TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 64

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Posted: 14 years ago
great part dear...sorry for beeing latee....upload asap
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mariescott14

hey shabz...great partt yaar

love the baji-rano n tasha scenes

so who is thie person taking tasha pics..hope u update soon




Thanx Marie ...
I m so glad that u liked it ..
😳
That is actually a suspense ..... waise u can guess it ...😉
will update soon ....


Originally posted by: Irika95

shabz that was so good. loved the part..



Thanx Irika ..
😃
I m glad that ur liked it ..😳

Originally posted by: chandanafan

Wow shabz lovely song selections. 👍🏼 👏 lovely update. I really like the song Kuch khaas hai, kuch paas hai. suits baji-rano so well. 😳 tasha scene is so romantic. 😍 😍 update asap. thanks for the pm.




Thanx Ritu 4 ur appreciation ...😳
Song selection was a little difficult but m glad u liked it ...
Will update soon ..
😉


Originally posted by: Naina_Mishal

great part dear...sorry for beeing latee....upload asap




Thanx Naina 4 ur comments & appreciation ..😳
Will update soon ...


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Krrish87_sweet

why u always leave a Mystry behind?😆😆
To keep u hooked ....😆

btw Dutta nd Teddy bears don't go together yaar..😆😆 but ya.. i loved to imgine MR doing that!😉😉 Dutta ko to kuch bhi gift dena nahi ata..

Well jo LTL mein nahi ho raha hai .... i m doin it here ....😉

Baji and Rano's kuch khas hai dance.. omg omg.. i can imgine a perfact salsa dance on it.. or a slow dance both holding each others and eye locks are perfact on that song! btw i love Kuch khas hai song..
I love this song too ...... glad that u liked it ...😃

but why Baji behaved so rude with rano!😭😭
He is just confused ....

and Nupur ko aur koi kaam nahi hai kya.. baar baar TaSha ke bich me aa jati hai!😆😆 when you mentioned the client.. i was thinking it will comeout something like Geet!😉 but nope.. he thought Rano as a younger sister!👏👏👏 kahani me acha twist hai!⭐️

I knew everyone will think of similarity with Geet ,,which I didn't want .... & plus when the client talked about his sister I wanted Baaji to remember his sis ...& thus sudden change in his temperament ..

but who is taking pictures of Tasha??😕😕

U guess ....😆

😛kahi ye BH to nahi??😆😆 (in a song manner!😉)

No BH in my FF ...but then who knws ..😉
Overall Beautiful FF as always Shabz! U rock!⭐️





Thanx a lot Krish 4 ur appreciation ....😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

@Part 19:

Shabz yaar, pata hai meri haalat kya thi when I was reading the Part 19?....Dutta/Naku....hatoo hatoo....saamne se hato...I wanna see Baaji and Rano....kahaan gaye dono....Yeh Tasha ne aake saara muh kaa zaaykaa khrab kar diyaa!! 🤣.....I was so desperate to just keep on and on reading about Baaji and Rano tht I was literally shouting, Dutta Naku, nain matakka baad mein karna, gaana baad mein gaana, ple pole baad mein khelnaa!!!.......Pehle Baaji-rano!!...🤣🤣🤣


whoa .... u don want TaSha ....😆

& everyone here wants more TaSha scenes ...

But me too enjoying Baaji & Rano more here..😳

Sab terei galti hai...Aisa koi kartaa hai DD ke Dutta ke saath??? 🤣🤣🤣 DD ke Dutta...wow...DDD....🤣 Some how all HOT Characters find a way to attach to DD na!! 🤣🤣🤣

hayee re khushfahmiyan ....😆
apne MIK ke paas ja ....bol to main chali jaaun ..
😉
BTW, Mein tere se bahut khafaa hoon!!.....How can u not make Mr.Kapoor a leech???...Rubbing Baaj the wrong way, mazaa aa jaata....Itni aasani se ladkoan ko sab kuch nahi milnaa chahiye!! 🤣🤣🤣

