OS: Naku - 'I do!' Pt 3 - Pg 15 - Page 12

Originally posted by: Made4eachother

Dancing Doll....when are you going to update the next part..???!!!!! if it is very late or smtn plz send me a PM...coz i wont be able to come to IF very often now on...>!!!!

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

30 more minutes...I am formatting it and placing snaps! 😉

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

*pinches Shreya*....same pinch

OMG Dude!!....Mine too...My first love, whom I can never forget.....He is like -------- 😍😳

Part III: Face revelation

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

Part III: Face revelation

Naku and Dutta disengage themselves and Dutta looks at her lovingly, a smile playing at the corner of his lips.

Naku looks at Dutta's eyes, sighs and finally decides that the time has come. She starts her revelation. "Saab, Lekin mein aapse abhi shaadi nahi kar sakti hai." Baaji and others get shocked to hear this. A flicker of confusion and doubt crosses Dutta's eyes.

Naku notices it and immediately continues, "Nahi, Mein koi jhooth nahi boli aapko Saab. Mere se shaadi karnaa nahi karnaa, woh faislaa aapka hoga, meraa nahi". Dutta starts saying something but she stops him, "Nahi sahib, Abhi nahi. Mein toh aapse pyaar karti hai aur uske badle mein mujhe kuch nahi chahiye. Aap shaadi ke liye bole, woh hi mere liye bahoot badi baat hai. Mein aapko mana kaise kar sakti hai? Naku apne Sahib ko kabhie mana nahi kar sakti. Par Mein aapse ek sach choopaayi. Aap ko pehle woh jaan na. Agar uske baad bhi aap mujhse shaadi banaane ko maangte, toh Naku aapki ho jaayegi.". She looks at him very lovingly and states in the end, "Naku toh aapki hameshaa se hai, Aap Naku ke ho jaaoge!" ❤️

Dutta is extremely confused. Naku takes his hand and pulls him towards Bappa's Mandir. She notices his family following. She looks at him, "Yeh baat mein pehle aapko bataayegi". Dutta for a second looks at her, question mark on his face, he then looks at Baaji and signals him. Baaji stops the family on their tracks.

Naku and Dutta reach Bappa's mandir. Naku stands opposite to Dutta and looks at him.

"Sahib, Mein aapse bahut pyaar karti hai, lekin Bappa ne jab mujhe aapka pyaar diyaa hai, toh mujhe majboor kar diyaa ki mein aapko apna sach bhi bataaye. Aaj tak yeh sach sirf meraa aur meri Aai ka tha. Bachpan se is sach ko pehni hai par aaj iss par aapka bhi haq hai. Mein iss Jhooth ke saath aapse shaadi nahi kar sakti."

Dutta's confusion only increases every second. "Naku, Tu kya keh rahi hai? Kiss sach, ya jhooth ke baare mein bol rahi hai?", Naku looks at him once more, she then turns and pulls the cloth from Bappa's idol, dips it in the water, looks at Dutta and then starts wiping the black paint on her face. The first brush gets her slight fair skin on the surface. She stops and looks at Dutta's confused face. She looks at Bappa and closes her eyes. "Saab ke saath rehnaa aaj Bappa".

She opens her eyes again and starts wiping her face with faster strokes. With every wipe, Dutta's mouth opens wider and wider. His eyes remain unbattered. Naku stops looking at him and wipes her full face. She now worked on her hands and when done, she clenched her fist. She didnt know what sight awaited her when she looked up.

She finally lifted her gaze to look at Dutta and Dutta was in shock. His mouth wide open, confusion at its peak with a slight anger flicking, he recollects how he had saved this damsel once from goons and the moment when he had seen her in Anna's den. Unable to make sense out of anything, his mind had shut down and he feels a shooting pain in his head. He turns his face in frustration. Anger growing every second, Dutta hits the wall and roars loudly.

Naku flinches and seeing Dutta in pain, she gets scared.

