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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
GR8 update. Hope Dutta soon finds that Naku n Nakusha are the same. He did find similarities between the two.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: *Guli*

Hello Babe ji!!!!!!!!!!!!! how are you??? haila... it was soooo nice seeing you yesterday!!!! i missed you soooooooo much!!!!๐Ÿ˜ญ i mean if you didnt have to leave.... we couldve talked more... cuz you know us and our babbling!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜† we talk to much!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† babeji!! im is yoU! ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...sigh...and now you are moving...so not cool...you wont be just 5min away anymore ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...not fair...not fair *throws tantrum* ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


Anyways... yay you updated!!!! totally forgot about this FF!!!.... thats cuz i didnt talk to u!๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...... good...forget...that way you cant bug me for updates ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›

Haila... wat an update!!! Aww Naku.... she just said sorry for talking sooo much!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† and didnt even let Dutta say anything and then he feels bad!!! oh man u gotta love that!!๐Ÿ‘ lol...i know...i loved doing it...she totally shut him up...and she didnt even have to...i love making men feel guilty!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...im hubby will be so lucky naa? ๐Ÿ˜‰

aww... she was talking about herself.. but omg.. Dutta.... a little birdie told me that.... she is Nakusha!!!!๐Ÿ˜† Im telling you... but you need to know that!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†... so there's the secret now you do wat u gotta do... cuz Jaz... she wont let u know soo soon!!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก she's just evil..... she's just plain evil!!!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก.... she does thing... its called suspense.... and its not fun!!!!!.... uff!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก i cant wait til he finds out... that its her!!!!... im not evil...im just...creative ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ but you have to admit...as evil as i am...when i give...i give GOOD!!! ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›...lol...im excited to write this ff...and that other one...he he...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

wen will that be??? ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ please!!!!!!! soon!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ...

plz cont soon!!!! soon...is soon...whenever you get your butt back online...cuz you are not gonna be on for me to update...and if i update without you here...you're gonna raise all kinds of hell ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•


luv u babe!!!! you too!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ



Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Will read aaram se ...!๐Ÿ˜† iss aaram se ki chakar mein...i forgot to read the LTL express from last week...*sigh*...i have two to catch up on this week

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Fabulous update Jaz ...
& thanx 4 only TaSha update through out ..no kebab mein haddis ...๐Ÿ˜‰ no kabab mein hadis' in this story...unless absloutely necessary..aur woh bhi...only to advance Tasha ki prem kahani ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›

Wat a perfect time Dutta chose to apologize ....par Naku bhi kam nahi ..
mauka hi nahi diya usko ....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
But y did u ended so soon ....

I hope Dutta is not a Gadha this time & cums to conclusion dat she is Nakusha ...! haila...soon...doh doh TaSha scenes diya maine...and you still say soon...*sigh*...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•...chalo...ill see what i can do...lol...Dutta...hmm...a little bit of a gadha here as well...but not as big as the one on the show ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† just wait and watch ๐Ÿ˜›

Nw ..update soon Jazzy ....koi bahana nahi ..!๐Ÿ˜† updating soon...and the new one as well ๐Ÿ˜ณ



Originally posted by: kshreya2002

Read it aaraam se! Jaz...is Dutta a gadha here too?


lol...Dutta is gadha...but chota gadha...you'll see what i mean soon enough ๐Ÿ˜›

Originally posted by: -RACHNA-

WOW awesome update, dutta feelin guilty n nakusha is sooooo sweet update soon ok


thanks yaar...glad that you liked it...next part will be up soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ

