Hi All, đ
I started watching LTL after Dutta's Entry. I loved LTL very much. I started visiting forum regularly and was enjoying every post. I my self have made 160 posts(I still wonder abt me đ). I have never written any FF till now. This is my first FF. This one is continuing on from the show. Story line starts after yestersdays episode. I am not a good writer. Still accumulating all the courage and writing this FF. I need your encouragement. Please forgive if the FF is not good or not well written. I hope you guys will read it. All the characters remains same. In My FF Roops is Positive, She is acting infront of her sisters. (I donot know in LTL it Turning Roops is +ve or not .. i would keep her +ve character in my FF) I am just trying to elaborate few charcters in my FF.
Part 1:
Starting from yesterday's episode,
After Dutta-Nakku left the Dinning hall, Roops goes to her room. Closes the door hard She goes and stands infront of her Father Sriram Patil's Photo and starts crying đ.
She says "BABA, aaj kala tayine vahinike charitra par ungli uttayi aur mai kuch nahi karsaki. Dekiye baba, Patil kandhan ki Bhauko kya kya sahena padraha hai. Jis ghar me unhe raksha aur Maan milna chahiye, ussi ghar me unke izzat par kichad uchala jaraha hai."
" Kyun?? kyun?? kala tayi ithni nafarat karthi hai Bhause ??. Appke mauthke karan tho Damodhar patil hai. Woh tho iss duniyame nahi rahe. Phir kyun Tayi Bhauke kushiya chinna chahthi hai?? Kya millega kala tayiko Bhauki zindagise khelke?? Mere kuch samajmai nahi aarahi hai baba" She cries loudly..
She goes and stands near the window, cold wind blows, she starts remembering the olden days which brings slight smile on her lips. Dutta, roops and Aayi saheb staying in Basti, It's Dinner time, aayi saheb and roop are waiting for him. Dutta cmes to home. He looks tired. Aayi saheb says "Dutta tu kyun ithni kaam kartha hai"?? Apne sheath kayal nahi raktha.
Dutta says "Aayi saheb main teek hoon" Roops says "Bhau maine aaj apka favorite food banaya hai" bholiye kya bhanaya hai maine??
Dutta acts asif he doesnot know.. Roops insists bholiye Bhau please .. Dutta smiles and says "KARANJI" Roops says "How cutena". Roops remembers Rakshabhandan scenes. She hears some sound outside. She comes out of her room and sees "Nakku talking to Madhu".
Nakku is asking Madhu "Can i stay in your room.. Please donot ask me any reasons" Roops is about to go towards Nakku, she sees Kala, who had victory smile on her face. Roops goes back to her room.
I donot know it is good or bad. Please provide your feedback. I will continue writing if u people like it. Thanks in Advance.
Edited by shashikalasm - 14 years ago