FF - Ek Duje Ke Liye, Ch 35, pg47 updt on 15.12

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Dear Friends,
I am Tintiny. Incase some of you have been following Kasamh Se might be knowing me. I was a regular FF writer there, written many. Infact in one of my FFs I had made Jai Walia, the hero Don...lekin in this story the hero is already a Don 😛. After Kasamh Se got over, I realised the writing bug had bitten me too hard and I am always in a look out for a new inspiration and storyline. With like minded friends we created another forum where you can horne your writing skills in form of stories, poems, reviews of books films etc., anything which you would want to write...it is called http://alliswell.express-forum.net. Other than writing you can share your travel experiences, post your favourite song or share a recipe. Entry is free, you just have to register. This is all about me now lets come to the story...
When I first came across the performance of Mishal Raheja as his father Tinu Anand died, I somehow instantly connected with his intense acting, later I caught up with few of the episodes to understand the basic storyline...I am still watching the past episodes but here is my version of the story, the first one to start with
Ek Duje Ke Liye....

EK Duje ke liye'.

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Naku gave a sigh of relief as she entered the basti/chawl (slum), taking a deep breath she walked towards her kholi which she shared with her ayi, baba and bhai'.though she lived in a chawl it made her feel secured, like any other chawl most of the inmates struggled to make a decent living in the expensive city of Mumbai. Most of the women here worked as housemaids while their husbands did various odd jobs like security guards, drivers etc., and many of them were engaged in various illegal jobs surviving in the city did give many opportunities not much choice on your ethics.

Naku entered the kholi to find her mother cursing her father Ganpat who lay drunk of the floor'.it was not an uncommon sight, happened in Naku's place quite often, her father had no regular income, whatever odd jobs he did was spent towards his 'daru''.it was so true for her neighbouring 'kholis' also, same story, the families survived on the income of their women folks, often pushing them to compromise their situation too in order to feed their children'

Naku or Nakusha as she was Christianized picked up the towel and the soap calmly and came out once again doing towards the common bathroom'hopefully since she has returned a bit early today it will remain empty'on the way she meets couple of her neighbours, exchanges pleasantries how are you, how is work etc., reply as brightly as possible as everybody knew the truth, nothing to be hidden too, same story all over, Nakusha reached the washroom just in time, kamla tai was coming towards it but Naku managed to reach first, she banged the door shut midst of Kamla tai's curses 'areh kalmuhi abhi tu andar gayi, jab nikelgi apna kala sharir dhokar pura pani khatam karke' she went on'Nakusha did not pay any heed, humming a tune she opened the tap, scrubbing herself she closed her eyes in pleasure as the water washed her body'the fragrance of the expensive soap, the only luxury she indulgences in reached her nostrils, she smiled forgetting all her tiredness, the grime and the hardship she has endured during the day.

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Naku crossed the courtyard of the chawl to see her mother looking worried coming out of the kholi, must be going to buy some provisions, if the shopkeeper gives in credit'.Naku knew her mother would not let them go hungry in bed, it has never happened, she manages somehow to put something in their stomach, how she does it is something Naku often wonders'with a drunkard husband who has no qualms about stealing in his own house for his drink'.

Kya huwa ayi? Naku asked, kaha ja rahi ho'.

Tu a gayi nahakar'dekh maine khichri charai hai, see it does not get burnt nehi toh aaj raat'..She left the rest unsaid, listen I am going to make a phone call'.

Phone? Kisse? Naku frowned, her mother did not waste her hard earned money over phone calls'..

Ayi Sahib ka phone aya tha at Chavan's shop'he just now sent his boy to inform me'.abh Ayi Sahib jo kabhi phone nehi karti has called, mujhe toh phone karna chihiye na'

Ayi Sahib? Oh Ayi Sahib'of course of course'you go I will take care of the Khichri'.Nakusha quickly added'.