JAZ

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Posted: 15 years ago
#83

thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by: mariescott14

great update jaz

hope realizes naku and nakusha is the same
and please update real soon
ur ff is really different


thanks luv!! dutta wont realize until he actually sees it..e.ventually...but have some hope...he's not a complete lost cause...trust me ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›...aage aage dekho...hota hai kya...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: newbe

very good cant wait to next update..!๐Ÿ˜
๐Ÿ˜


thanks...next one soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

JAZ

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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: jnawaz



lol...Dutta is gadha...but chota gadha...you'll see what i mean soon enough ๐Ÿ˜›


good jaz u havent diverted from the gadha aspect of his character.๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

lovely yaar
muhje lagat hai dutta to gaya naku ke pyaar usse naku bhi pasaand hai aur nakusha par tpo foida hai
wow some girls have all the lick
do continue
dera
bye sumi


i agree...some girls have all the luck...sadly...im not one of them...so i make all my heroines what im not ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† lol...did i make any sense...any way...glad that you liked it...next update soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: swati2008

awesome yaar............dutta likes naku n nakusha both..........great.............achha hua yahan to sups ki nautanki nahin chali.


how do you know if Dutta likes anyone...ussne tumhe bataya...haila...phone pe ya email se ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...lol...just teasing...and yes...rest assured...sups ki nautanki nahin chalegi ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

awesuuumm jazziee!!! im waitngg for duttaa to finndd out aboutt naku=nakusha phiirr supriyaa ko golii maaro!! :P:P
looveee u
cindyy :D:D


thanks sindy!!! ๐Ÿค—...for the naku = nakusha to come out...you're gonna be waiting for a while...but fikar not...you will be more than well entertained ๐Ÿ˜‰

JAZ

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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: sana786a

thnks ๐Ÿ˜ƒ4 da pm jaz seriously ur ff gets better n better mashallah luv it loads cant wait 2 read da next part mindblowing๐Ÿ˜ƒ


aww...sana...you are too sweet...so glad that you liking it...next part today for sure...not sure when...but today paaka!! but in the mean time ill have something to entertain you all...it shall be up soon ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: shonapinky

jaz....awesum work once again yaaar....!! ๐Ÿ‘luking frwd 2 ur next update...ittz great!!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ


thanks pinky! (you remind me of my Di!! her name is pinky ๐Ÿ˜ณ) ...next update soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: tasshamsi

kamaaall!!!!!!!!!! u r amazing Jaz.....its the loveliest FF by far.....m total fida on u!!!


thanks!! im glad you like it...look for update soon and for another ff all together ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: Irika95

awesommeee part loved it waiting for the next update...


thanks...next part up soon ๐Ÿ˜Š

JAZ

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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: flowergirl_O

hi fuppi...I'm sooooo sorry for the delay in commenting...i read it a while back but never got the chance to comment...i have one word for this update and it would be cute and by that i mean cute as in...the way dutta and naku talked...how naku told him about herself...how dutta noticed the similarities between naku and nakusha...dutta thinking about naku...it was a update where i just couldn't stop myself from smiling...while reading sometimes i would notice I'm smiling and I'd think to myself when did i start smiling...even though tasha aren't a couple yet they're still soo cute im glad that you liked the update Orpa...usually you are saying that my updates (lately on kis desh) have been making you cry...cuz in all three ff's Prem is sad...lol...but this wont be sad...it will be good...and happy...most of the time...he he...thanks for the summary...its great...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
dutta wanted to apologize to naku was really cute cuz he never apologized to anyone and he's apologizing to her and for him she's just a maid...but it was even cuter when dutta felt guilty that naku apologized to him...i think he's already falling for her...your story gives me so much hope good...im glad the story gives you hope...and yes...while Dutta has never apologized to anyone...he's never been the one that was wrong...this time he was...and Dutta is a good person...he knows what he has to do when he's wrong...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ thats what makes him a good gangster ๐Ÿ˜†
then when naku talks about herself...it was so emotional...i loved it and i also thought it was cute...but even better was that dutta kept telling her to keep talking which means he likes listening to her...i thought it was so cute how he told her and i could imagine him just staring at her while she was talking
i think my favorite part was when dutta noticed the similarities between nakusha and naku...the better part was he noticed her eyes and how he thought it was pretty...i don't remember exactly but i know that's what he basically said...in the show he didn't notice any similarities but that's why you're better...the bad part about it was he wanted to forget it but please never let him forget it
i fell like rups from the show cuz i thought everything was cute...thanks for making me smile and even when i read it the second time i smiled again so thanks for that and i just have to say you're story gives me a lot of hope to think of tasha as a couple the eye part...he was noticing the sparkle in her eyes...cuz it was there when she talked about her father...i think...lol...im not sure...i should go back and read it ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...but im working on the next update...so i can post it tonight ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...so glad you liked it...hope you liked the movie yesterday...love ya!! ๐Ÿค—



