FF - Ek Duje Ke Liye, Ch 35, pg47 updt on 15.12 - Page 30

Cool! They finally slept together! And why did AS call them? Why couldnt she have just slept aaram se? Thoda aur romance ho jaata lol

wow very nice update i loved it keep updating everyday cox if u dnt i feel very sad 😭 as if a big part is missed out in my daily routine everyday as soon as i wake up the first thing i do is see if u have updated 😆 great part loved setji heheheheh n how babi got shocked finally AS dream came true

woow....gr8 update...loved the love scenes too....

lovely part.. and Tin, some parts are best left to imagination if you feel comfortable doing that :-)

best part is how you show sethji asking babi innocently how D is in his tayi's room and you go into FB mode to explain the previous night..that was really well thought out.. I know in one of the previous parts you had mentioned that Dutta used to visit a lady outside his home.. but now that he has nakku, pls can u have a scene where he explains to nakku her importance in his life and how he will always only want her?! That is me, the ever romantic for you ;-P.. just feel it would be nice to see D opening up to Nakku as they did not get much of a chance in the village after Nakku got kidnapped, na.. but overall I love the pace of your story and the way you plan every phase in your story!

Nice update...............👏
The romantic scene was just within the limits,not senual or x-rated,thats why i liked ur ff from the beginning...............
I was hoping that u ll defo make it look decent...........n u did it so beautifully...........😳

Originally posted by: Tahreem05

(Bedi jalaile leh jigar se piya
Jigar maabadi aag hai) - 2
Wadaa nikari o lab se piya aah aa
Wadaa nikari o lab se piya jeh duniya badi dhank hai
Haan bedi jalaile leh jigar se piya
Jigar maabadi aag hai

Na gilaaf, Na lehaaf thandi hawa ke khilaaf sasuri
O itni sardi hai kisika lehaaf lehi leh
O jaa padosi ke chule se aag lehi leh
O jaa padosi ke chule se aag lehi leh
Na kasoor, Na fatoor
Na kasoor, Na fatoor bina juraam ke hajoor maar gaye
O maar gaye
O aise ik din duphari bula liyo re
Bandh ghungroo kacheri lagaliyo re
Bula liyo re, Bula liyo re dupehri
lagayilo re, lagayilo re kacheri
Angeethi jalaile leh jigar se piya
Jigar maabadi aag hai
Bedi jalaile leh jigar se piya
Jigar maabadi aag hai)

Hey, TINTINY, this is the song,i didnt apprehend in ur 27th chapter.........

Pleaseeeeeeeeeee translate it in english,n btw which language is used...........?

Ok this is a song from the film Omkara a nautch girl is dancing to it...I will look for translation and pm you 😉 The language is hindi from western UP, awadhi or khari what it is called I am not too sure...

Originally posted by: tintiny

Ok this is a song from the film Omkara a nautch girl is dancing to it...I will look for translation and pm you 😉 The language is hindi from western UP, awadhi or khari what it is called I am not too sure...

Ohh if its in hindi then i could understand most of it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Thanks so much for PM me its soooooooooooooooo SWEET.................but u dont ve to do that,i ll look it on youtube.............
Keep ur energy for ur fantastic ff,n again thanks for ur concern................😳

awwwwwwwwwwwww that was soo beautiful. imagine toh kiya, your description was soo good. dutta becoming restless to be with her it was sooo cute! loved it loved it loved it!!! but sethji lol he's so funny especially when he asked his mum about Dutta being in NAku's room haha, Babi must be overjoyed. jaldi update karna!! oh and P.S. i will still be hooked to your FF even if you don't leave it on a cliffhanger.

ur topic title says ch 29 updated on pg 38...bt its actually pg 39...make the correction hun!