New FF: The Reality of Dreams Ch8 pg31 Jan 9 - Page 10

lovely yaar
baho and teedy bear
wow
so cute
and baaji was so funny
naku is amazing ans supriya is irritating
do continue
bye sumi

Loved it. Naku made Bhao the teddy Bear. That was hilarious. She does make him speechless.

awesome part...

awesome..........dutta bhau aur teddy bear 😆😆😆.......its nice dutta dnt want to be judged by naku............dutta thinks naku is different..............😍

Wooooo hooooo ....awesum update jazzie ..👏👏
OMG ,,,,,,Baaji ji & bhao teddy .......luved it ..🤣
Dutta knws dat Naku didn't like him talking to his mom like dat ...😉
Keep it up sweety ....!👍🏼

ur ff gets better n better jaz👏i really enjoy reading it nw im getting impaticent 2 read da next part😆 hope u can write da next part asap 😃

awesome .. utterly fabulous wow i love the way uve depiced their emotions..... cont soon ..............off to read ur other ff lol

awww jaaaz....awesum yaaar..⭐️..tooo guud...!!👏 luvd d baji scene....👍🏼thankz for d update...!!keep up d good work...!!😃

omg fuppi...this update was awesome...i loved everything abou it ...eventhough i read it i'll comment later because i should've went to sleep but i was too excited to read this...so i'll take my time to comment tommorow...thanks for telling me today

@Jaz: Okay first of all let me say this - stop forcing your niece to comment! Bechari! 😛 Comment hog!! (jk) 😆

And now, about the FF - I read it today on the train and then sat in my car reading it through because I didn't want to drive away until I finished and let me just say this - It took me ALL my energy not to pump an air fist when I finished it. O.M.G. Aaaaaaa!!! I loved it!! I'm doing this from memory though so I might miss some points.

His entry - I loved how his presence instantly "shook" Nakku. He walks in and she's immediately breaking her cardinal rule of not attracting attention or being involved in anyone else's business. She's hooked - literally hooked - to his presence and she's being reeled in with every step he took. *sigh* Atey hi itna psychological hold ho gaya Nakku pe - I loved it!

And Dutta doesn't like his Aayi? That is so NEW! In the show he takes her word as a verdict every time. And here he dislikes her? Can I say I love it! It is different and challenging to get my head around since I'm so used to the idea of him being devoted to his mother - which is probably why I'm enjoying it so dang much! 😃

LOL! Dutta being harassed by Supriya had me rolling on the floor laughing. Dutta is such a chick magnet haan! Bwaaahahahahahahha 🤣 But I have to say this, I was uncomfortable FOR him - kya chipku larki hai! *shudders*

And OMG. If Dutta's presence had Nakku hooked then one look from Nakku turned Dutta's "neatly organized" world UP SIDE DOWN! Have I told you how much I love the "confusion" these two are causing in each others' perfect little worlds? She looks at him with disappointment (for getting the drink in the house and for talking to his mother so) and he was absolutely restless after that. BOTH times! *sigh*

And can I just say I LOVED how Nakku cut him down to size in the last update? He was so "I'm the big bad Dutta Bhao" expecting his reputation to do the work for him - to get her respect and "adoration" for him without doing any work. And she totally brushed him aside! I loved how she told him that Dutta Bhao and Sahib are BOTH men - flesh and blood human beings. So she sees no reason to be afraid of them. You tell him girl!

Oh oh, and before I forget - if Dutta had Nakku "opening" up in the third update then Nakku totally saw through Dutta in the fourth one. I liked how each update we get a little insight into ONE character. The third update was Dutta's turn to learn about Nakku and the fourth one was his turn to realize that he was just as transparent to her! And he hadn't even SAID anything!

By the way, I don't know if it's intentional on your part but I feel Nakku's a very "open and giving" character in this FF. She doesn't hold back (in front of Dutta). When he asked her about "Baade Saab" she told him everything and then later when he asked her about her lack of interest in jewelery she told him all that too. I wouldn't talk to some random guy so much - tell him my likes and dislikes or talk about myself (even if in third person and even if he ASKED). But she did. It was only after she felt that she'd gone too far in the study that she stepped back. Warna initially she had no trouble talking on - I thought that was really strong of her. Usually people shut down in front of a stranger. But off course Dutta's no stranger and I think this same thing is bothering her too - why she keeps confiding in him and getting affected by his actions and presence. *sigh* This will be interesting! 😃

And O.M.G. Teddy bear and Jiji?! Bwaaaahahahahhahahahahaha! 🤣 Now every time someone will call Dutta "Bhao" or "Dutta and Baji" will be used in the same sentence I will remember "Teddy bear and Jiji"! *falls off the chair laughing* 🤣

Lol and you had Dutta sit down and be asked to give his views on jewelery and sari? Man I could just picture the look on his face - one that said "Are you high woman?!"... 🤣 I loved it! But Babi is so conniving! She knew k Aayi Sahib and Dutta had JUST left to talk and she send Nakku right after to interrupt that and bring Aayi Sahib back! She really wants that lady around her daughters so she takes a liking to them doesn't she?! Or maybe I am just reading too much into this. 😆

By the way, I totally read that Dutta has a sister who got married - OMG! Is this a queue for Kaala's future entry?! *looks on with a puppy dog face* 😆

I think I've covered all the thoughts that came to my mind. Great job and can't wait for the next update. 😉 LOL!