Originally posted by: betty123

gr8 yarโญ๏ธ..... i m lovin it..................cont soon.....


thank you so much! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: sinak

GR8 update. Hope Dutta soon finds that Naku n Nakusha are the same. He did find similarities between the two.


lol...soon...yaar...if he finds out that Naku is Nakusha...the story is over...aur vaise bhi...tum toh jaante ho...im not that nice ๐Ÿ˜†...and one more thing...you follow LTL...i didnt know that...cool

JAZ

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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
hey guys...here is the next installment of this TaSha ff ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Chapter 4

After another semi-sleepless night, Dutta woke up rather later the next morning. After eating a quick breakfast he headed out with Baji to deal with some business matters before they got out of hand. When he returned about two hours later he saw all the women of the house gathered in the main hall surrounded my clothing and jewelry. His goal was to quietly sneak in so that he didn't get caught in all this girly mess. His goal โ€“ failed.

"Dutta beta, tum aagaye?" Babi called.

Dutta plastered a fake smile on his face and continued walking, hoping that was the end of it. No such luck.

"Dutta ji, yahaan aaiyeh naa," Supriya called.

'Dutta ji'? Had she really just called him that? Dear lord, she made him sound like a grandfather. He was used to people calling him Bhao, or Dutta Bhao but Dutta ji โ€“ this was a first.

"Mujhe thoda kaam hai," he said.

"Kaam toh hota rehga. Hume aapki help chahiyeh thodi dehr ke liyeh. Please," Leela pleaded.

Giving yet another fake smile, Dutta headed over to the sitting area. Supriya came up, grabbed him by the shoulder and made him sit right next to her.

"Aapko yeh sariyaan kaisi lagi?" Supriya asked.

"Kya?" Dutta was confused.

"Woh kya hai naa beta," Babi began, "Kuch hi dino mein Leela ki shaadi hai. Issi liyeh yeh log aapne liyeh sariyaan chun rahe haiโ€ฆhar function ke liyeh kuch naa kuch. Saath mein jewelry bhi."

"Oh," Dutta said. Like he cared โ€“ please.

"Toh bataiyeh naa, aapko yeh blue saree kaisi lagi?" Supriya asked.

As if saving him from brainless chatter, yet again, came Naku with a tray filled with glasses. She first came to Supriya and handed her a glass.

"Taayi, aapki nimbu pani," she said.

Supriya took the glass but only after giving Naku a glare. "Ek simple baath tumhare dimag mein rehta nahin?" she asked. "Kitni baar kaha hai ke mujhe nimbu pani tik teen baje chahiyeh!"

As if on reflex, Dutta glanced at his watch. It shocked him to see Supriya making such a big deal about something so trivial because it was only 3:05 at the moment. Five minutes late with your water, big whoop.

"Maaf kijiyehga Taayi, phirse nahin hoga," Naku said before turning to Dutta. "Saab, aapke liyeh kuch laoon?"

Speechless at what just happened, Dutta could only shake his head. Naku then quickly gave everyone else a glass of juice before disappearing into the kitchen once again.

"Yeh ladki naa, kissi kaam ki nahin," Leela complained as she began to look at more saree's.

"Dutta jiโ€ฆ" Supriya began.

"Wohโ€ฆmujhe pani chahiyeh," Dutta said cutting her off.

Without another word, he got up and left the room before someone could offer to have it brought to him. He was feeling rather thirsty to he made his way to the kitchen. Once he stepped inside he could see Naku, with her back to him, working on the chopping board while she hummed a sweet tune. She turned to the stove to stir something when she saw him.

