'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95 - Page 25

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

Originally posted by: Sophia21

Awesome update...

Hailaaa Dutta's punishment☺️ ... Best punishment in the world lol..

Ohh god that woman is back.. Bechari Nakku.. Buddhi cursed Dutta.. Hailaa.. how dare she curse DSP??

Well I hope thats not true :( .. I wana see him as a daddy ..

Originally posted by: -Ritz-

@jagrutid - very well written. 👍🏼 keep updating. already waiting for the next update. thanks for the update.

Originally posted by: anupamas2

nice update. Keep writing and write soon. Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: jagrutid

To be honest i didn't like any of it! 🤔I don't think any of it did justice to the characters and the end simply killed me!!!- seriously i can't even describe my feelings here😕. They way they showed him so lifeless..just finished everything off for me😲 i agree, the end to DSP character showin him lifeless was a bad move thts y for me the end was the smile they gave one another b4 he went off... LTL ended for me in after tht moment... n wil onli restart if MR returns...i personally wud hav liked thm 2 hav extended the SR scene, bt considering the of screen scenario i dnt think they cud hav dne nethin mre...it seemed they wntd 2 gt rid of MR in tht one epi so put al of it in 2geva I think it would have been better if i took fridays episode to be the last and let it be. Ok not going on about it..😆
My original plan involved seema but to be honest..reali? thank god u changed it.. dnt wnt seema 2 return... when i thought about it i didn't really like it hence a quick change. More instinct then anything..hope it works. This old woman is going to be involved in the future track..but cant really reveal any more...if i tell you now then there's no fun in reading. yh dnt wori m sure i'll b able 2 make sum predictions along the way...wil drop u a PM if i do so i dnt try n ruining ur suspense..hehe.. As for nakus old bhanshan queen act..yep i'm going to touch on that slowly, and your right i did mention it a few updates back (good memory!) aww thank u...hehe... . Dutta mentioned it ..and he's not forgotten about it.😉.. i hoping to keep a good balance of romance with..hopefully an intresting storyline too. m sure u will.. update soon!

Originally posted by: kiran255

OH Jagu ! aw hiya..!! thank you very much for reading and commenting.
cruelty is in the air ! very true..too much i think, did try to make you guys feel better with this update hope it worked.😉!!

what a start so you liked it then?😉

love love love it good, good! nice to know you guys are enjoying my writing.

have a request for u hmm..depends on what it is!

can i ahve the same punishment which naku got from Dutta ! your asking the wrong person..tume dutta ko milna hoga for that. Ask him one on one see what he says!😆

hahahahahha😉

love the saaza thought you would..you guys are always looking for an oppertunity to express your love for dutta.😳

and her stubborness , dutta sarcastic remarks ! Actually i didn't think you guys would notice that..wow..your really attentive when you read. Just something little i added with the moment.

amazing and specially when Dutta got annoyed and she callled "saab " I actually when back and read this because i think i did this without realizing..just came with the flow of things.

you just nailed it there -thank you, its very true its just natural i think naku was just very vulnerable here and clever tooshe wanted to remind him..that she was his wife..younger then him..maybe not as mature in the way he is..and of course that she loves him and for that reason he should give in.

we try to do this when we think we will be scolded ,

we try to calm the other person ! yep and naku has her own way too, works as well.

and do i have to mention again how much i love the sazaaaa :P yep you've already said..but to know that you liked it ...and to mention it again..is really something. Thank you.

coming to next part

their is always a respect for DUtta not just in her heart , but her eyes and soul too and she never forgets who DUtta is !

though Dutta likes it but soemtime he want her to be at level with him !
yep very true she doesn't forget who he is and your right..dutta does want her to give in at times..hes mentioned it in one of the updates earlier..and i hope it kind of came through in this scene too. I intend to push that a little more in the coming updates.

and what the hate last part !
can i kill that women

they way she accused Dutta !

though Dutta was cool

but now he lost it !

Aw yep..sorry i guess the story has to move along in some way so here it does..i really quite like this myself. of course not the woman and her bhashan but thinking about it. it was nice to write the kind of protective side of dutta.. he tries to keep naku away from it all but fails.
dutta did loose the patience and do you blame him? who wouldn't.

Gosh no words of that women come true ! you'll have to wait and see.

PLZ do something like this women come to know

even his son was culprit

cuzzzzzzz i cant see that :( don't worry in time all will be resolved..no worries. just enjoy all the tasha for now. yey sab baad mein dekhenge.

oh Jagu

love the update !

love the naughhtiness

but hate the oldie !

ehheheh

Thank you very much..love that you follow my updates in such depth..
love your comment..
love your specificness at my update..
hate nothing...
will be back with a update soon...and again a last thank you!😊