New FF - Just Another Love Story(Updt Chpt 9 pg22)

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Rose

@stranger2rose

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

what a lovely update....liking the way ur introducing dutta...very impressive...well written dear...enjoyed every bit of it

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left_forever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

wow Mithai..nice one yaar...plz update the next part soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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saakshi

@--Saaki--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

Okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyy................

Read all the parts together...........

Dear,I must say I seriously felt like I am reading some Novel book........

Part 2 & 3 : well,all past & history thingy.........I liked the way you have described all the details........ ...........It was too good.......I definitely like it..........Nothing much about it.........U know I crave for dialogues & thrilling story........yet liked it yaar..........

Part 4 : Loved the dialogues........ .........OMG..............Dutta in next part... .....I am eagerly waiting for the NExt.............Update soon dear.............waiting.........................

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princessmithai

@princessmithai

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

To all who have read my updates till now

A Big THANK YOU😃

I wish I could get the time to thank each one of you individually

like I normally do

but I am really sorry I am a little messed up with my venture in finding a new job😕

and on top of that the Durga Puja is Knock Knock Knockin on every Bengali's door😛

PLEASE FORGIVE ME

Of course I cannot leave you guys into a pool of water huffing and puffing for the next update

so here comes the next update

Chapter 5

She did not understand the meaning of what she read. Like a dumbstruck she stood still, till Leela arrived, took the note from Naku's hand and read it. Leela told the chauffer that Naku would be ready in time, when he said that he was instructed to pick her up at 7o'clock in the evening, and with a nod to Leela's assurance he left.

"He is loaded babe" was all Naku heard from Leela. They went inside their apartment where Roops was putting little Anupama in her crib.Leela was on her second, or may be third review over the note, when she said " '......had there been any other amiable way to do it,' sheeesh babe, this guy is sooo ...... eeerrrmmm... so ... so .... so English, oh ! and did I just say he is loaded? Well, make that super loaded .... I mean just imagine ..... he is living in the Taj Bengal hotel currently, because he has invited you over to the Crystal Hall, which is only open to residential guests, and he has gotta be loaded to be living there."
"Which also means that he is not from this city" added Naku thoughtfully.
"And I wonder what he meant by '..... had there been any other amiable way to do it,' I mean what were the odds? " Naku said clearly annoyed.

"Was sending his chauffer, with a note dictating me where I should go to get my cell phone back was the only amiable way?" , she went on. The stress on those two words were a signs of her annoyance.
"And look at his cheek; he actually looked me up over the telecom service providers' database!" Naku huffed out incredulously. "Don't these service providers have norms and rules of not disclosing their client's whereabouts?"

This was when Roops took the matters in her hand. "A guy in Giorgio Armani bumps into you,"
"Giorgio Armani !! Whoaha, Naku you skipped the Giorgio Armani part to me? Make that super duper loaded, is he good looking?"Leela cut in.
"Shut up Leela" both Naku and Roops retorted together.

To that Leela eagerly gave up her FAQs for a while.
"Yes, you were saying ..." Naku nudged Roops.
So Roopscontinued "Yeah! A guy in Armani bumps into you, then he sends his chauffer waiting for you with a note, that car we saw parked outside, was definitely his, inviting you over to the Crystal Hall in the Taj Bengal, put them all together and what do you get? VA-LA Leela is right; he is super duper loaded, which also means he is well connected. "
"It probably did not even take him 15 minutes to track you down with your number. Honey , it's just a matter of snapping fingers for him I guess. I think you should go to collect your stuff." She added furthermore.

Naku looked at her with queer questioning eyes, Roops understood her inhibitions and added "Don't worry, the Crystal is a crowded place, and I am sure it is just over a coffee, he did not invite you over for dinner; and besides Baji has a meeting with his new client at the Crystal at around 8 in the evening"
"Yeah I will tell him about your coffee date, blind one , with a guy who donned an Armani" added Leela with a wink; "to look over you in case you need him."
So finally Naku agreed upon the meeting.

In the evening, Naku was asked to wear a beige skirt and a plain white top, a perfect evening outfit without flaunting it too much, but Naku happily declined the offer. Naku was more of a "dress for the cyclone" sort of a girl. Her wardrobe mainly consisted of branded jeans and tees, and she loved wearing comfortable joggers and loafers, a style that she adopted and flaunted with ease and quite a lot of attitude. In spite of Leela and Roops' pestering , Naku chose her favourite pair of Levis, a cotton white tee, and a fluffy pink pullover. She donned her feet in her favourite pair of Nike, loosely tied her hair and took off only with her wallet. She had no fancy dress or makeup suited for a date in such a place; but she could not bother any less about it. She just had one mission in mind ' to get back her cell phone and get out of there.

The BMW arrived at the scheduled time to pick her up, the same chauffer held the door open as she stepped in. When the door of the passenger seat gently closed, Naku could see both her buddies waving at her; even without a clue whether she saw them or not, behind the tinted window. Of course Naku did notice them, and she waved back too. Naku could clearly see the look of concern in both their faces.

Please press the like button n leave your precious comments 😳

next update in a while😉

Edited by princessmithai - 14 years ago

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

Next update TaSha comes face to Face and i can't wait

Wooohooo lol Amazing updateeeee Please continue sooon!

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suhana19

@suhana19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Hey mithai thanx for the update and PM 🤗Amazing yaar ....can"t wait for the nxt part when tasha comes face to face 😍.....

...i know u must busy with job hunting and getting ready for durga pooja...but if u can then pls update soon...eagerly waitin for it ...take care and see ya around ...goodluck yaar for the job hunting...👍🏼👏🤗

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Bella

@darkchoco

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Wow... Mithai is becoming super duper fast and reloaded😈

....and we are sure you are taking something spl to keep you this active evev in your very tight schedule..😃

well.... as far as you update goes, i njoyed it very much..this is the first FF i am reading and i think now will read all others as well... ❤️

yeah... keep us updated like this.🤗

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Leandra

@Leandra

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

HI prince very nice story yar, it good to see nakku, leela and roopa as good friends, till now the story is going very smooth, all i am waiting for when the love story began update soon.

very well written, u have done a wonderful job. keep writing.