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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

hey great update hun..luvd hw naku has confidnc in hrself...n hr dialoguez wer gr8....rli wna kno wa hapenz at da ppoja..

hmm y am int suprisd bou sudz lol ope duta findz owt soon..awh felt soo sry 4 baaji..bles hm e feelz so lost
lotery! lol rli ope ganpat dsnt find out abou it!
update soon hun😳 x
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
read all the parts.........nice one dear......update soon.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
a nice updt...............keep going..............waiting fr ur updt..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Thanks a lot.
PART 5 :
Babi, Ganpath are in basti, Sethji comes running "aayi mareko 1 lakh ki lottery lagi hai".
Babi is Shocked and Ganpat's mouth is wide open. Babi asks "Sethji .. tu kya bol raha hai.. tera dimaag tho teek hain na .. tune kaab lottery karidi, tumhe paise kahase aayi".
Sethji says " Kya aayi tubhina .. main saach bolraha hai. Bajji rao ne mereko patil niwasse nikhalthe waqt 100RS diyatha, maine lottery karidi Dekho aab 1 lakh ki rakam milnewala hai"
Babi scolds sethji "Baapko tho bevda, juvari and beta ... tujhe bi lath lag gayi lottery ki, saach bolraha haina tu, tune lottery kyun karidi"
"Kya aayi shuru hogayi tere kichkich, mereko tayiko gift maane taufa deneka tha, mere dostne kaha ..agar lottery karidetho barobar 500RS miltha hai.. to maine karida.. dekho 1 lakh milgaya.. kya aayi tu na kabhi kush nayi hothi"
Ganpat is very happy,he is in drunken state, he screams at Babi.. "Dekha Babi mere beteko.. Wah mera sethji tho bada hoga... badde rakam.. lanewala hai... tere beti ki tarah nahi jo hume gharse nikhaldi hey sethji mera sun.. chaal paisa lathe hai.. .
Sethji says "Bas kar baba .. tutho full tight hai.. Paise tereko nahi denge..maine Aayike naampe lottery karida hai" Ganpat stares babi and sethji. "Tayar hona aayi kaal jakke paise lathe hai, he gives lottery ticket to babi" Babi's with teary eyes keeps it near Bappa's murthy. "Bappa tera lakh lakh shukar hai.. tune meri sunli.." Ganpat says to himself, paise tho aane do...badme..." he faints.
Roops in her room.. thinking what to do.. she opens her walldrobe, takes out diamond earrings (Dutta had gifted it for her birthday). She has a wide smile on her face. She goes to some jewellery shop, She talks to the shop owner "Maine hey earrings bhejna chahthi hoon.. kithna milega?", Shop owner checks the earring and says "1 lakh 20 hazzar milsaktha hai". Roops says "Teek hai, Please hai baath Bhauko pata nahi chalna chayihe" Shop owner nods his head, roops takes money and leaves the shop.
Roops Goes to Park, searches for some one .. Some one comes behind and holds her hand "Roops tayi main yaha hoon 😃" Sethiji is standing infront of her.. Both laughes and shakes hand, they sit on a bench. Roops gives chacolates to sethji. Sethji smiles. "Bol sethji kaisa hai tu.. maussi aur maussaji kaise hai" ..
sethji replies "appun tho mast hai tayi.. aayi tho gharke kaam ke liye jathi hai...baba daru pike pada rahtha hai, main to school jatha hoon, aayi taak jathi hai tayi..gharke kaam karke tayi mai padayi choddega..mujhe aayi ki madad karni hai"
Roops gets angry "Tu padayi kyun chodega.. tu aachi tarahse padayi karega .. bada admi baneya.. maine kahana saab kuch teek hojagega.., Tune kiya jo kaam maine bathayatha.. kaal aaraha haina maussiko leke.."
ha tayi kal aayiko leke aatha hoon.. Roops holds his cheeks and says .. "sethji you are so cutena😊 "
Tayi, "1 lakh tho baddi rakam hothi hai na..." Roops says "Hai sethji.. maussi is rakamse kuch karsakthi hai.. apna kudaka buissness karsakthi hai..dekho.. maussiko gharka kaam nahi karna padega achhi baath haina sethji",
Sethji says "Appun jaldi bada hojayega taayi.. aayi ka madad karega.. baba ka kayal rakhega.. khubb paisa kamahega aur Nakku tayi ko bahuth sara taufa dega... he starts crying 😭 in between asks Nakku tayi kaisi hai.. Jijaji kaise hai.. merako tayi ka bahuth yaad athi hai, aayi bhi tayiki yaad karke rothi hai"
Roops hugs sethji "vahini teek hai sethji.. unkke saath tho bappa hai.. Bhau vahinise bhahuth pyaar karthe hai.. unkke pyaar me ithini sakthi hai.. ho haar mushkil ka saamna karthe hai.. bhurayi bi unke saamene guttne tekh dega.. Duniya ka kohi takhaq unkhe alaag nahi kar saktha .. see starts crying loudly"
Sethji says "Roops tayi mera kuch samaj mai nahi aaya...😕" Roop says "tumhe samajna bhi nahi chahiye.. Sethiji scratches his head, roops smiles "aab tho mera dost hasegana.. hasso..😊 .. hum dono tho dost hai na ... hasna sethji please.. chalo chalo hassa tho passa, bol kya kahega.. icecream, pizza, pani puri.. khub kahenge aur majje karenge.. kya boltha hai 😉".
Roops and Sethji roam around, have chats.. Roops is about to leave "She bends down and dono haath jodke says "Sethji .. main phirse maafi mangthi hoon.. mujhe maaf kardo..Sethji, Uss raath kala tayi ne tumara muh par kala pocha.. maine tumhe mazboor kiya drawing likneko.. tu mujhe maaf karegana ... please sethji..agar tune maaf nahi kiya to mai khudse naazre nahi milasakthi.."
"TAYI KITHNI BAAR MAAFI MANGTHI HAI.. maine kahana chalo maaf kiya.. ussi raath tho tune mujse maafi mangithi.. aur hum dost banethe.. Dosti me no sorry no thanq 😛"
Roops hugs Sethji.
roops says " Wah sethji tu tho hero bangaya hai.. badde badde dialogues martha 😊"
" kyun tayi.. main hero nahi lagtha.. bolna tayi.. .roops laughs .. teek hai.. kaal maussi ko lekhe hey address le aur pankj sir se milo.. woh maussi ko 1 lakh denge.. uss paise se maussi kuch dandha karegi.. saab kuch teek ho gahega, vada kar tu kisko iss baremain nahi bataheya.. kisiko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki hum dono dost hai...aur hey saab kuch maine kiya hai ...kah kasam..samja.."
Sethji says "Phikar not tayi.. main saab samallega.. aayi ne bhi poochatha subhah.. maine samjadiya usko"
Sethji ays "agar babane iss paiseko cheen liya tho??" ... roops and sethji both look scared...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
awhh sethiji is suprer cute!! n i totali lu😆 da way u portrayd roops ere... itz so cutana 😳
rli ope ganpat dsnt tke da money tho..am sur babi wil find owt soon..
update soon hun.xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

