New FF: Raat Ka Nasha (LastChpPg107!!) - Page 7

Im sooooo P***** off!!! ARGH i wrote such a long update but my laptop froze and i lost it! It was sooooo good. now i hve to write it all out again!!!! Anyway im sorry for taking long!! here it is without any delay...

Nakku sits at the table with everyone else and eats while dutta who is standing upstairs peeks at her and smiles. he goes into his room. Nakku and the rest finished eating and AS tells them to go sleep as its very early.

They all go to their prospective room. Nakku enters her heaven (TaSha's room lol) and sees Dutta pacing around the room awake.

Nakku: saab, why aint you sleeping? what happened?

Dutta: O when did you come?

Nakku: just now, what happened?

Dutta: you finished eating?

Nakku: yes, but what happened?

Dutta: if you finished then feed me!

Nakku: What?

Dutta: Yes, look you just had your food and now fasting, now feed me so i can fast as wel.

Nakku: But only women fast

Dutta: who sed?

Nakku: your impossible, you cant fast

Dutta: yes i will fast for you

Nakku: No wont be good, what are people going to say?

Dutta: they wont know

Nakku: Noo its ok im fasting thats enough

Dutta: If you can fast for me, why can i fast for you?

Nakku couldnt argue any1 and gave it. She went to the kitchen, took out some food and brought it in the room. Dutta sits on the bed and Nakku sits beside him and feeds him like a little kid.

Atfer she finishes, Dutta takes the plate from her hand and goes to put it in the kitchen and come back to find Nakku sleeping. He smiles and gets on the bed next to her and sleeps putting his hands on her waist.

Few hours later, Nakku wakes up and panics cause she woke up late. She looks around for dutta but doesnt find him in the room, she checks the bathroom and its empty. She wonders where he is gone. Nakku takes a shower, gets ready and goes downstairs. She sees baaji..

Nakku: Baaajiiiiiiiii (shes shouting)

Baaji: Haan Vayhini

Nakku: wer is saab?

Baaji: he's gone out but will be back soon, dw

Nakku: what? but he didnt even tell me

Baaji: you were sleeping thats y!

Nakku: okay, when saab comes let me kno

Baaji: okayy

Nakku goes to the kitchen to prepare some sweet for KC. Babi comes and helps her.

AS, ganpat and Kishore are helping each other decorating the house while baaji is reading some file on the sofa. Babi, who was helping nakku is the kitchen gets called by sethji and she leaves. Just then Dutta walks in the house and looks for nakku. He sees baaji sitting down and reading something.

Dutta: Baaji

Baaji: areee bhao aap?

Dutta: haan. wer is nakku?

Baaji: kya zamana aaya hai? nakku dutta ko doonthi hai and dutta nakku ko!, no1 looks for me!

Dutta: stop this nautanki and tell me quick.

Baaji: kitchen i think

Dutta: okay

He walks away with lots of bags in his hands. He peeks in the kitchen so that nakku doesnt see him and he puts the bahs down quietly and runs behind her and hugs her from the back. Nakku jumps and pushes him away with her elbow as her hands are in flour. Dutta continues to hug her.

Dutta: you want help?

Nakku: noo

Dutta: but i want to help

Nakku: well if you want to help then go from here and dont disturb me

Dutta puts his hands in the flour as well and starts doing it with her getting his hands all dirty. He caresses nakku's hand and plays with the flour. Nakku couldnt push him away cause she was feeling too good to push this moment away.

Just then Baaji, AS and Babi walks in... (sorryyy i had to bring Kebab mein haddiss)

TaSha sees them and dutta pulls away and nakku straightens up.

Baaji, As and babi staring and smiling...

Dutta: woh mein.. Ermm there was something in the flour and i was taking it out! nakku couldnt see it so i thought i would help

AS: how big was it? that you had to use 2 hands?

Dutta: woh.. i used both because there were 2 things.

Baaji: was the thing nakku's hand?

Dutta: eyy chupkar.. i told you there was something in there.

Babi: its okay, go wash your hands

Dutta: yes, *turns to nakku* see cause of you my hands got flour. next time i wont help you.

Nakku giggles shyly.

Dutta takes the bags which was on the floor outside the kitchen and goes to his room.

