OS:'Waapis Aaogi Na' - Page 6

Originally posted by: chandanafan

Thanks for the pm DD. 🤗

Wow another OS from DD. 🥳
Awesome OS. no words to express how well u write. 😳 the dialogues r so well written. 👏 👏 Hats off to u DD.

Can't wait for the next update. Update asap plz.
Fabulous update DD.

Originally posted by: princessmithai

DD lovely wonderful

jitne bhi adjectives du kaam paar jayega

loved it loved it loved it mighty big tym

* Mithai hugs DD*

*Mithai is a lil angry too*

*DD was supposed to read Mithai's FF during weekend*

*It seems DD completely forgot*

anyways here comes the bloopers 😉

[DD] Nahi yaar Mithal...I didnt forget...I swear....This weekend became so busy...I thought I wuld finalize on my car, lekin sat ko office jaana padh gaya and sunday ko was off to check car and nothing striked....I wanted to finish my OS this weekend lekin woh bhi nahi hua, so, I had to write it on Monday....Socha tha Shabz and ur FF ke comments this weekend doongi lekin puraa time work and cars mein chalaa gaya.....ab is week ke liye rakha hai...BTW, I did a sneek peak....u got all bengali tadkaa na!! 😆😆...cant wait! 😉

Naku is still awake, lost in thought when there is a slight movement in Dutta...He gets up to find that he has been asleep since 6 hrs and Naku was still awake in an uncomfortable posture. She didnt want to move, scared that her movements might wake him up. 😳😳😳

6 hrs kucch zyada nahi ho gaya😆

[DD] I wanted to say 6 because woh bahut dinoan baad so raha tha...zyaada hote toh it wuldnt count as peaceful sleep na!! 😆😆

"Mujhe nahi maloom ki meri kis janam ki pooja hai tu, lekin tune mujhe puraa kiya Naku. Har Khokhlaa pan bhi poora lagta hai, agar tu hoti hai saath."...he takes her other hand and kisses it too..He comes closes to her lips and plants a kiss on her cheeks. He then closes her eyes and kisses both of them in succession. He finally moves below and closes in on her mouth.

iiiiiiimmmmmmmmpppoosssible 🤣

kucch bhi ho jaye iis haal mein humara gadha itna bara khatra mord nahiy sakta waise bhi woh sher kum gadha zyada lagta hein 🤣

jaab waqt rehte Naku ke kareeb nahi ja paya tow kya aabb bewaqt mein khak jayega!!! 🤣

[DD] sweetie, he is married and a year has passed....and there are these moments when a person is vulnerable when the passion is at its peak....😉😆

While kissing her he pushes her down on the bed and lies beside her. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Gradually the lights are turned off and the night closes with the birds chirping far away and two lovers emerged in their own world, unaware of the world or its problems! Atleast for this moment both felt complete!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

eeeeeeehhhhhhh is Naku in her fair avatar????

or did Dutta just turn blind to everything around him?

Is he experimenting on "Just cherishing life without even sneaking a glance at at it" funda?

[DD] u didnt read my assumptions in tnhe 1st post mithai....This is an extension of my previous OS....Naku's FR was done in the style I had written in previous OS....she is fair....😆😆

Dutta completes, "Shaadi ki pehli saalgiraa mubaarak ho!" ❤️❤️❤️❤️

well I thought its just past ....... eeerrrmmmmm.... three no four months since thier marriage

ek saal kaise beet gaya?????

aur woh bhi LTL ki script mein😲

[DD]...Tujhe ek saal mein badi problem ho rahi hai!! 😆😆...yaar, ek saal dimaag mein aaya toh daal diya...plus I wanted Dutta and Naku to have some great loving moments without hinderances....isliye 1 year ka break diya before a new problem surges up!! 😆

yeh pic tum kiss scene se utthayi ho???

mujhe kyun nahi dikha??? 😆

[DD] This was teh latest promo sweetie....very apt for my story!! 😆

"Mujhe nahi maloom ki meri kis janam ki pooja hai tu, lekin tune mujhe puraa kiya Naku. Har Khokhlaa pan bhi poora lagta hai, agar tu hoti hai saath."...

"Ek hi toh anaadi khushi milli mujhe aaj iss din, Iss see jis din bhool gaya Naku, us din Dutta jeena chod degaa. Aaj ke din Bappa ne mujhe mere zindagi ka sab se anmol tofaa diyaa tha."

wah wah meri Lady Anil KUDOS KUDOS👏

[DD] tu usse mera nick name banaake chodegi na!! 😆😆

*Mithai hands on hips*

aab zyada phulo maat jao meri FF paro

[DD] yes mam.....but where are ur spoofs?? woh padhne mein laughter riot ho jaata tha yaar...I miss them!!

Originally posted by: vika1981

DD, WOW! so you are back with a 'Bang' this OS is utterly amazing. As I was reading the scenes where dutta feels so lost and sad I felt like I was there. Naku is one strong woman! I am happy to know that dutta's father is trying to make amends of all the mistakes he has done, but was so not expecting AS to be BH.

I am looking forward to the next chapter of beautiful story:)

Vika

Originally posted by: amitasaily

stupendo fantastically fantabulous

just wanted to say that when dutta told Nakku that he too wanted something from her, I seriously thought he was going to ask for a daughter. Par Dutta ki thinking hum se slow hai.

Originally posted by: Rose_Petal

DD...This was so good! Just finished the rest and...oh my God...your Dutta is so ahem, ahem! 😳😳😳
I seriously thought, when Dutta was telling Naku he wants something, that he would say to "Naku, give me a baby," 🤣......you know, so he'd have someone who'd be his 'apne' 😆.

...Hope this isn't the only part...😊

Originally posted by: mozart66

Lovely OS DD!!

Tu toh Anil ko bhi maat de sakti hai!!

Aaj tune sabko emotional bananeki or rulaneki kasam khayi hai kya?!!

SUPERB OS!!! Wish it all comes true in the serial!! It is high time Dutta gets to know the REAL face of his "FAMILY".

Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Wow DD ..ur bak with ur OS...
haven't read it yet .... but 2day I will pakka read & comment ...


P.S : maine VM dekh liya ...😳😆

Originally posted by: swati2008

DD.......i m speechless........its awesome........u r a amazing writer.......TaSha scene was too good..........so Naku came to know about AS n Kala.......lets see what she'll do now.........update soon......