TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94

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Madhia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#301

Subhanallah😆 dill khush kardiya ree😆

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@IrikaLovesKMH

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Posted: 15 years ago

#302

very nice shabzz..continue asap 👏

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marie

@mariescott14

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Posted: 15 years ago

#303

hey shabz..just caught up with part

great part yaar..really enjoyed it

baji is so cute yaar...the flower thing was real sweet..loved how he took aashirwad..hope u update soon...with more tasha scenes

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Shabnam

@Dew-drop

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Posted: 15 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: jani-yeh
woohoo i cnt w8...😆😳...

arre vah that was a super quick while...😆...

thats was a short but sweet upd8...👏👏👏...

totally luved it Shabz...🤗...awww Baji is jus 2 sweet...felt lyk givin him a gr8 big hug...bless him...the flower thing in past n present was awesum...really sooooooo touching...😭...n the ashirwaad thing Baji did...omg so special...

cnt w8 2 read the next part...hope its real soon...mwahzzzz...😳...

Dekha maine bola na ...i willl update in a while & i did ..😉
Thanx Jani 4 liking it & 4 ur sweet comments .. ...😳
will try to update soon ....!

Originally posted by: sana786a
finally finally u update i thought u was serious and had 2 wait till saturday😆and as usual great update but where is tasha bata na shabz😡😆i thought u was gnna give us a naku dutta scene but u didnt nw u have 2 update by saturday and give a tasha scene😆update asap😃

Hw could i make u w8 ....😛
i waz gonna post it earlier but couldn't do it ..
I m still working on TaSha scenes ....😉
Thanx Sana 4 ur comments ..😳
will try to update soon ..!

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray
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My short and to the point comment:

1. I didn't have to read the side story from the beginning, I understood reading these two parts😃
Shabz, I understood the sidestory😎

Ishmaarrtt Girl ....😆

2. Loved Baaji Rano part😃

So glad that u liked it ...😳

3. Loved Naku- Datta part😳. Loved the way Datta was trying to say that he has not seen Naku in the auto😆

Thanx Stormy 4 ur comments ...!😳

Originally posted by: swati2008
nice part......update soon........

Thanx Swati ...😳
will update soon ...!

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 15 years ago

#305

Awesome update!

I am going to offer to murder Kala - save everyone the frustration 😆

Cont soon and get well soon!

As for your comment to my previous comment- Do I watch the show? 😆

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Faz

@maybe-just

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Posted: 15 years ago

#306

Ohmigosh Shabz, you are sbsolutely making this story work! 👍🏼

I'm lovin' it!

Since I havent commented on none of the parts, I will be commenting on all parts here! Told you, I'd give you a big surprise review though I don't think it was a surprise if I told you! 😆😆

The first part, I love how Naku's story started with the fortune teller and most amazingly, the two hottest men of LTL are going to be the leading men in Nakusha's life! 😉😉 I love the fact that both were introduced on the same day, and now there's a suspense as we dont know who Nakusha's life partner is going to be! 😉 The way you explained about Baaji Rao and Dutta Bhao 😍 DAYUM! They are smokin' HOTT!!

What I love about the second part is that the story moving gradually, not too fast or too slow, its at a constant pace, which is really good, at least it isn't going the LTL way 😆 wahan par toh story he aatak gaye hai 😕😆 Now onto the Dutta VS Baaji ❤️ That is just sooooooo good. Why? Because we get to see 2 gorgeous guys as rivals and they look Hot whilst having the rivalry! 😉😉 And Nakusha is thinking about both? 😲😆 Nice twist, I wonder if she herself has figured out who the lucky man is going to be? 😉😉

MJHT gang in the 3rd part! OH MY GOD! I love you for itttt!!!! 🤗 You brought one of my favourite characters Nupur into the FF, now this is a unique FF! 😉 I love Nupur and By God she is the same Nupur 😆 teasing Naku about her two men like that 😉 And oh my Mayu too is included 😳 Dutta again 😍 Now I'm intrigued to know who's picture Baaji was looking at?? Hmmm... and this new couple is alright I guess, I wonder what part they are going to play in the whole story!?

😆😆 TaSha bumping in the Mall 😳😆 That scene was hilarious, I loved the makhi comment by Dutta, their cute fight was so entertaining, I wonder why Dutta was amused! 😉 And love Nupur teasing Nakusha, what a twist, bags get switched! 😆 coincidence?? 😆 Now who's this women with Baaji? 😡 I don't like that, 😆 jealousy is not good! 😳 Awwww...Antara looking after Kishore's son like that, awww...such a cute scene, I loved it but oh my god! A shocker! Kishore getting married to Kala 😲🤢 I can just tell that she is going to be a total vampish character! 😆

Not liking Sam girl one bit in Pa5rt 👎🏼 but hehe nice Baaji and Naku scene, but why is Naku so uncomfortable around Baaji? Didn't they have that cute eye lock before?? BTW you mentioned Mayur but what about Sajan? I thought it was the whole MJHT gang? or is it just Mayur? 😆 Whoa Dutta thinking about Naku 😳 I can sense TaSha being the couple 😉 That was such a sweet scene between Dutta and Aaye! 👍🏼 And UGGHHH 🤢 Kala is still the same, greedy cow, she's after the money. AGAIN! 😡