"Saab aap? Kuch chahiyeh tha?" she asked.

"Paniโ€ฆ" he said.

Naku quickly grabbed a cold bottle of water and poured it into a glass before handing it to him.

"Naku, tu yahaan kaam kar rahi hai. Bahar ke sariyaan aur gehne nahin dekhni tujhe?" he asked.

"Main dekh ke kya karungi Saab?" Naku asked as she continued to stir the pot.

Once again, the girl surprised him. Dutta remembered at his own sisters wedding, when they had all the saree and jewelry people at their house, all of his housekeepers had wanted to see what was going on. They dreamt of owning such luxurious saree's and such priceless gold jewelry. They knew that they'd never be able to afford them; therefore, they were happy in just looking. As he traced his memory of who were outside, Dutta remembered seeing a few of the other maids of this house gathered around the boundary of the main hall, looking on amazed at the spread of clothing and gold. Everyone was interested, except Naku.

"Dekhne mein kya problem hai?" he asked.

"Koi nahin Saab. Magar saach boloon toh mujhe yeh saab pasand hi nahin," Naku said.

"Aacha? Kyun? Sariyaan aur gehne toh har ladki ko pasand hai," he said.

"Mujhe bhi pasand hai lekin aaisi nahin."

"Kya matlab?" Dutta asked, confused.

"Mujhe sadaran cheezein pasand hai, jaiseโ€ฆchote chote kaan ke jhumkeโ€ฆchudiyaanโ€ฆpairoon ke payalโ€ฆbindiyaanโ€ฆballoon ka gajra. Itne bade bade gehne aur itni bhari bhari sariyaan mujhe nahin pasand," she clarified.

Dutta knew he was looking at her like she had just grown another head. In this day an age, where did you ever find a girl with such simple taste? No matter what the class or level, all women loved expensive things. Dutta knew from first hand experience that women loved money. How is it that she didn't? Without giving it much thought Dutta headed out to the main hall where he was once again trapped by Babi.

"Kaal raath ke liyeh tum kya pehnoge Dutta beta?" she asked.

"Sorryโ€ฆkaal raath ke liyehโ€ฆmatlab?" Dutta asked as he had no idea what she was talking about.

"Kaal raath ko hume dinner ka invitation hai, Taayi ki sasural mein," Supriya said as she took off some earrings she was trying.

"Haan, aur Sujata ne vada kiya hai ke tum dono aaoge," Babi added.

Fury raced in Dutta's veins which he fought hard to control. He balled his hands into fists as she called out to his step-mother, "Aayi Sahib, mujhe aapse ek baath karna tha. Abhi." He made sure she understood that he would not wait.

"Main abhi aayi," AS said as she excused herself.

Dutta waited to speak until they were out of ear shot from Babi and her girls.

"Yeh saab kya hai?" he asked in an angry tone.

"Kya?" AS asked, confused.

"Dinner ka invitationโ€ฆ" Dutta said.

"Wohโ€ฆ" Suddenly AS looked nervous. "Babi ne zabardasti ki thi tohโ€ฆmain mana nahin kaar saki."

"Aapko jaana hai toh jaiyeh, lekin main nahin jaunga," Dutta said. Even as he said it he knew it was a lie. His number one priority was to protect AS at all costs, until the threats against her had subsided. That meant, going wherever she went.

"Magarโ€ฆ" AS began to say.

"Aapse maine kitni baar kaha hai ke mujhse pooche bina aap kissi bhi tarha ki vada maat karna. Toh phir yeh kya hai? Kyun mere waqt barbad karne pe tule hai aap!?" Dutta yelled, louder than he had intended.

Just then, as if appearing out of nowhere, Naku called to AS.

"Aayi Sahibโ€ฆwohโ€ฆ" she played with the edge of her dupatta feeling awkward in that situation. "Aapko Memsaab bula rahi hai," she finally said.

AS smiles at her sweetly before saying, "Tum jaao, main abhi aati hoon."

Naku took a few steps away from when AS said, "Mujhe maaf kardo," to Dutta and walked to the main hall.

