TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 19

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Frndzz ..
me bak wid the next part ..
Hope u all like it ....😳





Part 6

It was a very bright morning...

Aayi has gotten up early as usual ..she is in the garden sitting enjoying the sun & doing her jaap ,,Dutta who couldn't sleep well last night comes & sits besides Aaye ..

Aaye luks at him : U got up early than usual 2day ..

D : Haan bas aayee ,,neend nahi aayi …

Aaye scolding him : Tu bilkul apna khayal nahi rakhta Dutta …jab dekho kaam sar pe sawaar hai …arey neend kaise aayegi …raat ko bhi jaaga hoga kaam le kar ..

D : Aaye tu kyun tension le rahi hai ..

A: Achhcha tu shaadi karle aur mere liye achchi si ek bahu le aa ,,,main nahi loongi tension ..

Naku face comes b4 his eyes at the mention of bahu & a smile spread across his face …

A : ab tu hans kyun raha ..

D puzzled : Kuch bhi nahi Aaye ,,,tub hi na kya sochti rehti hai ….jab waqt aayega to aajayegi teri bahu ..

A : Ab bhi waqt aana baaqi hai Dutta ,,,tu kyun mujhe itna satata hai ..

D: Aaye filhaal tu meri chinta chod aur aaj maine tera doctor se appointment liya hai check up k liye ..tujhe dikhane k baad hi office jaaunga ..abhi chal naashta karte hain ..

Aayi : Main theek hoon mujhe nahi jaana doctor k paas ..

D : Haan tu bilkul theek hai bas routine check up k liye …

They both go inside the house ..


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Nupur & Naku having tea & talking about last night..hw much they had enjoyed ..Nupur asks her of her plans 4 the day ..Naku tells that she was thinking of to pick up sum things 4rm local the market & also had to change the bags 4rm the Mall ..

Nupur teasingly sayz : Now Don u start another fight with him again ….& winks at her ..

Naku just glares at her & then they both laugh ..

Nupur wishes her the best ..


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Naku after doing sum shopping heads 2wards the mall to exchange the bags ,,,she explains to the shopkeeper 4rm where they had purchased the things of her bags getting switched ..she asks him if the man has alo come to return it ..she is disappointed to know that there has been no complain yet ..she gives him her number & asks him to call her if he comes to return the bags ..She leaves 4rm there ..

Dutta after getting his mom checked up drops her home & leaves 4 the office ..on his way he passes the place where the accident took place between Naku & him …he then remembers is mom words of getting married ..a smile comes on his lips ..he is thinking of her & driving ,,he switches on the car radio ,,a beautiful song is playing ..

Kal se koi mere dil mein sama gayi
Kal se koi mere khwabon mein chaa gayi
Kal se koi ban gayi zindagi

Kahin voh tum tho nahin
Kahin voh tum tho nahin
Kahin voh tum tho nahin
Kahin voh tum tho nahin

His smile deepens as he hear the words of the song ..

Naku getting out of the mall ,,,she is looking 4 a cab or auto & suddenly she notices Dutta in a car …he is driving away ,,,she runs after the car waving her hand to get his attention ..

Kal se koi mere dil mein sama gayi
Kal se koi mere khwabon mein chaa gayi
Kal se koi ban gayi zindagi

Kahin voh tum tho nahin
Kahin voh tum tho nahin

Dutta totally lost in the song looks up at his rear view mirror ..he sees Naku waving at him …he turns his head to see but finds nobody there …he laughs it off thinking it to be his day dream & puts back his attention to driving ..

Neend jo na mili mujhe voh mili gayi nahin
Neend jo na mili mujhe voh mili gayi nahin
Uske chahat mein neend lekin aati bhi nahin
Jo raaton ko tanha beqaraar kar gayi

Kahin voh tum tho nahin
Kahin voh tum tho nahin

Naku finally gets a auto & asks him to follow the car ..