Her mother ran towards the kinara shop from where she would make her phone to Ayi Sahib'..

Nakusha entered to kholi to see her father still sleeping with his mouth open, snoring away while her brother tried to do his homework'.

Naku went to sit near the stove'.shaking her head and once again she took a resolution that she will live by herself and never get married'.watching her brother making faces at their father, she knew he too will be no different when he grows up, she has seen many boys in this slum following the footsteps of their fathers'.hawahi kharab hai idhar ka'.

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Babi put down the receiver, she looked at it quizzically wondering if she has heard right'wiping her face with her pallu, she stepped out of the shop'.not knowing if she should be happy or worried'

Those days Babi had got married and moved to Mumbai with her new husband Ganpat. Crops failed that year back in village and they were young, people suggested that they should move to the city for a better living. Ganpat those days was a different man, with dreams in his eyes and will to work hard he came to the city with his new married wife. They came to stay in a different chawl than this as recommended by a friend. While Ganpat went out to work, doing various odd jobs and looking for a good job, Babi joined the women's cooperative headed by Ayi Sahib'she lived with her husband and children in a nearby housing in the next locality and they were slightly better off compared to many others, her husband was a junior officer in a private firm having some extra income.

Ayi Sahib was a lady with wisdom, she guided and taught those young women who started life fresh how to support their family income and face their day to day problems'Babi soon became a great admirer of hers, having left her family in the village she started looking upto Ayi Sahib as her elder sister, seeking her advice and guidance. In the meantime Babi's family also started to grow, she had her first daughter, and Ganpat was turning out to be a different man 'he was frustrated easily not liking the jobs he was getting, drinking was becoming a regular affair'.Babi one day could not take it anymore went to the cooperative office to seek Ayi Sahib's help where she learnt that few days ago when they were closed for Diwali Ayi Sahib herself had lost her husband in a fight over a stake of cards with his brother'..his brother had pushed him and he had fallen from the terrace where they were playing cards to death'.

Ayi Sahib never returned to their cooperative again, she had become the sole breadwinner of the family and she needed full time job to support her growing family'.

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Naku looked up to see her mother looking puzzled'that was unusual as Babi all her life has been taking decisions, even with Ganpat around she was the man of the house as Ganpat has ceased to be one long back'.

Kya huwa Ayi'.Naku asked'..what did Ayi Sahib say?

Err Ayi Sahib'.you know what she said'..I mean I cannot believe her what she said'..

Kyu? Aisa kya keh diya unhone'..Nakusha stirred the khichri, checking the same she took it out of the fire'.

Ayi sahib wants me to take my family and join her family for the Ganapati Utsaav'

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Sleep eluded Babi, while her family slept she thought about herself'.she came to Mumbai with eyes full of dreams, Ganpat that time was so caring, Ayi Sahib always gave them optimistic views about life, trying to make their grim life a bit more cheerful '.Ayi Sahib's life took a drastic turn and they lost contact and in the meantime Babi also lost her elder daughter'inspite of years gone by Babi's eyes watered 'she was such a beautiful daughter, a princess in their small dark kholi, how old was she hardly 15/16 when ''.when 'Babi swallowed, from that day she has never had a peaceful night sleep always worried for Nakusha, her unwanted daughter, yes she and Ganpat had wanted a son after their elder daughter instead Nakusha was born, though they were upset with the birth but like all parents they too overcame it and accepted Naku, now Naku is the constant source of worry for her mother, Babi no way can allow Naku to meet the same fate of her elder sister, no way as long as Babi has her blood running through her veins'

Ayi, eh Ayi, Sethji, her son was sitting up'.sach me we will go to celebrate Ganesh Chathurti with Ayi Sahib'..it seemed he was unable to sleep with excitement'.

Babi swallowed to see Nakusha lying next to him was also watching them'

Naku uth, mujhe kuch kehna hai tere se'.babi coaxed her daughter'..Naku stretched herself, she was tired and she wanted to sleep'.

