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Posted: 14 years ago
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I planning to continue this as FF - if u like it plz give ur thought.

What if FR happen like this.

When kala find nakku true colour she want to know the true intension of nakku why she hide her true colour. She is happy that nakku fair and beautiful and come to her room and inform to her sister that I have a very good news but want to make it great so I am going out to make it great wait until I return and see the drama and enjoy she leave the PN take a trip to basti find the truth about nakku. When she knows about mory she contact mory and make a deal. And return to PN.

Her in PN nakku decide to say the truth about her face and walk toward datta room. Datta was sitting in the thinking about nakku

He closed eye and open nakku was standing in front of him nakku look worried looking down.

Datta go near to her hold her face nakku I want to be with u for the rest of my life.

She couldn't able to see datta.


Datta look worried and understand that nakku want to say something. Datta ask what it is nakku.


sab plz take me out.


Datta smile and ok and were u want to go.


To the river side sab datt look shock and look at her like why and say ok.


He grabs nakku hand and get out from the house.


Babi looked worried seeing datta and nakku getting out.


Datta look worried and drive fast and reach the place.


Nakku get out from the car and walk toward the river side. Look back at datta. Datta followed her.


She sadly looks at water. Datta try to open his mouth. Nakku say sab


Sab after you reveal your past life, poured your heart, shared your sorrow in this place with me at the same time I want to hold your hand reveal my secret, poured my heart, shared my sorrow but I was stopped by promise that I gave to my mother.


I ran to my mother ask her to break the promise, she said no way. She remained me who I am. I was stopped. Because of me she went through lot of trouble and she never hates me for that reason. I couldn't able go against her.


Datta go nere to nakku and wipe her tears and hug her and say nakku don't cry I don't care about you past life.


Nakku walk away from datta and she reval her past life from her sister to moory ended with anna. And how she try to revel her face and her mother promise make her stop.


Datta think about how he save her twice from moory, how she crying for help in anna house. Datta think about nakku life and what she went through because of her beauty. How she was scared that her beauty will also take her love. Datta understand why she was hiding the truth from him. Datta can't able to stop his tears.


Datta go near to nakku. I am sorry nakku


Nakku look shocked at nakku


Datta say my arrogant behaviour make u to stop saying the truth nakku.


Nakku no sab it is not ur arrogant behavoiur make me hide. I don't want to break ur heart sab.


Datta ' nakku I did not fall in love with u because of ur face I fall in love with u because of ur heart. And I will love ur heart till I die. U are the one who bring me out of darkness and this is the time I bring u out of darkness. U the one who made me realize what is true love and I have to prove it.


Datta hug nakku and say I here nakku always her for you for ever and ever. You don't have to hide you any more. I don't care about how you look all I love is your heart. I promise you that I am you shield and I will protect you at any cost. You r DSP wife you don't have to be scared any more.


Datta hold nakku hand and take her back to the house.


Babi was waiting in the hall. Datta and nakku come inside the house. Datta go nere to babi and say masima now you can wipe the snoot from her face. I promise you that I will be her shield not the snoot


Babi look at datta tears in her eye. Babi say I am sorry sab. All I did for her safety.


Datta say she was your daughter and all u did to protect her. You don't have to be sorry for that. I understand u. now you remove her snoot.


Babi look at nakku took her wipe snoot from nakku face.


Every one in the house looks at nakku with shock.


AS come near to nakku ask babi why did you hide your beautiful face of your daughter babi. Babi say because she is beautiful.


Nakku look at datta with tears in her eye datta look at nakku and smile and signal her not to cry.


Bajji come near to datta and say I am sorry bau. Datta hug bajji don't .


Datta walk back to nakku and hold her face and say ur beautiful as ur heart nakku. And hug her.


Kala enter PN. Look shock and doesn't no what to do. She makes a wide smile look worried at her sisters.AS welcome kala with a big smile and say look at nakku kala she is so beautiful. Kala smile Pretend happy.


Kala get a call. She excused her self and walk away to atten the call. And say now is not a right time plan is changed. I'll call u later with a new plan.

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Plz share ur thought and how u want FR should happen.

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rama_2010 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amen ..... These are positive vibes...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rama_2010

Amen ..... These are positive vibes...

thanks yar.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow sasha.. u have written it so beautifully 👏
i wish it happens this way!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow..Sasha..u described Fr in a vry +ve way.👍🏼..but i doubt this to happen.........coz cv's may show a lot of hyper drama.........😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow sasha.. u have written it so beautifully 👏
i wish it happens this way!

But I strongly feel that C.V.s create more and more twists. O God............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow sasha i hope it happens as u r saying i like ur imagination.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Subii

wow sasha.. u have written it so beautifully 👏

i wish it happens this way!


thanks for the command yar i wish the same😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: isatb

Wow..Sasha..u described Fr in a vry +ve way.👍🏼..but i doubt this to happen.........coz cv's may show a lot of hyper drama.........😡

thanks yar i eagerly waiting for FR i hope they bring out like datta marriage - what a marriage yar no other serial has shown like that na.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: m.indira

wow sasha.. u have written it so beautifully 👏

i wish it happens this way!

But I strongly feel that C.V.s create more and more twists. O God............

thaks for the command and u r right CV will bring big twist i hope we enjoy the twist.😉

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