FF- Raj Gharana,Ch39, the end, pg76, updtd on 21.2

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divya17-7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: tintiny
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hey jayati,

u r not doing any good for us da😭.......... leaving the update at a cliffhanger romantic situation....

too bad............

im eagerly waiting for the next update.... hope u update on weekends also dearie.......

thnx

tc
divya

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shruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

Great update tin.... 👏.... 👏. Finally, TaSha together, that too alone.... 😍 .... 😍.

Roops luv baji truly, RuJi rocks.... How cute na.... 😍 .... 😍.

Its getting interesting day by day, i m ryt now in my college, attending my lecture but all my mind is in my phone as i m reading this ff.

Thnx for updating....

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prettywoman

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Posted: 14 years ago

#203

Hey Jayati.. Kavi has said everything i wanted to say really.. thanks to my hubby who is abroad and called me so early in the morning and woke me up.. i was grumpy when he rang, but then remembered you must have updated and was happy he woke me up so early yaar!

first shikayat.. it was not long enuf.. tell u what, it never is.. ask shilpi, she will tell u how i pester her for long updates.. aaj kal woh samaj gayi and always posts long ones.. but i have to admit, u post my dose everyday.. hats off..

AS is slowly waking up from her slumber.. she is slowing connecting the dots and crossing ths T's!! Roops is so sweet and was laughing reading how she also does not like seema..lol.. her convo with baaji is very sweet..she is her natural self and such a different person to her brother.. at the moment cannot even imagine D being playful with N.. but yes, that would be worth a sight when it does happen..

wow, Baaji tak Roops khabar pahunchati hai.. so now baaji knows that Dutta is acting weird outside the haveli and with Seema too.. I am sure he slept in his car when on the dinenr date might have pacified a few loyal readers today, me included.lol.

why do i feel that Bolt has not been sold?! Why do I feel he has been tied to one of the trees in the meadow or he will come galloping to naku?! why.. i sure hope so..i know baaji loaded the horses, but you did not mention that he had gone to the airport.. but then he also did not go.. but he is DSP na, ek phone ghumake kaam ho sakta hain.. anyway waiting to be surprised..

waise kya clifhanger tha yaar.. tujhe bhi shilpi ki bimari lag gayi hai.. she did exactly the same yesterday and aaj you also!! my poor heart.. sigh.. waise i am hoping u will keep up the weeekend special epi tradition.. pls let us know?!#

aur naya horse ka naam meine pada and i nearly fell off my chair.. kya similarity.. ?!!! ha ha

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Wanderbug

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Posted: 14 years ago

#204

Thanks...First for the update and second for giving the baaji-roops convo..I was wondering wht kind of gal roops has grown up to be without a close contact with her mom and a stern rather detached father and maybe not a very affectionate brother..kala must be very elder to her so she might not even have her to interact with..this raj gharana gives a new name to word dyfunctional...i wondered if she is as disappointed in her mother as her brother or did she not care or was she aware but caught up in her own selfish world like the princess she is..but now i know she is the only normal,balanced person in the family...she is not ashamed of her feelings for baaji, just an employee yet she understands his discomfort to move in her circles..she knows that her father rules and with hardness. i would not be surprised if Dutta and all are proved wrong in thinking that she is a silly, bimbo.

I hope AS starts having courage and starts fighting her corner...that will get her more respect infront her kids and me too.

Waiting for tomorrows part..i have a feeling that we will not see romance tomorrow ...no, we would rather see explosion or say explosions...First Dutta will explode on nakku berating her and demanding trust from her while nakku is taken a back and is cowering....then she will not be able to cantain her resent for him selling bolt and blast out at him for being insensitive and selfish and bossy amazing the high and mighty prince....i hope you don't cut the Dutta-nakku convo short like in all last updates..let the next update be a long shot without any other characters scene...it will probably build a tempo and feel of the ice beraking between the two...see when the protagonists interact there has to be more written about that.

nahole darshak kimba bolo readers ra bujhbe na je ki amon ekta holo je tara eto kachche ashlo..ki kore bhoaj-bhuji holo tader mode..aar judi raag arr jhogra bare tahole kano barlo..ke bhul chilo ke theek..readers will begin to connect with their feelings for each other.

