TaSha FF - Pyar Ke Dhokhe Part14Pg35.(23.01) - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
whats this sophie..u wrote another fan fic but forgot to tel me...??
Yuvika throws chappal at sophie...lol
amazing update
wow she's pregnant m sure dutta wil cum around...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

whats this sophie..u wrote another fan fic but forgot to tel me...??

Yuvika throws chappal at sophie...lol
amazing update
wow she's pregnant m sure dutta wil cum around...

Im so sorryyyyyy I didn't pm anyone lool 😆
Actually i was taking a nap and got this dream ahahaahah😳😆
Then i thought i would write it down init... It's not that good but anyway lol... I will update part 2 2day.. 😉
And i will also update Raat Ka Nasha lol😃
I'M SO SORRY EVERYONE... I WILL PM ALL OF YOU WHEN I UPDATE IT!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: sunshiine21

Im so sorryyyyyy I didn't pm anyone lool 😆
Actually i was taking a nap and got this dream ahahaahah😳😆
Then i thought i would write it down init... It's not that good but anyway lol... I will update part 2 2day.. 😉
And i will also update Raat Ka Nasha lol😃
I'M SO SORRY EVERYONE... I WILL PM ALL OF YOU WHEN I UPDATE IT!

Koi bat nahi. its ok.
Haaawwwww Sophie tujhe kaise kaise sapne aate hain. Mujhe aate hain but as i get up sab bhooljati hun.LOL😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow sophie u started OS how exiting tanx dear 4 the pm what a fantastic OS i looooooooved it can't wait 4 the next update jeldi kerna and pm me pls. i love hoe u came up with black avatar and revelation i hope dutta accepts her quick.😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey sophie wow wrote new tasha OS and forgot to PM me....really loved it alot like always...how did she survive for 2 weeks😆,,,,she is pregnant...wow lookin forward nxt part..pls jaldi update karna..and pls PM me....👏👍🏼🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok i know everyone is curious how Nakku survived for 2 weeks without revealing her beauty...

Well leme break the suspense... Everytime Ahem Ahem happened, Nakku would turn the lights off so that Dutta doesn't see anything Lool girl is clever!
Anyway here's a promo -
Nakku is 7 months pregnant and she's sitting in her room crying... Dutta takes care of her but his silentness kills her every moment...She holds her belly and cry and Dutta looks at her at the door but doesn't come in.
VoiceOver - Kya Dutta apne bacche ke khatir Nakku ke saath ek nayee shurwaat kar payega?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey jann its a nice start plssss jaldi upload karoooo naplsss.......plsss i am waiting for it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HEY Sunshine
yet again an amzing writing from ur side
im loving it
wow sunshine
ur coping 2 amazing write ups
great job
do pm me when update

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sophie....thankyou soo much for sending me a PM abt this...!!!!! seriously..otherwise i would miss it...!! [oooo and that would b really bad...!!!! ]...haye yaar...it was awesome....bt ya..when Dutta said started that "Jhoot....Dhookha" stuffs i really felt like slapping him...!!! seriously...i mean how could he..she told him everything...from which angle he found it as a Dhoka..?!!!ab bhagwan hi bachaye in dono ko..!!!!!
and the promo...she's 7 MONTHS pregnant...??and he STILL didn speak to her..?? tat's sweet tat he cares for her bt baat karta tho kya jaata uska..??!!!!
when are you updating next...??!! do send a PM...!!! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2

Baaji leaves and closes the door behind him. Dutta is lying on the bed drunk...Nakku comes and kneels down next to him and starts to take his shoes off. Dutta was going to push her with his feet but he remembered that she's pregnant. Dutta pulls his feet back and turns his face away. Nakku pulls his feet back and takes the shoes off. Dutta doesn't look at her.

Nakku: Main jaanti hoon ke aap naraz ho.. lekin mujhse baat karo.. daato..maaro.. lekin aise chup mat raaho..Aise toh aapki Nakku maar jayegi..

Dutta: maar jane do

Nakku is shocked and she steps back.. she couldn't believe her ears.. She leans against the wall and sits down crying. She rests her head on her knees and cries. Dutta pretend as if he doesn't hear her and turns the other way. He falls asleep. Nakku's head feels heavy and she sleeps on the floor itself.

2 hours later... Dutta wakes up holding his head. He sees Nakku on the floor and looks at her with anger but then he remembers his child.. HIS unborn baby.. who is suffering along with Nakku. Dutta picks Nakku up without looking at her and puts her on the bed, he gets up to walk away but her mangalsutra is stuck with his kurta button which pulls him back down near her.. He looks at her, scanning every part of her face with his eyes. Without realising he starts tracing her face with his fingers and removes the strand of hair which was on her face making her uncomfortable. Dutta looks at her and couldn't control himself, he leans in to kiss her but then he moves back and quickly untangles her mangalsutra. He takes a pillow and goes to the sofa to sleep. He keeps turning around but can't sleep. He looks at Nakku on the bed and sees her moving as well but she was sleeping but she was also murmuring something. Dutta got up and went next to her.

Nakku *in her sleep*: Nahin... Nahin... saab... baccha.. Nahin...mat jao...nahin reh sakti...aapke bina Nahin...mar dalo..baat karo..AHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Nakku jumps up shouting and holding her belly. Dutta gets worried and gives her water. Nakku holds her belly tight and she's in pain. Dutta makes her drink the water. Nakku whines in pain holding her belly. Dutta gets worried and picks her up. He goes downstairs and everyone was there. No one could sleep. Everyone sees worried but dutta doesn't stop and goes to the car. Baaji comes there and opens the door. Dutta puts Nakku in and she grabs his hands in pain. Dutta also gets in next to Nakku. Baaji gets in the driver's seat and drives to hospital. On the way Nakku lose conscious and faints in dutta's arm. Baaji and Dutta both get worried and they hurry to the hospital. Arriving there Baaji opens the door and Dutta picks Nakku up and runs in. Dutta shouts for doctor and a few nurses come running. They lead TaSha to a room and Dutta puts Nakku on the bed. Doctor comes and tells Dutta to wait outside. Dutta goes out and waits outside with baaji. Doctor checks Nakku and gives her an injection. After a little while he comes out and dutta rushes to him..

