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Posted: 16 years ago
please update soon as soon as i got back from kelowna i had to go on the computer to see if its updated yet hehe
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Shivi!! So sry for the delay! ok now for part 21:
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this part was the best!!! 😃Kt was herself agains!! Its so good to have her bak. Aw wahida was scared. I dont blame her. it is pretty scary to hve a person with multiple personality disorder. i love how all the girls were working in the kitchen together and had like an only girls night to themselves!! it was so cute!! i love the detail of kt cracking open the window, vry creative!😊 hmm they were watching hp and order? reminds me...i havent even seen tht yet and i'm an hp fan!!! 😕😆lolz
the rohan and shivani parts were incredible once again!!! sparks are flying!!😳 i love how he just cornered her, tht was so sweet!!! i wonder wut else will happen in their relationship?😉😃 hope she admits she loves him!
omg tht prerna and nakul scene was off the hook yaar!!! props to u!!👏👏👏 it was hysterical how everyone was just watching them, even their mothers!!😆😆😆 thts embarassing! uff, nakul was on fire yaar, wonder wut wouldve happened if they were left alone for a bit more time?😉😆
this update topped all!!! i cant wait for the next one!!!!!!! OUTSTANDING!!!!!!👏
ok and now for wut u commented on b4... ooooooo zinu's gonna have a love story? 😳and me? 😳aw how sweet of u! my gosh, i'm blushing😆! ok whoever is with me and zinu MUST be handsome!! i would prefer pullu but he's takin! thts ok i'll live as long as hes with mouni!😉 hmmmm koi handsome tujhe dhund na parega!😉😆😃
luv u!!!🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome please update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 22
*Coming Soon*😉

Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

when ? i'm dieing to read it

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: 12kaler

when ? i'm dieing to read it

u r so funny
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Posted: 16 years ago
Dedicated to 12kaler and Aaliyah!!!!
Part 22

Mumbai, India

Nakul was still blushing as he walked into the house with Rahul. Nakul and Rahul both walked into the kitchen first to go say hi to the elders of the house. Rahul walked into the kitchen and noticed Ba sitting there, so he walked up to her and took her blessings, then he walked up to Tulsi and took her blessings.

Rahul-Mihir dadu? Where is he?

Tulsi-He is upstairs probably still trying to dye his white hair.

Rahul laughs-Dadi...Ganga mom, Nandani mom, aur Damini Chachi kaha hai?

Nakul-Rahul, those three are probably still hanging around creating thier own mischief.

All of a sudden Ganga walks in and grabs Nakul's ear.

Ganga-Really beta....hum kaam karahe thai..tum kya karahe thai?

Nakul-uh...ma mein woh...

Nandani-Ma'woh mein....kya Nakul (she winks at ganga and Damini)

Damini-U act as if you have been caught romancing or something....or stealing or something.

Nakul clears his throat-mein abhi ata hoon.

Ganga, Damini, and Nandani start to laugh. Rahul stands there clueless as well as Nandani B.

Nandani B-Kya hua...why are three laughing so much?

Ganga-Kuch nahin Nandani Di....nothing special...

Tulsi-Now you three please start to cook lunch....my poor grandkids must be getting hungry soon. Oye Rahul...where is Rohan?

Rahul-Rohan...he was right behind me....I'm guessing he is still coming out of the car.

Outside of SN Shivani is stil standing there holding her neck breathing hard, when she remembers Rohan punching his hand onto the wall in anger, then she quickly runs inside the hall where Rohan was just about to enter. She grabs his arms tightly and pulls him out the door.

Rohan-Kya hai tumhara problem?

Shivani-Excuse me....(rolling her eyes) mujhe koi shock nahin hai tumhare saath ghoom ne ka....ya tumhara haat pakadne ka. I just pulled you out because I don't want you to walk in the house with your hand severly bleeding.

Rohan confused-What the hell are you talking about...let go of my hand....

Shivani-Shut up, and listen....if you walk in the house with your hand all bleeding people will ask you what happened...and what are you going to say? Abh chalo....

She walks out holding her hand while her duppata flying everywhere in the air, and then finally flying on top of Rohan's face. There was a guard that was in his booth outside of the SN driveway, Shivani went to him and took some alcohol swabs to wipe off the blood and clean the hand. While Shivani was cleaning his wound Rohan kept looking at her concerned yet angry and stubborn face'as soon as Shivani looked up he looked away.

