New FF:Hai dil ko teri arzoo..........

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hieeeeee to all the lovely ltlians......😃.......this is my first ever ff........i am quite nervous whether u all will lyk it or not.........hope u all lyk it............

it starts with Naku after the ganpati puja is over..........

Naku stands infront of Bappa......asking him to take care of her saab and to give her strength to tell the truth.....then AS comes in and asks Naku to take Dutta's food to his room.....as he is doing his work upstairs.....Naku agrees to it.....Naku takes dutta's food and goes to his room...........Dutta standing infront of his balcony looking at the moon and content.........Naku says"saab".........Dutta turns to see and naku says"saab khana khalo"......Dutta keps looking at her........and after a pause asks her"tune khaya?"..........to that Naku nods her head indicating no......Dutta says "usdin jab maine tujhe apne saath khane ko bola tha to tu chali gayi"........."par aj tujhe mere saath khana hi hoga"........"aj agar tu nahi khayegi to main bhi nahin khaunga"..........Naku all red sharm se pani pani..........she tries to make a bahana.......and there is a eyelock between Tasha..... .Dutta argues tune aj vrat rakha hai na........tu agar nahi khayegi to main.........Naku stops him sying "ap khalo........main khalegi......."then dutta in his orderly tone BUT WITH LOVE IN HIS EYES asks her to sit with him and hav food together and Naku gives in.......


while Baji was about to enter Dutta's room wen he stops as he finds Dutta and Naku having food together...........Naku continues to look at Dutta.......and Dutta while eating looks at her..........and in the background the song plays of"jiya dhadak dhadak jaye"..........❤️


jaldi batao kaisa laga...............waiting for ur comments........ 😳 😊 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow.............very nice⭐️....
plz continue.....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow......its awesome.......kaas serial mein bhi aisa dekhne ko mile.......continue soon.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow reali sweet... continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great start triasha update more soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really.............i hope serial mein kuch aisaa dekhne ko miley b4 face revealation...................bcoz after dat dere is lots f problem ahead b/w tasha......................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow triasha this is relly lovley plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do pm me when u update next.............



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Posted: 15 years ago
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I liked it very much👏👏 and I want you to continue my sweet ,little Tiramisu..😊 Love you darling🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it's nice Triasha..!!😊 please continue....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Trish:
It's really good! Keep Writing! Love it Trish! Keep it up!



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