Dutta: doctor kya hua mere pat...patni ko?

Doctor: dekhiye... woh bohut stress mein hain.. aur yeh unke liye achi baat Nahin hain.. maine injection de diya hain lekin usse araam ko bohut zaroorat hain..

Baaji: lekin woh theek to hain na?

Doctor: Nahin woh bohut weak hain... lagta hain usne khana Nahin khaya.. aapko dhyaan rakna chahiye tha...maine energy ka injection to laga diya hain lekin usse abhi tak hoosh Nahin aaya..

Dutta: aur baccha? Woh theek to hain na?

Doctor: haan lekin bacche ma ke emotions se jure hain... agar maa udaas rehti hain to phir bacche bhi udaas rehenge. Khane waqt par dijiye...maine kuch dawayi likhi hain..usses khane ke baad de dijiye.

Dutta: ji doctor..

Doctor: Aap unke paas jaa sakta hain.. lekin woh abhi tak hoosh mein Nahin ayee hain..jab woh hoosh mein ajayegi toh aap mujhe bulaye ga.

Baaji: ji doctor..

Doctor leaves and baaji goes in the room where Nakku is unconscious. Dutta stands outside and looks at Nakku through the window. His eyes starts tearing up and he gather some courage and goes inside. Baaji is standing near the bed and he looks at dutta. Dutta is looking everywhere but Nakku. He couldn't take in the fact that HIS Nakku changed. It wasn't the Nakku he wanted to see. He wanted his kaali mitti Nakku. But this is someone else. Baaji can see dutta is thinking about something.

Baaji: Bhao?

Dutta *coming back to his sense*: haan

Baaji: Bhao... I know you're angry and upset with Vayhini but please put everything aside...She needs you.. Your baby needs you. God forbid but because of your anger, you can lose Vayhini and your baby.

Saying this baaji went out of the room. His word echoes in dutta's head...Dutta looks at Nakku and sits down next to her. He puts his hand forward to touch Nakku's belly but he pulls it back. He thinks again and finally touches her belly and naturally a smile comes on his face. He caresses the belly but then Nakku starts moving. Dutta gets up and goes to call the doctor. Nakku opens her eyes when dutta already got out of the room and she felt as if dutta was there. She could still feel his touch but she wasn't sure if she was dreaming or he really came. Just then doctor comes in and greets her. Dutta and Baaji comes in as well behind the doctor. Nakku looks at dutta and baaji and then the doctor. He checks her pulse and temperature. All this while Dutta and Nakku are looking at each other.

Doctor: Pulse to khafi slow hain.. yeh pregnancy mein acchi baat Nahin hain

Nakku: mere bacche to theek hain na? *Dutta looks at Nakku guiltily*

Doctor: haan woh theek to hain lekin agar aap khana Nahin kha ega toh baccha kaise jiyega?

Baaji: Fikar nako doctor... Vayhini time par khana khalegi

Doctor: theek hain...

Nakku: Doctor... beta hain ya beti? *Dutta looks at the doctor waiting for a response*

Doctor: Pata Nahin... 2-3 months baad mein pata chalega..

Nakku: Ji

Doctor: ab aap usse ghar lega sakte hain...*to Nakku* tumhe araam ke sabse zaroorat hain.. aur stress mat lena. Theek hain.

Nakku nods and tries to get up holding her belly. She can't and Dutta picks her up avoiding eye contact with her. Baaji is happy that dutta is concern for Nakku. He puts her in the car and sits next to her. Baaji drives to PN.

Dutta carries Nakku inside and everyone comes to them. Dutta goes to his room with Nakku without saying anything to anyone. They all look at baaji questioningly.

AS: Baaji kya hua Nakku ko? Sab theek to hain na?

Baaji: woh AS... Vayhini is not well.. stress ki wajayse halat kharaab ho gaya hain...

AS: hayeee jagdambe yeh kya horaha hain (loool i can actually imagine her saying this..nautanki kahin ki mwahahah im so evil)

Baaji: chinta nako AS... doctor ne dawayi dedi hain...aap jao aur sau jao.. main hain na bhao aur Vayhini ke saath...

AS: Nakusha ka khayal rakna .. aur dutta ka bhi.

Baaji: ho AS.. aap jao aur sau jao...

Dutta enters his room and puts Nakku on the bed without looking at her. He leaves the room...Nakku is sad that dutta isn't even looking at her or talking to her. She thinks dutta went to sleep somewhere else but dutta comes back with food. He sits down next to her and feeds her. Nakku smiles at him but he doesn't look at her. After dinner dutta makes her drink water and baaji comes there with Nakku's medicines. Dutta makes Nakku take her medicines. Baaji leaves.

Nakku: aap..

Dutta: sau jao..

Nakku: lekin meri baat to...

Dutta: raat bohut ho gayee hain.. sau jao..

Nakku: mujhe akela mat chodiye

Dutta puts the plate on the table and lies down on the bed next to her and puts his hands on his forehead and closes his eyes. Nakku closes her eyes and tries to sleep but she can't she turns to him but his eyes are closed. She looks at him for long then finally sleep took over and she fell asleep. Dutta opens his eyes to check on her but she fell asleep. He turns off the light and sleep aswell.

Precap – 7th months leap...

Nakku's breakdown... Dutta back to Normal

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