New FF: The Reality of Dreams Ch8 pg31 Jan 9

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Madhia

@-Madzy-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

very good cant wait to next update..!😍
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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

lovely yaar
muhje lagat hai dutta to gaya naku ke pyaar usse naku bhi pasaand hai aur nakusha par tpo foida hai
wow some girls have all the lick
do continue
dera
bye sumi

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Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

awesome yaar............dutta likes naku n nakusha both..........great.............achha hua yahan to sups ki nautanki nahin chali.

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#74

awesuuumm jazziee!!! im waitngg for duttaa to finndd out aboutt naku=nakusha phiirr supriyaa ko golii maaro!! :P:P
looveee u
cindyy :D:D

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sana

@sana786a

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#75

thnks 😃4 da pm jaz seriously ur ff gets better n better mashallah luv it loads cant wait 2 read da next part mindblowing😃

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shonapinky

@shonapinky

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#76

jaz....awesum work once again yaaar....!! 👏luking frwd 2 ur next update...ittz great!!!👍🏼

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Tas

@tasshamsi

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#77

kamaaall!!!!!!!!!! u r amazing Jaz.....its the loveliest FF by far.....m total fida on u!!!

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@IrikaLovesKMH

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#78

awesommeee part loved it waiting for the next update...

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flowergirl_O

@flowergirl_O

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#79

hi fuppi...I'm sooooo sorry for the delay in commenting...i read it a while back but never got the chance to comment...i have one word for this update and it would be cute and by that i mean cute as in...the way dutta and naku talked...how naku told him about herself...how dutta noticed the similarities between naku and nakusha...dutta thinking about naku...it was a update where i just couldn't stop myself from smiling...while reading sometimes i would notice I'm smiling and I'd think to myself when did i start smiling...even though tasha aren't a couple yet they're still soo cute
dutta wanted to apologize to naku was really cute cuz he never apologized to anyone and he's apologizing to her and for him she's just a maid...but it was even cuter when dutta felt guilty that naku apologized to him...i think he's already falling for her...your story gives me so much hope
then when naku talks about herself...it was so emotional...i loved it and i also thought it was cute...but even better was that dutta kept telling her to keep talking which means he likes listening to her...i thought it was so cute how he told her and i could imagine him just staring at her while she was talking
i think my favorite part was when dutta noticed the similarities between nakusha and naku...the better part was he noticed her eyes and how he thought it was pretty...i don't remember exactly but i know that's what he basically said...in the show he didn't notice any similarities but that's why you're better...the bad part about it was he wanted to forget it but please never let him forget it
i fell like rups from the show cuz i thought everything was cute...thanks for making me smile and even when i read it the second time i smiled again so thanks for that and i just have to say you're story gives me a lot of hope to think of tasha as a couple

Edited by flowergirl_O - 15 years ago