TaSha FF - Pyar Ke Dhokhe Part14Pg35.(23.01) - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
great waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muaahhh................. Muaahhh..................Muaahhh
U gave the my name to Dutta's daughter.................... when I read i cant believed and check that twice.................. I am so happy................ and in one line where u wrote Khushi Dutta patil.............................. I cant stop my khushiiiiii.....................................
this part is my favourite..........favourite.....................favourite...........................
whole part is very nice............................. but precap is very scaring........................
Update soon dear.........................................
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Posted: 14 years ago

such a sweet name .. khushi.. and papa ke haath mein aake chup ho jati hain.. lagta she has already got her dad wrapped around her teeny weeny finger! such a sweet baby yaar..

loved the update.. new entry for baaji huh.. and starting mein takraar.. ab aage aage yeh takraar turns into pyaar!!

waiting for next part dear.. thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
GR* UPdate
i like the changed precap
love baby Khushi <3
and Baji Bela
sounds interesting
keep up the good work !

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey really a fantastic 👏 update yaar..................dutta loving his daughter n talking with her it made naku😆 jealous na n naku keep pillow on his sides of ears😆...........it was sooooooooo cute n for the name of their baby........ tahsa fight was sooooooooooo cute n i loved the name kushi...........it was soooooooooo good n baji n bela wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so baji gonna fall for her n am waiting for that.............wat dutta gonna ask from naku...... u keeping suspence yaar,,,,,,,,,,,,,waiting for that..............totally this part was full entertainment package👏 i throughly enjoyed it....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
hieee sophie nice part😊 love d pals of datta wit khushi n convo tooo"ouchiee pauchiee"😆 amazing wow soo nice u show dat nakku irrited wit dat😆 amazing nice update👏👏👏 bela n baaji woohoo,,,,again luv story start wow 😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 8

Baaji+Bela = BaLa

Everyone is in the hall fighting to hold Khushi. Baaji is already holding her and not giving her to anyone including Dutta. Everyone sits down and Baaji gives Khushi to Nakku. Dutta looks at him angrily.

Baaji: woh kya hain na bhao.. Vayhini Maa hain.. dena to parega na

Dutta: Woh Maa hain to kya main sautela baap hoon?

Baaji: Haila.. yeh aap kya kehrahe hain bhao.. maine aisa to nahin kahan

Dutta: kabse kehraha hoon ke Khushi ko muje dede.. Lekin nahin.. tu kabhi sunta hi nahin.

AS: ab bas bhi karo tum dono.. kya bacchon ki tarah lad rahe ho?

Dutta: Maine usse kahan

AS: haan haan janti hoon. Tamo... Baap ho tum uski... Tumhare hi godh mein ayegi na

Nakku: Yeh lijiye. *Hands Khushi over to Dutta and Dutta is happy*

Baaji: bhao. Ab mein kya karoon?

Dutta: Tu ek kaam kar.. Woh zameen hain na jo humne kareedli?.. wahan jao aur dekho ke kaam hua hain ya nahin.

AS: lekin jaldi wapas aana.

Baaji: Kyun? Aaj kya hain?

AS: aaj pooja hain ghar mein...Khushi ke liye

Baaji: Khushi ke liye? To main abhi gaya aur abhi aaya.. Bole to superfast. *Baaji leaves*

.....

Baaji stops right infront of the land and everyone is working on it, He walks around checking everything and his watch drops on the floor, Baaji doesn't notice and walks off. He smiles happily and looks around to see a shopping centre with a few shops in there selling toys and teddy bears. He thinks about Khushi and runs to the shop only to bump into Bela. She looks at him irritated. Baaji is shocked to see her again.

Bela: TUM??

Baaji: TUM?

Bela: Tum aandha ho? Phir se mujhe takkar maara

Baaji: eeyyy jaan bujke nahin kiya..

Bela: hmm sab samajhti hoon.. ladki ko dekha to line marna shuru karte ho

Baaji: KYA?? Main tujhpe line kyun maroonga? Apne shakal aaina mein dekhka kabhi..

