OS:'Waapis Aaogi Na' - Page 19

Originally posted by: taman07

I Like your parts.

Originally posted by: vika1981

DD, I am lost at the words to say that I am loving this ff so much:) can't wait to read what happens next.. Naku has to be strong..

Originally posted by: suhana19

Hey DD thanx for the update and PM 🤗OMG what is kala has planned for naku....this jhumri really getting on my nerves pls kick her out ASAP😡....I hope she doesn"t take advantage of dutta ...pls don"t essence of his character get lost ...i hope the truth comes out soon and tasha unite soon ..pls jaldi update karna....Wow pooji did really awesome job with the VM it match the situation perfectly ...thanx alot for the wonderful treat ...👏👍🏼🤗

Originally posted by: pbtghosh

👏 Achcha to hai per Golmal😆

Kal rat ko SP padaya 😕 ho ke so gai. phir aaj P-I se pura pada. last me tumne SP se DP kardi. Kyun Kyun Kyun? waysehi D&N ke liye ro rahe hayn upar se tum pada pada ke rularahe ho😭😭 Akher Kyun?

Aur ye Naku Kali hay ke gori hay??? 😕😕. Likh rahe ho gori aur dikha raheho kali.😲

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ritun

Hi DD.. mein aur OS likhoon.. tere ko bhi chad gayi kya ;-) seriously, no way. And BTW those lines were from your OS.. some lines just stay with you and this was one of them! You need to be very creative and have the ability to weave magic with your story to be a writer.. I can only understand/appreciate a story as I am someone who feels from the heart first rather than think from my brain!

I read after I had posted my response that Pooji is not even a LTL fan.. she deserves a big round of applause for putting together such a VM, esp as it had so many touching moments from D-N's life so far.. and yes, I loved the rain effect and it was on Dutta too when he comes looking for her!!!

Even I was having mixed feeling wondering how this OS of yours will turn out as it is a bit longer than the 1^st one. You had handled the 1^st OS with utmost sensitivity and that made me wait even more impatiently to read this one.. sometimes kya hota hai ki you put down all your emotions in your first piece of work, sort of like you burn yourself out, but if you are born to be a creative writer like you, you will always surpass yourself every step of the way.. and that makes you stand out in a crowd for me.. you should seriously consider this as an option as you write beautifully and from your heart J The only trouble with your OS is that it is so close to D-0N we all love that it is like watching the show for me and for the sort of person I am, I take it to heart and fret and fret till you post the next update! I cry with Dutta here pining for Nakku…I cant tell anyone at home as otherwise mental asylum mein room book kar denge mere liye ;-) but the good part is that I know D-N are in good hands in your OS, so the ending will be good.. good for me you don't write FF's as otherwise I will perpetually be in a state of mouring agar D-N mein jhagdaa hota hain!!!

You are so right about lovers standing on either side and blaming each other that you don't love me anymore NOW!! I can say that from experience ;-)

Cant wait for next part, though I know after reading it I will be depressed till I read the next one.. kya nasseb hain dekho toh.. yahaan show mein finally D-N khush hain lekin when I see them sad in your OS, my heart will be pining for them !!i cant imagine what kala has planned.. trap dutta with jhumri (fake trap), so that Nakku leaves.. that is the only way she willleave.. but feel DP will somehow do something here?! And pls last part will be a privilege to read for me.. I will be so over the moon as it will be Dutta repenting and Nakku overcome with reliefe and love. Cant wait..

If poss, after next episode update, don't leave too long before you post the next one, so our hearts will not be paining for a long time L

Love you DD…

Vandu

DD,sweetie,u r scaring me with this Jhumri character.Her track seems to be too long.I can't bear it.What isshe going to do?I hope CVs dont read this. Pls DD atleast iss baar Kaala ka parda phash karo na?Pretty Please?

Originally posted by: prettywoman

Hi DD.. mein aur OS likhoon.. tere ko bhi chad gayi kya ;-) seriously, no way. And BTW those lines were from your OS.. some lines just stay with you and this was one of them! You need to be very creative and have the ability to weave magic with your story to be a writer.. I can only understand/appreciate a story as I am someone who feels from the heart first rather than think from my brain!

[DD] i went and checed my OS....phir se...u know Vandu, Now I am getting very confsed between LTL dialogues and my OS...I dnt know which onw was spoken when...😆😆.....

I read after I had posted my response that Pooji is not even a LTL fan.. she deserves a big round of applause for putting together such a VM, esp as it had so many touching moments from D-N's life so far.. and yes, I loved the rain effect and it was on Dutta too when he comes looking for her!!!

[DD] yeah...I told her that Dutta is watching her from other side of the lawn so, he has to see thru rain!!....The scenes tht she chose on her own were - all jungle scenes, Naku servin food and Tasha Hug in Anna's den!!...How apt na??...baaki I gae her but she twisted it based on wht she felt right....some ppl are just born talented! 😛

Even I was having mixed feeling wondering how this OS of yours will turn out as it is a bit longer than the 1^st one. You had handled the 1^st OS with utmost sensitivity and that made me wait even more impatiently to read this one.. sometimes kya hota hai ki you put down all your emotions in your first piece of work, sort of like you burn yourself out, but if you are born to be a creative writer like you, you will always surpass yourself every step of the way.. and that makes you stand out in a crowd for me.. you should seriously consider this as an option as you write beautifully and from your heart J The only trouble with your OS is that it is so close to D-0N we all love that it is like watching the show for me and for the sort of person I am, I take it to heart and fret and fret till you post the next update! I cry with Dutta here pining for Nakku'I cant tell anyone at home as otherwise mental asylum mein room book kar denge mere liye ;-) but the good part is that I know D-N are in good hands in your OS, so the ending will be good.. good for me you don't write FF's as otherwise I will perpetually be in a state of mouring agar D-N mein jhagdaa hota hain!!!

[DD] awwwww....thx Vandu.... this means a lot to me....I think u r right, I put all my energy in 1st OS...actually, the 1st OS was instant....dimaag mein aata chala gaya and I kept on writing in a flow...I didnt even proof read..this OS stayed in mind for quiet some time and then it turned out longed than anticipated.....Islye I guess slip ho gaya....

You are so right about lovers standing on either side and blaming each other that you don't love me anymore NOW!! I can say that from experience ;-)

Cant wait for next part, though I know after reading it I will be depressed till I read the next one.. kya nasseb hain dekho toh.. yahaan show mein finally D-N khush hain lekin when I see them sad in your OS, my heart will be pining for them !!i cant imagine what kala has planned.. trap dutta with jhumri (fake trap), so that Nakku leaves.. that is the only way she willleave.. but feel DP will somehow do something here?! And pls last part will be a privilege to read for me.. I will be so over the moon as it will be Dutta repenting and Nakku overcome with reliefe and love. Cant wait..

[DD] next part is very depressing Vandu...I will defn warn u about it....infact now the subsequent parts are only depressing..i am sorry, but I am not able to change the storyline in my mind.....i tried removing the Jhumri track from my story, lekin woh itnaa carve ho gaya hai, ki I cant take it out...and as KALA SAYS THT This is the only thing that even savitri cannot escape!!!....

If poss, after next episode update, don't leave too long before you post the next one, so our hearts will not be paining for a long time L

Love you DD'

Vandu