TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 29

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Posted: 15 years ago
Shabooo guess who it is?!?! 🤣🤣🤣

I finally read your FF! 🤣🤣🤣 See I told you I will do it when you aren't around.

Right Love it, bit confusing since I don't actually watch the show but interesting liking the Dutta and Naku stuff (I am guessing they are TaSha😆)

Awww poor Chintu 😆 Didn't like Kala from the beginning the name said it all 😆

Hopefully I read this quicker than you reading my one 😆 if not revenge is sweet (Look I will even send you Gulab Jabmo's🤣🤣

So Continue soon, I think Pari and Bunty would have made sense but you made it seem like brother and sister which is cute as well!

Keep the PM's coming I should continue reading now! 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey shabz
great update yaar..baji is so cheeky and cute
loved the tasha scene...hope there more such tasha scene in future
update soon hun..cant wait
btw..congrats on the viewbie status
love,
marie
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Posted: 15 years ago
Im lovingg it daammnnn Shabzs!!! ☺️
Updateee Pleechh 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
i have all the patrs.its aweome n gr888888!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
ok catched up now😆 wow baji kitna cuty cuty ho raha hai😆
loved tasha ,...keep going👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
shabz upd8 likho na...😳😆...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nikita_88

Shabooo guess who it is?!?! 🤣🤣🤣

Pinch me ...I m still in shock ...😲🤣

I finally read your FF! 🤣🤣🤣 See I told you I will do it when you aren't around.

Well thanx a lot 4 reading ...i really appreciate it ..!😳

Right Love it, bit confusing since I don't actually watch the show but interesting liking the Dutta and Naku stuff (I am guessing they are TaSha😆)

Yh ,,u guessed it right ....😆😆

Awww poor Chintu 😆 Didn't like Kala from the beginning the name said it all 😆

No one likes Kala ...🤣

Hopefully I read this quicker than you reading my one 😆 if not revenge is sweet (Look I will even send you Gulab Jabmo's🤣🤣

Still w8ing ...😆

So Continue soon, I think Pari and Bunty would have made sense but you made it seem like brother and sister which is cute as well!

U didn't like them as brother & sister ..😲😆

Keep the PM's coming I should continue reading now! 😆

Don worry ,,,,i m not letting u off so easy ....u will defo get them ..😉




Originally posted by: mariescott14

hey shabz

great update yaar..baji is so cheeky and cute
loved the tasha scene...hope there more such tasha scene in future
update soon hun..cant wait
btw..congrats on the viewbie status
love,
marie



Thanx Marie 4 ur wishes & appreciation ..😳
I m glad that u liked it ..
U keep reading ...TaSha scenes r defo cuming ..
will update soon .,.!
😉



Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

Im lovingg it daammnnn Shabzs!!! ☺️
Updateee Pleechh 😃



Thanx a lot Cindy ..😳
will update soon ..!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayur-tasha

i have all the patrs.its aweome n gr888888!!!!!!



Thanx a lot 4 ur appreciation ..!😳


Originally posted by: newbe

ok catched up now😆 wow baji kitna cuty cuty ho raha hai😆

loved tasha ,...keep going👏



Thanx Madiha ..😳
Yh ...Baaji is cute ,,,,no doubt 😉,,,,even me liking him ..😳
I m so glad that u loved the TaSha part ..!



Originally posted by: jani-yeh

shabz upd8 likho na...😳😆...



As u wish Jani ..
😆
Will update in a while ..!😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Frndzz ..😃
Here is a short update * ducks jhoota & chappals * ..😆😆..samjha karo yaar ..😉
will defo update a long one next time ...
Hope u enjoy this part ..!😳



Part 9

The day is nearly over …all the people r winding up their work & head 4 home …even in Baaji office all his employees' r leaving..he is lost in his thoughts …his manager cums & tells him that everyone has gone ,,,ain't u gonna go home …Baaji luks at him & then gets up to leave 4 home ..his manager remind him of a important meeting 2mrw telling him the date …On hearing the date Baaji turns back & sayz 2day is 10th June ..his manager nods his head …Baaji runs his hands on his hairs & murmurs "hw can I 4get ….aaj to maa ka b'day hai …he goes into a flashback ..when he waz only 10 yrs ..

Flashback


Bunty & Chintu come home …they r arguing about something …on entering the house Chintu sees Antara & hugs her ..bunty complains to her that he is becoming very naughty & his pranks r increasing day by day …Antara luking at him with adoration falsely scolds him & tells Bunty that she will explain to him ….Chintu shws a tongue to Bunty …to which Bunty shws a thumbs down to him …Antara gets up to get them snacks …they start arguing again ..

Bunty to Chintu : Haan haan khush ho le ,,,waise bhi maa to mujhse zyada pyar karti hai …

Chintu : jee nahi ,,,maa mujhse zyada pyar karti hai …

At dat time Antara cums ,,Chintu & Bunty both of them ask her who u luv me more ..

Antara to them : Ye kaisa sawaal ,,main tum dono se pyar karti hoon ….

Chintu cupping her face & asking her : Nahi aap mujhse zyada pyar karti ho ,,hai na …

Antara luks at him …his face so innocent & eyes pleading …she then luks at Bunty ,,he nods at her & she smiles at him ,,she turns bak to Chintu & sayz ye s,,,I luv u more …okkkiiee ,,,nw hav ur food ..

Chintu gets very happy & starts dancing ,, Antara & bunty laugh at his reaction ..& then suddenly Bunty asks him …Okkiee ,,mom luvs u more than me …..but nw tell me hw much do u love her …

Chintu replies innocently : main to maa se bahut pyar karta hoon …tumse bhi zyada ..

