OS:I still love her with my heart.. - Page 2

Originally posted by: vahgar

Hi Shilpi,

Loved it....Awesome...........

I hope something similar to this happens in LTL, but I am sure Dutta is not going to be sitting and chatting with Chanda, he will try to get back to Nakku as soon as possible. He is a man of actions (according to him, but we know how well he can express himself , the proposal scene and the pre FR scene)

I can actually imagine the whole scene, the dialogues are amazing, perfect for Dutta's style of dialogue delivery.

Enjoyed the FB scenes between Dutta and Chanda, how Seema thought it was her. Would have loved to see the expression on her face, when he said , Mein Apne patni say pyar kartha hoon. :)

Keep writing, looking forward to an update on your FF also.

--lalitha

i know yaar...i love him in action...but darn it..he is playing sleeping beauty too much..

anyways...since chanda is adamant on keeping him in till he is ok...and since dutta is blind and helpless i think that jaywalking on road was one off....now he will stay put for somtime...bonding with that Woman,......Grrrrrrrr.

awesome yaar hve no words plez update da nxt part soon yaar

very nice

Hey shilpi,

Hey Shilpi Beautifully written yaar 👏iam totally speechless.....Loved the way Dutta described Naku ....The dialogues were superb 👍🏼....The way he poured his heart out ....awww it really teriffic yaar ...it bought tears to my eyes😭....Seema or chanda i just i don"t wanna mention anything and spoil my mood.....

hey hun..jus saw ur os now..wil read it asap..can u plz pm it..u wil b continuing wit it ryt..?? xoxox

e d i t e d;;;

omg shipli dat is such an amazin os!!

luvd da way d sed hez a wrrior n need 2 fight😳

4 nakuz sake...

he wnt2 2 live wit/4 his luv...his naku..

hw evn darknes wil b beautiful agar woh saath ho..andhera roshni mein badal jayega😳

😍

**missy in tasha dreamland**

can totali imagin N lukn afta blind D but nt makin hm feel vulnerabl

it wud b amazin if cvs do read dis n show us dis scne

wudn hav 2 wory bou seema..she wud kno dat her maang mein sindoor meanz nuthng...dat shez lyk kiran sed in lala land😆😆

thnx 4 such a beautiful piece of writting

seriusly shilpi itz an honour reading ur amazin wrk!!👏👏👏👏👏

mwahh

xXXx

WOW!!!! such a beautifully written emotional OS...........bought tears into my eyes........ Would really like to see this happen in the serial............Luved the Dutta-Seema Convo.............seema dreaming abt her and Duttta..........whereas Dutta saying evrything thinking of Nakku............. and in the end the last dialogue that bought Seema back to ground......

Dutta-Chanda, main uske bina ab nahi rah sakta. Main maut se nahi darta. Par main maut se lard kar wapas sirf jeene ke liye nahi aya hoon. Main uske sath jeene ke liye wapas aaya hoon. Main lautna chahta hoon meri mohabbat ke paas. Us ladki ke paas jisse main har roop mein, har rang mein behat pyaar karta hoon. Main aapni patni se pyaar karta hoon. Main aapni pyaar se milna chahta hoon, uske paas jaan chahta hoon. Main meri Nakkusha ke paas lautna chahta hoon hamesha ke liye.

Simply superb, shilpi...............made my day..........thanx once again........hav a wonderful day.......