If I had made him a leech .... u would hav been the first to shout about similarity with Geet ..😆
which I didn't want ....... & plus I wanted Baaji to remember his sis while Mr K talked bout his sis ..😉

Awesome!1 Next part, I want atleast 80% Baaji!! 🤣

Who knws ..... may b or may b not ....🤣




thanx 4 ur appreciation & comments DD .....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Shabz update kardo na
u have left it on cliff hanger
and im hanging on it :P
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran255

Shabz update kardo na
u have left it on cliff hanger
and im hanging on it :P



Sure Kiran ...why not ..
abhi update karti hoon ...😆

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Posted: 14 years ago



Hi Frndzz ..😃
me back with a short update ..
Thanx to all 4 taking time & reading it ..
& 4 ur sweet & encouraging comments ..
Hope u like this one too ..
Here is the link to previous part 4 those who missed it ..Part 19




Part 20

Next morning Naku & Nupur were talking about last night function & hw well it went .. Nupur also inquired about where Naku disappeared 4rm the party .. Naku just smiled away ..Nupur just knew that she was with Dutta .. she reminds her that they were not talking with the boys … but then Naku manaos her into 4giving them .. Nupur agrees after some time ….she then coaxes Naku into telling her about last night dinner details with Dutta ... Naku starts telling her about it … Nupur is in total awe as she hears …. She wishes that Mayank did sumthing like this 4 her .. they also discuss about clothes to wear for 2dayz function ..


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At another place, it's a very small place with only 2 rooms.. a man is sleeping on the bed .. his cell phone has been ringing 4 quite sumtime .. the man turns sides & places a pillow on his ears to shut the noise off …his place looks a mess with his clothes & other things all strewn over ..after sum time the cell stops ringing .. the man makes himself more comfortable .. a little time passes when suddenly sumone presses on his doorbell .. the man annoyed pulls the quilt over him thinking that whoever it is would go away … but the person outside keeps on pressing the bell … the man has no option but to get up ….stumbling & yawning he opens the door … a beautiful woman around 25/26 is standing outside … she is wearing a scarf over her head & big sun glasses …she comes inside & yells at him 4 not picking up the phone & opening the door so late .. he just ignores her & sits on the bed yawning ..

He asks her : Tum itni subah subah ..

She almost yells at him : ye subah subah hai …Its 10 Am & u had to meet me at 8 .. tumhe pata hai mera yahan rukna kitna mushkil hai … phir bhi .. kitni der se phone kar rahi hoon …

He replies : Haan wo raat ko ek photoshoot thi … usme late ho gaya .. phir ghar aake main pix develop karne mein lag gaya …… I hardly slept … its just a little while ago I fell asleep ..

She sayz : Okkiee leave it … batao jaldi se kaam hua k nahi .. RG k kitne phone aa rahe hain .. ek to RG khud wahan hain aur mujhe bhej diya … he knows mere liye yahan kitna risk hai ….

The man : Haan kaam to ho gaya ….Ye RG bhi na .. achcha kya logi tea or coffee …. B4 she could reply anything he sayz "banani khud padegi" …… She refuses the offer .. she looks around the room .. she turns around her nose in disgrace looking at the condition of the room .. suddenly sumthing gets her attention … its sum pix …they look freshly developed … she takes them in her hand & looks at them ,, her eyes opens wide … the man notices her looking at the pix .. he sayz that he had gone 4 the photo shoot last night & as the model had turned in late so as he nuthin to do but w8 he took these snaps of a couple who had come there .... they were so lost in love so they hardly noticed .. she nods her head & keeps the pix back on the table ..

The man goes to the another room to get sumthing … while he is gone ,, she hurriedly takes a couple of pix & keeps it inside her bag … the man comes back & hands her a bundle … she quickly takes the bundle & thanking him leaves 4rm there ..

