TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 65

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow! this chapter was full of mystery just loved, update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG Shabz
why did u update when yOU have such shockers to us
so many mysteries
oh my god
its getting too interesting
plz plz plz this time u have to update really fast
im dying to know
who is RG and the lady
superb update
full of suspense
gr8 going Shabz
loved it

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey shabz thanx for the update and PM 🤗Omg so mysteries and suspense ....i was hoping to see tasha and rano -baaji romance.....but still i wanna see this mystery unfold soon in ur nxt update ...will wait eagerly ...pls jaldi update karna.....loved it yaar ....very well🤗 written.....awesome......thanx yaar ....take care and see ya around 👍🏼👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update shabz...too much suspense..hm who is RG?
waiting for ur next update n hpe tht u reveal the mystery soon
and here u r shabz...i promised i wud giv u chocs n sweets..so here u r... took me a lot of time n effort to find a shop 2 raid, cos al the others i've already raided for sana..lol
here u r huni... n hpe ur feeling better...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update Shabz!

Cont soon!

Sorry for the short comment but uber busy!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Plz solve the mystery fast or the curiosity will kill me.. From Romantic track to this mystery track??!!!.. Do one thing start writing mystery novels you will make good money out of it..LOL
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Posted: 14 years ago
hay hay kya update hain magar mujhey pura ghomadiya 😆 i mean so many mysteris😆...well will be waiting for next part dear...great written🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hailaaa........ shabz fool suspence movie....ek scene idhar ek scene udhar,,, omg😲...such me ghuma diya😆
BTW...really nice style of writing👍🏼..........great
awwww no tasha....n no baaji n rano too😭😭😭
hope in nxt updat😉
Edited by sonee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Shabz!
Sowee I haven't commented on your FF for like 6 updates.. 😳
So here I go then:

Part 13- Ermmm.. W*H! Uffff, this Suds! He is so disgusting! Baji iss ka saar phodd de! Lol..

MayUr.. Shooo shweet.. =) I really like their interaction&argument!

Nupur&Naku.. Lmao! I am really liking Nupur's idea to Dutta! Lol.. Bachara is thinking he is meeting his sweetheart and this is a different lafda! Lol.
Mazaa aayega! Lol

Part 14- Wow! Pitaee super hero Baaji to the rescue! Suds is just sick for attacking Rano! Loved that Baaji hit him in the family jewels! Serves the scoundral right!

Baaji-Rano scene was really cute and seeing that he is worried about her. 😳
Really sweet of him.. Bechari is in trauma of that beast so he gives her day off! Well Done Baaji! Lol..

The TaSha finally chatting and falling in love process with BajRan.. Love the song choice.. ❤️.. I loved how they all end up looking at the moon too. The description you gave was magical!

And MayUr.. Ufff Ho! When you going to make them stop arguing over Dutta! Lol..

Part 15- Very mastiful part! Light hearted and soooo fun to read..

Dostana between Mayank&Dutta! 🤣 I laughed at that.. It was quite unexpected but.. Naku's re-appereance was great!
Now finally TaSha have accepted each other.. ❤️

Part 16- Another light hearted part! Loved it and how Dutta remembered his own days with his friends was cute..

Dutta.Kissed.Naku.. 🤣 Sher really is a sher! Lol! And Mayank tries his luck.. Lol.. Ab khair nahin inn dono ki! Hehe..

Part 17&18- I liked the song choices.

Mr Kapoor turned out to be cupid rather than a sick perv which was cool! But Baaji going off at Rano so wasn't!
I am surprised with his constant change of personality??

Part 19- Simply romantic! Well done Dutta very sweet for organising everying! Naku is lucky to have him.. And someone is taking photos of TaSha??
Who.The.Hell is stalking them now??

Part 20- I wonder who this person RJ is? And also I am guessing this woman is maybe Sups?? Why would they send TaSha photo's to Baaji though? Please don't make Baaji a kabab mein haddi just to take revenge on Dutta!

Its all very interesting! I wanna know what the whole masla is! The new characters seem to be bhery shady.. :D

Do update soon.. There is just so much suspense. Please jaldi jaldi update karna.. =)
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Posted: 14 years ago
shockerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...................shabzie...............kya hai yaaar full of mysteries..................awesumm part loved it.............ab raha nahi jata update the next part jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😛

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