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regalla

@regalla

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: PremLeoManav
Ok guys here's the one shot...........😳

Hope u all enjoy...........😊

Bas abb 5 hours aur...........at last..the wait will end for all of us..........

Tab tak enjoy this one shot.............Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do send in ur valuable comments.............😊

It begins with the last scene in yesterday's episode…………



Dutta turns the car to avoid collision with the black scorpio coming from the other side……..



He tries hard to control the car………but in vain!...........



When he realizes things were not in his hands anymore…he instructs baaji to get out of the car with the others………



Baaji says a no at first lekin when dutta shouts at him he quickly gets down and pushes sethjii and baabi out too……….😲



Dutta turns to find nakku still there.he shouts at her----Sunaayi nahiin detaa tere ko nakku?!...........Utar……….Naku utar……(He turns to find nakku still there and he says desperately trying har to control thecar which was heading for the cliff!...)……….…….Jaldii utar……….😳



Nakku had had enough of dutta and she turns to face him and says sternly---Kyun utru?!...........



Dutta looks at nakku taken aback!..........😆



Se says on----Kyunkii Dutta bhau ka hukm hai?!..........⭐️



Dutta glares hard at nakku…Lekin naku won't budge……….She looks at him and says matteroffactly-----AAJtak aap jo kehtey rahey…Wahii kiyaa mainney……….Aapney jo chahaa……….Wahii kartii aayii hoon aaj tak………..Lekin ABB NAHIIN!...........👏



Dutta is still struggling to bring the car to a halt but in vain……….seeing the car near the cliff dutta says to nakku frantically----Paagal ho gayii hai nakku?!.............Utar jaa…Marr jaayegii!............



Nakku turns to look into dutta's eyes as tears well u in her eyes……….and says trying hard not to lose her calm as she wanted to give dutta a real piece of her mind that moment---- Aapkey Binaa jeekar karegii bhi kya main?!...........Aapney apney saath zindagii bitaaney kaa hak toh cheen liyaa mujhse………Lekin Aap Mujhey Apney Binaa jeeney Kii Umr Bhar Kii sazaa dein…………Yeh hak nahiin degii main aapko!...............(Dutta looks at Nakku as she says on………..)………..Saahib……….aapke saath jii nahiin sakii toh kya hua?.........Marr toh saktii hai naa?!.............😍



Dutta keeps on gazing at nakku as he stops the try to stop the car…………



He found himself lost in what nakku had just said!..........



Nakku meanwhile looks at dutta longingly …..the car reaches the edge of the cliff almost…………



She takes in a deep breath and with tears rolling down her cheeks nakku says----Mainney aapko dhokaa nahin diyaa sahib………Main aapsey bahot pyaar kartii hai…….Humeshaa se kartii hai………..Martey Dum TAk Kartii rahegii!...........😳



Dutta saw it……….saw what he never did since the time he first saw nakku……….



There it was in her eyes………..



There was LOVE………..Only for him………Love that was soooooooooo pure…and unconditional……….😳



There was no fear of death in naku's eyes………..



There was a strange satisfaction in her expressions!.............



And as u see the car falls off the cliff……….Dutta just wanted to…………and wished………….If only………..If only he had realized this before………Or may be……Just may be……….Life would give her another chance to make things up with nakku…………



While Nakku she was more than happy to atleast die with the love of her life…………



As u see the car falls into the khaayi……….Sethjii cries……….Baabi screams………..baaji looked on horrified……….😲



Dutta's voice says in the background----



Aaj jab terii har baat par yakeen aayaa…….

Teri har khamoshi bhi sab kuch bayaan kar gayii……..

Gilaa kismet se nahiin……..Khud se hai……….

Jo tujhey samjhney mein itnii derr kardii……….

Kitnii shidatt se tere saath eke k pal ko jeena tha…….

Guzraa wahii ek pal………

Jo khudaa se humney cheena tha!..........😳

Kaisa lagaa?........😊

Jaldii bataao...........😊

mind blowing....hats off to you dear...... 👏

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Sweta jii waitingggggggggggggggggggg................😳

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Hey nazia..............sorry...Lekin main kya karoon...Merii feelings ek dum aisii hain............I am crying too dear............I don't know par meraa mann kar rahaa tha to write like this😭...........something heart touchung....I am at least happy u could feel emotions I tried to pendown..........Yaa shaayrii kabhi kabhii...........I am glad u liked..........the first lines I wrote neechey waali I heard somewhere................😍

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Thankx regalla...........I am soooooooooo glad u liked it dear...........😊

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Shweta

@Shweta_Dutta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Mishee...i went into imagination land..aur waahan DuKu 😍 se mulaqat hui..😆..yaar tym tho lagta hai na..samjha karo ...aise mauke baar baar nahi aati..

Edited by balluda - 15 years ago

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Dhanashree

@pinks0986

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Sheeba...........tu Mahan hai...osam yaar.....⭐️⭐️

Lekin Un dono ko marna jaroori tha kya...😭😭😭😭

lekin really the way u potraited the dialogues superb..👏👏👏👏

Even i really felt touched...😭😭

Hope Humara Gadha aaj kuch samjhe jo humari koyal kehna chahati hai 😳😳😳

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Thankx shweta........Wow............I am soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo glad u enjoyed it that much dear!............Reader blowing dialogue!..........I am laughing hard............🤣............yaar I honestly soooooooooo elated u could feel all that I tried to portray and pendown.........Yaa ek dum boltii band!.........Aisaa hii honaa chahiye aaj dutta ke saath............Hmm..........Ur last lines have left me..........😍

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Thankx pinkky..........I am soooooooooo glad u could feel whatever I tried to pendown😍..........arre yaar marey nahiin hain donon..........Aggar main yeh continue kartii toh i would have shown them lying hurt in the khaayi and then tasha in JUNGLE alone!............samjhey?!.............jangule mein mangal!...........😆

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Thankx aarathi............I am soooooooooooo glad u found it interesting dear.........😳

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Hey aarathi!...............Awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pic.............hai............Sooooooooooooooo cute!..........U enlarged it great!.................😳

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