Kal se koi mere dil mein sama gayi
Kal se koi mere khwabon mein chaa gayi
Kal se koi ban gayi zindagi

Kahin voh tum tho nahin
Kahin voh tum tho nahin

Dutta still lost in songs ….Naku waving & yelling 4rm the auto to stop him ..but Dutta who still thinks it's a dream scolds himself ..& drives off fastly to his office leaving Naku way behind ..

Ek pal mein badal gayi voh meri zindagi
Ek pal mein badal gayi voh meri zindagi
Tha kahan hoon kidar mujhe yeh kabar thaq nahin
Jo sapnon ko sacha sach ko khwab kar gayi

Kahin voh tum tho nahin
Kahin voh tum tho nahin


Naku gets out of the auto & yells at him but he is long gone she is very angry …she then tells the auto driver,,who is amused by all this, to take her home ..


Kal se koi mere dil mein sama gayi
Kal se koi mere khwabon mein chaa gayi
Kal se koi ban gayi zindagi

Kahin voh tum tho nahin
Kahin voh tum tho nahin
Kahin voh tum tho nahin
Kahin voh tum tho nahin


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Dutta reaches office ,,he is still smiling ,,his employees r surprised to see him in such a good mood ..its very rare dat they hav seen their boss smile …he goes to his cabin & calls the manager ,,,he inquires abut the land deal to which the manager replies that they still have not been able to contact the land dealer ,,he seem to hav disappeared ..Dutta is surprised at this but asks him to keep trying ..Ther manager leaves 4rm there …Dutta gets busy in his other works ..Time passes by & later in the evening the manager comes & tells him that Baaji has purchased the land they had wanted to ,,Dutta on hearing this gets very angry …he leaves the office deciding to meet Baaji ..


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Naku reaches home ..Nupur is already there ..she asks her about her day ..Naku tells her it had been very tiring & she had not been able to exchange her bags ..that man still had not returned with bags ..

Nupur sayz may b he had not checked the bags till now ,,she asks her not to worry ..

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Kala hadn't said anything after the will fiasco ,,,but she had so much hatred in her 4 Chintu …she had even started poisoning Sups little mind against him ,,,The children were growing up ,,nw even sups is going to school ,,,she is also in the same school as Chintu & Bunty …Chintu takes care of his lil sis very much ,, 4 him she is an angel ..Even in school he is very possessive of her …no one dared to say anything to Chintu sister ,,,he waz a bossy type in school ..Bunty waz the quite type ..very studious ,,whereas Chintu waz a naughty child but very bright ..he used to get in trouble in school sumtimes 4 his naughtiness ..Nw even sups waz always wid them ,,& even Sups friend, the headmasters daughter ..Chintu used to get very irritated with her ,,but 4 his sis& also dat she waz the headmaster's daughter he let her b wid them but Chintu would often tease her , pull her hair ..scare her with plastic lizards & snakes ..She waz a very pretty child with big brown eyes oozing innocence , round face & curly long hair ....everyone used to call her Pari ,,although her name waz sumthing else ....these foursome would always be seen 2gether in school & even sumtimes after school either in Bunty home or Chintu home …Antara too also became very fond of Pari ..she also liked Sups ,but Sups nature waz not friendly as she had already been poisoned by Kala against them so she never tried to cum close to Antara ..Sups even bossed over Pari ..if Pari didn't listened to her ,,she would scare her that she will tell Chintu & Pari feared Chintu very much …Pari was always in awe of Sups ,,she always thought of Sups to b so lucky to have a brother like Chintu ,who took such a good care of her & pampered her ..

Once Bunty saw Pari crying ,,he asked her 4 the reason ,,but then he knew Chintu must have said sumthing to her ..he tells her that he would scold Chintu & ask him not to say anything to her ..She cries that if only she had a brother then he would also protect her ..Bunty hugs her & wiping her tears asks her not to cry & sayz 4rm now I m ur brother ,, & no one will say anything to her not even Chintu ..a big smiles spread across Pari face & she hugs him bak ..

