OS: Naku - 'I do!' Pt 3 - Pg 15 - Page 13

just read ur fan fic....must say beautiful and so cute.....i loved it

Originally posted by: KalyWayne07

Chicky poo....this is...I don't have words to describe this....you have left me stunned!!! I am extremely speechless bestie!! Since when did you decide to join CVs? I LOVED both of the parts!! Dude, you are an excellent writer! Well, I am not surprise at all because I always knew that you had hidden talent in you! But, girly...I didn't understood Hindi dialogues.... Can you por favor translate for me. Overall, YOU ARE SPECTACULAR!!! That's my chicky poo!! Please.....I WANT more!! Great work my dear!!!

@ DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!! - OMG OMG OMG!!! You made me cry after reading your Part 3 😭 ...

Are u really not a part of the CV teaM???😲 Sachi sachi bol???! If u still are not, they should hire you NOW....like NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVED your OS all the 3 parts.!!!! and as u said the dailogues is the USP..they were infact...just toooo good! N I also liked the visualization part tht u thought of...

..especially (Dutta gazes at the mirror which had Naku's reflection. While Naku goes on, he catches the glimpses of Koel Naku beside her....
He closes his eyes and sees fair Naku looking at him longingly, with same love in her eyes as the Kaali one!) AWESOME is the word for this one !!! This wud be a cinematic thing if CVs decide to something like this!!!


But pls dont mind , i did have one problem....I CANNOT see Dutta cry!!! i dunno why..just feel he wont do tht! or i atleast cant imagine him crying)... DUTTA is a tuff guy..agreed he is human n a normal person with a good heart n all tht..but someone like Dutta break down...so not happening!!!!😔...so pls pls dont make Dutta cry...the heart to heart talk is fine where he opens up abt his feelings..but NO crying.!!!..otherwise i wll end up crying too!!!!

I felt so choked up n senti reading ur OS-3...but man!!!!...the last few lines.abt Nakku whispering abt Daaru ya main waala line....i burst out 🤣..

LOVE you DD!!!! for such an awesome creativity n fab OS!!!! Once the show happens..we shud do a post analysis n see how much of this had the CV inspired!!!😉

Originally posted by: chandanafan

Mega big hugs DD. Wow awesome OS. Absolutely brilliant dialogues. Ab jaldi se batao, Do u work for the CVs? 😆 I have never read such awesome dialogues. 👏 👏 I have no words. btw how long did it take u to write this OS? Just curious to know how DD came up with this idea. 😳

Thanks for sharing DD. Lovely OS. do pm me the third part. I think I'm waiting more for u to update rather than the monday's epi now. 😆

bye. tc. 😃

Originally posted by: kateleode

OMG...........DD.....I am speechlessssssssssss..........................

Loved every bit of your Second Part............

Words cannot describe what I felt reading it.Love you................ for such an amazing OS........Waiting fror next one.

Originally posted by: princessmithai

kaal raat se abhi taak tere 3 hrs purey nahi huye?????😡

jaldi kaar

BTW yeh pics keise upload karte ho mujhe zara Pm karke bata na pls

mujhe nahi pata😆

Originally posted by: Nali4180

yaar, judt read your first part, kya style hai!!!!! loved your Sallu/CP "I say!!"

Can't wait to read the rest, don't ever stop writing, your talent shouldn't go to waste.

Are mein tori gi selfish hoon, dn't deprive me of your fab writing!!!😳

ok, here i go to read the other parts!!!😉

Originally posted by: ansah

just read ur fan fic....must say beautiful and so cute.....i loved it

continue soon 😊

DD very well written thinking this wek is going to be same which you wrote ,morning article where salman and nakuu in dabba (for tea) pic is there as you wrote and now in u&m tv mahi said her color would come off too soon so tell truth are you from cv"s team 😆 😆

very well written your dialogs are wonder full 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

😆😆😆😆😆😆

kar diyaa meri princess!! 😆😆

haaayyeeeee mein teri Jodha tu meri Akbar😳

yahan pe bhi DOSTANA😆😆😆😆

arey itni sweetly my princess tow meri bf bhi mujhe nahi bulata hein😳

yaar, ismein actually time lag gaya....was very difficult to convince dutta...bahut nakhre maartaa hai!! 😆😆

dekha nmeine eise hiy nahi kahithi Dutta ko sanki

aab tow woh attitude wala sanki ho gaya😆😆😆😆😆😆

sure gal..will PM u