Uth Naku it is important, see I have no one to discuss other than you, tera baap toh'Babi shakes her head in dismay'

Bol Ayi, Nakusha sat up'

Come this side'aur sethji tu sow ja'.hum ma beti abhi kuch baate karenge'.

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Naku wore her costume, it was humid and stuffy but it was her job, she wore the costume of mickey mouse and stood in the entrance of big shopping mall exclusively for children. It was one of the biggest malls in Mumbai meant for children and their needs'Naku and few others like her dressed as various cartoon characters roamed around the mall entertaining the little ones while they shopped'.while her fellow colleagues cribbed about the stuffy costumes, Naku never complained for it provided the security she always craved for'.

As they took their position, Suchitra the girl who was dressed as Minnie Mouse whispered I hope we get our bonus today'.I have planned to buy presents for the family tonight before entering the house'.

Yes I hope too, Naku looked at the Mandap across the road already decked up waiting for inauguration'.Bappa please ensure the bonus is paid today'.

Yesterday night when the mother and daughter sat for discussion Babi told her apprehensions'see Ayi Sahib has invited us to her house for the first time, yes I must confess that many a times I borrowed money from Ayi Sahib to meet my expenses and she is very much aware of my condition, lekin kisi ka ghar me jana, puja ke liye udhar rukhna'.matlab'khali haath kaise jayu and also we do need at least a set of new clothes''

Aap unse paise udhar leti thi'I thought you always went to her for guidance aur unhe kaha se paisa milega, didn't she meet with a great tragedy'.

Areh beta that was long time back, now her children have grown up and must be doing well'.waise Mumbai ane ke baad se I must confess I had the best time of my life in that basti but then with your father's erratic income and growing family we could not stay there as the landlord would not keep us anymore without rent, tabh se is chawl se us chawl ghum rahi hu, till we settled here and now that you are working too, lekin 5 saal pehle ki baath, when you were not working and I had no money, nobody was willing to give me a loan even, I was worried what to put in front of you, how to return home without food'.Ganpat par toh koi bharosa nehi kar sakta hai na, I was walking aimlessly when I realised that I was walking past the old basti, patah nehi kyu aur kisliye, maybe my destiny as for the first time I went in there after I had left'I walked towards the cooperative office wondering whom to meet and what to say and how to ask to my surprise I saw Ayi Sahib after all this years, she looked happy, well dressed with her usual cheerful face'she was happy to see me'as I spoke to her I told about my trouble she gave me money and her phone no'she said few years in between she did not come to this cooperative, now she has time and she does not need to work anymore, mera beta bada ho giya hai Babi, he takes care of his family'..this cooperative was close to my heart and the ladies were happy to have me back'.I come here more or less everyday'..

So whenever I needed money after that day, I always called her up and collected an envelope kept in my name from that cooperative office'

Ayi tu chinta maath kar, tomorrow before we close for Ganesh Chathurti we will get our bonus'.

Ha lekin tujhe paisa milte milte sham dhal jayega beta'.

The shops will remain open whole night, tomorrow is the last day before Ganesh Chathurti'tell me what to get, I will buy everything before coming home'..

Beta agar bonus nehi mile toh?

Naku sighed'mother and daughter stared at each other'.

Oh my god so much security'Naku observed as she watched some hefty men scanning the area'.do you have any idea who will inaugurate this Mandap today'she asked Suchitra'..

Hmmm Dutta Bhao'.

Dutta Bhao, who is that?

You have not heard of Dutta Bhao? Suchitra sounded surprised'..

Err no'who is he? Naku asked'.

Well the biggest don of Mumbai'.

Hai hai kya jamana a giya'Now Bappa is in the mercy of dons of Mumbai'Naku commented a bit sarcastically'.

Well if reports are to be believed than he is one of the biggest bhakts of the Bappa'.