He turns and grabs Naku, "Kyun Naku, Kyun? Mein hi kyun?". Naku gets tears in her eyes. He leaves her and goes to his room and bangs the door. Naku looks back at Bappa and falls on his feet and cries. Babi comes from behind and consoles her. "Naku, Sab Bappa pe chod de. Woh tujhe niraash nahi karegaa". Naku tells Babi, "Mujhe Bappa par poora vishwaas hai lekin Saab ki jo haalat meri wajah se hai, usse mein kaise sehen karegi Aayi?". They both hug each other.

The family sees Naku's real face when she comes out of the temple and everyone is left shellshocked. Babi takes Naku to her room.

Dutta is lying on his bed, eyes closed, anguish on his face.

Dutta thinks about Naku's confession in his dream - "Sahib, Mein Nakusha, Dikhne mein bilkool sunder nahi, par aapse bahut pyaar karti hai"...Dutta flinches in emotion, "Jhooth tha kya meraa yeh aehsaas? Nahiiiiiiiiiii"...He remembers Naku's true face and moves uncomfortabley. He remembers Jagtaps' words to close his eyes and his love would be in front of him. He wonders, "Yeh kaise ho saktaa hai? Mera woh Aehsaas Jhooth nahi ho saktaa! Nahi ho saktaa!"...He hits his bed hard. He then opens his eyes and looks at bappa's idol. He goes towards it, "Bappa...Dikhaa mujhe rastaa aaj!! Nahi rahi mere mein taaqat ab kuch bhi sehen karne ki". He opens the alcohol and drinks the whole bottle in one shot. He falls down on the floor. 😭

In the morning, Naku knocks on Dutta's door. When she doesnt hear for a long time, she enter the room quietly and sees Dutta lying on the floor and Alcohol bottle lying open near his hand. Tears roll down her eyes, seeing Dutta in this condition. "Mein aapko waapis gumnaam nahi hone degi." She gets AS on the spot to help Dutta out. 😭

In the late evening, Naku again goes to Dutta's room. Dutta was lost looking at the sky, remembering the day he had seen Naku staring at the stars innocently. Naku comes from behind and calls him, "Saaab". Dutta sighs but doesnt turn.

Naku understands that Dutta wouldn't turn. She asks him, "Saab, Aap ab mujhe dekhoge bhi nahi?". When Dutta doesnt say anything, Naku goes on, "Saab, Bachpan se mein kaala hi roop dekhi apnaa. Mei toh bhool gayi thi ki mein sunder hai. Log meraa mazaak udaa te the, bachche mujhse darte the aur mujhe lagtaa ki mein kitni bhayaanak hai. Phir aap aaye.".

Naku goes in trance and smiles with her memories. "Aap pehle aadmi the jo mere par hasse nahi, jo mere se dil khol ke baat kiye, jo mujhe kissi bhi ladki ki tarah izzat diye. Aap mujhe dekte, mujhe lagtaa mein sunder hai. Mere liye woh hi kaafi tha. Phir pata nahi kab pyaar ho gaya aur ab mere ko aapko yeh sach batnaa hi tha."

She looks at Dutta but Dutta doesnt react.

She goes on, "Saab, Aap apni Naku se door jaa rahe? Naku kaise jeeyegi agar aap usse nahi dekhoge? Yeh meraa chehraa hai, lekin mein wahi hai sahib, jo hameshaa se thi...Nakusha, jo aapse bahut pyaar karti hai! Aapke naam se jiski subah hoti hai, aapki yaad se jiski raat! Jiski mohabaat aapko dekh kar sirf badhti jaati hai...sirf baadhti jaati hai! Saab..." Dutta's eyes flicker, anguish developing on his face gradually. Naku calls him again, "Saab, Mujhse baat karo na. Mujhe daanto, Maaro, par mujhse baat karo na"

Dutta suddenly turns towards her and shouts, "Nakuuuu".

