TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 10

Originally posted by: swati2008

awesome part yaar.........loved naku n nupur scene.......awaiting for tasha meeting........neways does the side story related to dutta n baaji's past.............

Originally posted by: PremLeoManav

Nice yaar..........Loved it............UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gr8 part!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

hii...i m new reader......really nice concept.....seems interesting........reaaly enjoying reading nakku and dutta in totally changed characters......plzz add me to ur pm list

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

😈 I got a chance to criticize somebody's FF, I will surely do a post mortem with it😆

I hope tumhe mere SS ka post mortem karne ka mauka na mile ..😆😆

Chalo let me start with my criticism😆

I was totally confused with the "Another Story" , who are these peolple?😕

U will get to knw later ,,,its not dat confusing yaar ...😉

Now the good things😳

1. Fast paced, short and to the point.......which I like the most😃

2. Loved Nakusha-Nupur part, the way Nupur was teasing Naku is very sweet😛
So Nupur and Mayank is here? 😃 I love them very cute couple😛

Me luv mayur too ,,,but they r only mostly Nupur as fillers ..

(P. S. : one of my suggestion: don't bring much characters, I feel very very confused when I see many characters in a FF, sometimes I skip reading the paras which don't have hero/ heroine/ villain😆. I usually love to read more about the main characters, but I know other characters are needed for the story)

I knw yaar ,,,,but this side story was important ,,so started it ...but it will all b clear in the next few parts ..& so will b the the characters ..!😉

3. Loved the Datta-Ayi part, very sweet relationship.

4. Specially loved the Baaji part, the mystery behind the pic is really haunting me, want to know more about it😃

Bas thoda intezaar ....matlab kuch parts ka ..😆😆

5. Finally Shabz, you are such a chhupa rustam, where are other Krazzians? we need to grill you for "chhupaying your talent"😆

Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ,,,,no grilling ...😛
I guess the Krazzziens r busy ,,,haven't seen them 4 a long time ....only u & Lekha is here ..
Nadz to pata nahi ,,,,where has she disappeared ..!😆

Originally posted by: skavitha08

i read two parts ages ago but was not able to comment as my net was goin crazy now its der so read the third part too
as i already told u that ur ff is too good as it is completely different from the original one loved it will wait for the next update 😍

Originally posted by: Additi...

Olalalala....Finally i am done reading it.......
You SS is still nameless 😲.....lazinness or run of names 🤔...😆

Both ....😆😆

Oye hoye....Deadly Triangle...🤓....Nakku+Datta+Baaji =????? 😆
This nakky is already feelling goshee goshee for baaji...😳..humare datta ka kiya hoga...😒
wahi hoga jo main chahungi .....!🤣
........Aweosome updates.........Continue soon and PM me

Will update soon & added ...!😉

luv
Pari
😎

Originally posted by: nabilamubeen

hii...i m new reader......really nice concept.....seems interesting........reaaly enjoying reading nakku and dutta in totally changed characters......plzz add me to ur pm list

Hi Nabeela ...😃

Thanx 4 reading ...I m glad dat u liked it ...😳

will defo PM u next time ..!

Originally posted by: newbe

JIO JIO MERE YAAR😃
have read all parts..very good story🤗
Ab jaldi update karna ....mai yaha aati nahi iska matlab yeh nahi mein parhti nahi 🤣

good job keep going!😃