nice update .... both roops and sethji very sweet

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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Part 6:
Sethji says "agar babane iss paiseko cheen liya tho??" ... roops and sethji both look scared...
Roops says "haisa kuch nahi hoga, donot worry". She goes back to PN.
Next day whole family is sitting in pooja. AS is waiting for Nakku,AS has asked her to dress properly as guests are coming for pooja. Nakku is wearing red mysoresilk saree with mango border, her hair is not tied, she has put JASMINE flower in hair, she is wearing mango designed golden hara, red glass bangles and silver payal (mango designed). Her payal makes sound when Nakku enters Pooja, Dutta turns back and look at Nakku, she is really looking like a princess. Duttake nazar nahi hatthi nakkuse. he comes back to sense, when Nakku sits beside Dutta for pooja. Dutta is about to get up,
Aayi saheb says "Dutta, maine hey pooja gharke shanthike liye rakhi hai.. tumhe nakku ke saath pooja karna hai.. hamari iss baathko maan ja Dutta". Dutta looks at AS, she is in tears, he sits back. Purohit starts "SATYA NARAYANA POOJA" Newly married couple will do this pooja for better life. Purohit asks Dutta to wear dothi and shalya. Dutta stares at AS, comes to pooja wearing silk dothi and Shalya. Dutta sits beside Nakku. They both look like "Lakshmi Narayan"
Purohit asks Dutta to put sindhoor to Nakku, Dutta looks at AS and puts sindhoor to nakku.Purohit says Dutta to hold Nakku's hand for pooja, he stares purohit.. puroith says "Haath pakdiye Srimaan", He holds her hand and both will do kukum archana to Idol. Both worship "SATYA NARAYANA SWAMY" with different variety of flowers and then "purohit starts reading satya narayana swamy katha"
Roops asks "Leela, tayi kya baath aaj kala tayi koi chaal nahi chalegi", Leela says
"Kal tu gharpe nahi thi.. aab dekh hota hai kya.. aaj nakku ka iss ghar me akkri din hai" Roops says "Kya..kya karnewali hai tayi.. bolo leela tayi.." AS asks roops to be quiet as katha is going on. Roops gets tensed. Pooja ends dutta and Nakku takes ashirwad from purohit. Purohit says "SHIGRA MEVA SANTHANA PRAPTHI RASTU" , Dutta and Nakku look at each other.
Madhu distributes prasad to every one. Bajji comes near roops and says "Dekh choti behen hai teri, kithni kaam karthi hai tu hai.. poojape bhi chup nahi baitsaksthi", Roops ghurrs Bajji, he leaves saying "Mujhe bhulaya aaya Aayi saheb"
"Suresh enters PN calling Nakku's name", roops gets a call from sethji.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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a nce updt.............Sureshs entry here also..........OMG!!!!!!!!!!.continue sooon..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Part 6:
"Suresh enters PN calling Nakku's name", roops gets a call from sethji. Kala goes close to Nakku says "Nakusha, appni bappase prathna karle.. tumara gharme akkri din hoga, aab jo chaal me chalnewali hoon, tera bhagwan nahi bachasaktha, she gives photo to her in which "suresh and nakusha" are together. Nakku gets worried. She stands mum.
Roops sees Suresh and leaves PN, BG's are holding Suresh, stopping him to enter PN, Dutta asks BG's to leave suresh. Suresh says "Bhauo main suresh, Nakku ne mujhe dokha diya, usne appko bi dokha diya, apse shaddi karli, hey Nakku dokhebazz hai", Bajji is abt hit Suresh, Dutta stops him.Dutta says "aur bol kya bolna chatha hai".
Suresh : "Bhau aap bhagwan hai aap mere saath nyaah kighiye, sazza dijiye iss dokhe bazz ko, mera pass saboot hai hey photo dekhiye.. he gives photo to Dutta".