Shivani-Guard do you have a bandaid?

Guard-Nahin Shivani madam...i don't have one

Shivani looked around to see if anyone was looking, finally she sighed and ripped her duppata up...finally she tied it on Rohan's wound quietly. What she didn't notice was Zinu, and the girls looking at their other little hot love story from the window.

Rohan-Are you done now?

Shivani lets go of his hand throwing it down-ha i am...gussa kyu karahe ho...i just did it so no one would ask you anything stupid in there...

Rohan-Mein gussa karaha hoon (laughs angrily) what do you do then...you carry the whole worlds anger on your shoulders.

Shivani-I never get mad anyone....abh tum ja sakte ho.

Rohan laughs sarcastically-You never get mad? (shakes his head angrily and leaves)

After Rohan walked in Shivani followed and then immediately Nakul came and grabbed Shivani's ear.

Nakul-Kyu...you love to spy around in the house don't you my lovely sister.

Shivani-Ahhh bhaiya yeh aap kya karahe ho? Uh maine kya kiya (says innocently)

Laksh-Bhaiya kya kiya isne (winks his eyes at his sisters)

Nakul-Tum chup raho....acting as if you don't even know whats going on...

Laksh smiles and joins Aaliyah, Zinu, and Pari. While Nakul and Shivani are having a sweet argument, the Bahus and Nandani B come in to see what is going on.

Ganga-Nakul'.what are you doing to my ladli?

Nakul-Mom, you are always taking her side'.no wonder she is so spoiled.

Shivani-Dekho na badi ma'.maine kuch nahin kiya.

Damini-Nakul chodo usko'.chalo to'.stop acting immature'and if she even did do something, then she has every right to.

Nakul-Chachi aap bhi?

Damini smiles-after all she is your sister'.

Nakul-Iss baar chod diya tumhay meri pyari Shivi'.is baar to ma, aur Damini chachi ne bacha liya'.

Shivani laughs and then runs off hugging Damini and Ganga. Nandani B and Nandani V are standing there smiling, when Prerna comes in all blushing red.

Pari-Aray'Prerna di'kya hua (winks at Zinu)

Zinu-yea whats wrong?

Prerna-Kuch nahin'.I'm just you know uh'u know'(interrupted)

Shivani-Acha chodo Prerna'koi baat nahin'.you don't have to tell us' now (she winks at Zinu and Pari.

Aaliyah-Magar kya hua Prerna'why do you look so you know'lost?

Prerna cutely-maine kaha na kuch nahin hua.

While all of this is going on Rahul and Bhoomi come down after their little private romance from the terrace.

Bhoomi-What's going on'.here'.mom is lunch ready? I am so hungry. Aray rohan tum agaye'..?

Ganga looks at Damini, Nandan B, and Nandani V winking and smiling, because apparentely Bhoomi had told about Rohan and Shivani's little hot story.

Ganga-Oh to yea Rohan hai. (she walks up to him and starts looking at his face here and there)

Nandani V-Bohot hi handsome hai..nai Ganga?

Damini-Ha hain to bohot hi handsome.

Zinu laughs rememebering what she and Pari and Aali had seen from the window a couple of mintues ago. Zinu quietly walks off to tell it to Damini, Ganga, Nandani B, Nandani V, and then finally Bhoomi and all of them look at each other surprised because they knew Shivani too well, and that defintely would not be something she would do.

Zinu-So hello rohan, nice to see you again.

Rohan- Hi zinu, how are you?

Zinu-Fine, thank you.

Aaliyah-Hi my name is Aaliyah'.you can call me Aali in short'.so nice meetin you too. (giggles a little)

Pari-Hi jeeju (closes her eyes thinkin what the heck did she just do) I mean Rohan'woh kya hai na ke Rahul jeeju se Rohan jeeju ho gaya'.it was a tini tiny mistake'.my bad.

Rohan looked at all of the sisters blushing'.and also confused.

Tulsi screams-Lunch'.come on!!!!!