He keeps staring at her for a long time. He takes one step towards her, moves his gaze from top to bottom and says with tears in his eyes, "Tujhe dekhtaa hoon to apni Kaali Naku ko dhoondtaa hoon.Kya karoon mein? Tu bata, Kya karoon? Woh Naku meri pehchaan thi. Apni uss Naku mein, mein apne ko dekhtaa tha. Ab lagtaa hai, ki mein hi kahin kho chooka hoon! Jab door se, tere aane ka ehsaas hota hai, toh meri nazar darwaaze par beth jaati hai, Meri Naku ab aayegi, ek sapna boon leti hai yeh aankhen, ki meri Naku, chupke se aayegi, mere ko pyaar se dekhegi, haath aage karke, mujhe pukaaregi, "Saaaaaab", aur uski aawaz sun ke mein wahin khoo jaaongaa. Par jaise hi yeh roop dekhtaa hoon, mein pareshaan ho jaata hoon, kahaan hai woh meraa sapna? Woh Naku, jo Kaali mitti ki bani thi lekin sabse Gori thi!"
He falls crestfallen on the couch and closes his eyes. "Mein uss Naku ko bahut miss kartaa hoon. Mujhe meri Naku chahiye...Meri Naku waapis de do.". He covers his face and weeps.

Naku can't help crying. She finally wipes her tears and tells Dutta, "Mein yehi hoon Saab, Aapki Naku mein hi hoon. Bus Aankh band kar ke mujhe dekho, Aapko koi farak pata nahi chalegaa. Jaise aankh band kar ke aap kaali Naku ko pehchaane, waise hi aankh band karke, ab sirf Naku ko pehchaano!"

Dutta cries, 'Mein iske liye tayaar nahi hoon, Nahi hoon". He gets up and goes to the wash room and closes the door.

Babi sees Naku coming out of Dutta's room crying. Babi is not able to see her daughter in distress and decides to take charge. She goes to Dutta's room. Dutta comes out of the washroom and sees Babi there. He throws the towel on the bed and sits, his gaze on the floor.

Babi looks at him sadly. "Saab, Mein jaanti aapko bahut badaa dhakka laga, lekin meri Naku ki koi galti nahi hai ismein. Usse woh kaala rang mein di." Dutta looks at her and doesnt say a thing. Babi goes on, "Meri ek aur beti thi Sahib, Naku ki badi behen. Woh Naku se bhi zyaada sunder thi. Uski sundartaa uske sar par chadh gayi, aur galat sangat mein aake woh apna jism Dubai mein bech di. Aap batao Sahib, Mein kya Naku ko bhi Dubai ke bhediyoan ke hawaale hone deti?" Hearing about how Naku could have had such a prospect, a chill runs down Dutta's spine. He shivers.

Babi continues, "Naku mere ek baar kehne par, apnaa roop, rang sab de di. Mein Kaali Naku ko dekhti aur sochti, ki ek din uskaa bhi Raj Kumar aayegaa, jo usko in bhediyoan se bach aayegaa! Tab mein khud uska rang nikaalegi, khud usko sajaayegi, lekin tab tak mein usko bachaayegi. Morey uskaa roop dekha, aur usse ek raat istamaal karke Dubai mein bechnaa chahtaa tha, tab aap usse bachaaye." Dutta remembers the first time when he had met Naku, how she had come running to him, "Saab, Mujhe bachaao".

Babi tells him, "Phir Anna dekha usse aur apni biwi ko chod, Naku ke saath suhaag raat manaane ko koshish ki, Phir aap aake usse phir bachaaye." Dutta is shocked to hear this. He remembers how Naku was in the same bridal dress when he saw her with Anna and when he saw the beautiful Naku. He remembers Naku roaring - "Mere saab aayenge toh iss dus sar waale rakshas ka ek sir bhi nahi rahegaa. Yeh ek patni ka vishwaas hai". He clenches his fist and hisses. The fact that Naku came close to being raped when he was close by, in both the instances, shakes him internally. Dutta shivers further! The thought of Naku in Dubai or as Anna's wife, was too tormenting for him, He bangs his fist on the table, "Nakuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu".

He looks at Babi and requests her in loud voice to leave him alone. Babi leaves crying.