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Rano is getting sum groceries 4rm the store ….. uncle was not feeling well so she had to get them … Her mind is sumwhere else while she is shopping .. she is still thinking about last night ..about Baaji & his strange behavior … this man was becoming ore of a mystery to her .. he sometimes would b like a complete stranger to her … what was the reason 4 his this behavior …. The more Rano thought the more she became confused .. Lost in her thoughts she takes the groceries 4rm the shopkeeper & heads the way to home .. suddenly she collides with a woman … the woman bag falls down … the woman curses at Rano … she & Rano both bow down to pick the bag .. Just as Rano touches the bag the woman snatches it bak & yells at her "are u blind … dekh k nahi chal sakti kya.." .. Rano looks at the woman .. she seemed strange to Rano … her head is covered with a scarf & half of her face is hidden by huge glasses she is wearing .. Rano apologizes but the woman marches off in a hurry & gets in a cab & it drives off ...Rano wonders wat a strange woman she was ..

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In a shady hotel room … a woman is talking on the phone ..

"Haan RG kaam ho gaya hai …. Main aaj pahunch rahi hoon ….. tumhe pata hai main yahan nahi ruk sakti .. sirf tumhari khatir maine ye risk liya aur yahan aayi hoon …. Haan tickets confirm hai meri … bas thodi dair mein.." …

After a little convo she keeps the phone … she takes out the pix 4rm her bag & stares at it … after staring at them 4 a while she keeps them on the table … she looks confused .. she takes out a bottle & makes herself a drink .. she gulps it down at one go .. she suddenly starts laughing & then stops suddenly ,,,she lies down on the bed & stares aimlessly at the ceilings …the fan making a grrrrr noise .. she is thinking …time passes by ,, her thought r broken down by a alarm on her cell phone ..she shuts it off … Its time 4 her to leave .. she gets up … she has only one baggage & her shoulder bag … she covers her head in a scarf & wears her big sun glasses … she picks up her bag & is about to leave the room when the pix gets her eye .. she comes bak & picks them up .. she looks at them & a evil smile plays on her lips … she just knows what to do with them ..she take out a big envelop 4rm the drawer ,,keeps the pics inside them …taking out a marker she writes down a name in big bold letters … she then checks out of the hotel … she takes a cab to the station & on the way she makes the cab stop to post the letter through urgent mail …. After posting the letter ,,she collides with a woman who is lost in her thoughts .. she curses her & gets inside the cab to go to the station ..

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Baaji office ….Baaji is seated on his chair … he has some snaps in his hands … he is looking at it one by one .. he stares at the woman in the pic & then at the man .. he had just received them a while ago by an anonymous person …there was no note inside ,,,just the pix .. he wondered who had sent them … Just then there is a knock on the door … A man who looked quite shady asks permission to cum in .. Baaji nods his heads & signals at him to get seated … that person comes in sits on the chair …. Baaji gives him the snap of the woman …. The shady man takes it ,,looks at her & nods his heads in approval .. "work will b done" … "It will take about 3 -4 dayz" …… Baaji nods in refusal & then throws sum bundles of notes in 4rnt of him … the shady man then sayz "Okkiee ..i will let u knw in 2 dayz" ….Baaji again throws sum more money 2wards him …The shady man picks it up & sayz "1 day & not less than that" …Baaji nods his heads at approval & asks him to leave ….

After the man leaves Baaji goes to the window & looks down …. He is lost in some deep thoughts..


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Pllzz do comment

Thanx ..😳


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Posted: 14 years ago
very well written 👏👏👏👏👏👏 keep it up⭐️⭐️ loved it 😳😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

So many mystery loool...

nice update... nicely written..
Please continue soon ...
No TaSha or Baaji-Rano scene? =(
Awwww anyway.. it's still awesome..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update dear... 👏 n erm.. ab yeh RG kaun hai bhai 🤔

Waiting for the mystery to unfold in the coming epis..!! Great update dear... luvd it..!! 😊

Btw hope u feeling better.. tk care..❤️

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