New One shot...Till death do us Part...UpDt..Pg2!!

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nik_ita

@nik_ita

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

OMG Sheeba...................that was sooooooooooooooo REAL..................

you left me in tears yaar........😭

those last lines were so touching..........😍

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

I am sooooooooooooooo glad nikita u could feel all that I wanted u to................Even I was in tears when I typed it and was checking for any spelling errors!😛..............Yaa last lines achchi thi naa?.............Upar waali I wrote and neechey waali I heard somewhere...............😍

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Hey shwetaa.............I am soooooooooooooooo glad yaar u imagine what I write............This one for u...............🤗

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-SilverFlames-

@-SilverFlames-

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

OMG..!! Sheeba that was absolutely amazing.. =) In such a short passage you brought tears to my eyes..

The last part with the shayari.. Its just simply beautiful..!!

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chitrakshgeet

@chitrakshgeet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Hi,

It was excellent...and wanted to tell you that ...toda our likhna tha re...you know it is weekend and we wont get chance to MISHAL.....a Dream boy....kal us gadi ko girhte dikhaya...toda usa shakal dhikhathe to accha hota...per kya kare......YEH LOG TO USKO(Mishal) DIKHANA MATLAB HUMPE EHSAAN KARNA SAMAJTHE HAI....If you would have written that then toda dimag me hota ki....No worries..Hamare JANEMAN aayega... 😉 vapas...

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suhana19

@suhana19

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Hey sheeba thanx for the new one shot ....loving it yaar ...pls jaldi update karna 👍🏼 👏 🤗

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Alyson Kapoor Wayne

@KalyWayne07

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Sorry Sheeba dear for the delay reply......

Wow..........................you always know how to amaze me girly!!

I awfully LOVED and ENJOYED it yaar!!

It is truly emotional girl......

I love the dialogues......

You made me cry for the first time. 😭

All the times, you made me happier with joy, but today you bought tears in my eyes........ 😭

Finally, your donkey realized that she is speaking the truth. 😊

Hope, they are safe and sound!

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