FF- Raj Gharana,Ch39, the end, pg76, updtd on 21.2 - Page 22

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi TIn, we all love our baba dont' we,😳 they are "sher" but when the wife say's something, that is the final word... 😉 I lost my baba a couple of years back, but not a moment has passed that i donot think about him
keep up with ur ff , i really look fwd to it, it is my bed time treat😃, with a pack of m&m's on the side😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi, lovely FF. waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 16, weekend spl

He stopped, Naku saw they had come to a clearing….with benches etc., it looked like a picnic spot, he jumped down and came forward to hold Naku's horse….

Naku did not want his help obviously so tried to copy the way he does it and lost her balance…she grabbed his shoulders to steady herself, he let go of the horse to bring his arms around her…

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Leela was supervising the cleaners when her eyes fell on Roops coming down the stairs….she raised her brow…Roops and at this hour…..

Kya baath hai Roops…jaldi uth gayi aaj…..

Err socha Bhau se ek baath kar lu….Roop stammered

But now he must have gone for a ride….lekin baath kya hai…what is so important…Leela asked….

Bus ek baath hai….nothing important usdin Seema mili thi…but then I realized I hardly get to see Bhau…so thought let me catch up with him….

Leela stood amused…my god what is wrong with the girl..there must be something otherwise why would she wake up in the morning and want to speak to her brother…they rarely interacted until it was some occasion or they crossed each other's path somehow….

Seema is it…I thought she was dropped…chalo I will set up a breakfast for you two and both of you of you can chat…

Thanks Leelu…let me see if I remember to ride…Roops went went…..

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Ayi Sahib was listening to a villager when she heard a voice saying Areh Baji…jaldi kar…mere liye saddle prettylady,…… Roops so early?

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His hot breath fell on her forehead…she dug her nails in his shoulders….

He brought her closer to his body…she tried to push him away…trying to deny the attraction she was feeling…..he kissed her forehead….

She raised her face to look into his face…he lowered his lips and captured her's….

Momentarily she lost herself…swimming in an unknown sensation which filled her body, he pressed himself to her, her arms went around his neck…he moaned….feeling her hair, trying to open her bun lifting his face…I hate when you tie your hair like this…he said….

Naku came back …she pushed him hard…making him lose his balance….

Isliye aap mujhe idhar laye ho….

Not exactly but partly yes…he tried to pull her back into arms…

I thought I told you to stay away from me ..Nakusha glared…

Dutta looked amused…interesting…you want me to stay away from you but given the first opportunity you hug me with your might….

I lost my balance….

I am here to help….

I don't want your help…..

Why? Just because Ayi Sahib told you to stay away from me? What is my fault….that I wanted to help you…I wanted to share your problems….I wanted to take care of you…..

Take care ka toh pata chal hi gaya…Nakusha replied retying her bun…given the first opportunity you ….

What did I do? He lifted her chin…maine kya kiya…don't tell me now that I made you pregnant….you just had your….

Nakusha's ears burnt…..well kya pata agar mai chance deti toh……

He kept a finger on her lips…dekh Naku….I know my limits…yes I am attracted to you but don't think you are the ultimate woman in this world….and don't dare accuse me…mujhe kitna janti hai tu…you are going by what my mother has told you….a woman who hardly cares about her husband and children….inspite of all these years refuses to come out of her shell ….

Nakusha grabbed his hand and lowered it….Don't speak about Ayi Sahib in that manner…she is your mother…

Hardly….he released himself from her grip and pushed her back to turn around…..pulling his horse away

As a son how can you be so blind…how can you be so deaf….you stay in this house….do you have any idea what goes around here….do you have any idea that your mother for 35 years have died hundred deaths, specially when her husband compared her with other ladies and flaunted his ladies on her face…..

My mother told all these to you…..he was surprised…Patils believed in keeping their secrets under the carpet….everybody knows but nobody talks about it….

When I met my aunt I asked her how was Ayi Sahib as a young girl….she replied a very vibrant and full of life girl who came forward in every project they undertook….my aunt then asked me why do I want to know…..

I did not tell her the obvious reasons but which woman for 35 years would like to hear that you are a classless woman, you don't know how to keep your husband happy…you don't know how to dress…you are a bad example to my children…etc etc agar mai hoti na kab ka chali jati aise shaadi par juta marke….

I hear amongst her sisters she has got married the best.....