Naku is in her room, thinking about everything Dutta has gone in his life, right from Seema, Sups to her. Naku gets up determined and decides that it enough. She cannot bear Dutta's anguish and pain anymore. She decides to take the most difficult step in her life - leave PN forever!

She goes to Dutta and sees him feeling the MS.

She chokes with emotions and recollects the history of this MS. She zaps out of it and controls herself. She clears her throat. Dutta looks at her and sits straight. He keeps looking at the MS.

Naku stares at him for a second then tells him, "Mein jaa rahi hai Sahib"...Dutta's back is towards her...he looks up, back still towards her. "Mein aapko aise nahi dekh sakti. Naku yeh sehen nahi kar sakti ki uske saab uski wajah se rote hai...Mein Jaanti hai aap Naku se bahut pyaar karte hai, aur mere jeene ke liye yeh kaafi hai...Mera dil to woh hi hai jo aapse pyaar karta hai, chahe kaali Naku ke andar rahe ya iss Naku ke andar! Bahut badnaseeb hai mein, sundar hai na, isliye. Yeh khoobsoorti hi meraa shraap ban jaayegi, meine socha nahi tha...Mere bus mein hota naa Sahib, Mein Bappa se bolti, Yeh roop le le, bus mere saab phir se mujhe dekhnaa shuru kar de! Naku ke sahib agar usse dekhte toh Naku Khoobsurat hai, nahi toh Naku kuch nahi!".

Dutta gets further tormented, He covers his eyes with his fists.

Naku finally tells him, "Aise mein yahaan rahegi to aap mujhe apni patni toh bana loge, aap achche ho na isliye, lekin mere ko dekh nahi paaoge, apne se har pal ladoge, aur mein mar jaayegi yeh dekh kar."

Dutta gazes at the mirror which had Naku's reflection. While Naku goes on, he catches the glimpses of Koel Naku beside her....

"Mein aapse bahut pyaar karti hai, aur yeh haq mujhse koi nahi cheen saktaa! Yeh Pyaar sirf meraa hai."

Suddenly, Dutta sees, the Kaali Naku and fair Naku merge into one. He recollects Naku's numerous confession.

He closes his eyes and sees fair Naku looking at him longingly, with same love in her eyes as the Kaali one! Confessing the same lines as Kaali Naku..."Mein aapse Bahut pyaar karti hai, Mein aapse Bahut pyaar karti hai..."

He remembers Naku saying - "Ab toh khud bhi bhool chuki hoon, kab se unse pyaar kiya. Bus itnaa hi keh sakti hoon, sirf unse hi pyaar kiya"...Dutta weeps silently.

Naku sees Dutta going into further distress. She gulps her emotions and tells him finally, "Mere liye mere Saab ko khush rakhnaa!"

Naku leaves with tear in her eyes...

Dutta sees her running from the room. He remembers the time when he came out of Jungle and he felt like never letting Naku go. He keeps murmuring to himself, "Kyun aaj wahi aehsaas hai...Kyun Aaj bhi dil wahi keh raha hai, Dutta usse math jaane de."

Naku reaches the last leg of the stairway...Dutta's anguish increases, "Kyun lag raha hai ki meraa ang nikaal le gaya koi? Rok le usse Dutta!"

He sees his dream again but this time it was revised, "Saab, Mein Nakusha, Kali yaa Gori, par Aapse bahut pyaar karti hai.". He sees Naku's hand going far away from him again.

Dutta runs to grab her hand and wakes up to find empty room. He runs to the window to see Naku and her family, leaving in the car.

Suddenly, her smiling face, her dancing with the Teddy bear, her wiping his wounds, her joke on her being kaali mitti, her look of determination - "Maut mein mei aapke saath rahe naa rahe, yeh faislaa sirf Naku ka hogaa. Maut ki kagaar mein akelaa chodke aapko kahin nahi jaayegi", All flash in front of him in fast forward mode...

