FF - HUM TUM upd pt 12 pg 26 (26/08/11)) - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Check out for these options, if it suits u --
1) Uff Yeh mohabbat (UYM)
2)Yeh Ishq nahi Aasaan (YINA)
3)Qayamat se qayamat tak (QSQT)
Updt sooon.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you for your suggestions everyone. i think i might go for hum tum as it's short and catchy, but thank you for your other suggestions too and ushankitvc thanks for your suggestions they're very nice. ok update will be up soon. xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OK, I've changed the name to HUM TUM thank you scorpio for you lovely suggestion. this part is before they leave for honeymoon and when they board the plane. i'ts in Dutta's point of view. this isn't full on Tasha romance but i promise that will come soon, the honeymoon is gonna be long so there will be lots of romance.

here it goes...

finally, packings finished. NAku bhi na, she's so slow with thousands of questions. "saab, hum kaha jayenge, kya pehno, kya loo?" and on and on she went. she was driving me mad so i kicked her out the room and did the packing myself. obviously i didn't want to kick her out, i wanted her with me, but at the rate we were at there was no way that we would get to the airport on time. i was so excited about this,BAaji told me where we were going and i was over the moon when he said it was Greece, I've always wanted to go there and to go with NAku, on our honeymoon even better! Baaji also mentioned it was Madhu's idea too, my face dropped when i heard that. i mean i don't want to be harsh but she reminds me of that man, the man who did wrong with me and my family. i know she wants me to love her and give her the sisters love but it's so hard, i'm gonna need time to fully accept her.

Anyway let's not spoil the mood. AAAHHHHHHHHHH i can't believe it we're going on our honeymoon, we're gonna be alone on our own private island, beautiful villa, blue sky, clear sand and crystal clear sea. wow, boy is this gonna be good or what. The best bit is that we're going to be alone in a different country with no one to disturb us. i was getting so impatient the last couple of hours were just so dragging. i sat in my room the whole day, i didn't want to face any more embarrassment by by going downstairs. i know for a fact that nautanki BAaji will start his bakwaas again, he's so irritating, just loves pulling my leg. well just wait Baaji, wait till you get married there'll be no stopping me then! i kept on look at the clock impatiently, Naku was downstairs doing i have no idae what. and i spent my time staring at the clock when i heard my name being called. i rushed downstairs with our bags when i realised i was only being called to eat and not to leave! i kept my head down and ate as fast as i could, i knew they we're laughing at me but i just wanted to hurry and leave. i was the first one to finish and i ran upset to get ready, i ignored Baaji's stupid comments. Naku quietly followed me upstairs. we both got ready and said our goodbyes to the family, Baaji dropped us off at the airport and Madhu joined as well.

we finally boarded the plane after a long hour of going through customs, they take for ever!!! As soon as we got in the plane i started to relax more, now i knew we we're finally going to be alone. Naku and i sat cuddled together, very nice and cosy. i kept on stroking her hair and smooth cheeks. i was so lost in her eyes, those beautiful green eyes. i leaned in and placed a kiss on her soft pink lips. she responded back and so i deepened the kiss. i knew people were staring but i didn't care, we're husband and wife and we're going on our honeymoon. i deserved at least a kiss from her. i have no idea how long that kiss lasted, we stopped for a breather and naku lay her head on my shoulders and held my hands tightly then fell asleep.

PRECAP: naku's pov, tasha reach to their villa and the romance starts, they go to a resturant and then head to a beach ( a private beach for only them no one else is there😉)

i know this isn't their honeymoon, but i promise next couple of updates will be full on romance. sorry for any mistakes, press the like button and plzz plzzz comment😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Reserved.....

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yaaay they are leavin for HM😉
OMG they called him for lunch n he ran down with his luggage 🤣 OMG i cracked up awww dats so cuteee😳
N finally they are on the plane ... Haila kissin on the plane😉 PDA eyyyy😆
Thnks for the PM... continue soonEmbarrassed
Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hum tum ..........yippe ... great ... Ur welcome ..

keep writing .......dutta in this one seems impatienced ....he want to leave as soon as possible .
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
nice name of fan fic
very nice update...aww dutta so eager 2 go to honeymoon tht he tuk his bags wen he ws called for dinner..lol
he shud accept madhu soon...she's a sweetheart
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
very nice FF read all the part very good
plz pm me when u continue

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Posted: 14 years ago
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gee hun da update woz soo cute..hahaha lo duta rli cud nt wait 2 ahem ahem 😉😳 ... awhh bles im ez hidn so dey dnt laf at hm lmao...cnt wait 4 nt update hun soundz gr8!! ...private beach!! how romantic!! 😍 thnx 4 pm 😃.xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!! They called him dwn for lunch and he came down with his luggage.............OMG!!!! How many comments must hav been passed on him........mostly by baaji.....he was so eager to go for the honeymooon....
How romantic..............And in the plane their Kiss............WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
M tooooooo curious to read the nxt upd.............
Updt soooooooooooooooooooon.......
Thanx fr PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow very nice FF👏 it like reading datta heart love it every bit keep writing and update soon.

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