Dutta looks at photo and stares Suresh, " Photo acchi hai, kahase banyi?? agar Tujhe lagtha hai main hey photo dekhke hey manlooga ki Nakku ne tumhe dokha di and tu saach kaharaha hai to tu bilkul (pause) galath sochta hai" Main janatha hoon meri nakku kya hai.. Woh sacchi aur boli hai.. Natak karna, pasana mere nakku ko nahi aatha.. Agar usse apne roop dikhakar dokha dena aatha ho tho kaabhi woh naukrani banke mera ghar me nahi aathi aur ussne kabhi mujhe nahi pasaya. Meri nakku aag hai aag, agar koyi usse ankhe utakar be dekhe to woh jaljayega. woh gangaki tarah pavitra hai tumare himmat kaise huyi Dutta sriram patil ki dharam patni par lanchan lagane ki"
Nakusha hears dutta's words and starts crying (kushike hansu), Kala look shocked.
Dutta roars, suresh gets scared, suresh is shivering, Dutta gun points Suresh and says "Saach bol warna maine tera game bajadunga.. main 3 tak ginuga hoon, agar tune saach nahi batayi to tu nahi tera laash iss gharse jayega, bol bol tu kiske liye kaam kartha hai" Kala's face fades.. she gets tensed... Sudarshan and leela gets scared.
Ek, Duo .. aur thee..before Dutta completes Suresh holds Dutta's leg, "Bhau mujhe maat maro.. daya karo bhau... mai mai saach boltha hoon.. mujhe kuch pata nahi.. kisine mujhe paise diya tha natak karneke liye...kaha." Bajji, kishore and AS gets shocked. Mai natak company me kaam kartha hoon, mujhe paisoki saak jarurath thi, mera maa ki operation karvani hai.. issiliye maine hey galath kaam kiya.. mujhe maaf kardo bhau... main Nakusha ko nahi jantha.. he starts crying, hey kisne karvaya woh natak company ka malik ko pata hoga".
Dutta beats him and holds his shirts coller, "chaal dikha tu kiske liye kaam kartha hai, Dutta calls Nakku, Nakku looks into Dutta's eyes, her tears are not stopping... suresh maafi maang meri patnise... Suresh haath jodke kahtha hai "maaf kardo vahini, maine paiseke liye mere maa ko bachaneke liye natak ki gareeb hoon maaf kardo." Nakku keeps on looking at Dutta.. Duttase uski nazar nahi hatthi. Bajji gives a wide smile. AS says "jagadamba.. jagadamba"..
Nakku gives a look at Kala.. Kala turns her face. First time in life kala looks scared. Sudharsan is shivering.. Dutta says "Bajji gaddi nikal.... dekhthe hai.. hey hamara kaunsa naya dushmaan hai.. hamare ghar ka haar baath jantha hai.. hamara gharme ashanthi phylana chahtha hain.. main ussko nahi chodunga Suresh mai tumhe issliye nahi marraha hoon kyunki tumne natak appne maa ko bachaneke liye kiya hai warna.. ,.. Le chaal mujhe tumare natak company ka malik ke paas". Kala ka payrotale jameen nikhal jatha hai.. Dutta leaves PN along with Kishore,Bajji and Suresh.
Nakku comes close to Kala and says "Dekha kala ... mere pati mujhse kithna vishwas karthe hai... dekha.. hum door hothe huve bi kithne paas hai.. Suna saab ne kya kaha... main aag hoon aag.. mujhe haisa RAM mila hai kala jo.. kabhi mera agni pariksha nahi lega.. Kala ... majhe to tumhe Thank you kahena hai.. mujhe kabhi nahi pata chaltha.. saab mujhpar ithna vishwaas karthe hai.. ithna maanthe hai mujhe..saab mera gora ya kala rooopse nahi ..mere athma se pyaar karthe hai kala.. mere athmase." aab bachale apne appko .. agar saabko tera sachayi pata chale ..to soch tumara kya halath hoga... bachasakthi hai baccha appne apko Mera bhagwan hamesha mera saath hai... dekhthe hai aaj kiska akri din hoga...iss gharme.."
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30

well written .... please update soon

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