He runs shouting "Nakuuuuuuuuu". He reaches the gate but the car had left. His eyes become wet, "Aaj mere se agar tu door chali gai Naku, toh teraa Saab jeenaa chod degaa. Tere ko mein apne paas se jaane nahi doonga". He had a new look of determination, he runs to his SUV, Pulls the driver out, places himself in the driver seat and starts his car. He reverses it in one stroke and runs behind Naku's car! He overtakes her car and stops in front of it. Baaji applies the brakes and everyone looks at Dutta in shock.

Dutta comes out of his car and pulls Naku out. He stares at her for a long time and then takes her face in his hands

and looks at her, "Naku, Humari yeh kahaani sirf do pal ki toh nahi ho sakti na? Do pal ki khushi aur phir gham? Do pal ka saath aur phir bechadnaa? Do pal ka Aehsaas, aur phir se adhooraapan?"

He bites his upper lip, "Apnaa sab kuch lootaane aaya hoon. Math jaa Naku!".

Tears rolls down from Naku's eyes. She tells him, "Aap bhi toh nahi roke mujhe"

Dutta moves his head in frustration, "Arre, aisa hee hoon mein, par Mujh se achcha, mujhe tu jaanti hai...Toh tu hi bata -
Tere "Saab" bolne se jab meri subah hoti hai, toh tu mujhe chod ke jaa rahi thi?
Tere aankhon se jab mein apne ko dekhta hoon, toh tu mujhe chod ke jaa rahi thi?
Tere gusse se, mera dil jab bachcha ho jaata hai, man kartaa hai aur shaitaani karoon, toh tu mujhe chod ke jaa rahi thi?
Tere aahoan se jab mein apne wajood ko mehsoos kartaa hoon, toh tu mujhe chod ke jaa rahi thi?
Tere Khaane se jab mujhe lagtaa hai, Mein aaj trapt ho gaya, toh tu mujhe chod ke jaa rahi thi?"

"Tu apne saab ko kaise chod sakti hai Naku? Mein to teri aakhon mein, saansoan mein, sapnoan mein, tere har astitva mein dikhtaa hoon!"❤️

Naku and Dutta keep crying.
Dutta goes on,

"Log kehte hain ki tune mujhe dhoka diya, toh kyun tu mujhe maut ke muh pe chodi nahi?
Log kehte hain tune mujhe dookh diya, toh kyun mere muskaraane pe tu muskaraati hai
Log kehte tu matlabi hai, toh kyun mere khaane se pehle tu nahi khaati hai
Log kehte hain tu chalaawaa hai, toh kyun jab mein rota hoon, tu mere paas hoti hai
Log kehte hain tu fareb hai, toh kyun tu mere liye jeeti hai
Log kehte hain tu meri status ki nahi, toh kyun meraa dil sirf tere aehsaas pehchaantaa hai" ❤️

Dutta holds her hand with both his hands.
"Tere hone se phir jeene ka man kartaa hai
Tere hone se jhoom ne ka man karta hai
Tere hone se pet bhar khaane ka man karta hai
Tere hone se hasne ka man karta hai
Tere hone se bar bar pyaar karne ka man karta hai!" ❤️❤️

He pauses and looks at her intently
"Lekin tere naa hone se toh, marne ka bhi man nahi karta, Naku!" ❤️

"Aur tu mujhe chod ke jaa rahi thi? Math Jaa Naku!" Dutta pleads with his wet eyes.

"Maanta hoon thodi der ke liye bhatak gaya tha.Par ab mein jaan gaya hoon - Teraa chehraa badla, tera aks nahi.Teri shakal badli, Teraa aehsaas nahi.Teraa rang badla par mere liye teraa pyaar nahi!"

He gets very clsoe to Naku and holds her by her arms,

"Apne Kali-gori life ke saare din, mere naam kar de Naku!". he pauses for a second, searching her eyes -
"Mein tere ko yeh waada toh nahi karta ki tere har pal khushi se bhar doonga, par yeh waada karta hoon, ki tere har pal mei mein hoongaa...
Mein tere se yeh waada toh nahi karta ki tere aankhon mein kabhie aansoon nahi aane doonga, par yeh waada karta hoon ki tere har aansoon ko pochne ke liye mein hoongaa...
Mein tere se yeh waada toh nahi karta ki mein tere se jhagdoongaa nahi, par yeh waada karta hoon ki jab tu apni nazar uthaayegi to tere ko manaane ke liye mein hoonga..."