Bela: Eyy chokra..

Baaji: mera naam baaji hain

Bela: aur dikhne main bhi baaji dikhte ho

Baaji: matlab

Bela: kuch nahin.. hato mere raaste se

Baaji: yedi..

They both walk to the opposite directly. Baaji goes to the shop and bela walks to the opposite side but then she remembers what she came here for. She promised her nephew she would buy him a car toy. Bela looks around and sees the shopping centre she goes in and goes directly to the toy shop. She sees baaji there but turns her back towards him and starts looking for a car. Baaji scratches his head and looks around thinking what to buy. He then gets an idea and asks the person on the counter to pack everything. The girl laughs and asks him how old the child is. Baaji replies "one day". The lady then shows him some toys suitable for Khushi. Baaji is quite embarrassed and starts selecting toys. Both him and Bela comes to the counter together and fights over who will pay first.

Bela: yahan pehle main aayi thi

Baaji: dekh mera beja fry mat kar... main yahan pehla aaya tha..

Bela: main ladki hoon.

Baaji: to main kya karoon? Nachoon?

Bela: dekh *points index finger at him*

Just then they hear a gun shot. Baaji looks up and sees some men dressed in black, face covered with a mask barging in the shop. Baaji was about to take out his gun when one of the men grabbed a girl and pointed the gun on her temple. Baaji stood still. Bela got scared and grabbed baaji's kurta leaving him stunned.

Man: koi nahin hilega... sab neeche baito

Man2: Suna nahin.. BAITOOO

Everyone in the shop sits down on the floor including BaLa. The masked men starts going around and checks everyone. They make baaji stand up and check him. They find his gun and take it. They push baaji back on the floor and looks at the counter. They take out all the cash and then walks around holding a gun in their hand.

Bela is frightened and holds baaji's hand. He looks at her and she's sweating. Baaji looks at the men and thinks about calling dutta. He checks his pocket but his phone is in the car. Baaji hits his forehead in frustration and curse himself for being dumb.

One of the men's phone rings and he picks it up.

Man: tum hamari maange poori kardo commissioner saab varna hum iss shopping centre ko uda denge.

He cuts the phone and smiles cunningly. The men starts talking amongst themselves and one of them said to kill one by one to get the commissioner to give them what they want. All agreed to it and looks around.

Man: Daro mat.. Hum tum logon ko kuch nahin karenge... Agar police ne humein jaane diya to tum log bhi jaa sakte ho.

The phone rings again and the police refused to give them anything because they are terrorists. One of them signals the other something. He nods and leaves. They all smile evilly and looks at their watch. A few minutes later, they hear a bomb blasts. Everyone starts screaming and gets scared. The terrorists laugh and shoot in the air telling them to be quiet. Bela moves closer to baaji hiding herself behind his back on the floor. Baaji doesn't say anything as he understands she's scared. Baaji looks around to find a way out and sees the washroom.

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Dutta is playing with Khushi on the bed while Nakku is looking at them happily. She feels bored and switches the TV on. Dutta looks at the TV and then back at Khushi when he suddenly realise something. He looks back at the TV and sees the shopping centre.

Baaji: aree yeh mall to zameen ke bagal mein hi hain.. shayad baaji dikh jaye TV par.

Dutta puts the volume up and watch the news. He is shocked to find out about the bomb and that people has been held in captivity by terrorists. Dutta starts panicking and calls baaji. But as baaji's phone is in his car, no one picks up. Dutta gets angry and calls again. Nakku is confused.

Nakku: saab kya hua?

Dutta: Baaji is not answering my calls

Nakku: Why you panicking? Baaji has gone to see the land not to the mall.

Dutta: The mall is right next to the land. If a bomb blasted already then it will affect people working on the land.

Nakku: KYA? Yeh aap kya kehrahe hain?

Dutta: yeh baaji bhi na.. phone kyun nahin lag raha hain...