He takes out a beautifull red and gold saree and matching jewelries out of the bag and puts it on the bed. In the other bag, there were flowers to put on hair and then he got high heels for nakku. He takes out a red sherwani out of another bag and puts it on the bed next to the saree.

Scene shifts...

Nakku finishes cooking and decides to get ready as guests will soon come. AS also tells her to go as she will be late. Every1 goes to get ready..

nakku enters her room and sees Dutta next to the bed.

Nakku: im going shower, when im done you go.

Dutta: no lets go together so it saves time

Nakku: no!

she runs to the bathroom but dutta gets hold of the door and enter the bathroom as well and he closes the door. Both him and nakku are inside! (we all know what they are doing)

After a little while they both come out in towels and Dutta takes nakku to the bed and shows her what he bought for her for KC. Shes touched by his gestures and hugs him. He hugs her back!

Nakku gets ready and Dutta puts the flower in her hair. He also puts her sindoor and mangalsutra.

Dutta: as long as im breathing, i will put ur sindoor n mangalsutra everyday for you

Nakku blushes and puts her hed in his chest and he kisses her head.

Scene shifts...

Everyone on the terrace waiting for moon and Nakku walks in. Every1 praises her saying she looks beautiful. AS puts kajal behind nakkus eyes to prevent evil eyes (KALA's EYES!)

AS: where is dutta?

Nakku: i duno, he was right here but went somewhere

AS: its ok he will come.

Nakku: yes

AS: come lets go over there.

Nakku walks with AS and other women and they are all waiting her chand!

They all see the moon and nakku looks for her other chaand (DUTTA). Just then he makes his big entry in red sherwani looking dashingly handsome. (btw he wasnt dressed when nakku was in the room, he had towel on)

Every1 looks at him happily as he proceeds towards nakku and smiles at her. She starts her prayer, pour water, looks at the chaand and then dutta. In her taali, there was two cups of water, she took one and dutta took one, they made each other drink at the same time. Baaji who was watching, informs every1 loudly that dutta was fasting for nakku thats why he didnt eat and now hes drinking water off nakkus hands. dutta looks at him angrily and then blushes.

Will update the next part sooon..

i hope you like it

Thanks Yuvika_15 for your suggestion!

Please comment!

hey

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

hey

thanks for the PM...i was waiting all day for ur update...lol..

anyway lovely update... sweet tasha scene,...naughty dutta follows naku every1...he duznt evn space the bathroom..lmao..

wt do u plan 2 do next...wud b nice 2 c a jealous dutta ...

btw thnks for giving me credit..

WOW Dutta fasted for Naku. So cute na

aye hay ...yummy yaar !🤗 please pm next time u update if u can !😉

Ohhh sunshine....you are really a sunnshiiiiineee....i loved this update it was great and soooo cute....thanx for PMing me...the shower scene was the best :D:D thanx again plsss upload asap👍🏼

tanx sunshine awesome D & N fasting 4 eachother v.cute can't wait 4 ur update good going girl well done.👍🏼👏

its awesome as usual.......yeh Dutta Naku ka pichha hi nahi chhodta......loved the way Baaji said no body looks for me......poor fellow........how lonely he has become.........iski bhi LS suru kar do........update soon.......

Recap : KC is on! TaSha breaks each others fast.

STORY CONTINUES FROM YESTERDAY...

Baaji informs everyone that Dutta was fasting and now he is breaking his fast with Nakku's hands. Dutta looks at baaji angrily but then blushes. AS and Babi are happy that Dutta Kept a fast for his dear wife. Everyone else laughs at baaji's statement and blesses TaSha.

After the KC pooja, everyone goes to the hall to enjoy themselves. Nakku is with AS, babi and some women sitting on the floor talking while dutta is with baaji and some other boys talking and take glances at her every second (loool).

*Aakhon ki gustakiyaan maaf ho* (Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam) song comes on!!

Dutta follows Nakku everywhere and tries holding her waist behind a pillar when some girls pull Nakku with them leaving dutta longing for her. Nakku runs away with the girls and gives a naughty wink to dutta which makes him drool over her.