Everyone quickly goes to the dining table where Sahil, Gautam, Karan, and Anu were sitting and looking at their files. As soon as Ganga, Damini, Nandani, and Nandani B walked in the men put their files down fast and cleared the table before they said anything.

Damini-Kya baat hai'no files huh?

Nandani B-Yeah right'.no files'impossible!

Ganga-These guys can never ever stay without their work files ever.

NandaniV-Chalo mein check karti hoon ke kaha gayi unko fileyan.

Nandani starts to look under the table and spots them there and screams.

Nandani V-Well we were right'.chalo give up the 100 rupees we made a deal about.

All the men took out their wallets and gave their beautiful wives 100 rupees since they won the bet. Bhoomi comes in laughing because she saw her dad, bade papa, chachu, Anu uncle give money to their wives.

Bhoomi-Lost the bet?

After bhoomi walked in'.following her came Shivani, Rahul, Pari, Zinu, Aaliyah, Laksh, Nakul, and Prerna; as soon as they sat down to eat lunch everything went silent and love was in the air. All that was heard was the wind blowing hard, and all the couples hearts beating for one another. The whole scene goes mute while the song Khuda Jane from Bachna ae Haseeno was playing and Nakul and Prerna kept staring at each other passionately.

(For this part you MUST listen to the song'here is the link:

http://smashits.com/music/hindi-film/songs/6871/bachna-ae-haseeno.html )

The Whole Song will be acted out by some of the characters!

The beginning music starts and both Nakul and Prerna are staring at each other, and everyone is done eating lunch. Now they are all sitting at living room

Beginning-Aaa aa'.

Nakul sings- Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon, Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon, Kya yeh sab ko hota hai.

Prerna hides behind her mom- Hum ko kya lena hai sab se, Tum se hi sab batein ab se, Ban gaye ho tum meri dua. (when she says Dua, she looks at Nakul lovingly)

Rahul sings his line- Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon, Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon, Kya yeh sab ko hota hai (pulls his hand out to dance with Bhoomi)

Bhoomi in Rahul's arms- Hum ko kya lena hai sab se, Tum se hi sab batein ab se, Ban gaye ho tum meri dua. (when she says dua she hugs him)

While these lines are playing Prerna and Nakul both get up and start dancing with Rahul and Bhoomi.

Khuda Jaane Ke Main Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane
Main Mitt Gaya'.
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai'..
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

Both Couple spin their girls around, and parents are snapping their fingers and are enjoying each others company.

While the extra music is playing Sahil grabs Ganga and pulls her to dance, and Nandani and Karan join them, while Tulsi and Mihir look at each other smiling and clapping. Pari and Aaliyah are both throwing around a tiny ball and are playing catch with Laksh. Rohan and Zinu are dancing with everyone else. Shivani is standing leaning against the wall, when Laksh throws the ball at her.

Shivani's line- Tu Kahe To Tere Hi Kadam Ke, Main Nishanon Pe, Chalun Rukun Ishaare Pe (she throws back the ball at laksh) Tu Kahe To Khwabon Ka Bana Ke, Main Bahana Sa, Mila Karun Sirhaane Pe

Rohan sings while Zinu pushes him towards Shivani-Ho Tum se Dil Ki Baatein Seekhi, Tum Se Hi Yeh Raahein Seekhi, Tum Pe Mar Ke Main To Jee Gaaya (as soon as he says gaaya Damini pushes Shivani and Rohan together and now their dancing.

Khuda Jaane Ke Main Fida Hoon (during this whole part all of the couples are dancing)
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

Aaliyah, Zinu, and Pari are dancing with each other, and Zinu starts to get flashbacks of the guy she met at the airport. Laksh is leaning on the couch when he starts to see Kt dancing on the dance floor. He smiles imagining her, then sees flashbacks of when they first met, their first dance at the Prom, and both of them making coffee and food in the kitchen together, then her tying a tie on him when he couldn't, and finally both of them being lost in each other's arms and eyes. Here Shivani notices Laksh's eyes tear so she walks up to him.

