Posted:
hi fuppi😊...is that how you spell fuppi😕...anyways i loved your update👏👏👏...there were so many wonderful sections and each one was awesome😛...before i start my list of awesome parts i have to tell you that i'm addicted to your zkh, heer's secret, and this ff😉...honestly i'm less addicted to sau dard cuz it's the least updated😳😳😳 but the good thing about that is when i don't expect you to update it you surprisingly update it and it takes me a while to remember what happened in the update before
i'm so sorry i got of topic😆...i'll try not to do that again...my first favorite scene was when dutta tried to hide from the girls...that reminded of a kid in my class named chris who always listens to me and my friend's conversation and to annoy him we involve him in our conversations😆...idk know if he's really listening to us or whenever we look at him he just happens to glance at us😕...whatever it us it's fun messing with him😳...we ask him what color should we paint our nails and we'll talk about his hair in front of him and we'll take out scissors and say we're going to give him a haircut😆...by now you must've realized that we talk a lot in class...i'm so sorry i got of topic again😆...anyways it reminded me of him but that's what all guys do😉
next i liked how when naku came again to dutta's rescue👏...do u remember when in the show baji called naku dutta's bodyguard...that's what that scene reminded me of😉...i'm do glad naku came cuz i felt bad for dutta that he was stuck with sups🤢...sups in the story and in the story are both super annoying😡
something i didn't like not that i didn't like your story but i just didn't like that part which was when sups talked bad about naku😡😡😡...i just hate that girl🤢...i mean she got mad just for 5 minutes😈...but a good thing about it was that dutta saw how bad she was😛...atleast he didn't think it was naku's fault and then sups tries to make a bad impression of dutta on nake but sad for her😭 and yay for us it didn't work...she's just jealous that dutta is already more comfortable with naku than with her👎🏼
another part that i liked was when dutta got up to get water an left sups and went to naku...at first i thought he said that cuz he wanted to see naku but he was actually thirsty😒...whatever it was i was happy he went😃...atleast he got to find out that they have similar taste😉...both don't like looking at sarres and jewelry...also he noticed her simplicity and noticed she was differnet that the other maids and as long as he's thinking about her in any way except bad i'm happy😃...i'm happy cuz she's a maid and she's the only maid he talks to
after that when dutta screamed at aai sahib i thought he was over exaggerating but she shouldn't have done that either...the most important part is that naku heard it and it bothered dutta...i know it sounds mean but i was happy that dutta was bothered because he actually cares about what she thinks😉...he didn't think of how the people judged him or thought of him when they knew he killed people but it mattered to him how naku thought of him and he wasn't even sure what she was thinking.🥳..at first i thought that dutta was going to get mad😡 but he didn't and instead it made him think more about naku...i was also happy cuz naku didn't think he was a bad person
the next part i liked was dutta realized naku cared more about baddi saheb than anyone else...first he knows she's caring and second he knows more about her than others
my favorite part was how nkau made baji jiji and dutta teddy bear😆😆😆...what i really liked was when baji said when people hear jiji and teddy bear are coming they'll laugh😆....starting form when nkau makes baji's name into jiij and to when she make's dutta's nake into teddy bear was hilarious🤣...i just loved it...i think dutta can look like a tedy bear if he smiled a little more😳...but he's still cute without smiling😉
the last section when naku says she's not afraid and she thinks he's a good person and leaves dutta speechless was fantastic👏... naku doesn't know she's been leaving tremendous effects on dutta lately😉
thanks for the pm😃 and sorry for the delay in comenting like allways...i love the update and you can tell by my list of scenees👏👏👏.
.i would give it ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️/5...i can't wait for the next update...
i miss you🤗🤗
i'm so sorry i got of topic😆...i'll try not to do that again...my first favorite scene was when dutta tried to hide from the girls...that reminded of a kid in my class named chris who always listens to me and my friend's conversation and to annoy him we involve him in our conversations😆...idk know if he's really listening to us or whenever we look at him he just happens to glance at us😕...whatever it us it's fun messing with him😳...we ask him what color should we paint our nails and we'll talk about his hair in front of him and we'll take out scissors and say we're going to give him a haircut😆...by now you must've realized that we talk a lot in class...i'm so sorry i got of topic again😆...anyways it reminded me of him but that's what all guys do😉
next i liked how when naku came again to dutta's rescue👏...do u remember when in the show baji called naku dutta's bodyguard...that's what that scene reminded me of😉...i'm do glad naku came cuz i felt bad for dutta that he was stuck with sups🤢...sups in the story and in the story are both super annoying😡
something i didn't like not that i didn't like your story but i just didn't like that part which was when sups talked bad about naku😡😡😡...i just hate that girl🤢...i mean she got mad just for 5 minutes😈...but a good thing about it was that dutta saw how bad she was😛...atleast he didn't think it was naku's fault and then sups tries to make a bad impression of dutta on nake but sad for her😭 and yay for us it didn't work...she's just jealous that dutta is already more comfortable with naku than with her👎🏼
another part that i liked was when dutta got up to get water an left sups and went to naku...at first i thought he said that cuz he wanted to see naku but he was actually thirsty😒...whatever it was i was happy he went😃...atleast he got to find out that they have similar taste😉...both don't like looking at sarres and jewelry...also he noticed her simplicity and noticed she was differnet that the other maids and as long as he's thinking about her in any way except bad i'm happy😃...i'm happy cuz she's a maid and she's the only maid he talks to
after that when dutta screamed at aai sahib i thought he was over exaggerating but she shouldn't have done that either...the most important part is that naku heard it and it bothered dutta...i know it sounds mean but i was happy that dutta was bothered because he actually cares about what she thinks😉...he didn't think of how the people judged him or thought of him when they knew he killed people but it mattered to him how naku thought of him and he wasn't even sure what she was thinking.🥳..at first i thought that dutta was going to get mad😡 but he didn't and instead it made him think more about naku...i was also happy cuz naku didn't think he was a bad person
the next part i liked was dutta realized naku cared more about baddi saheb than anyone else...first he knows she's caring and second he knows more about her than others
my favorite part was how nkau made baji jiji and dutta teddy bear😆😆😆...what i really liked was when baji said when people hear jiji and teddy bear are coming they'll laugh😆....starting form when nkau makes baji's name into jiij and to when she make's dutta's nake into teddy bear was hilarious🤣...i just loved it...i think dutta can look like a tedy bear if he smiled a little more😳...but he's still cute without smiling😉
the last section when naku says she's not afraid and she thinks he's a good person and leaves dutta speechless was fantastic👏... naku doesn't know she's been leaving tremendous effects on dutta lately😉
thanks for the pm😃 and sorry for the delay in comenting like allways...i love the update and you can tell by my list of scenees👏👏👏.
.i would give it ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️/5...i can't wait for the next update...
i miss you🤗🤗
Udne Ki Aasha
Bigg Boss 19
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