(Song still playing) Nakku sitting on the floor with the girls and talking (but the talk is muted as the song is playing) and dutta comes sit behind her touching her hands and hair. She pushes him with her elbow without any1 noticing but he grabs her waist and holds onto her hands. AS comes and takes Nakku with her and Dutta sits there alone feeling defeated. Then he sees Nakku going to the terrace alone and follows her!

On the terrace, Nakku is taking the taali which has flowers in there, she turns to find dutta. He comes towards her, near her, more near till she could feel his breath on her face and he takes the taali away. *kaajal ka ek til tumhare labon pe lagadoon(this is the lyrics of the song)* Dutta takes nakku's kajals from her eyes with his fingures and puts them on her lips and tries to kiss her but she runs to the swing and sits on it. He walks towards her slowly, sits with her and they sit in each others arm. (its those big swings that 4 people can sit on & its white decorated with flowers). They start lipsing the song as though they are singing it and dutta kisses nakkus neck and eyes. She holds onto him tightly and he grabs her hands. She stands up and turns to him and sings "yeh zindagi aapki hi amaanat rahegi, dil mein sada aapki mohabbat rahegi, in saason ko aapki zaroorat rahegi!" (Song lyrics) runs to him and hugs him. He hugs her tightly and closes his eyes while kissing her head.

*Song Finishes*

They come to their senses when AS calls for Nakku; she breaks the hug, grabs the taali and runs downstairs. Dutta looks at her and sigh (Hayyeee). He also goes downstairs, he walks towards baaji but his eyes looks for Nakku. Him and baaji talking when Nakku comes there and gives AS the taali and she goes with the women (random people in Patil Niwas for KC loool).

They pooja and party is finished and every1 leaving PN. They all bid goodbye to TaSha, Babi, AS.. basically to every1.

Every1 goes to their room to sleep and Voila its morning time already (time goes fast in PN).

Dutta in the hall and Nakku comes with Tea, She serves him and just then Dutta bodyguards comes and tells dutta some people wants to meet him. Dutta tells them to send the people in. Nakku goes inside. Some men comes and greets dattu and talk about some land. There were 3 men, 2 young ones and one old man. Nakku comes there with tea and pakoras and greets them. Dutta introduce Nakku as Nakusha SriRam Patil, Meri Patni! (someone's proud!)

The men greets her and the 2 young boys (not exactly boys but they are young maybe Nakku's age)checks out Nakku. Nakku feels uncomfortable and goes from there. Dutta sees this and feels jealous and tries change the conversation. But his blood still boiling, he remembers nakkus words that she doesn't like him fighting so he decided not to create a drama in patil niwas but if he sees him on the road he will kill him right there. Dutta excuses himself and goes to the kitchen where Nakku is and tells her not to come out until those people are gone. Nakku teases him and tells him hes jealous but he denies it and says he doesn't like people looking at his wife and holds her hands. Nakku tells him she doesn't care about anyone else, she's lucky to have him as her husband, he kisses her forehead and goes back to the hall.

Dutta finalise the paper for the land and those people leave. He comes to the kitchen to look for Nakku but doesn't see her; he gets worried and thinks that the boys kidnapped Nakku but then sees her outside through the window (Hes soo protective lool)

He goes outside and Nakku is putting clothes to dry and humming. Dutta comes from behind and hugs her, she tells him to go as she has lots of work to do. Just then baaji comes there and dutta lets go of Nakku. They both turn towards baaji and ask him what happened? Baaji tells dutta he's going to see the land and dutta should come too. Nakku tells dutta to go but come back quick. Dutta smiles and was about to walk away but take a last glimpse of Nakku who is about to faint. Dutta gets the shock of his life and holds her. Baaji also runs towards Nakku who is in dutta arm unconscious. Dutta shouting nakku's name worriedly, while baaji runs inside to call every1. Babi, AS, Ganpat, Leela, Roops, Kishore, kala, suds and sethji comes there running to see Dutta holding unconscious Nakku. Baaji is on the phone calling doctor while dutta carries Nakku to the room.

Lool thats it for today.. Hope you liked it and please comment.

CREDIT GOES TO: Yuvika_15 for the Jealousy Track! Thank You Soo Muchh!!😳

Please give more suggestions if you dont mind! I will happily fit them into the story. And if you people wishes then i will continue writing!

Thank you every1 for appreciating my FF! 😳 Love you girls😳