Nakku: Call one of the workers working on that land

Dutta: haan..

Dutta calls every workers possible but no one picks up. Dutta starts getting scared and decides to go himself.

Dutta: Nakku... Im going there myself

Nakku: Nahin..

Dutta: Mujhe jaana parega nakku.

Dutta looks at Khushi and leaves. Nakku sits on the bed scared. She folds her hands and prays for DuJi's safety.

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Arriving to the site, Dutta parks his car and gets out. He sees Baaji's jeep and runs to it only to find it empty. Dutta looks around and sees Police all around the mall. He goes to the land but all the workers are dead on the floor due to the blast. Dutta is shocked and walks around looking for baaji. Dutta turns around going mad when he doesn't find baaji anywhere. He feels as if the world is spinning fast around him and he's going crazy. Dutta holds his head and screams "BAAAAAAJIII". He cries and walks around turning the dead bodies looking for his baaji. Most of the bodies were burnt so Dutta didn't recognize any of them. He walks a little further but doesn't see anyone, he was about to walk off when his eye caught something shining on the ground. Dutta looks at it properly and it's a silver watch. Dutta runs to it and takes it. He was shocked to see baaji's watch. He holds it tightly and looks around with teary eyes.

.......

Baaji holds Bela's hand. She looks at him confused. He signals her to stay quiet and pulls her to the washroom that was next to them. Inside he locks the door and looks around. He sees the window and rushes to it. He looks around for something hard to break it but doesn't find anything. Bela is standing there looking at him confused.

Baaji: apna dupatta dedo

Bela: kyun?

Baaji: dekho time nahin hain hamare paas.. jaldi dedo

Bela: takes off her dupatta and gives him while she holds her hand onto her chest as she's feeling uncomfortable but baaji doesn't look at her as he's busy wrapping the dupatta around his hand. He hits the window hard and it breaks. The terrorists hear the noise and looks around. Baaji comes back to bela and place her dupatta around her. Bela looks at him innocently. Baaji grabs her hand and pulls her to the window. He lifts her up and helps her get out. Bela gets out and gives her hand to baaji. He smiles and holds it. Bela pulls and baaji climbs up and gets out. BaLa runs away holding hands and one of the terrorist breaks the washroom door. He looks around and sees the window broken. He looks at it angrily and goes back to the others. He informs them about the broken window and two of them run out the back way. BaLa are running when suddenly Bela screams. Baaji looks at her shocked. Bela puts her hand behind her back and then looks at it with horror. It was full of blood. Baaji is shocked. Bela was about to drop but baaji holds her. She falls unconscious in his arm and baaji picks her up.

.......

Dutta walks into PN in a trace with the watch in his hand and tears in his eyes. Everyone rushes to him and asks him about baaji. They all found out through Nakku. Dutta looks down on the floor trying to avoid the eye contacts.

Nakku: saab.. Baaji kahan hain.. woh theek to hain na..

AS: bolo dutta.. baaji kahan hain?

Suds: Shayad kisi kaam mein phasse hue hain

Roops: Lekin bhao aap kuch bolte kyun nahin?

Nakku: saab kuch to boliye.

Without looking up and without speaking dutta holds out baaji's watch infront of everyone and breaks down on his knees. Everyone is shocked. Dutta starts crying and holds the watch in his fist.

Will BaLa's Love Story finish before it even starts?

Will Dutta find out that baaji is alive?

Well Wait for the next update to find out.

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Sorry No Precap

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow very nice update yar i loved it every bit. i am eagerly waiting for next update. i hope in some way bajji inform to daatta about his situation.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow sophie very interesting part enjoyed reading it.waiting for next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey great update yaar............... bela n baji fight😆 was funny n poor dutta he couldn't know wat to do??? plz tell him baji is alive for him n his family...................OMG wat happened to bela???????????????? i hope see will be fine ...................................n i loved baji n bela scene's ................ it was nice....................update ASAP................

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