like 2 mention i reali adore the way u show naku behaving towards dutta... with the sme respect she used 2...evn the slightest gesture of hers is so adorable in its own way n shws hw high she thinks of him, i.e. wer she refuses 2 sit beside him rather near his legs/feet n rests her head in his lap..it was a sweet gesture tht i reali reali liked😳

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Posted: 14 years ago


The episode was not to great..😕 feel a bit down after watching it. Really wish i hadn't seen it!😉.moving on from that matter. Thank you very much for your feedback always helps...as for the old woman track..i had something else in mind but for some reason i changed it last Minuit. don't ask me why..cuz i don't know lol. i just usually go with the flow in mind and i guess thats what happened her.
As for nakusha..and the way she thinks of dutta. The thing is i wrote this update..when i thought about it.. there was something missing from it. I want nakusha to be as close to the one shown in the serial as possible and so i added that little interaction between them both. Glad it worked out..i didn't want it to be too OTT, was scared of that but i really wanted to stick to her character...her feelings.
I'm glad you mentioned that bit because i wondered if it would be a like or dislike for you guys.. As for sports well yep each to there own. Its only cuz of the world cup i guess.. but ya i do prefer it to football. anyway.


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jagrutid

The episode was not to great..😕 feel a bit down after watching it. Really wish i hadn't seen it!😉 which parts didnt u like? or was it the whole epi..i jus watched tasha moments..cos they r the last we'll eva c 😭.moving on from that matter. Thank you very much for your feedback always helps..aww ur welcum....as for the old woman track..i had something else in mind but for some reason i changed it last Minuit. reali? wt did u originally plan? don't ask me why..cuz i don't know lol. i just usually go with the flow in mind and i guess thats what happened her. hmmm so wil she b bk? i was thinkin she was bk so mayb its linking towards the future track u intend to introduce, i thrt u myt shw tht mayb soon naku becums pregnant bt loses her child..n thts wer the woman visits n makes her feel evn mre bad by makin her remember the words she had told her b4... wts tht mad womans role in the story or was it jus a random visit? sori i knw 2 many ?s bt m jus curious...
As for nakusha..and the way she thinks of dutta. The thing is i wrote this update..when i thought about it.. there was something missing from it. I want nakusha to be as close to the one shown in the serial as possible and so i added that little interaction between them both. Glad it worked out..i didn't want it to be too OTT, was scared of that but i really wanted to stick to her character...her feelings. yh i liked tht scene in particular, n it wasnt so alien 2 the naku tht we knw as evn in tht act she showed her affection n love for him by placing her head in his lap wich means she considers him her lover as well as "saab"
I'm glad you mentioned that bit because i wondered if it would be a like or dislike for you guys.i liked it... bt u cud also probs show her opening up a little..bit like the koyal naku, becos as u mentioned a few updates bk tht dutta had asked tht he wnts the sme old naku bk so mayb u cud shw tht she slowly opens up n tht old bak bak karne wali naku returns..so dutta stil feels she's der in this new naku n isnt lost...if u gt wt m sayin?. As for sports well yep each to there own. Its only cuz of the world cup i guess.. but ya i do prefer it to football. anyway.

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