Laksh lines he remembers Kt and his moments-Dil Kahe Ke Aaj To Chupa Lo Tum, Panahon Mein, Ke Dar Hai Tum Ko Kho Doonga , (Shivani is holding his shoulder) Dil Kahe Sambhal Zara Khushi Ko Na Nazar Laga Ke Darr Hai Mein To Ro Doonga. (Shivani wipes's Laksh's tears off)

Laksh imagines KT sings her part-O''.. Karti Hoon Sau Vaade Tum Se, Baandhe Dil Ke Dhaage Tum SeYeh Tumhe Na Jaane Kya Hua (kt blows a kiss to him and disappears)

Rahul Picks Bhoomi up high-Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Nakul Kisses Prerna on the forehead-Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Rohan-Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai
Laksh dances with Shivani-Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

Nakul-Sajde Mein Yun Hi Jhukta Hoon

Rahul-Tum Pe Hi Aa Ke Rukhta Hoon

Laksh-Kya Yeh Sab Ko Hota Hai

Prerna-Hum Ko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se

Bhoomi-Tum Se Hi Sab Baatein Ab Se

Aaliyah-Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua

Laksh-Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Rahul-Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya

Rohan-Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai!

Nakul-Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda, Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

As soon as Nakul says Khuda he bends down on his knees and Prerna's hand is in his hand, and it looks like he is proposing to her. The song was over and everyone in the house looks at them and starts to laugh.

Ganga-Nandani di, this is what I wanted to tell you about'.I want to make your daughter Prerna my Bahu! Kya aap apni beti ko mujhe dengi?

The Episode ends on Nandani B's face..shocked!

Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
great part
i love the way shivani cares for rohan but doesnt show it to him
the house is full of spys that spy on other peoples life
i wonder what the answer will be
cont....soon cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwww. what an awesome part.. i loved it. . absolutely loved it.. so cute.. so much fun anf love and respect and wow! you write so well... shiv likes rohan.. awww.. hai.. and everyone saw that.. and wow.. NAKUL and PRERNA's end.. sweet..!! why was nandini b shocked? shouldnt she be happy!?! arre yaar please please update soon.. cant wait..
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow....amazing....totally fresh...completely interesting...very entertaining...marvellous....and really fantastic....ok...i cant think of any more adjectives to describe this part.....really fun filled and very cute and fresh.
its very rarely we see families that are this close and having fun together....the song was an absolutely great idea....the only regret i have is that i wish i could see all the character live doing this particular song...i really wished ur fan fic could come alive when the song started....really amazing....u did a great job writing it all out and coordianting it to where all the youngsters are with their better half or atleast thinking about them while they are singing....great job!
shivani and rohan part was really cute....they are both hot-tempered....but the thing about them is that their anger vanishes in a few minutes....so romantic the way shivani takes care of rohan's wound.....i wonder how no one noticed shivani's dupatta tied on rohan and ask about it....though it was cleaned up, her piece of dupatta was still tied to his hand.
gosh, i guess with a house that big and so many people, nothing is kept a secret....pretty much everyone's love story is revealed....lols....but its so good that everyone's love story proceeds with so much ease...no problems at all.....i wonder if we see a difference in nakul and prerna's love story...i mean though it seems like there is no chance...but i wonder if nandani will deny prerna for nakul.....i dont think she really have any reason to deny....but it would surely bring a big twist in the story....something unexpected....anyways, it was so cute to see nakul-prerena dancing and stealing glances at each other....hopefully their love story will float safely.
you know what....i was really excited to read this part because i thaught u were gonna reveal shivani's secret.....but u turned out smarter than that...lols....though u didnt reveal the secret, you still managed to expertly keep your audience entertain by bringing in a romantic song for the couples....your too smart as a writer and very talented to bring in such ideas....hopefully, u will reveal shivani's secret soon.......i m soooooooooooo dying to know what it is....i will keep thinking about it if u dont reveal it soon.
one of the other cute part was when nandani finds the files and all the ladies win the bet....so cute the way the husbands had to cough up 100 rupees out of their husband's wallet....really nicely written scene.
one of the funny parts was when tulsi said mihir is probably upstairs dying his white hair....lols...that was funny.
missed out on kt and her friends today....what would have been really interesting was if kt and her friends were staying up late listening to the same song and dancing around when the viranis were....hopefully we will get to see kt in the next part.
really very excited and anxious to read the next part....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update really very soon....i know us readers are too demanding....but hey, what can i say.....we are hooked!....lols...take care...keep up the great job.

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