Bunty : achcha ,,mujhse bhi zyada to phir batao ,,,aaj Maa k b'day hai ,,,,tumhe yaad hai aur tum kya gift laye maa k liye ..

Chintu face fades a little ,,but then he sayz that he had remembered , suddenly he gets up & goes outside in the garden …there r many white rose bushes …he knew maa liked white roses …so plucks a few flowers & runs inside & givs it to her ….Ye lo maa …mujhe pata hai aapko safed gulab pasand hain na ….main aapke k liye ye laya tha ….& then Antara hugs him & he shws a thumbs down at Bunty …


Present


Baaji leaves the office … The Manager shrugs his shoulder at his boss strange behavior & follows him out ….Baaji gets in his car & drives away … At a point he stops the car …suddenly a little boy who is selling flowers cums to him & begs him to buy some flowers ..Baaji luks at the flowers …he is thinking ,,but then he asks the boy if he got white roses …the boy nods his head & runs to get it …He brings a bunch of roses wrapped beautifully ..Baaji payz him & keeps the flowers on the seat besides him .. he is driving aimlessly on the roads ..& then he stops the car at one place …he looks up & is shocked to see the place ..he gets down & after much hesitancy he takes the bouquet & gives it the watchman to give it inside ..


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Dutta comes homes ….he hands over the gifts to Aaye ,, saying that he got it exchanged ..Aaye opens it & likes it very much ….She gets up to get his dinner but Dutta refuses that he has a business dinner & he has to leave …he goes to his room to freshen up …After he has gone Aaye caresses the gift he has bought …she gets up & takes out an album 4rm the cupboard ..she opens it & is looking at the pic of a young boy smiling ,,she touches his face ,,past memories strike her & tears began to form in her eyes …Just then Dutta comes ,,she quickly wipes her tears …Dutta comes near & hugs her …he asks her if she is all right ,,he decides not to go to the meeting but she says that she is fine …he leaves after hugging her saying that he will b back soon ..

After Dutta has left she keeps bak the album in the cupboard .. just then one of the servants cum with a bouquet of white roses ….he says that some man gave it to give it to u …she takes the bouquet in her hand ,,her face lightens up ,,she murmurs " Tumhe yaad hai "…she asks him if he is still outside ,,to which the servant sayz he doesn't know …she goes outside to see …she gets out of the gate but no body is there ..she is disappointed & with a heavy heart goes inside …Just as she leaves ,Baaji comes out 4rm behind a tree …He luks at at the direction where she went,,,after she has gon inside & the gateman had closed the door he goes to the spot where she had been standing …he touches the ground where she had been standing & takes aashirwaad & sayz happy b'day maa & then goes back to his car & drives off ....


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It has been 4 days since Kishore died …Everyone is in mourning …Chintu is totally broken up ,,but Antara is there 4 him ,,,he cries uncontrollably in Antara arms …People who had gathered there leave one by one …Nw no one is there except Kala , Antara , Chintu & Bunty ..Sups is in her room sleeping ..Kala to gets up to go to her room leaving them behind .…she is too tired ..she goes to her room ,locks the door , taking off her white saree she just throws it on the floor ..she takes out a bottle of liquor 4rm her room refrigerator …she pours herself a glass & gulps it down at one go …she feels her mind clearing ,,she pours herself another glass & taking it in her hand sits on the sofa with her legs spraled on the table …she is thinking of the past few days happenings …she laughs aloud ..she talks to herself " Jo bura na samjhe , jo bhala na samjhe ,,wo Kala ko kya samjhe ..".. She cheers to herself " wah Kala wah …ky adimaag paaya hai tune …kaise tune apne raaste ka kaanta hataya hai …..she luks at the pic of Kishore & sayz Kishore kaash tum mera aur Supriya ka raaz na jaan jate to aaj tum zinda hote …" she laughs again & thinks hw Kishore had caught her red handed with another guy ….they were talking about something which Kishore had overheard …& hw they had followed Kishore & caused his car to an accident …but Kishore had survived & then at the hospital , Kishore had tried to tell Chintu about the truth ,,she had just in time kept her foot on the oxygen pipes blocking the flow of oxygen to him & Kishore had breathed his last & she had let out a sigh of relief ..

Late that night Kala goes to Sups room..She is awake & reading a book .. On seeing Kala she keeps the book aside & looks up to her questioningly ….Kala comes near ,,she sits on the bed besides her …she asks Sups as to hw is she feeling & why she has not slept till now .. Supriya replies that she is not feeling sleepy …Kala luks at her face ,,Sups feels that she has come to say sumthin & asks straight away to tell what the matter waz .. Kala asks her that 4rm now on she has to make extra efforts & get more close to Chintu , so that he believes & trusts her blindly …itna bharosa k use tumhari baton pe tum par yaqeen ho us Bunty aur Antara k baton se bhi zyada … hamare paas 3 saal hain …Chintu abhi 18 saal ka hai aur uski saari property k dekh bhaal Antara aur Arvind k haath main hain …hamein in 3 saalon mein Chintu k dimaag mein aisa zehar gholna hai unke khilaaf .. samajh gayi na.. Sups nods her head agreeing …!



Pllzz do leave ur precious comments

Thanx a lot ..!😳

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dew-drop


As u wish Jani ..😆
Will update in a while ..!😉

woohoo i cnt w8...😆😳...
arre vah that was a super quick while...😆...
thats was a short but sweet upd8...👏👏👏...
totally luved it Shabz...🤗...awww Baji is jus 2 sweet...felt lyk givin him a gr8 big hug...bless him...the flower thing in past n present was awesum...really sooooooo touching...😭...n the ashirwaad thing Baji did...omg so special...
cnt w8 2 read the next part...hope its real soon...mwahzzzz...😳...
Edited by jani-yeh - 15 years ago

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