😆 Naku running after Dutta and him thinking its a Dream! 😆😆 I loved this part, Full of Tasha moments, mother-son talk but the last bit I found a bit odd, the children getting married 😆 or would it be in the future when they are old enough! BTW the kid Sups is just aaggghhh 😡 poor Bunty, getting stuck with such a brat 😆 But that Bunty and Pari moment was so cutee awww, Pari found a brother! 😳 Die Kala Die, as you can see I hate her here too 😆

Whoa, this past I loved. So Bunty is Dutta and Chintu is Baaji? Am I right? or is it the other way round 😕 Because is Baaji is chintu then he gets 75% of the property, which would make sense as to why he's alone now? Antara had always been a good mother meaning Dutta and Aaye. Okay I'm confuzzled! 😆 Loved this part, LOL at the clothes for Aaye 😆 And whoa confrontation between Dutta-Baaji...I wanna know more so Imma move onto the next part! 😃

Part 8 was sooooooooo good. 😳 oh my god oh my god, TaSha moments! 😳 I could totally imagine TaSha like that!!! 😳 Haye, in love with TaSha all over again 😉😳 Ohmigosh, Pari comes back 😲 Means a Pari and Baji love story 😉😆 Poor Chintu, his dad passes away 😭

Awwww Baaji is so cute totally love him but HATING Kala and Sups 🤢 Leave the poor kid alone, his dad just died! Again more sweet mother son moments between Dutta and Aaye! Thanks for the short update!

So here you are Shabz, I had to type this all over again 😡 because my computer crashed! Twice!!! After my 3 hour exam this was the best I could do today, my eyes are literally going to close and I'm so tired but I just had to write all this for yew! 😉

Thanks so much for a wonderful FF 👏👏 I'm really liking the whole concept of the story, the way the stories intertwine is just genius. Very creative and rocking FF 😃

Waiting for you next update! 😉🤗

Faz x

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jess_dutta

@jess_dutta

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#307

hey shabz..great part yaar..love this baji..he so cute

the flower scene is real nice..love his style of taking aashirwad

waiting to see more of tasha and baji scenes

hope u update soon

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Shabnam

@Dew-drop

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Posted: 15 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: betty123
hey shabz.....nice part yaar...👏
👏⭐️update soon.......dear

Thanx Betty 4 ur sweet comments ..
Will update soon ..!

Originally posted by: Armu4eva
Jaan.........aaj to tumne hamara dil hi khush kar diya hai.....👏Excellent part.....👏👏👏
Chalo i m glad to hear that kabhi to mujh se tum khush hui ..😛

So happy as to how u have interwoven the past n the present...the subplot n the mainplot..n made it all so crystal clear....!!

A super special HATs OFF to u for the Baji-flowers-Antara-Chintu remembered-touching the spot where she stood bit........*Kudos* 👏

Thanx a lot 4 ur sweet & encouraging comments ..😳

n argghhhhh KALA 🤢....i knew it ...she wuld b the reason for Kishores death.....such a lechre of a being ...hate her...🤢

Me too hate her ....😡

M very very curious to know....as to what plot the evil Ma-beti duo have formed for Chintu aka Baji...😕

Abhi kaise bata doon ...suspense hai ...😉

Rocking update dear......n GET WELL SOON ❤️

Thanx 4 ur wishes ....i m feeling much better now ..!😳

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya
OMG! So thats hww baaji seperates frm dutta =(=( Nawwww!! Shabzzz updateee yaar :(:(

Yh Cindy ,,,they were the reason Dutta & Baaji separated ...
Will update soon ..!😉

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Shabnam

@Dew-drop

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Posted: 15 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: Naina_Mishal
uiii shabz....
greatz update....

i loved it.....

pls jaldi upload karna....

thanx for PMing me....

Naina

Thanx Naina 4 ur comments ..😳
Will update soon & ur welcum ..!

Originally posted by: sinak
GR8 update

Thanx Sinak ..!😳

Originally posted by: anirka
Great FF. Your FF is different. I liked it. 😊

Thanx Anirka 4 ur comments ..😳

Originally posted by: moully
muh....muh...muh....❤️

dear i just wnt 2 kiss ur hands. 4 ur superb writing.

cn't wait 4 next. if possible plz update jaldi karo.

Nw nw ur embarrassing me...😳
Thanx Moully 4 ur sweet comments ...
Will update soon ..!😉

Originally posted by: SanRajDeewani
Loved it Shabz.. Very touching episode with Baiji.. So Baiji is Chintu and Bunty is Dutta.. Lol..

Yh ,,,u got it rite ..😆
Dutta was so samajdhaar as a child.. and Baiji shetaan.. 😆..

Wo bachpan tha ,,,ab ulta hisaab hai ...waise Dutta is still samajhdar bas Naku ko dekh ke usse kuch ho gaya hai ..!😆

OMDzzzz..!! Kala and the other man??!!??😲 It was brilliant..!! I was like.. WOW.. Kala's famous dialogue found its way i see.. *winks* LOL..

Just added it at the last moment ..😆

Brilliant part though..=) Update Soon Please.. (;