Looking up in frustration, Dutta's eyes fell on Naku's, and from the look in them, he knew she'd heard it all.

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Naku had heard it all. Her eavesdropping had been unintentional, but still โ€“ she'd heard it all. Babi has asked her go get AS so that they could get her opinion on one of the sets that she liked for Leela's wedding. Naku knew that they mother and son duo was having a private conversation and she hated to interrupt but she knew if she didn't, Babi would have her head later. As she approached she could hear Dutta's slightly raised voice. The closer she got the more clear the words became.

When she had interrupted, she saw fury in Dutta's eyes and sorrow in AS's eyes. All of the things that Dutta had been saying, they really hurt AS. Naku didn't know what had happened, every parent-child relationship had its up's and down's but to be so rude and disrespectful โ€“ Naku couldn't imagine why. Deep down Naku knew this wasn't just some random mother-son argument, this was much deeper.

It wasn't until she smelled smoke that Naku realized that in her distraction from her thoughts, she'd managed to burn one of the roti's she had been making on the stove. She quickly took it off the stove to let the pan cool because the last thing she needed was to draw attention to herself.

"Stop it Naku," she said, scolding herself.

This was not her problem, it was theirs, and she had no reason to think over it so much. Naku tried to go on the rest of the day without thinking about what Dutta said, or the look of utter sadness in AS's eyes โ€“ key wordโ€ฆtried.

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

It was well into the evening, but Dutta just couldn't shake this encounter with his step-mother. He knew that he was out of line in the way he spoke to her. He knew that it wasn't her fault โ€“ she was a good friend, and a guest in Babi's house, she had to follow the lead more or less. They'd had arguments like this before โ€“ over small, petty things โ€“ because no matter what she did, AS always managed to infuriate him.

Usually he was able to control himself until no one else was around, but this time, adding Babi and her idiotic daughters to the mix, he just couldn't. And then, to make matters worse Naku had heard most of it, if not all of it. He was surprised to see her there, and he tried to get a reading from her eyes but she'd looked away so fast he hadn't been able to. Whether she said something or not, he knew that she had judged him in that moment and that bothered him. He didn't know why, but it did. And that too bothered him.

Dutta pushed those thoughts out of his mind as he and Baji entered the study of Naku's Bade Saab. Before coming he had asked permission from Babi, because it was their house and it was a private study. Babi had said it was no problem for him to use it. She said that they wanted to get rid of the study because no one used it but they never got around to it. It was at the moment Dutta felt that Naku probably cared more about her Bade Saab than his own widow.

Baji and he had bin discussing some business when Naku came in holding a tray of food in her hand.

"Baji-ji, aapka khana," she said as she placed it on the table in front of him.

"Chi! 'Baji-ji'?" Baji made a face. "Tu mujhe Baji-ji kyun bula rahi hai?"

"Kyun?" Naku asked, confused. She was showing the man respect, there was nothing wrong with that.

"Baji-jiโ€ฆtaubaโ€ฆyeh ji-ji kya laga rakha hai?" Baji asked getting up and walking over to Naku. "Tune toh mujhe ladki bana diya. Jiji toh ladkiyaan aapni behno ko bulati hai."

Dutta couldn't help but smile at the comparison.

"Phir main aapko kya bulaoon?" Naku asked.

"Baji, sirf Baji," he said with a smile.

"Nahin, nahin," Naku said as she shook her head. "Main aapko sirf aapke naam se nahin bula sakti Baji-ji."

Baji smacked his head with his right hand before turning to Dutta. "Yeh Naku toh mujhe ladki banake hi chodegi. Kuch karo Bhao," Baji pleaved.

Before Dutta could say anything, Naku chuckled under her breath causing both Dutta and Baji to look at her.

"Kya hua?" Dutta asked.

"Kโ€ฆKuch nahin Saab," Naku said, with a grin on her face.

"Lagta hai yeh khud yedi hogi hai Bhao," Baji said.

Once again, Naku giggled. She knew she had to get out of the room before she laughed out loud. She turned to leave.