Ha with a rich man yes…but is she happy…does her children understand her…areh even Leela snaps at her…Kyu? What has she done to earn Leela's wrath…

I have never seen seen Leelu snapping at Ayi Sahib….she is utmost courteous to her….

Uff ankhe khule rakhoge toh dekhoge na ….Nakusha turned to walk away …

Yeh kaha ja rahi hai tu…don't dare and walk out on me….

Nakusha stopped and turned her head….I have been hurt a lot recently..my family is yet to be back and my only relative is imprisioned atleast I understand why Ayi Sahib does not want me to get close to her son…she has suffered ….she does not want me to suffer anymore…atleast I understand her very well…Nakusha ran towards the haveli….Dutta stood stunned ….

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Dutta sat on the bench….he never felt his home as home, not the same feeling when he visited homes of other friends…he attributed the same partly to his parents and partly to the size of house he stayed in…too big to feel cozy and homely…

A spite of a girl, no family, no money but the way she talked to him, her eyes blazing, nose flaring, 'juta maru mai aisa shaadi pe' he tried to imagine her in Ayi Sahib's place….walking about the Haveli boldly doing things herself, like the way she cleans the stable, as if she has been doing this work for ages…no longer the frightened and lost looking the day she had come in…her eyes flashed in anger, her lips soft and melting under his, her warm breath …oh he wanted her more now, he wanted see himself getting lost in her eyes as he made love to her…he wanted to hear her moans and cries….but is it only her physical being he wanted, to satisfy his lust?

Bhau…Bhau….tu idhar baithkar keya kar raha hai….

Dutta looked up to see Roops galloping towards him…he took a few seconds to register her presence…

Baitha hu bus yuhi…he replied trying to remember when did he last see her riding in the morning….tu is samay idhar….

Err I wanted to put a horse in the forthcoming racing season….I wanted you help me choose one….Roops looked around for Naku as she spoke to Dutta…Naku was nowhere to be seen…

We will have our horses anyway Roops….we are a big name in the circuit….

I know but I want my own horse….Roopvati ki ghora….not the Patils…my own….

You are a Patil nevertheless….

Well …yes I will not deny that…I can't deny that but I decided to have my own horse…under my own banner….you have any objection….

Dutta looked at his sister…she never went to hostel …how does she feel about their parents he wondered …she has her breakfast with their father he has seen many a times but what about Ayi Sahib…as a daughter shouldn't she be more close to her mother….

I don't have any objection Roops but then if you want your own banner do all the formalities …bus khali naam ka nehi….

Roopvati was surprised to hear her brother agreeing to her proposal …something she just said out of the hat to indulge in a conversation…

Of course Bhau, I have already thought about my own logo and banners…I will show you the design….Oh thank you thank you….I hope bus Baba agree ho jaye….

Well I am sure he will not say no to his little poppet….Dutta got up to bring the horses back which were grazing ….

What are you doing with two horses and prettylady too…

Naku ayi thi…..

Naku…where is she …Roops feigned her ignorance and looked around….

Chali gayi…..

Why…..I mean I did not see her when I was coming…..

Must have taken someother route or you simply missed her….come lets go back…..Dutta climbed his horse after tying the rein of prettylady to his saddle…

Oh I must have….strange girl….I mean she has no qualms in cleaning horse's shit but when she is around the Haveli she walks about as if she owns it…..Roops commented observing her brother's reaction….he was very quiet…thoughtful…..

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Ayi Sahib looked at the watch and then went towards her room…no she was not there…she dialed the stable, one of the boys answered….no Ayi Sahib …Naku is not here…she is not here for quite a while….now…

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Raja Saab was talking to Vipin regarding some appointments standing in Vipin's office when he heard voices from outside…looking past the glass doors he saw Roops standing and talking to his wife…Dutta too standing at a distance….Bajirao assuring something…..

What is the matter Vipin?

I am not too sure Raja Saab….let me find out….

Just then Leela entered carrying lunch trays….

Kya Leela what is the problem? Chaos kis baath ki….

Ayi Sahib's pet is missing…Leela replied sarcastically and Ayi Sahib has put the whole house on her head….sar pe chara liya….

That girl?

Who else? Vipinji will be going home for lunch or should I get something for you…..Leela asked….

I ….

No I don't think you can go home today…I think you have to call the police, maybe the fire brigade also…..I tell you Raja Saab…aaj toh hadh kar di Ayi Sahib ne….Dutta had gone to office…use bhi bula liya….

