New One shot...Till death do us Part...UpDt..Pg2!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok guys???I am completely shocked after yesterday's episode and precap??..😕

A little disappointed too???Thankx to the creatives??..😲

KItnaa dragggg kartey hain??..

I don't understand why they don't get it kii we r least interested to see Kala sudarshan chit chat!.........😡

Anyways???Unhein toh humpar taras nahiin aata???😕😭

Lekin meraa dimaag iss time ek dum tensed hai???

And to relieve this stress???I will be soon sending in a one shot for tonight's episode???..Hope u all enjoy???Just working on itwill update in a while????.😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
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another one shot.good it will keep us busy this weekend 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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No no..........just one part........aaj kaa din nikaalney ke liye dear............OMG aarathi raat kab hogii yaar..........The wait is killing me...........😭

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: PremLeoManav

No no..........just one part........aaj kaa din nikaalney ke liye dear............OMG aarathi raat kab hogii yaar..........The wait is killing me...........😭

you must extend your FF for the weekend for our sake.
And have patience 13.5 hrs to go.😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I can't wait for it either dear!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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bring it on.. sheeba.. can't wait till the one shot.. i am currently loving this track on LTL. I so want dutta to finally realize he def cares for naku.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Woww...jaldi Sheeba jaldi upload karo cant wait for it...
& yes u r rite Woh Kala aur Sudarshan ki bad bad mein time chala gaya...
even today i think so they will show Kala & Kishore ka debate..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok guys here's the one shot...........😳
Hope u all enjoy...........😊
Bas abb 5 hours aur...........at last..the wait will end for all of us..........
Tab tak enjoy this one shot.............Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do send in ur valuable comments.............😊

It begins with the last scene in yesterday's episode…………

Dutta turns the car to avoid collision with the black scorpio coming from the other side……..

He tries hard to control the car………but in vain!...........

When he realizes things were not in his hands anymore…he instructs baaji to get out of the car with the others………

Baaji says a no at first lekin when dutta shouts at him he quickly gets down and pushes sethjii and baabi out too……….😲

Dutta turns to find nakku still there.he shouts at her----Sunaayi nahiin detaa tere ko nakku?!...........Utar……….Naku utar……(He turns to find nakku still there and he says desperately trying har to control thecar which was heading for the cliff!...)……….…….Jaldii utar……….😳

Nakku had had enough of dutta and she turns to face him and says sternly---Kyun utru?!...........

Dutta looks at nakku taken aback!..........😆

Se says on----Kyunkii Dutta bhau ka hukm hai?!..........⭐️

Dutta glares hard at nakku…Lekin naku won't budge……….She looks at him and says matteroffactly-----AAJtak aap jo kehtey rahey…Wahii kiyaa mainney……….Aapney jo chahaa……….Wahii kartii aayii hoon aaj tak………..Lekin ABB NAHIIN!...........👏

Dutta is still struggling to bring the car to a halt but in vain……….seeing the car near the cliff dutta says to nakku frantically----Paagal ho gayii hai nakku?!.............Utar jaa…Marr jaayegii!............

Nakku turns to look into dutta's eyes as tears well u in her eyes……….and says trying hard not to lose her calm as she wanted to give dutta a real piece of her mind that moment---- Aapkey Binaa jeekar karegii bhi kya main?!...........Aapney apney saath zindagii bitaaney kaa hak toh cheen liyaa mujhse………Lekin Aap Mujhey Apney Binaa jeeney Kii Umr Bhar Kii sazaa dein…………Yeh hak nahiin degii main aapko!...............(Dutta looks at Nakku as she says on………..)………..Saahib……….aapke saath jii nahiin sakii toh kya hua?.........Marr toh saktii hai naa?!.............😍

Dutta keeps on gazing at nakku as he stops the try to stop the car…………

He found himself lost in what nakku had just said!..........

Nakku meanwhile looks at dutta longingly …..the car reaches the edge of the cliff almost…………

She takes in a deep breath and with tears rolling down her cheeks nakku says----Mainney aapko dhokaa nahin diyaa sahib………Main aapsey bahot pyaar kartii hai…….Humeshaa se kartii hai………..Martey Dum TAk Kartii rahegii!...........😳

Dutta saw it……….saw what he never did since the time he first saw nakku……….

There it was in her eyes………..

There was LOVE………..Only for him………Love that was soooooooooo pure…and unconditional……….😳

There was no fear of death in naku's eyes………..

There was a strange satisfaction in her expressions!.............

And as u see the car falls off the cliff……….Dutta just wanted to…………and wished………….If only………..If only he had realized this before………Or may be……Just may be……….Life would give her another chance to make things up with nakku…………

While Nakku she was more than happy to atleast die with the love of her life…………

As u see the car falls into the khaayi……….Sethjii cries……….Baabi screams………..baaji looked on horrified……….😲

Dutta's voice says in the background----

Aaj jab terii har baat par yakeen aayaa…….

Teri har khamoshi bhi sab kuch bayaan kar gayii……..

Gilaa kismet se nahiin……..Khud se hai……….

Jo tujhey samjhney mein itnii derr kardii……….

Kitnii shidatt se tere saath eke k pal ko jeena tha…….

Guzraa wahii ek pal………

Jo khudaa se humney cheena tha!..........😳

Kaisa lagaa?........😊

Jaldii bataao...........😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yipeee!! 1st one 2 coment..hav been trying 2 do this since wen...finally achieved success 2 day..
😲 Boss ..ekdum jhakasss hai...bole toh ..apun ko bahut achha laga 😆
heheh...imagining d way he says.."Jaldi utar"..naku's on full sherni mode..roaring on our sher..n Sher just glaring..bechaarre ki bolti bandh kar di Naku ne😆...
Naku crying😭..nahin..I pity her..bahut sehan kiya usne dutta k nazaron mein aapne aap ko sahi saabit karne k liye
👏Aapkey Binaa jeekar karegii bhi kya main?!...........Aapney apney saath zindagii bitaaney kaa hak toh cheen liyaa mujhse………Lekin Aap Mujhey Apney Binaa jeeney Kii Umr Bhar Kii sazaa dein…………Yeh hak nahiin degii main aapko!...............(Dutta looks at Nakku as she says on………..)………..Saahib……….aapke saath jii nahiin sakii toh kya hua?.........Marr toh saktii hai naa?👏👏These lines are just reader blowing...😆

Aaj jab terii har baat par yakeen aayaa…….

Teri har khamoshi bhi sab kuch bayaan kar gayii……..

Gilaa kismet se nahiin……..Khud se hai……….

Jo tujhey samjhney mein itnii derr kardii……….

Kitnii shidatt se tere saath eke k pal ko jeena tha…….

Guzraa wahii ek pal………

Jo khudaa se humney cheena tha!👏
Very nice lines...I just wish i cud get 2 see a copy of ur one shot ...d same scenes and everything 2nite..
very well written...👏
..hats off 2 u Mishee 4 such a beautiful FF.There's life in it as I Know U hav put ur heart n soul into it...😊


Edited by balluda - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sheeba 😡 yeh kya tha...hum ko rulana bohot pasand hai kya tumhein???itna bhi acha likhne ki zaroorat nahin thi ok???..im struggling to stop my tears...it was EXTREMELY AMAZING sheeba 😃 ...yaar tum she-o-shayari bhi karleti ho??woh bhi itni meaningful??aaj rula diya yaar tum ne...thats all i can say 😳

bohot hi acha tha..thanx for starting a new OS..it was the need of the hour!!

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