Years passed ,Sups & Pari are nw 10 yrs old ….the arrogance & attitude in Sups has increased & so has her hatred 4 Chintu & Bunty ,,though she never showed it ,,in open she waz all sweets …Only Pari knew dat how much Sups had hatred in her heart for Chintu & Bunty …she waz confused over her this behavior ..Chintu waz the same possessive & protective towards Sups ..getting into fights also which Sups used to get started …she luved to see Chintu getting into trouble ..,but Bunty waz always there 4 Chintu & sumhw used to get him out of it & for this Sups hatred for Bunty also increased ..

Kishore & Arvind wanted to make their friendship more strong ,,so they decided to get their children Bunty & Sups engaged …the talks were still among the elders but Antara didn't like the idea ..she tells Arvind that if the children didn't want to make this relationship in the future he would not force them to which he agrees ..Kala waz also not in favour of this new relationship ,,but doesn't say anything 4 the time being ..!



Okkiee dats it ...
Plzz do leave ur Valuable comments ..😳
will try to update as soon as possible ..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wah kya timing hai😆 idhar maine hukoom diya aur update hazir!😆
dutta smiling 😍 good good😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Wow..... yaar... what a romantic epi..... bole..to ek dum rapchik epi...😉

Dutta ke khayalon mein Naku....aur.. Dutta ke gano mein Naku..... wah wah..... Dutta bhao ko to premrog lag gaya hai... jao jao.. kisi vaid ko bulao...😆😆
Super epi yaar.. 👏ClapClapClapi just luvd the whole Tasha sequence... n man...can so imagine.. just how cute Dutta wuld hv looked smiling to himself thinking of Naku on that song.......😳EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed Haiiiii...just awesome..!!
Btw mere chote se dimag mein yeh khayal aaya hai..ke the sub plot culd actualy b a past for the main plot.. as in ..chintu bunty...culd b baji / dutta.. n pari for sure has to b naku... sups ka pata nahi....🤔
Rocking update Shabz ji...ClapClapClapClap
Edited by Armu4eva - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow that was good .....oye dutta already dreaming so much that he feels hes imagining her running behind him abey yeh dutta apne aap ko kya samjhta hai 😆 hai nakku ne bechare ko pagal kardiyaaa........ 😆
serial main bhi keh raha tha bohut badi machli phasa li toone nakku.......i thought he should say shark whale phasa li then i thought shark whale ko phasathe nai hain ulta phas jaathe hai ......aur yahi ho rahi hai nakku ki haalat
sorry for the diversion
well bak to ur ff..........wow nice way of putting who became what n how.......hmmmm ab is baar late mat karne u better update soon 😉

well done me enjoyed 👏 ⭐️ 👏
Edited by skavitha08 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey shabz
great update yaar..loved it
loved the tasha sequence..bichari naku running after dutta..but dutta thinking was imagination hehehe
hope you update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Shabz awesum awesum upd8...👏👏👏... luved how Dutta thgt Naku was a dream...😳😍...so so cute... soooooooooooooooooooooo cnt w8 4 ur nex upd8 Shabz...
afterthgt...i missed Baji...😆...
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Posted: 15 years ago
I liked it Shabz :) It had a different story and it was interesting! Keep updating. 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago

😉bole to ekdum jhakaas FF tha..😆😆....woow dutta has started dreaming abt nakku😳😳...aur jab woh reality mein uske aage hai still he thinks its a dream😆..bechari nakku...she should be singing this song 4m PAA.."mili mili dutta bhao se mili mein ladi ladi ittefaq se..."😉😉...

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey shabz
thanks for the p;m...caught up with the story...great update yaar
missed baji though
hope you update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
really very very nice concept. bt plz make fall tasha in love. plz....
wo fight karte hu acche nahi lagate.
plz pm me whn u update........

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