Dutta kya karega…how is Dutta responsible ?

Pata nehi Raja Saab I was busy but overhead that Dutta had taken that girl for a ride and after that the girl went missing….

Raja Saab did not need anything more to hear, he strode over to open the door and asked …what is going on here in a booming voice….Madhvi what is the matter?

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Leela putting down the tray in Raja Saab's room, Leela patted her hair and putting the loose tendrils behind her ear..

Vipinrao watched her antics through the corner of his eyes…and sighed…how many times he has seen her playing tricks with that helpless woman…

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow!!!!!!! Nakku in her sherni roop.............She snapped back at Dutta abt him not understanding his AS such a way that......... she send him into a thinking mode............... good now he may start to talking to AS...............Roops-Dutta convo gr8.........Leela uffff!!!! a headache...............cliffhanger!!!!!!! Nakku missing...........sure her absence will make Dutta realise that he does not want her only physically but emotionally also.............. But where is she???????? AS, Roops, Baaji all worried........ Is Dutta toooo worried????? Hope so.........looking frwrd fr mondays updt..........hav a wonderful weekend............Cya...
Edited by ushankitvc - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey great update yaar............
OMG naku said boldly abt AS's suffer to dutta,how bravo naku was👏,i hope now onwards dutta try to convo with his mom..............it was superbbbbbbbbbbbb dear................looking fwd...........

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Posted: 14 years ago
Goooo nakku
Just one thing more I'm gonna add Tinni it's a favor frm u to me a loyal reader of ur FF plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzz kill dis Leela or if u can't atleadt make ayi sahib put her in her place not anyone.else she has to b d one as she has suffered tooooo much cuz of her
Waiting for next prt
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the weekend update...........................as for the update it was awesome..............loved the way naku defended ayi sahib...................
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Posted: 14 years ago
I visited the forum at 8:30 in the morning nd found that there is no update, so i was lyk 😭 , but now, wen i visited again, by seeing update, i was lyk dhinchak dhinchak [:D/] .... [:D/].

Weekend spl is indeed very spl, tin dear. I want to applaude for u.... 👏 .... 👏 .

Mazaa aa gaya tin 😳 . So our TaSha kisses, dutta getting naughty, naku too feelin attracted towards him.... 😍 .... 😍 .... 😍 .... 😍 .

I lyk the way naku explained AS condition to dutta, now he vl get to know wat all his mother has gone through....

Naku missing.... 😲 , that wud be something interesting. But i dont understand why naku always ran 😡 . But naku chahe jitna bhaag le par usko pyar to hona hi tha.... ❤️.

Gr8 gr8 gr8 update tin.... Thnx for updating regularly.... Now as there vl be no update tomorrow, i vl wait for monday.... 😍 .

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Posted: 14 years ago
Very well handles tintiny....the entire Dutta-Nakku convo was too good...hmm..i understand your hesitation to unite raja saab and madhavi....but its a 35yrs marriage they had 3 kids together...as newly married couple..he must have had some deep emotions for the woman he married ....she was full of life and vibrant right...there has to be some level where they connected...but with time and misunderstandings..the feelings that could have turned into deep abiding love were just smothered....I just had an idea....i'll PM you with it...see if you like it.
but todays update was awesome the kiss the small noke-jhoke....dutta is sooooooo falling in love....ok..so he doesn't think she is the ultimate woman in the world does he?...give it sometime and a few more kisses dutta would think she is ultimate in whole universe even in heaven...
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Posted: 14 years ago
RES...Will be back later.
Jayati Ma'am,
Finally back to Chapter 16 update. Happy to see Dutta no longer worried or inhibited in any way by his awareness/nascent feelings for Nakusha. I am not very sure about the "lust" bit as yet but I am sure that since the characters are your babies, you know better.
So have we reached a high point ibn the story with Dutta giving in to this woman who seems to be so at ease and almost part of what is Dutta's natural environment (as in the stud farm and his passion for horses). I would also like to commend you for the way you are develpoing each and every character of Raj Gharana so as to be in sync with the main storyline. If only our CV's would make the same effort s in integrating each protagonists of LTL as seamlessly as you manage in R/Gharana.
Will look forward to your next update.
Love,
Kavita😳
Edited by KavitaDR - 14 years ago

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