People had already assembled around the Mandap and within next few minutes 3 -4 SUVs came to a stop in front of the Mall'.few security men ran towards one of them'.Naku was standing up the stairs having a good view, the door opened, a young man got down, wearing a jacket over his jeans, the diamond stud in his ear sparkled under the sun rays nearly blinding Naku, she closed her eyes for a second only to see the back of the person walking towards the Mandap in long strides followed by two armed bodyguards ''

Oh my god'so this is Dutta Bhao'oh my god'exclaimed Suchitra next to her'.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi! Your FF is fantastic! Its really very interesting. Nakku has to be Mickey Mouse? Aww poor her. But Dutta wont be able to see her will he?Continue soon!
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hi nice update gud start .......hmm intresting .............
pls update next part soon
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Congrats for your FF.. Nice start Aww dutta wont see her cuz of her mask... Continue soon!!
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Hi tintiny.............
Welcome to the Forum.. ...Good start dear..........
PM me when you update the next apart........................



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hi tintiny welcome to the forum. u going to enjoy LTL.

very nice ff keep writing it is fantastic love it every bit plz PM me when u update next part ok.
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hey tinytiny.. welcome to the LTL family.. so u were also taken in by Dutta's acting skills hain.. just like the rest here ;-)
lovely start to the FF, must say.. me excited to know if D-N will meet at the mandap or will that be at his house?!!
pls continue and Pm me if possible when u update next
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Dear Friends,
Thank you for your appreciation. I also welcome criticism as I think it helps me to think, if you do not agree with anything please comment on it...of course I will give explanations but then let me tell you something about myself also...I am a Bengali so my hindi is not very good, please ignore the gender mistakes and I almost update regularly...I hate to read incomplete stories myself so I will update regularly from Monday to Saturday (sunday off ;) I give my brain some rest) unless otherwise I am very busy with office and do not get time to write, my update will be posted...
Now wish you a Very Happy Diwali!! Enjoy and have a blast...be careful with the crackers....the next update will be posted on Monday....till then enjoy....love Tin
Chapter 2

Oh my god…so this is Dutta Bhao…oh my god…exclaimed Suchitra next to her….

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They stood in front of a huge gate matching the address given by Ayi Sahib with it…..

Yeh Babi tera dimag toh theek hai na….tune theek se likha na pata....Ganpat could not believe his eyes that the address written on the piece of paper brought him and his family here…..

Babi too looked puzzled….err maine suna toh wahi…..50 no. Link Road……

Sethji ran to read the name plate….Patil Niwas, 50 no.Link Road….hoga yehi….unhone sirf 50 no. kaha…Patil Niwas nehi kaha…kya Ayi Sahib ka pura nam Patil hai?

Babi looked confused, she was always known as Ayi Sahib, what was her name or full name Babi was not aware of.….

Ganpat scratched his head…shyad patil…I remember when I heard about the accident – they said Patil had fallen from the terrace and died later only I came to know that he was the husband of the lady about who Babi always talked about….

Sethji did not wait any more, he pushed the bell next to the name plate….a small window opened on the iron gate, the security asked Yes….whom do you want….

They once again became speechless, Ayi Sahib's name was not known….Ganpat cursed Babi under his breath when Naku said…Ayi Sahib, she has invited us…could you inform her that Babi and her family have come for the Ganesh Puja….

Oh Ayi Sahib yes she did tell us about it….the massive gate opened a bit, they entered….the security watched them with sharp eyes….Char admi…Ayi Sahib had told us to expect five….one of them asked…..

Babi swallowed…err abhi hum char hi hai, she quickly added…..

Oh…theek hai, go with him, he directed them towards one of his men…he will take you to Ayi Sahib….

If the gate was huge, the bungalow was massive with quickening of heart beats they followed the guard towards the house….

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Ayi Sahib was looking like a queen thought Babi with her changed surroundings, wearing long gold chain, gold bangles and a silk sari she presented a very different picture from the lady whom Babi met at the cooperative society office…..

