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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: ZubyDutta

DD,sweetie,u r scaring me with this Jhumri character.Her track seems to be too long.I can't bear it.What isshe going to do?I hope CVs dont read this. Pls DD atleast iss baar Kaala ka parda phash karo na?Pretty Please?

The vm made cry so hard. All this will happen in TaSha life soon.Ab kya hoga? But....

Kala hears the echoing voice and makes an irritating face! "Shuru ho gayi..."..She closes her ears with the cotton bud.

AS hears the voice and says "jagdamba jagdamba"

DP hears it and is touched!

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Awesomely written.Now jaldi se a slow & painful death for Kaala & Co,OK?

Zuby, Jhumri scares me too!! 😆😆

OK, your wish is my command...i will try closing my OS in next 2 parts....but a warning, next part is painful...very painful indeed!!

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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: bfunofbb123
Hey DD dear muje maf kerdo i am so late in commenting but i am telling u what an OS i loooooooooooved it u r eeexxxxxxcellent 👏 my God so detailed and very good i wonder how u come up with the idea i love how u bring back meri Ai bolti hai love it DD this days we don't hear it in the show from naku u reminded me how much i miss it. DD about DP's convo with naku it so realistic it could happen in the show. so hard to c dutta broken but atleast naku is there to help him ok dd i am off to read ur next update will comment more after i read tanx dear for this and pm.👏

hey Jorda...thanks sweetie....even I miss Naku's Aayi bolti talks...today she atleast gave her talk ut missed on "Aayi bolti" phrase!! 😆😆

Originally posted by: bfunofbb123
OMG DD u r awesome my God i am happy finaally i am able to read all of ur updates from part 1-4 in one go and that too aramse not rushed i love love it love it u sarpass my expectation DD kya OS hai hats of to u it is very well written the story, dialogue the pics and now the song sequence Aree Vah vah exxcellent job after reading all of it i still want more it is that much good i miss some words but, still i understood it well to know it is fantastic dear i love the VM it makes it more realy and helps to picture it more and of course the pics r a treat it show what they going through or look like at that moment. DD i like the pic of dutta with kala in part2 he looks handsome/ gorgeos 4 his party perfect pic. Aww it is so sad to c tasha apart like this naku was acting sherni despite telling her to go she refused well hope dutta will get to know very soon she is doing this 4 his good. is that fig in the part 4 dutta i have a feeling he might hear kala and leelas convo. ugg 😡that jhurum i can just picture her evil how low of kala. tanx DD for all the update and pm eagerly waiting 4 ur next update i promise i will read it on time this time.😉😃

ps DD I FORGOT TO MENTION THE TITLE I LOVE IT PERFECT"Waapis Aaogi Na"

Jorda, that figure was DP...lets see if he is able to do anythng....and u wuld now why I kept the title, "Waapis Aaogi na" in next part......BTW, Its the same dialogue tht Dutta uses when he holds Naku's hand!! 😛

I am glad u loved this OS....I guess just 2 more parts to go!!!

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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: mussy.jamshed
DD..........you promised that u will kick out jhumri from dutta's life.......u r so kind but yaha real life mein tu RD jhumri ban kar agaye hain yaar..........😕😕😆😆😆😆😆

I promise Mussy....Jhumri will be out....atleast by next 2 parts, I will kick her out....

OMG!! This RD has really taken all ur sukh and chein na??? 😆😆

r u in love wit MR or something?? 😆😆

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#194

DD UPdate karo its been like almost a week @##@@

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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: kiran255
DD UPdate karo its been like almost a week @##@@

sorry Kiran...My complete OS is ready, I am just waiting for a VM from someone because the next part would have the VM...I am sorry, I wanted to close the OS by now....but willd efn close it as soon as I get the VM....2 more parts to go...by thur all parts wuld be up!!!!

pakka!!

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#196

Ahhhhhhhhh ok then i wish jaldi say vm bn gaye
and i got to read the awesome OS by DD :D

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marie

@mariescott14

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#197

hey dd

just read all the four parts together

truely beautiful yaar...you portrayed all of them so rightly

hope DP soon tell naku about kala plan

dont want jhumri to come in the way..already lot of troubles for naku

i am feeling so bad for dutta n naku..seperated like that

really love the vm too..hope you update the next part soon

mwah :)

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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: mariescott14
hey dd
just read all the four parts together

truely beautiful yaar...you portrayed all of them so rightly

hope DP soon tell naku about kala plan

dont want jhumri to come in the way..already lot of troubles for naku

i am feeling so bad for dutta n naku..seperated like that

really love the vm too..hope you update the next part soon

mwah :)

Thanks Marie...I will close my OS in another two parts hopefully by thursday.....I am just waitign for the next song sequence VM...as soon as thats up, I will post the next parts!!!....

I am glad u loved it....Next parts will make u run for ur tissue papers.....but I promise, it wuld be beautiful...I loved writing each and every sentence of those parts!!....

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prettywoman

@prettywoman

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#199

intehaan ho gayi intezaar ki..😆 DD bathaio kahaan tak phunchi aapki gaddi ya mein kahoon VM ki gaddi😆

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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: prettywoman
intehaan ho gayi intezaar ki..😆 DD bathaio kahaan tak phunchi aapki gaddi ya mein kahoon VM ki gaddi😆

I guess in 2-3 hrs, the VM would be delievred to me by a pro and then I will just copy paste the 5th part and deliver it to you...

Vandu, I just felt tht my original form (the one in OS#1) was back with these two parts (Part#5 and Part#6), and I lvoed writing each and every part...I had the skelton but I filled the skelton yesterday, and I jst kept writing it....writing it...and writing it......Just like my OS #1.....I am sure u wuld love the dialogues.....but u wuld still cry and curse me....

then end is very unusual in my mind, I dnt know how many wuld not run to kill me but I couldnt change my story line, no matter how much I tried....But it wuld leave u with "eternal" feeling...I promise!!

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