"Ruk," Dutta called out. "Tu kyun haans rahi hai? Yeh pehli baar nahin hai joh tu aaise haans rahi hai. Jaab bhi koi mujhe 'bhao' bulata hai, tu haansti hai. Kyun?"

"Kuch bhi toh nahin Saab," Naku said as she tried to kill her bubble of laughter in her chest.

"Naku," Dutta said in a deep, raspy voice. "Saach saach bol."

"Wohโ€ฆkya hai naa keโ€ฆjaab main choti thi tohโ€ฆwoh bachoon ke khilone hote hai naa, woh Teddy Bearโ€ฆ" Naku said.

"Haanโ€ฆtoh?" Baji asked.

"Jaab main choti thi, toh main Teddy Bear ko 'Bhao' bulati thi," Naku admitted.

Both Baji and Dutta looked at her in utter shock. After a few seconds passed, as they digested what she had just said, Baji busted out laughing.

"Bhao aur Teddy Bear," he laughed amused. Baji staggered to where Dutta was standing and put a hand on his shoulder as he tried to control his laughter. "Bhao, yeh ladki naaโ€ฆhume barbad karke chodegi. Kitni mushkil aur mehnat ke baad humne yeh reputation banaya. Yeh Naku toh ek jhatke mein usska satyanash kaar diya." At this point Baji was gasping for air.

"Baji chup," Dutta said as he tried to keep himself from smiling.

"Jaab bhi logoon ko pata chalta hai ke Bhao aur Baji aa raha hai, toh unke halat kharab hojate hai. Zaara yeh soocho, ke jaab unhe paata chalega ke Teddy Bear aur Jiji aa rahe hai, woh toh haanste haanste marjayenge," Baji said as he fell into a fit of laughter on the couch. "Bandhook ke jaga hum unka swagat phloon se karenge."

"Baji," Dutta warned in a strong tone, immediately shutting up Baji.

The one thing Dutta refused to do in front of anyone except associates, was discuss his business or anything related to that. When Baji had mentioned the gun, he'd crossed that line โ€“ and he knew it too.

With his hands held behind his back, Dutta silently walked up to where Naku stood.

"Mere naam pe haans rahi hai tu?" he asked, not expecting an answer. After a short pause he added, "Tujhe mujhse daar nahin lagta?"

Immediately Naku looked up at him and said, "Mujhe aapse daar kyun lagega?"

"Main Dutta Baho hoon. Mere bare mein toh suna hi hoga," Dutta said. "Bhao kitna bura hai, Bhao ke seene mein dil nahin haiโ€ฆvagera vagera."

"Main kissi Dutta Bhao ko nahin jaanti," Naku said. "Main sirf Saab ko jaanti hoon."

"Tere iss Saab mein aur Dutta Bhao mein bohot farak hai," Dutta said.

"Jaise Saab ek insaan hai, vaise Bhao bhi ek insaan hi hai," Naku said before leaving.

Dutta stood speechless and rooted on the spot where he stood. This was the first time in years that someone didn't fear him or see him as an item for use. This was the first time in ages that someone had seen the man that Dutta was โ€“ the man that lay beyond the image of Dutta Bhao.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
Arre..... my babeji..... im soooo sorry!!! i totally forgot to comment.... i remember reading it..... but i was gonna comment later!!! sorry baba!!!! maaf karna!!!

๐Ÿ˜† its a good thing i re read this... had a nice little laugh again... the teddy bear part was priceless๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†..... oh man!!!..... that was a classic!!!......

He's thinking about her.... i like that...... well he should..... Dutta ji...... she's a charm!!!!!.....๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ and she's one of a kind.... dont let her go!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

uff babe..... cant comment for too long... duty calls... aka asha aunty!!!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก she's useless i tell ya!!!!


luv u!!!

๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by *Guli* - 15 years ago
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fabulous jaz...i liked how u too some situations from the show gave it a different twist. i also liked the fact that dutta here knows that naku is effecting him and doesnt like it.

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