Ek thi kahani-unke pyar ki Ch63 n epilogue(24aug)) - Page 14

Originally posted by: princessmithai

Wonderful

meri updates bhi bohut jaldi ayega

i loved ur updates

by the way

Shubho Bojoya

Shubho bijoya to u and ur family too😃

by the way wht will u guyz like to see next in the ff. should i make roops all goody goody or evil like in the show...😕

Loved it shilpa ,missed you and your FF a lot but you returned with a bang ,you have beautifully brought emotions of both nakuu and dutta and baji ,oh please make Tasha meet soon can not see them in more pain ,I had tears reading in my eyes you wrote so nice

i just got ur PM. i really don't want roopa for bajji. introduce some one new or datta has a sister from his real dad (DP) who want to come inside PN to make datta to forgive DP. she is also have good heart like datta. who genuinely care for datta, bajji and nakku. i want a real beautiful love story for bajji. only bajji and nakku genuinely love datta and stand for him in every circumstances. if datta misunderstood,and mistreat them they don't care all they care is only datta. i want one more prodctor for tasha love.i want i more person for datta- i want a person who whole heatedly stand for nakku, datta love.

sorry for to much blabbering.

Hey Shilpi..

I am totally floored reading your FF. you have great vision on taking the story forward and keeping the charecters intact too..some of the dialogues that touched me are below..

Nakku is silent, she can see in dutta's eyes that he has prosecuted her again without listening to her..

This is soo true so far in Dutta's case. I just hope when FR happens, he doesn't sentence Nakku before she tells him her truth.. I hope she can see the trust in his eyes which will give her the courage to speak up.. at least in the show he is learning to trust himself through nakku and believe in himself more too thru nakku.. so I don't want all that wasted in a minute in the show!

morey story --amazing story idea... the way Morey speaks and the story he makes up anyone will fall for it..and dutta is a gadha that in his anger he forgets how morey was after her that night and thinks nakku is the culprit..

he doubts baaji and nakku.. baaji opposes him for vahini!

I don't know how he can just forget everything his loved ones have done for him in fraction of a second.. like nakku rightly said that jab jazbaaton ke toofan aate hain toh aap ke pair dagmaga jaate hain.. felt really bad for baaji and nakku..but I am so glad that he stood up for his vahini!

Nakku keeps staring at him as if he is a stranger. Ab ye rishta jhorna ya todne ka faisla main karungi. Ab main nahi aap apne pyar ki sachai sabit karenge

Loved this angle.. always nakku pacifies him and makes him see sense.. but even after SR, if he cannot believe in her, cannot see her sachai in her eyes, she did the right thing walking out.. but beautifully written that she knows he will come for her..

- thode se gadhe to hai par dil bachcho jaisa hai. jaldi se bhatk jata hai. fir sir se gussa utarte hi ekdum masoom ban jate hai jaise kuch nahi hua. Har baar main manati hu. Is baar wo manayenge.

that is what I like about D-N ...the atoot vishwas..though Dutta's mind is clouded due to anger, he is suffering equally. She understands him so well, but she has been shielding him all this time, and now she knows he needs to grow up and realise his mistakes and start making correct judgements on people who surround him!

This new friend and her bro Harsh look like great people.. it will be difficult for any nice man to not like nakku.. so can easily understand harsh falling for her.. but we all know that nakku is married for saath janams to her one and only saab.. cant wait to see dutta coming to get her.. I am really looking frwd to see how you make Dutta grovel, though Nakku may not let him grovel! I am sure seing Harsh, the possessive side of Dutta will come alive.. cant wait to see that!

Hope u have a grt holiday in Calcutta.. pls update when you can and would be waiting to read it . pls PM if possible!

BTW, also loved how Dutta kept staring at her face, her lips etc but thinking they all look like nakku's features but now on a stranger :-(

vandu

Originally posted by: sasha_1

i just got ur PM. i really don't want roopa for bajji. introduce some one new or datta has a sister from his real dad (DP) who want to come inside PN to make datta to forgive DP. she is also have good heart like datta. who genuinely care for datta, bajji and nakku. i want a real beautiful love story for bajji. only bajji and nakku genuinely love datta and stand for him in every circumstances. if datta misunderstood,and mistreat them they don't care all they care is only datta. i want one more prodctor for tasha love.i want i more person for datta- i want a person who whole heatedly stand for nakku, datta love.

sorry for to much blabbering.

Yaar even i love baaji a lot. but when they were showing roops and baaji together they kindda grew on me. i was so shocked by fridays epi...i almost forgot the tasha scene of monday..almost... so i want roops to really fall for baaji. that way aleast dutta will have one sister who actually deserves his love. all that gift wala scene and her being repentent and all should not go waste.😭

Reserved!! Will comment later =)

Originally posted by: shilpita87

Yaar even i love baaji a lot. but when they were showing roops and baaji together they kindda grew on me. i was so shocked by fridays epi...i almost forgot the tasha scene of monday..almost... so i want roops to really fall for baaji. that way aleast dutta will have one sister who actually deserves his love. all that gift wala scene and her being repentent and all should not go waste.😭

but kala, roopa and leela are cousin to datta. if DP has another daughter in another marriage it is datta step sister mean real sister to datta. All that glitters is not gold.this is what i feel about roopa.

Arre.. stop teasing us with volcano and explosions ki promise.. karke dikhaoo toh manoongi.. just kidding! Waiting for the next part eagerly!

And BTW, I don't think he was not going to forgive AS, I think he was just upset that they all hid this from him.. so that hurt him more.. if AS had disclosed it to him, he would have felt better as now it feels like they don't trust him enough to reveal such truths to him..but anyway, I am really enjoying how ur story is shaping!! When will u update next :-)

Originally posted by: vaniabi

hey thankz for 4 long updates yaar...............i really hate dutta 😡 for his behavior ............... how he doubt nakku n with baji OMG wat is this ???????????? that'sall his love n friendship ah.............no yaar i don't like him n thank god baji is always for TaSha finally he prove the reality n truth abt nakku na............. dutta is really gadha ............n y baji forgive him ...... hmm........ anyways yaar i don't forgive dutta for his behavior n i really feel bad for nakku... according to me nakku is really poor soul............how much pain she can passes thro her life n her dutta too broken her heart n gave pain to her......... how u gonna convince nakku here afterwards........... if i'm in nakku place i never forgive dutta for his behavior n his doubting 😡................ plz gave me a nice part to convince me tooooo........ i really hurt by dutta's behavior😭,,,,,,,,,,,,,doesn't have faith for his love😡.............OMG plz yaar do something............ here i'm said abt my thoughts dear ..........if i hurt u or anybody plz forgive me...........looking fwd ..............

Oh don't worry dear. I'll make dutta grovel, bray like the donkey he is and make him suffer for mistreating out sweet nakku. 😆 every once in a while all the male of the species should realize how lucky they are to have us....well you may be angry with dutta...but i am anoyed with my bf right now.. i tell u...these men...can't live with them and can't leave them alone too, or else they'll destroy the world when u r not keeping ur eye on them.. 😡😡😡 so when i make dutta grovel..u can assume this may be pretty much how i want my gadha to grovel....darn but are all men so silly...plz tell?