FF-Unspoken words-part8 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

38

Views

5.7k

Users

15

Likes

81

Frequent Posters

ushankitvc thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#11
a nice updt...........the ETs are really njoying their victory..........Anay is not well........Kala hardly cares............
Cant wait for the nxt update............updt sooooooon
Prinsesse.Suvi thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#12
Congrats for ur ff!
Its really good
Glad to see that Roops is positive
Yeh Kala is so evil, doesnt care about her own kid😡
Leela and Suds wont be happy for too long abhi jitni masti karni hai karlo😡
Continue soon😊
MeetPremeer thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#13
hey dear
nice begining
loved both the parts
plz continue soon
plz pm me whenever u update
love
Nidhi
shally_m thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#14

nice update .....

please add me to your pm list
486270 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#15

Thanks All. I am still adding to PM list, need to validate my email address. I will add you all in the PM list by tomorrow.

PART -3.

Nakusha, gets up early in the Morning. After bath, Goes to Pooja room, Lighten the diya, She prays to god "Bappa, apne meri har mushkil ki ghadi me mera saath dihai. isbhar Mera pyaar ka, mera vishwas ka pariksha hai bappa, Mera Maan rakhna. Saabse alag hona mathlab mera kudhse alag hona. Mai Sukh nai mangthi Bappa, Mujhe ithna Sakthi dena ki mai har Dukh aur Mushkhil ka samna hasthe huve karu". She does Tulasi pooja, prays for Dutta's long life. She puts haldi and Kumkum to her mangala sutra. Then Goes to Kitchen. She starts cooking food. Madhu enters kitchen and ask "Bhabhi main apki madad kar do". Both will start preparing food, Kala enters Kitchen, Madhu goes to dining hall to keep the food.

Kala gives a Evil Smile. Kala say "Kya Nakusha... tum kudh Duttase alag hogayi, Mujhe kuch karneki jarurath bi nahi hai. Uske saath kamre nahi rahogi tho, usske saath bhat nahi karogitho tumare saab ko kaise bachayegi, uske pathni kaise banogi??".

Nakku smile innocently "Kala .. Saabse alag hona tho kudhko mauth dena ka barabar hai, mai unsse alaag nahi horahi hoon, unke kareeb jarahi hoon, Unhe mera ehsaas delana chahthi hoon, Mera saab merese alag nahi rahsakthe.. ithna kush math ho.. Saab kudh mujhe apne kamre main bhulahenge.. Tumare hansiko uss dinke liye bachake rakhna, pati pathni ka rishta eek kamrese rahenese nahi bantha.. duo athmayo ka milanse hotha hai, jo alag hokar be saath ho, judha hokarbhi pass ho usse kahthe hai pyaar, mai kisse samjarahi hoon Kalavathi kya janne pyaar ki bhasha or bol".

Kala is about to say something Aayi saheb enters kitchen, kala changes her color. she is happy to see smile on Nakku's face. Aayi saheb say " Nakku hamare gharko kisiki bhoori nazar laagi hai, issliye main gharme pooja karvaniki sochrahi hoon, tumhe aur duttako pooja me baithna hai"

Bajjike saath jake poojake saman lehana." Nakku nods her head.

Bajji in room, thinking about bhau, "pahili baar bhau mujhe chodkar akela sudhde pe jaraha hai pata nahi, hey chaskar kya cheez hai saala.. husne bhaose haath kaise miladhi.. jo peechese bhauo par war kar saktha hai uska kya bharosa, Bhau, kabtak mujse roota rahega.. main tumse alaag nahi rahi saktha bhau"

Madhu enters the room with breakfast tray, says Bajji "breafast kahlo, bhaiya kampe nikal gaye" Bajji says "Nahi Madhu mera bhukh marchuki hai, mujhe kuch nahi chahiye ", Roops is walking near BAJJI's room and listen to bajji-madhu.

Edited by shashikalasm - 14 years ago
shally_m thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#16

nice update .... getting interesting

nupurvj23 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#17
very very nice!
please add me to the pm list!
thanks
take care =)
nupur
ushankitvc thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#18

a very nice updt.............liking the way the story is moving............

Sophia21 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#19
nice update... moving on steadily... aww bechara baaji..
Continue soon
486270 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#20

PART-4:

Madhu looks sad, "Bajji app kuch Khalo saab teek hojayega.. haise umeed nahi todthe". Roops goes to Aayi saheb's room, AS is doing pooja. She leaves from there.

Dutta is with chaskar, dealing the diamonds, in between Dutta leaves and Body guards go behind him. Chaskar makes deal of 3 cores for diamond, he calls Phaltu and gives the money briefcase to him, says "Chal phoot… iss Dutta se haath milake bahut fayda hone ko hai, chaal re aaj party karthe hai bol phaltu amne kithne ka deal kiya 2 cores ka" , both phaltu and Chaskar smiles and leave from there.

Chaskar in his adda .. in dancing mode .. he is drinking and some lady dancers are dancing for "Sapne me milthi hai kudi meri " song. Chaskar and his gang is enjoying the Dance. Sudharshan drops in.

"Kya chaskar bhai .. Bahuke saath dokha karneko hai tu… jantha hai na Bhau Dokhebazzko kabhi maaf nahi karega??". Chaskar gets tensed.. "Woh Sudharsan bhauo mai kya kahtha hai.. appun ko tho …" Sudharsan stops him and says " Tension nahi leneka.. appna hissa agar milgaya to baath katham .. tumbhi fayde main aur hum bhi" … Chaskar and sudharsan laughs loudly. Chaskar says "Sudharsan bhau aap bade kamine ho"..they both laugh again. Sudharsan says "50:50" chaskar agrees. Sudharshan starts staring dancing girls.

After sudharsan left, Chaskar calls phaltu .. phaltu says "bhau mehnath hum kare aur fyda uss sudharsan ko… kyun maan liya appne" Chaskar talli bajatha hai .. peath pakadke hastha hai… "Hey Phaltu Bhauo ka Dushman bahar nahi re … usske appne ghar me hai… Uska saala .. Jaab gharme hi lootere chupe have tho … hamara kaam hassan hai na.. Dekh tumara chaskar bhauo .. dutta ka jaghah lega.. hametho kush honeko hai.. ithna bada bakra jo mil gaya, aab main isse poora information nikhalega.. pata nahi hey kaab kaam ajaye "

Babi, Ganpath are in basti, Sethji comes running "aayi mareko 1 lakh ki lottery lagi hai".

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".