In differnt storylines like this i don't see Dutta as Dutta and Nakku as Nakku they are completely differnt from show hence as readers we need to reconnect with our protagonists again..one long uninterrupted shot will probably do it...some inner thoughts and interactions and some habits and mannerisms..that's all..

Gyan dite jayni kinto baeshi likhe falechi....ami jaani tume bahlo bujhbe afterall ieta tomar brainchild...but i love your baby like my nephew now.hence the concerns..

don't mind.please.

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divya17-7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: shilpita87

hey shilpi,

i seriously did not understand one bit what u wrote in btw......... is it marathi......... oh god, i m confused now.........😕😕
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Pooja_219

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

Thanks tin for this lovely update,but i found it short.I guess i m being greedy.

Hope to get week-end dose slightly longer.😊

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Wanderbug

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Posted: 14 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: dc17-7

hey shilpi,

i seriously did not understand one bit what u wrote in btw......... is it marathi......... oh god, i m confused now.........😕😕
😕
tc
divya

Soo Sorry...i lapsed into bengali with jayati who is also frm kolkata...in between as i sometimes feel straved for speaking my mothertongue..actually i wrote the same thing in english in the above para and just summerized it in bangla....will try to stick to english.😃

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bfunofbb123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#208

First of all Tins tank tank u for been so loyal to us & delivering ur beautiful FF everymorning w/out fail. read both updates which is amazingly awesome & can't get enough of it. aww he is trying to sell bolt but i doubt he is going to sell him infact i refuse to beleive D is that insensitive he is just doing that to make naku upset like she upset him by not trusting him. like @vandu i also think bolt is some where on that meadow & once she knows he is not sold she will soften towards D. wow vandu i am quoting u every time but it is true As surely woke up from her sleep & is smelling the coffee i am glad she picked up on kanta's game & she will b on her case & she won't let D or N suffer the consequenses as she did. Ohh poor naku D is absolutely adamant to get his way he is not used ppl refusen him & w/out her consent he shoved her to pretty lady & i love the comment he made about her monthly so humourous & it was funny how she said it in ur prev. update. tins i love how roops is her i love how she replied to seema & baji so adorable as usual he is looking out 4 naku but he knows he cant with his bhau.😆 Tins i love the way u r writing it so unique & entertainging but there is chota sa problem now that u told me the meaning tanx dear short hai sorry but pls we greedy readers we so love it we want more pls 4 weekend spsl make it looooooonger pls i am begging with follded hands & i am sure my fellow readers will agree as well 4 longer hai na? tanx dear lovely update can't wit 4 next sorry long comment!😊

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Juni17

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Posted: 14 years ago

#209

Dear Tinni,

As always ur update was awesum ...............now i kno its not fair to request as ur a amazing writer n i've complete faith i n u.........but plz plz plz make dutta pour his heart to nakku this time.........at least nakku shud kno that dutta has feelings for her n that to genuine........... waiting for a memorable weekend update...............take care dear

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jayati

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Posted: 14 years ago

#210

Dear Friends,

Thank you for your lovely comments. Please feel free to write your thoughts as they give me inputs to ponder specially at times when I am stuck... :) :)

@ Vandu - you caught me right....I did write as prettywoman and then changed to prettylady 😛 I did not want to make you a horse so soon ....😃

@ Shilpi ..gyan nishoi debe...ebong amio debo sujog pelei...free hai...paisaa nehi lagta toh problem keya....

To be frank in my effort to keep the characters realistic as much as possible I do need inputs because I have not met variety of people...e.g I have not met any couple like Ayi Sahib and Raja Saab....since Shilpi wrote she wants them to connect or unite also ...I am wondering what to do...after 35 years is anything at all possible to that regard...was speaking to my partner with whom I created 'All Is Well' she knows somebody who reconciled after 17 years but told me I really do not know if they are happy in true sense or just have reconciled...

My own parents are very different...if my father is like Dutta my mother is somewhat like Naku..My father has his moods and temper, my mother bears it all till she gets angry...she does not shout but then from 'sher' he becomes.....nope I will not call my Baba names 😳 Love Tin

Edited by tintiny - 14 years ago

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