Yeh kuch bhet hai puja ke liye, Babi put down the basket carrying the savouries she and Naku made by staying awake whole of last night….Ayi Sahib gestured to one of the servants to take it away and put it with the Puja offerings….

She observed the family, of course she knew a bit about them, the women in the society office always chatted while they worked….she watched the girl standing behind her brother & father, trying to hide herself …..

I had heard that you have two daughter Babi…tera bari beti, kya naam tha uska Pari, woh dikhai nehi de rahi hai….Ayi Sahib asked Babi…..

The family held their breath, it was a subject they never discussed, it was the reason they had changed their chawls last time to avoid unwanted questions and to live amongst strangers….

Ji….Ji …..woh abhi hamare sath nehi rehti……

Kya shaadi ho gayi…but the other day you said that none of your children where married

Nehi…matlab..woh abhi humse….matlab hum….Babi's eyes watered…..

Ayi Sahib raised her hand to say…koi baath nehi…turning towards Nakusha she asked tumhara naam kya hai beti?

Nakusha….Naku replied a bit hesitantly….

Ayi Sahib nodded as if in understanding….directing another servant to take the family to the guest room that has been prepared for them….Puja will begin, get ready for the same….

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Wearing their new clothes they huddled in the big hall as the puja was about to begin…the pandit stood ready, various family members dressed in fine clothes assembled alongwith their relatives and friends, the servants also joined when Ayi Sahib turned to one of the men standing….

Bajirao inform Dutta that we are ready to start the puja, if he can join us….

The man named Bajirao smiled, Ji Ayi I have already told him and he should be coming any moment now…..just then they saw a man coming down the stairs, wearing a silk dhoti and a kurta he came to join the family….

Wah kitna sundar beta hai Ayi Sahib ki…Babi exclaimed softly…..Nakusha who was as usual standing behind her brother and father peeped to see the profile of a man standing with his folded hands in front of the pandit who putting a tika on his forehead…the light fell on him, the diamond dazzled once again blinding her momentarily….

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Ayi Sahib sat on her usual chair to see prasad distribution, the assembled guests were being looked after by her daughters and son, Bajirao was directing the servants, when her gaze fell on Babi and her family, they were still huddled together, extremely out of place and obviously not knowing what to do…Ayi Sahib sighed, the reason for sending for them here stands no longer valid, Babi's elder daughter was not available….she got up…well she has invited them hence it is her duty to ensure they are taken care of…..

Areh Dutta beta idhar a…come meet some old friends of mine...you know about the society I go....this is Babi, her husband Ganpat, their children Sethji and Nakusha….

Datta watched the girl did not raise her eyes to look at him, that was unsual….

Keya naam bataya apne Ayi, he asked his mother….

Is ladka ka na….

No the other name…..

Nakusha….Ayi Sahib reiterated ….

Nakusha he repeated…..unwanted….lekin kyu he asked...startling Naku….she looked up to see him, straight nose, bright eyes, ears pierced with diamond stud and gold rings, calm but serious face…..why you have kept such a name for your daughter, he turned towards Ganpat…..

Ganpat gave a foolish smile, hehehhe dusri thi…matlab we wanted a boy….I mean….

Sahab hume kya pata, unpadh hu…kisi ne kaha rakh diya…Babi quickly intervened…..

Bhao you are here …my friend Sona wanted to meet you, come Bhao…come this side…a girl came and pulled him away….

Dutta…..Bhao….thought Nakusha….what was the name of the don who came to inaugurate the Mandap yesterday…..whom Suchitra called the biggest don of Mumbai….nehi nehi….Dutta is a common name and Bhao means brother….and every other man wears a diamond earrings nowadays….

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Great update. SO aayi sahib was planning to get Dutta and Pari married? cool
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very nice update keep writing i love it every bit plz PM me when u update next.

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