"Bol, Meri hoke rahegi na?"

He extends his hand...Naku holds his hand and whispers, "aap dayedc ns pe"...The words come out unintelligible, Dutta comes closer and asks her, "Kya boli tu?"...Naku again whispers, "hb nfiew hfewi ds"...

Dutta gets a little impatient, "Ae Ladki, Ek toh sabar ho nahi raha hai, aur tu mantra jaap kar rahi hai. Pyaar mein zubaan bhi jaati hai kya?...Zor se bol".

Naku gets a little annoyed and literally shouts in his ears, "Us kamre mein mein rahegi yaa daaroo. Toh Kya soche aap?". 😆

Dutta intially looks at her zapped then he starts laughing and pulls her towards him, "Tu hi meri Daroo hai Naku, Teraa Nasha utaarnaa mushkil hai, aur daroo mein kya loonga?". He gives her a tight jhappi. Naku gets embarrased and disengages herself.
"Saab, Aap bade wooh ho!!"

Baaji hears this and gives her amusing look, "Arre Naku, Humaare Bhao kya karegaa, Woh to clean bowled ho gaya hai. Pehle woh chamktaa tha, goraa chalk, kaali slate,...ab woh toh sab se badaa kaala kaooa lagtaa hai! Ae Bhaoo, tu toh gaya kyunki mein toh saala hameshaa goraa hi rahoongaa! Tum dono hi contrast contrast khelte raho. Dutta gives Baaji a final whack on the head. "Ae, ab teri Vehni hai". Baaji nods obediently.

Just then Sethji comes out of the Van and runs to Dutta and Naku..."Bhao, Iska matlab mein waapis aa saktaa hai?' Dhinchak Dhinchak! Baaji joins in the dance. Babi looks at the couple and cries with smile on her face. Ganpat has a wicked smear on his face, he starts day dreaming about the gandhi notes in his dreams.😉

Dutta pulls Naku in his car! He turns to Baaji and tells him, "follow us! We have lot of arrangements to do back home!" Naku blushes.❤️❤️❤️

This was the final Part! Please leave your comments.

Love,

DD

Originally posted by: suhana19

Hey DD omg i just read both the parts ...i must say u left me totally speechless 😃 ....where were u hiding yaar ?...its totally out of this world 👏 ....

[DD] Suhana...awwwwwwww...Thank u! 😛

Part 1st :Awww..poor naku feeling bad for her all lost ...then comes CP to save her ....i can totally see him like that in show...btwn why he was so keen on putting dutta in jail 😆 ....Abhi lock up mein daal doonga.... 😆 😆 😆 ....loved the way CP played cupid for tasha and made naku understand true meaning of love...where are no conditions....he gave naku strength,courage to go back to her love .... ❤️ ...i could see it all in front me.....i wish they show this in the show .....loved it .....

[DD] 😆😆😆....Suhana, "Abhi lock up mein daal doonga"is his takiyaa kalam....I created tht for him...he is always eager to lock up anybody and everybody n the lock up! 😆😆😆

Part 2nd ...iam totally mesmerized and 😲 ...the pics and the dialogues each and every line touched my heart to the core ...i had tears in my eyes ....i feel every emotion ,pain they were ...so realistic...
now i cant wait for the 3rd part ....iam equally excited and impatient for tomm epi and ur 3rd part ....pls pls pls don"t make us wait and update soon ......

[DD] Its up now.....😊....Thanks Suhana....I made the dialogues my USP...bcoz thats what touches me!

Thanx alot for the new OS and PM .....ur excellent jitni tareef karo utni kam hai .... take care and see ya around 🤗 👏 👍🏼 5 ⭐️